| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1142 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "lazily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 78.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1142 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1153 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.01% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 956 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Nyx | 4 | | February | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Eva | 7 | | Seer | 1 | | Isolde | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.82 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like watching faces, the city simp" | | 1 | "looked like a poppy made of frost, its pe" | | 2 | "seemed closer than it ought to be" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.867 | | wordCount | 1153 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the bruised orange of a London evening but a deep liquid violet shading to gold near a horizon" |
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| 94.98% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "saw that she" | | 1 | "hated that she'd" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 34.94 | | std | 27.9 | | cv | 0.799 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 102 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 93 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 68 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 68 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 69 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 15 |
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| 96.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "been poured" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.097 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the ordinary hush of Richmond Park at dusk — that was a busy quiet, full of distant traffic and the hum of London pressing in from every direction." | | 1 | "The two oaks stood maybe ten feet apart, ordinary enough — except that the path she'd walked in on was gone." | | 2 | "Rory had expected a clearing — a circle of trees, maybe, the way fairy-tale woods always seemed to be." | | 3 | "It was warm here, the air heavy with the green smell of growing things and, underneath it, something sweeter and stranger — like honey, like smoke, like a word she'd known once and forgotten." | | 4 | "There were no stars, but there were lights — drifting motes that hung among the flowers and lifted, lazily, when the three of them passed." | | 5 | "The grass parted around Rory's boots without resistance, and when she looked back — she couldn't help it, despite Eva's warning — she saw that she left footprints, dark crushed trails through the silver." | | 6 | "Except —" | | 7 | "The bowl of the meadow flattened, and the light-motes thickened until they drifted in slow constellations overhead, and Rory began to hear it — music, or something that wore music's clothes." | | 8 | "The fae blade hung heavy at her hip, cold even through its sheath — colder, she thought, than it had been in the park." |
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| 90.19% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 742 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.05121293800539083 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008086253369272238 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 12.4 | | std | 9.2 | | cv | 0.742 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 77.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.5161290322580645 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead the land sloped gently" | | 1 | "Somehow it wasn't." | | 2 | "More like the memory of" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, and their voice" | | 1 | "They tilted their head, violet" | | 2 | "Her stomach tightened." | | 3 | "It should have been February." | | 4 | "It was warm here, the" | | 5 | "It pulsed, considering her, then" | | 6 | "She'd half expected it to" | | 7 | "They went down into the" | | 8 | "They crouched, fingers hovering over" | | 9 | "It was a fair question," | | 10 | "She'd left a note on" | | 11 | "She had a horrible feeling" | | 12 | "They followed the worn place" | | 13 | "It came from everywhere." | | 14 | "Her eyes had gone soft" | | 15 | "Her friend blinked, frowned, came" |
| | ratio | 0.239 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The first thing Rory noticed" | | 1 | "This was something else." | | 2 | "The moment she stepped past" | | 3 | "they whispered, and their voice" | | 4 | "They tilted their head, violet" | | 5 | "Rory glanced behind her." | | 6 | "The two oaks stood maybe" | | 7 | "Her stomach tightened." | | 8 | "Eva said from her other" | | 9 | "Rory made herself face forward" | | 10 | "The grove opened ahead of" | | 11 | "Rory had expected a clearing" | | 12 | "Wildflowers grew everywhere, thick as" | | 13 | "Bluebells beside foxgloves beside something" | | 14 | "Snowdrops nodded next to roses." | | 15 | "The seasons had all been" | | 16 | "It should have been February." | | 17 | "It was warm here, the" | | 18 | "The sky was the wrong" | | 19 | "Rory thought they might be" |
| | ratio | 0.716 | |
| 74.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Wherever they were, it wasn't" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 20.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the ordinary hush of Richmond Park at dusk — that was a busy quiet, full of distant traffic and the hum of London pressing in from every direction." | | 1 | "Bluebells beside foxgloves beside something that looked like a poppy made of frost, its petals pale and brittle and somehow blooming." | | 2 | "Not the bruised orange of a London evening but a deep liquid violet shading to gold near a horizon that seemed closer than it ought to be." | | 3 | "The bowl of the meadow flattened, and the light-motes thickened until they drifted in slow constellations overhead, and Rory began to hear it — music, or someth…" | | 4 | "Isolde's gift, given before any of this, as if the Seer had known they'd come walking into her grove one strange evening with too many questions and not enough …" | | 5 | "Ahead, where the music swelled, the meadow gave way at last to a ring of standing oaks, and within them, seated on nothing, waited a figure with silver hair to …" |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "They crouched, fingers hovering over the bare earth without touching it" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |