| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She turned away [away]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.256 | | leniency | 0.513 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |
| 85.99% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1071 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1071 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "charm" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "cascading" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 63 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1076 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 643 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 4 | | Moreau | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Water | 1 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Silence" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1076 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.95% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "hated that it" | | 1 | "chose that moment" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 24.45 | | std | 23.66 | | cv | 0.967 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 78 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 62 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 67 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 103 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 46 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 20 |
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| 97.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | |
| 87.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "wasn't shoving" |
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| 30.08% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "That was the thing about Lucien — everything he carried was a story he wanted you to read wrong." | | 1 | "Three months of nothing, of her checking a phone she told herself she didn't care about, of rehearsing what she'd say if she ever saw him again — all of it collapsed into the small space between the doorframe and his shoulder." | | 2 | "Underneath it was something she'd only seen twice — once in the alley behind Silas's bar when a thing with too many joints had nearly opened her throat, and once in the dark of her own flat, after, when he'd held her hand and counted her pulse like he was afraid of losing the number." |
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| 94.20% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 622 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.04662379421221865 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00964630225080386 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 14.16 | | std | 13.19 | | cv | 0.932 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 55 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 65.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4473684210526316 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn't move, and neither" | | 1 | "He never really needed it." | | 2 | "She stepped back." | | 3 | "He came in, and the" | | 4 | "She hadn't meant to lead" | | 5 | "She'd meant to be cool," | | 6 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 7 | "He set the cane against" | | 8 | "She turned away, busying her" | | 9 | "He was closer now." | | 10 | "She heard the floor give" | | 11 | "She gripped the counter." | | 12 | "She watched it instead of" | | 13 | "She killed the gas before" | | 14 | "he said quietly" | | 15 | "Her breath caught and she" | | 16 | "He lifted his hand, slow," | | 17 | "Her pulse hammered under his" |
| | ratio | 0.429 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt always stuck." | | 1 | "Rory wrestled it free, expecting" | | 2 | "Ptolemy threaded between her ankles" | | 3 | "Lucien tipped his head down" | | 4 | "He didn't move, and neither" | | 5 | "The ivory cane rested against" | | 6 | "He never really needed it." | | 7 | "That was the thing about" | | 8 | "The words sat there." | | 9 | "She stepped back." | | 10 | "A refusal to be the" | | 11 | "He came in, and the" | | 12 | "Books stacked to the windowsill," | | 13 | "Lucien took it in with" | | 14 | "She hadn't meant to lead" | | 15 | "She'd meant to be cool," | | 16 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 17 | "He set the cane against" | | 18 | "She turned away, busying her" | | 19 | "Water, the click of the" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Water, the click of the gas, the small domestic ritual that let her keep her back to him." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.128 | | leniency | 0.256 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |