Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1G2GKB1BZ0SZYFVV9WD70E

Run Details

Duration:
7m 56s
Cost:
$0.019001
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of the Raven's Nest flickered once, twice, then held. Aurora stood on the pavement below it, hood up against the drizzle, and watched the light stutter as if the bar itself were deciding whether to stay open. The street was quiet. London always went quiet in the early hours between the last train and the first bin lorry, and this stretch of Soho wore that quiet like a held breath. She hadn't been inside the bar in almost four months. The flat above it was hers; the stairs were hers; the radiator that woke her at odd hours was hers. But somewhere along the way the door at the bottom of the stairs had become a thing she passed through on her way to the world outside, never a place she stopped in. Silas was always in there. He was in there when she left for the restaurant in the morning, and he was in there when she came back at night, and in all that time they had not said anything to each other that could not have been said in a year. She pushed the door. It gave its small tired sigh. He stood behind the counter with a glass in one hand and a cloth in the other, polishing with the kind of attention most people reserved for surgery. He hadn't looked up. The walls behind him were the same as always - maps of places she couldn't pronounce, black-and-white photographs of men in coats standing next to cars that didn't exist anymore - but the man in front of them looked older tonight, or perhaps it was the light. The grey in his beard caught the green of the sign and turned briefly silver. She stepped inside. The door swung shut behind her. "You'll wear a groove in that," she said. He set the glass down. Looked at her. His face did the thing it always did, the very slight rearrangement of features that meant he was recalculating something. "Couldn't sleep?" he said. "Radiator's making a noise." "Which one?" "Living room." He nodded as if she had reported a casualty. "I'll come up in the morning." "I can wait." He held her gaze for a second longer than usual, then pulled a second glass from under the counter and set it beside the first. "Sit down, Rory." She sat. The stool creaked. She remembered, with a small lurch, that she had not spoken a full sentence to another person in some time. She had been delivering until late, sleeping until late, eating whatever Yu-Fei pressed into her hands at the end of the shift. The flat had become a place to deposit her coat and nothing else. Silas poured her a whisky without asking. She wrapped her hand around it. The glass was cold. "You look tired," he said. "You look like a spy in a film." He almost smiled. "I'll take that as a compliment." "It wasn't meant as one." He did smile then, briefly, and the years on his face rearranged themselves into something she almost recognised. She had seen that smile before, she thought. Years ago, in a kitchen that was not this one, in a city that was not this one. The thought slid away before she could hold it. "How's the restaurant?" he asked. "Yu-Fei's fine. He's got a new dim sum menu. He wants me to try the pork ones." "Tell him I said they're too greasy." "You tell him. He likes you." "He likes everyone who eats his food." "That's not true and you know it." He poured himself a measure from the same bottle. His hand was steady. The silver signet on his right hand caught the light as he lifted the glass, and she looked at it longer than she meant to. She had never asked him about the ring. There were a lot of things she had never asked him about. There were a lot of things he had never offered. "I ran into Eva," he said. The glass stopped halfway to her mouth. She set it down. "Where?" "Waterloo. She was reading a book on the platform." "Waterloo is a big station." "She was wearing a yellow coat." "Yellow coat. That's her." He watched her. She watched her whisky. "How did she look?" Rory said. "Older." "Everyone's older." "She asked about you." Rory turned the glass slowly on the bar. The whisky made a small lens of itself against the wood. "What did you tell her?" "That you were working. That you lived here. That you were well." "Which part was a lie?" He didn't answer. She looked up at him then, and the thing she'd been avoiding for months, maybe longer, was suddenly in the room with them, sitting on the stool between her and the door, taking up space. She had not spoken to Eva in three years. The last message was in the autumn, something about a film Rory hadn't seen, and then the new year had come and gone and she had not replied, and the summer after that, and now it was autumn again and she still had not replied. She could not, now, remember what she had wanted to say. The message had been about a film, but the film was not the point. The point had been to say: I'm still here. I'm still the person who knew you when. The point had been to keep a thread from fraying, and she had let it fray, and now Eva was at Waterloo in a yellow coat and Rory was in a bar in Soho at half past two in the morning, and the thread was not there to be picked up. "Why didn't you tell me before?" she said. "I wasn't sure you'd want to know." "That's not your decision to make." "No," he said. "It isn't." He took a drink. She watched the line of his throat move. He had been kind to her when she arrived. She remembered that now, the way you remember a room you once lived in - the shapes of the furniture, the colour of the curtains, but not quite where the light fell. He had let her stay in the flat for almost nothing. He had walked her to the restaurant on her first morning. He had stood at the door of the kitchen and said, in that quiet voice of his, that if she ever needed anything, she should ask. She had not asked. She had not asked for a lot of things. "Eva was your friend," he said. "Before." "Before what?" "Before all of it." She looked at the maps on the wall. One of them was of Prague. She had never been to Prague. She had a feeling, suddenly, that he had, and that the map was there because of him, and that she did not want to know why. "I was different then," she said. "You were twenty-two." "You remember." "I remember everyone who sits at that bar at closing time." "You don't usually serve anyone at closing time." "No," he said. "I don't." The silence came back and sat down. It was not a comfortable silence. It was the kind that had weight, that pressed on the chest, that made you want to fill it with something just to make it stop. Rory had been good at filling silences once. She had been good at a lot of things once. "Do you ever think," she said, and then stopped. He waited. "Do you ever think about the people you were, before. Whether you'd recognise them." "Sometimes." "Would you? Recognise them." He looked at her for a long time. The green neon buzzed faintly outside. A car passed. The radiator in the flat above them made its cat-noise, and they both looked up at the ceiling as if they could see through it. "I think," he said, "that I would be surprised. By how little I'd changed. And by how much." She nodded. She didn't trust herself to speak. "You didn't answer me," he said. "Which question?" "About Eva." "I heard you." "And?" She looked at her whisky. She thought about Waterloo at rush hour, the way the platforms filled up and emptied like lungs, the way a yellow coat could be a person and then a stranger and then just a coat. She thought about the message she had not replied to. She thought about a kitchen she had not been in for years, and a friend who had once told her to run, and the way you can love someone and also fail them, repeatedly, in small ways, until the failure becomes the shape of the love. "I don't know what I'd say to her," Rory said. "You could start with hello." "That's not really her style. Or mine." "No," he said. "It isn't." He took her glass and refilled it. He did not refill his own. The bottle made a small glugging sound that was oddly comforting, like a small animal drinking. He set the glass back in front of her, and his hand brushed hers, and he did not pull it away as quickly as he might have. "When I came back," he said, "from the last job, the one with the knee, I didn't speak to anyone for six months. Not a word. I sat in this bar every night and polished glasses and read the papers and I didn't speak. People came in, they drank, they left. I said goodnight. That was the most I had." "Why?" "I was tired of hearing my own voice. I thought if I didn't use it, I'd forget the things I'd said. The things I'd done. I thought silence would make them smaller." "Did it?" He looked at her. His hazel eyes were very clear in the low light. "It made them louder." She held his gaze. She thought about Evan. She thought about the small crescent scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident she had told people was from a childhood accident, because that was easier, because the truth of it was something she had only ever said out loud once, to a woman in a clinic in Cardiff who had nodded and written things down and then asked her to make another appointment, which she had not done. She thought about the flat above this bar and the man who owned it and the years between the woman in the clinic and the woman on this stool, and how the years were not a distance but a kind of weather, something you moved through and were moved by, and that you came out the other side of them different in ways you couldn't yet name. "I don't know who I was before," she said. "I don't know who I am now. I just know they're not the same person." "No," he said. "They aren't." He took the cloth back up. He began to polish the same glass again, slowly, the way he had been when she came in. The map of Prague watched them from the wall. Outside, the green neon buzzed, and a bin lorry started its slow round somewhere in the next street, and the city began, very faintly, to wake. Rory sat with her whisky. She did not drink it. She did not need to. The warmth of the glass against her palm was enough for now, and the sound of the cloth on the glass, and the man behind the bar who had not asked her anything she wasn't ready to answer, who had offered her a drink and a question and the space to do with them as she pleased. She thought about Eva in the yellow coat. She thought about the message still unread in her phone. She thought about Prague, and the limp, and the ring. She would go up in a minute. She would sleep, or she would not sleep, and in the morning she would deliver food for Yu-Fei and the world would go on being the world, and the radiator would still need fixing, and the thread to Eva would still be where she'd left it, frayed and waiting. But for now, she sat. For now, the bar was quiet, and the man behind it was quiet, and the silence between them was not the loud kind, not yet, and the green light held, and held, and held.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.268
leniency0.535
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2077
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
3"really"
4"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2077
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"lurch"
count1
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"comfortable"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"lurch"
2"silence"
3"comfortable"
4"weight"
5"comforting"
6"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences129
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences181
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2080
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1661
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Yu-Fei2
Rory7
Eva4
Waterloo2
Prague4
Evan1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Waterloo"
2"Prague"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite where the light fell"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.481
wordCount2080
matches
0"not a distance but a kind of weather, something you moved through"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences181
matches
0"seen that smile"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs94
mean22.13
std32.99
cv1.491
sampleLengths
073
1114
210
394
49
58
628
74
84
92
102
1115
123
1325
143
1560
1617
175
188
199
205
2153
225
2317
247
256
267
277
2868
296
3011
311
329
335
346
354
367
376
381
392
404
4119
425
4312
445
4538
46147
478
487
496
99.82% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences129
matches
0"been said"
1"were moved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs283
matches
0"were deciding"
1"was recalculating"
2"was oddly comforting"
95.50% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences181
ratio0.017
matches
0"The flat above it was hers; the stairs were hers; the radiator that woke her at odd hours was hers."
1"The walls behind him were the same as always - maps of places she couldn't pronounce, black-and-white photographs of men in coats standing next to cars that didn't exist anymore - but the man in front of them looked older tonight, or perhaps it was the light."
2"She remembered that now, the way you remember a room you once lived in - the shapes of the furniture, the colour of the curtains, but not quite where the light fell."
96.59% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1663
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount73
adverbRatio0.043896572459410706
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.007817197835237523
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences181
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences181
mean11.49
std12.99
cv1.131
sampleLengths
012
128
24
329
410
520
633
75
846
94
106
1128
124
1347
1415
153
166
178
185
193
2020
214
224
232
242
259
266
273
2825
293
302
313
3220
3322
3413
357
366
374
385
398
403
416
425
4318
448
4518
469
475
4817
497
32.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.2541436464088398
totalSentences181
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount68
totalSentences108
matches
0"She hadn't been inside the"
1"He was in there when"
2"She pushed the door."
3"It gave its small tired"
4"He stood behind the counter"
5"He hadn't looked up."
6"She stepped inside."
7"He set the glass down."
8"His face did the thing"
9"He nodded as if she"
10"He held her gaze for"
11"She remembered, with a small"
12"She had been delivering until"
13"She wrapped her hand around"
14"He almost smiled."
15"He did smile then, briefly,"
16"She had seen that smile"
17"He poured himself a measure"
18"His hand was steady."
19"She had never asked him"
ratio0.63
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences108
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Aurora stood on the pavement"
2"The street was quiet."
3"London always went quiet in"
4"She hadn't been inside the"
5"The flat above it was"
6"Silas was always in there."
7"He was in there when"
8"She pushed the door."
9"It gave its small tired"
10"He stood behind the counter"
11"He hadn't looked up."
12"The walls behind him were"
13"The grey in his beard"
14"She stepped inside."
15"The door swung shut behind"
16"He set the glass down."
17"His face did the thing"
18"He nodded as if she"
19"He held her gaze for"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Aurora stood on the pavement below it, hood up against the drizzle, and watched the light stutter as if the bar itself were deciding whether to stay open."
1"The walls behind him were the same as always - maps of places she couldn't pronounce, black-and-white photographs of men in coats standing next to cars that did…"
2"His face did the thing it always did, the very slight rearrangement of features that meant he was recalculating something."
3"The radiator in the flat above them made its cat-noise, and they both looked up at the ceiling as if they could see through it."
4"The bottle made a small glugging sound that was oddly comforting, like a small animal drinking."
5"She thought about the small crescent scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident she had told people was from a childhood accident, because that was easier…"
6"She thought about the flat above this bar and the man who owned it and the years between the woman in the clinic and the woman on this stool, and how the years …"
7"The warmth of the glass against her palm was enough for now, and the sound of the cloth on the glass, and the man behind the bar who had not asked her anything …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.268
leniency0.535
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.1578%