| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx flowed back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.543 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 86.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "fractured" | | 4 | "unsettled" | | 5 | "measured" | | 6 | "resolve" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1081 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 846 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.54 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 6 | | Richmond | 1 | | South | 1 | | Circular | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Eva | 8 | | Shade | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Hel" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.732 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 51.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not-quite her had unsettled something in her chest" | | 1 | "not quite meeting the ground" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.775 | | wordCount | 1081 | | matches | | 0 | "Not silence exactly, but a swallowing, as though someone had pressed thumbs against h" | | 1 | "not gold, not silver, but a thousand fractured colours shifting as the water passed ov" | | 2 | "not silver, but a thousand fractured colours shifting as the water passed ov" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 26.37 | | std | 21.05 | | cv | 0.798 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 71 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 79 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 71 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 72 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 52 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.122 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones came first—gnarled oaks twisted into pillars, bark grey as old bone, leaning toward one another like conspirators." | | 1 | "The ordinary world sat just over the rise—joggers, dog-walkers, the distant drone of the South Circular." | | 2 | "Then it returned all at once, doubled, tripled—birdsong she didn't recognise, a low chiming like wind through hollow glass, the wet rush of water somewhere ahead." | | 3 | "Wildflowers grew in tangled riot—bluebells beside poppies beside blooms Aurora had no name for, petals the colour of bruised plums, others that glowed faintly from within like banked coals." | | 4 | "Beneath the surface, the bed glittered—not gold, not silver, but a thousand fractured colours shifting as the water passed over them." | | 5 | "Aurora found its source—a stand of trees with leaves of thin silver, each one ringing softly against its neighbours when the breeze stirred them." | | 6 | "She stood very still, staring at a tree to their left—an oak, broad and old, its trunk split by a hollow large enough to step into." | | 7 | "The blue had deepened to something closer to dusk, though no sun had set, and threaded across it ran faint ribbons of colour—aurora-light, slow and rippling, green folding into violet folding into rose." | | 8 | "The pendant at her throat sat cool and still—no warmth, no pulse." | | 9 | "A path had opened ahead of them where she was certain none had been—a trail of flattened gold flowers leading between two leaning stones toward a hollow deeper in the grove, where the wildflower-light glowed brightest." | | 10 | "\"Your friend it merely tolerates. And I—\" something almost like a smile moved through their voice, \"—the Grove and I have an old quarrel. I'll come no further than the water.\"" |
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| 95.27% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 837 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.04540023894862605 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008363201911589008 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 12.01 | | std | 8.4 | | cv | 0.699 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 74.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4666666666666667 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 52.08% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it returned all at" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back." | | 1 | "She stood in the grove." | | 2 | "They covered the ground in" | | 3 | "She snatched it back." | | 4 | "They had solidified now, fully" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes drifted across" | | 6 | "She looked down and frowned." | | 7 | "She jerked away." | | 8 | "It would push warm and" | | 9 | "She stood very still, staring" | | 10 | "It was older, stranger, harder" | | 11 | "she said, and stepped onto" |
| | ratio | 0.188 | |
| 30.31% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones came first—gnarled" | | 1 | "Aurora pressed her palm against" | | 2 | "She glanced back." | | 3 | "Eva hovered three paces behind," | | 4 | "The ordinary world sat just" | | 5 | "None of it reached this" | | 6 | "Aurora drew a breath and" | | 7 | "The sound went out of" | | 8 | "She stood in the grove." | | 9 | "Eva breathed, stumbling through after" | | 10 | "The clearing spread wide and" | | 11 | "Wildflowers grew in tangled riot—bluebells" | | 12 | "They covered the ground in" | | 13 | "Snowdrops nodded beside summer foxgloves." | | 14 | "The air smelled of honey" | | 15 | "Eva crouched, reaching toward a" | | 16 | "She snatched it back." | | 17 | "They had solidified now, fully" | | 18 | "Their violet eyes drifted across" | | 19 | "Aurora moved deeper." |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers grew in tangled riot—bluebells beside poppies beside blooms Aurora had no name for, petals the colour of bruised plums, others that glowed faintly f…" | | 1 | "The hollow yawned empty, ringed by bark worn smooth as if hands had passed across it for centuries." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.114 | |