| 78.79% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn moved around [around]" | | 1 | "She crouched again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.121 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1172 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1172 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "churn" | | 3 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 95.70% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 1 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 63 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Pathologist's first guess is cardiac. No wounds, no ligature, nothing. Bloke's heart just stopped.\" Pell shrugged." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1181 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 900 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1 | | worstName | "Pell" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Pell" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 5 | | Camden | 2 | | Underground | 1 | | Transport | 1 | | London | 1 | | Sergeant | 1 | | Pell | 9 | | Expensive | 1 | | Deptford | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Good | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Sergeant" | | 3 | "Pell" | | 4 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Transport" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Deptford" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.387 | | wordCount | 1181 | | matches | | 0 | "not footprints but a kind of fanned scouring, as though something had been drag" | | 1 | "not with the points of the world but with cramped, looping symbols she had no name for" | | 2 | "not north, not at her, but past her, toward the fanned" | | 3 | "not at her, but past her, toward the fanned" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 39.37 | | std | 31.33 | | cv | 0.796 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 105 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 92 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 80 | | 14 | 70 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 85 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 81 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 78 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 64 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 16 |
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| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "been bricked" | | 1 | "was furred" | | 2 | "was disturbed" | | 3 | "been dragged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell reached Detective Harlow Quinn before the light did — damp brick, rust, and underneath it something sweeter and wrong, like meat left too long in a warm room." | | 1 | "His eyes were open and fixed on the curved ceiling, and his expression — this was the part the duty officer's report had failed to capture — was not fear." | | 2 | "She had never seen this — a man dying with his face turned up like a child watching fireworks." | | 3 | "The platform was furred with decades of grey silt, undisturbed except for the churn of boot-prints near the body — police, paramedics, all radiating from the tunnel mouth." | | 4 | "On the far side, where the platform met the tunnel's black throat, the silt was disturbed in a strange way — not footprints but a kind of fanned scouring, as though something had been dragged, or had withdrawn, sweeping the dust into faint radial lines." | | 5 | "She let her fingers drift lower, to the small watch pocket sewn inside the lining — and felt something hard, cool, and round." | | 6 | "It swung, settled, swung again — and each time it pointed not north, not at her, but past her, toward the fanned and scoured dust at the tunnel's mouth." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 900 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.023333333333333334 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005555555555555556 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 13.27 | | std | 11.99 | | cv | 0.904 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 64 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 91.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5730337078651685 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 55.56% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a smell of sweetness" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 53.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She ducked under the strip" | | 1 | "Her torch found the body" | | 2 | "He wore a good wool" | | 3 | "His eyes were open and" | | 4 | "It was something closer to" | | 5 | "He was a broad man" | | 6 | "She crouched beside the body," | | 7 | "She'd seen a hundred death" | | 8 | "She had never seen this" | | 9 | "She shifted the beam down" | | 10 | "She lifted the trailing hand" | | 11 | "She set the hand back" | | 12 | "She stood and swept the" | | 13 | "He had simply arrived in" | | 14 | "She had seen marks like" | | 15 | "She had filed it under" | | 16 | "Her voice came out level" | | 17 | "She crouched again, this time" | | 18 | "She let her fingers drift" | | 19 | "She drew it out." |
| | ratio | 0.417 | |
| 68.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell reached Detective Harlow" | | 1 | "She ducked under the strip" | | 2 | "Quinn took it anyway, testing" | | 3 | "Her torch found the body" | | 4 | "A man, mid-forties, lying on" | | 5 | "He wore a good wool" | | 6 | "His eyes were open and" | | 7 | "It was something closer to" | | 8 | "He was a broad man" | | 9 | "Quinn said nothing." | | 10 | "She crouched beside the body," | | 11 | "The wonder was still there," | | 12 | "She'd seen a hundred death" | | 13 | "The blank nothing of a" | | 14 | "She had never seen this" | | 15 | "She shifted the beam down" | | 16 | "Camel wool, lined." | | 17 | "The shoes were handmade, leather" | | 18 | "She lifted the trailing hand" | | 19 | "The fingertips were clean." |
| | ratio | 0.783 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Tile, most of it cracked, the old cream-and-green livery of a station that had been bricked off from the network sometime before she was born." | | 1 | "Beneath Camden, technically, in a ribbon of the Underground that didn't appear on any map she'd been able to pull from the Transport for London archive." | | 2 | "On the far side, where the platform met the tunnel's black throat, the silt was disturbed in a strange way — not footprints but a kind of fanned scouring, as th…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.152 | | leniency | 0.303 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |