Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1G0EKJHWJSPDF3RKNMPFBC

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3m 18s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory yanked the door open, already rehearsing the apology she'd give to whichever drunk from the bar had lost their way up the stairs. The words died in her throat. Lucien stood in the narrow hallway outside her flat above Silas' bar, one gloved hand still raised from a second knock. Rain had speckled the shoulders of his charcoal overcoat, beading on the wool despite the quality of the cloth. The ivory handle of his cane caught the light from the single flickering bulb overhead, throwing a pale stripe across the opposite wall. Those mismatched eyes, one amber, one black, studied her face with an expression she could not name and had spent eight months trying to forget. "You've cut your hair," he said. She hadn't. Her black hair fell to her shoulders as it always had, straight and unwashed at the ends because she'd been in bed when the knock came. The observation was a lie, and they both knew it. A test, delivered with the same quiet precision he brought to everything. To see if she would flinch. To measure how much of the girl he remembered still stood behind the door. "It's been eight months, Lucien." "I know." "You said not to contact you." "And I haven't. You're the one who opened the door." Heat climbed the back of her neck. She wanted to slam it shut. She wanted to pull him inside by the lapels of that immaculate coat. The two impulses warred behind her ribs, and she hated him a little for putting them there. "It's half eleven," she said. "I have work at six." "I won't keep you long." "You said that last time." His mouth twitched, though whether in amusement or something else she could not tell. The bar below had gone quiet, the last of Silas' stragglers stumbling home an hour ago. She could hear the faint creak of old floorboards settling, the tick of the ancient pipework in the wall behind the fridge. The smell of spilled lager and wood polish drifted up through the floorboards, and beneath it the wet-stone scent of the alley where the neon from the off-license bled pink and blue across the concrete. "What do you want?" she asked. "May I come in?" She stepped aside. It was a mistake. She knew it was a mistake the moment he crossed the threshold, his shoulder brushing hers in the narrow entry. The scent of him flooded her senses. Sandalwood, cold tobacco, something darker underneath that was not quite human. She had buried her face in his coat a hundred times, breathing it in like a drug. Now she stood with her arms folded, watching him survey her small living space with those predator's eyes. The flat was clean but cluttered. Yu-Fei's delivery rotas pinned to the fridge with a magnet shaped like a golden cat. A half-drunk cup of tea on the counter, going cold. A stack of library books on the kitchen table, all of them with that particular look of being searched for something other than what they were about. "You've been busy," he said. "People eat. I deliver." "I meant the wards." She blinked. "You can see them?" "Three layers. Salt line at the threshold, ordinary enough. Something older in the window frame, Slavic if I am not mistaken. And whatever Eva has got humming in the walls." He turned to face her. "You've been expecting trouble." The admission cost her. She gave it anyway, because he already knew, and because lying to Lucien Moreau was a waste of everyone's time. "Someone has been asking about me." His expression did not change. She watched for it, the way she always used to watch him. The microscopic shift in the muscles around his eyes. The slight tilt of his head. Something. Anything. "Who?" he asked. "If I knew that, I wouldn't need the wards." Silence pooled between them. He set his cane against the wall, and the click of the ivory handle against the plaster sounded like a gunshot in the small room. She watched his gloved hand return to his side. The blade was in there, she knew. Eight inches of polished steel, thin as a letter opener and twice as lethal. He had used it before. He had used it in front of her, and she had kissed the blood off his knuckles afterwards in the back of a black cab crossing Waterloo Bridge. "Sit down," she said, and hated the softness that crept into her voice. He did not sit. He stood by the window, looking out at the rain that had started to fall in earnest. The neon caught the sharp lines of his profile, the old scar cutting through his left eyebrow she had never asked about. The rain streaked the glass in crooked lines, blurring the alley into something almost beautiful. "I heard about Evan," he said. Of course he had. "News travels." "He surfaced in Whitechapel last week. Asking after a girl from Cardiff. Dark hair. Works for a Chinese restaurant. Delivers in the City after dark." Her blood went cold. "How do you know that?" "Because I put the word out that you had left London. That you owed money to the wrong people. That you were not worth the trouble." He turned to face her. "It bought you six months." The floor seemed to tilt beneath her. She gripped the back of the kitchen chair, knuckles white against the wood. "You told people I owed money?" "I told people you were a liability. That hunting you would draw attention from parties far worse than whatever Evan thinks he is running from." He paused. "It was the best I could do on short notice." "And now?" "Now someone has been asking questions that suggest they have done their own research. The story is wearing thin." She should be angry. She was angry. But underneath it, tangled up with the fear, was something else. Something worse. He had come back. After eight months of silence, of pretending she did not exist, of looking through her at the last meeting as if she were already a ghost, he had come back. And the reason was not her. The reason was the danger she represented to his careful, immaculate life. "You could have sent a note," she said. "A note would not have kept you alive." "A note would have been honest." That landed. She saw it land. The muscle in his jaw tightened. His gloved fingers curled against the windowsill, leather creaking softly. "Honesty," he said, "is a luxury I cannot afford. You know what I am, Rory." "Half-demon. Yes, you told me. Several times. Usually right before you disappeared." "This is different." "Different how? Because this time you have invented a new lie?" He crossed the room in three strides. She did not step back. She refused to step back. They stood close enough that she could feel the heat radiating from him, see the pulse beating at the base of his throat where the collar of his shirt had come slightly undone. "Evan Whitmore is not a jealous ex with a temper," he said quietly. "He is a summoner. Low-grade. Untrained. But he has a grimoire, and he has your name written in it, and the last three women on that list are dead." The room went very still. The rain hammered the window, a sound like small fists. Somewhere below, Silas turned a key in the lock of the front door, the click travelling up through the floorboards like a heartbeat. "Show me," she whispered. "Not here. Not tonight." "Then when?" He reached out. His gloved hand hovered near her face, not quite touching. The leather creaked. The space between his fingertips and her cheek seemed to hum. "Pack a bag," he said. "The kind of bag you take when you do not intend to come back." She should say no. She should tell him to go to hell, that whatever debt he thought he owed her had been paid in full the night he walked out without a word. She should remember that he was half-demon, that he kept secrets like other men kept loose change, that he had lied to her with every breath he had taken since the day they met. She looked at his eyes. One amber. One black. Both of them, right now, afraid. "How long?" she asked. "As long as it takes." "And after?" "After," he said, "we will discuss the word you keep using. Honesty. I believe I owe you some." She stepped past him into the bedroom. She pulled the duffel from under the bed, the one she had packed three months ago and not unpacked. She did not think about the fact that she had been ready for this. That the salt line was already laid. That somewhere in the back of her mind she had known he would come back. She had just not known it would feel like this. In the other room, she heard him strike a match. The window opened. The smoke curled out into the rain, and the sound of his breathing carried through the thin wall between them. She zipped the bag.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.04
90.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1541
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1541
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"predator"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"predator"
1"silence"
2"eyebrow"
3"could feel"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences112
matches
0"was angry"
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1541
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount1126
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.18
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rain1
Lucien2
Moreau1
Silence1
Waterloo1
Bridge1
Silas1
persons
0"Rain"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Silence"
4"Silas"
places
0"Waterloo"
1"Bridge"
globalScore1
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite human"
1"sounded like a gunshot in the small room"
2"not quite touching"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1541
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences145
matches
0"remember that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean22.66
std24.53
cv1.083
sampleLengths
024
16
288
36
470
55
62
76
810
943
1010
115
125
1387
146
154
1680
1758
185
194
204
216
2239
2324
246
2534
263
279
2892
2913
3058
316
326
3325
349
3536
3620
376
3837
392
4019
4172
428
438
446
4522
4615
4712
483
4911
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"being searched"
1"been paid"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs194
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences145
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount338
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.014792899408284023
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0029585798816568047
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean10.63
std8.44
cv0.794
sampleLengths
024
16
221
319
423
525
66
72
826
910
1012
116
1214
135
142
156
1610
177
186
1913
2017
215
225
235
245
2514
2616
2722
2835
296
304
313
324
3320
347
3511
3617
3718
386
3915
4010
4127
425
434
444
452
464
4735
484
494
46.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.36551724137931035
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners53
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Of course he had."
1"Somewhere below, Silas turned a"
ratio0.022
26.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences91
matches
0"Her black hair fell to"
1"She wanted to slam it"
2"She wanted to pull him"
3"His mouth twitched, though whether"
4"She could hear the faint"
5"She stepped aside."
6"It was a mistake."
7"She knew it was a"
8"She had buried her face"
9"He turned to face her"
10"She gave it anyway, because"
11"His expression did not change."
12"She watched for it, the"
13"He set his cane against"
14"She watched his gloved hand"
15"He had used it before."
16"He had used it in"
17"she said, and hated the"
18"He did not sit."
19"He stood by the window,"
ratio0.484
14.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences91
matches
0"Rory yanked the door open,"
1"The words died in her"
2"Lucien stood in the narrow"
3"Rain had speckled the shoulders"
4"The ivory handle of his"
5"Those mismatched eyes, one amber,"
6"Her black hair fell to"
7"The observation was a lie,"
8"A test, delivered with the"
9"Heat climbed the back of"
10"She wanted to slam it"
11"She wanted to pull him"
12"The two impulses warred behind"
13"His mouth twitched, though whether"
14"The bar below had gone"
15"She could hear the faint"
16"The smell of spilled lager"
17"She stepped aside."
18"It was a mistake."
19"She knew it was a"
ratio0.89
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences91
matches
0"To see if she would"
1"To measure how much of"
2"Now she stood with her"
ratio0.033
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.56
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.04
88.6410%