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Run: 2026-05-31-01KSYXG5ENQ4F05QX9W7VFZ205
Run Details
Model:
Claude Opus 4.8 (Reasoning, High)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
37.5s
Cost:
$0.080845
Provider:
Anthropic
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
94.97%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
59.76%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
95.52%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
80.47%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
57.47%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
26.90%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
28.97%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
91.84%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
87.8629%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The deadbolts gave one at
a time. First, second, third. Then the door swung inward, and Lucien Moreau filled the frame like he'd
been carved
to fit it. "You're a difficult woman to find, Miss Carter."
Rory kept one hand on
the door, the other braced against the jamb. Behind her, Ptolemy wound between her ankles, tail flicking. She didn't move aside. "Funny. I wasn't aware I'd been looking to be found." "That's rather the point of hiding." He glanced past her shoulder, taking in the chaos of Eva's flat, the towers of books, the scrolls bleeding off the kitchen table. "Three deadbolts. You've grown careful." "I've grown tired."
She didn't soften it
. "Of people turning up where they're not wanted."
His mismatched eyes settled on
her face.
The amber one caught the
light from the corridor.
The black one swallowed it
whole.
He hadn't changed, the slicked
platinum hair, the charcoal suit that probably cost more than three months of her rent, the ivory cane resting against his palm like an afterthought. "You left Soho without a word," he said. "I left a note." "You left a napkin."
A faint curl at the
corner of his mouth. "With two words on it." She remembered the words. So had he, apparently.
She'd written them with a
shaking hand at four in the morning, and she'd meant every letter at the time. "Then you got the message."
She started to close the
door. The cane stopped it. Not the blade, just the ivory tip wedged neatly against the wood, polite as a knock. "Aurora."
The name landed somewhere under
her ribs.
Nobody called her that except
her mother and the men who wanted something.
She hated that her pulse
answered before her brain did. "It's Rory," she said. "It's always been Rory." "To your friends."
He let the cane fall
away, a small surrender that wasn't one. "I came to warn you. That's all. You can shut the door after, if it pleases you." She studied him. Lucien didn't make house calls. Information came to him, never the other way round, and people paid through the nose to sit across his table. Whatever had brought him to Brick Lane on foot, in the open, it wasn't a courtesy. She stepped back. Just enough.
He crossed the threshold like
a cat testing thin ice,
scanning
corners, marking exits. Old habit. Ptolemy hissed once and fled under the sofa. Smart animal. "Charming," Lucien said, eyeing a stack of grimoires balanced on a kitchen chair. "Eva still collecting things that could get her killed?" "She's out. And you didn't come to talk about Eva." "No."
He set his cane against
the table, deliberate, both hands now empty in a way that
was meant
to read as harmless. It didn't. "Someone's been asking after a delivery girl. Black hair. Blue eyes. Works the Golden Empress, lives above a bar in the city run by a man named Silas." The breath went thin in her chest. She kept her face still. She'd had practice. "Lots of delivery girls in London." "Not many with a crescent scar on the left wrist." His gaze dropped to it, then lifted. "They had that detail. Specific, isn't it? The sort of detail a person carries from years of looking at the same hand across a kitchen table." Evan. Her
stomach
turned to stone. "You're guessing," she said. "I never guess. It's bad for business."
He leaned a hip against
the table, careful of the scrolls. "A man paid a great deal of money for an address. My address, as it happens, since he didn't know where else to ask. I declined the commission." "How noble." "How inconvenient. I don't decline money for sentiment." Something
flickered
across his face, quick, gone. "And yet." The two words from the napkin sat between them,
unspoken
, taking up all the air in the cramped room. *Forget me.* That's what she'd written.
She'd meant it as a
kindness.
She'd meant it as a
knife. She still wasn't sure which. "You should've taken the money," she said. "Less complicated." "You're under the impression I came for absolution." He pushed off the table and crossed the small space, slow, until there wasn't much floor left between them. Close enough that she caught the cold-iron-and-cedar scent of him, the one that had haunted her for six weeks like a song she couldn't shake. "I came because the alternative was reading about you in tomorrow's papers. And I found that prospect... distasteful." "Distasteful." She laughed, short and bitter. "You walked away first, Lucien. In Marseille. Don't rewrite it." "I sent you home before my father's people arrived." Low. Even. The amber eye burned. "You'd have died in that room. You knew the cost of staying, and you chose to be angry about the bill." "You decided for me." "I always will." No apology in it. None. "When it's your life against your pride, I'll choose your life every time, and you'll hate me for it every time, and I find I can live with that arrangement." The honesty hit harder than any lie. She looked away first, at the deadbolts, at the cat's eyes
glinting
from beneath the sofa. "He's coming, then," she said quietly. "Evan." "He's already in the city." Lucien lifted his hand, slow enough that she could've stopped him, and didn't. His thumb
traced
the small crescent at her wrist, the old scar, the one a stranger shouldn't know about. "So you have a choice to make, Aurora. You can shut the door behind me and trust three deadbolts against a man who taught you to be afraid of the dark." His eyes came up to hers. "Or you can come with me, and we discuss what happens to men who hunt women I've decided to keep." Downstairs, the street door banged open. Footsteps on the stairs. Heavy. Unhurried. Lucien's hand left her wrist and found his cane. "Decide
quickly
."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
17
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences
47
tagDensity
0.362
leniency
0.723
rawRatio
0.059
effectiveRatio
0.043
94.97%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
994
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
highlights
0
"quickly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
59.76%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
994
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"pulse"
count
1
1
word
"scanning"
count
1
2
word
"stomach"
count
1
3
word
"flickered"
count
1
4
word
"unspoken"
count
1
5
word
"glinting"
count
1
6
word
"traced"
count
1
7
word
"footsteps"
count
1
highlights
0
"pulse"
1
"scanning"
2
"stomach"
3
"flickered"
4
"unspoken"
5
"glinting"
6
"traced"
7
"footsteps"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
72
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
72
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"started to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
99
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
31
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
1
markdownWords
2
totalWords
994
ratio
0.002
matches
0
"Forget me."
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
11
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
14
wordCount
590
uniqueNames
9
maxNameDensity
0.85
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
5
Moreau
1
Ptolemy
2
Eva
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
Evan
1
Close
1
Low
1
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Ptolemy"
3
"Eva"
4
"Evan"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
2
"Close"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
40
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
994
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
99
matches
0
"hated that her"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
46
mean
21.61
std
17.54
cv
0.812
sampleLengths
0
28
1
8
2
26
3
10
4
34
5
15
6
52
7
8
8
4
9
18
10
28
11
11
12
20
13
1
14
30
15
8
16
32
17
44
18
5
19
26
20
22
21
10
22
53
23
15
24
6
25
43
26
6
27
4
28
46
29
2
30
17
31
42
32
9
33
70
34
16
35
36
36
4
37
38
38
23
39
7
40
68
41
6
42
20
43
12
44
9
45
2
95.52%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
72
matches
0
"been carved"
1
"was meant"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
106
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
99
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
593
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
18
adverbRatio
0.03035413153456998
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.006745362563237774
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
99
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
99
mean
10.04
std
8.04
cv
0.8
sampleLengths
0
7
1
3
2
18
3
8
4
13
5
9
6
4
7
10
8
29
9
5
10
7
11
8
12
7
13
9
14
6
15
30
16
8
17
4
18
13
19
5
20
4
21
4
22
20
23
11
24
4
25
16
26
1
27
7
28
13
29
10
30
4
31
4
32
15
33
17
34
3
35
5
36
20
37
16
38
3
39
2
40
14
41
2
42
8
43
2
44
13
45
9
46
10
47
23
48
2
49
28
80.47%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
7
diversityRatio
0.5252525252525253
totalSentences
99
uniqueOpeners
52
57.47%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
58
matches
0
"Then the door swung inward,"
ratio
0.017
26.90%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
28
totalSentences
58
matches
0
"She didn't move aside."
1
"He glanced past her shoulder,"
2
"She didn't soften it"
3
"His mismatched eyes settled on"
4
"He hadn't changed, the slicked"
5
"She remembered the words."
6
"She'd written them with a"
7
"She started to close the"
8
"She hated that her pulse"
9
"He let the cane fall"
10
"She studied him."
11
"She stepped back."
12
"He crossed the threshold like"
13
"He set his cane against"
14
"She kept her face still."
15
"She'd had practice."
16
"His gaze dropped to it,"
17
"Her stomach turned to stone."
18
"He leaned a hip against"
19
"She'd meant it as a"
ratio
0.483
28.97%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
50
totalSentences
58
matches
0
"The deadbolts gave one at"
1
"Rory kept one hand on"
2
"She didn't move aside."
3
"He glanced past her shoulder,"
4
"She didn't soften it"
5
"His mismatched eyes settled on"
6
"The amber one caught the"
7
"The black one swallowed it"
8
"He hadn't changed, the slicked"
9
"A faint curl at the"
10
"She remembered the words."
11
"She'd written them with a"
12
"She started to close the"
13
"The cane stopped it."
14
"The name landed somewhere under"
15
"Nobody called her that except"
16
"She hated that her pulse"
17
"He let the cane fall"
18
"She studied him."
19
"Lucien didn't make house calls."
ratio
0.862
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
58
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
91.84%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
14
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"Nobody called her that except her mother and the men who wanted something."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
17
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences
47
tagDensity
0.149
leniency
0.298
rawRatio
0.143
effectiveRatio
0.043
87.8629%