Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1G3N6T45MZANCPP9SG7HHF

Run Details

Duration:
3m 1s
Cost:
$0.004015
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed its familiar low hum above the door, the kind of sound Rory had stopped hearing years ago, or thought she had. She stood on the pavement with her hands buried in the pockets of her jacket, watching the letters flicker through condensation—RAVEN'S NEST, the R and the S always the dimmest, as if the whole establishment were perpetually winking at some private joke. She had delivered to worse places. Had delivered to places that made the hair on her arms stand up, that made her check the locks twice when she got home. This was not one of those places. The Nest had never been one of those places. That was the problem. The door stuck, the way it always had, and she had to hip-check it the way she'd taught herself to years before, a trick of leverage she'd thought forgotten. Inside, the air hit her: stale beer, wood polish, the ghost of cigarettes from before the ban, and beneath it all, something warm and human that she couldn't name but had missed in a way that lived in her chest rather than her head. The maps were still there. The photographs. The same battered stools with the torn red leather. A Tuesday, half-eight, and the place was nearly empty—a couple in the far booth murmuring over their pints, a man at the bar reading a paperback with a whisky he was nursing the way one nurses a grudge. Silas was behind the bar, doing something with a glass and a cloth, his back half-turned. The grey in his hair had spread. His shoulders sat lower in his frame, or his frame had narrowed around them. She watched him for a moment before she understood she was holding her breath. "Closed for private function," he said without looking up. "You'll have to come back when you're less handsome." A beat. His hand slowed on the glass. "I don't—" He turned, and the rest of the sentence left him. The cloth dangled from two fingers. He looked at her the way a man looks at a photograph he's been carrying in his wallet, expecting the paper to have yellowed, expecting the face in it to have aged in proportion. She had not aged in proportion. None of them ever do. "Christ," Silas said. "Rory." "Aurora, actually." She hadn't meant to say it. The name came out before the joke could catch it, and she watched his face do something complicated—hurt, recognition, the flicker of a laugh he didn't let through. "Right. Yes." He set the glass down. "What are you doing here?" "Delivering." She lifted the insulated bag at her hip, the Yu-Fei Cheung logo bright in the dim. "Mrs. Patterson in Flat 3B. Spring rolls." "You could have just—" "I know." He looked at her properly then, the way he used to, that quiet inventory he did of everyone who came through his door—threat level, tells, the story written in the set of the jaw and the cut of the coat. She let him do it. She had nothing to hide. That was new. "You're thinner," he said. "You're greyer." "Fifty-eight will do that." "I thought you were older." That one he did laugh at, a small sound, almost surprised out of him. He set the cloth on the bar and came around the end, and for a moment she thought he was going to hug her, and for a longer moment she thought she might let him, and then he stopped at a respectful distance and gestured at a stool. "Sit. Please. I'll get you something." "I have to get back to Yu-Fei." "Aurora." The name, when he said it, sounded like a key turned in a lock she'd thought she'd changed. "Sit down for ten minutes. You can ring her from here. She owes me a favour anyway." Rory sat. The stool creaked under her in exactly the way it used to, and she put her hands flat on the bar to steady herself against a wave of something that was not quite nausea and not quite grief. He poured her a glass of water without asking, set it in front of her, poured himself a measure of something amber that he did not drink. "How long," he said. "Three years. Give or take." "You didn't write." "I know." "I didn't either." "I know that too." He nodded, as if she'd confirmed something he'd been turning over for longer than she wanted to calculate. The couple in the far booth got up and left, the woman laughing at something the man said, the door catching on the same hip-check trick, and then they were alone with the maps and the photographs and the hum of the sign outside. "You look—" he started. "Don't." "—tired," he finished, quieter. "You look tired, Aurora. I'm allowed to say that." "Then yes. I am." She took a sip of the water. "I'm tired, Silas. I'm tired in a way I don't think sleep fixes." He turned the glass in his hand, watching the liquid move. "Evan." The name landed between them like a dropped coin. She didn't flinch. She'd trained herself out of flinching two addresses and one police statement ago. "Evan," she agreed. "And before Evan, and after, and all the bits in between that I don't talk about at dinner parties." "You never came to dinner parties." "No. I didn't." He was quiet for a long time. The clock above the till ticked loud enough to count. She counted four ticks, then stopped. "I should have come after you," he said, finally. "When you left. I had the address. Eva's people gave it to me. I had it written down and I stood in this room and I looked at the paper and I put it in the drawer and I poured myself a drink and I never went." "I know that too." "You—" "I knew because I was waiting for you to come. For about six months, I was waiting. Every time the door went, every time the phone rang, I thought, that's him, that's Si, he's come to tell me I'm being a fool and to get in the car. And then it wasn't. And then I stopped waiting." He set the glass down with a click that was too careful. "I told myself you needed space. I told myself I'd done enough damage by—you remember what I said. That night." "I remember every word you've ever said to me, Silas. That's the trouble with you. You're memorable." "You were twenty-one." "I was twenty-one, and I was in love with a man who put his hands around my throat in a Tesco car park, and you told me to come back when I'd sorted myself out. As if it were a prescription. As if I'd gone to the chemist." "I was trying to give you dignity. I was trying not to make your choices for you." "You were trying not to get involved." The words sat in the air. He didn't deny them. She watched him not deny them, and she felt something loosen in her chest that she hadn't realised she'd been clenching for three years and a thousand miles. "You're right," he said, after a while. "I was trying not to get involved. I'm old, and I've been involved in too many things that ended badly, and I thought—" He stopped. He looked at his hands. The silver signet ring caught the light. "I thought if I kept my distance, I wouldn't be the one to break you." "You weren't the one to break me, Si." "I know that now. I didn't know it then." She turned the water glass in her fingers, the way he turned his whisky, and she thought about the flat upstairs that she had not been inside for a thousand days, the bed she had made that morning and not slept in, the boy she had loved and left and loved and left and finally, finally, not loved at all, the way you stop loving a fire when you've watched it take too much. "I came back three days ago," she said. "I've been sleeping in the back of Yu-Fei's van. She doesn't know. I haven't told anyone I was back. I thought I'd just—deliver, and leave, and not bother you with it. I thought that would be the kind thing." "And what made you come in?" She looked at the maps. One of them, above the till, was of Prague, and she knew without asking that the photograph beside it, the one of a young man with no grey in his hair and a different kind of weight in his shoulders, was from before. From before the knee. From before the bar. From before her. "I forgot how the door sticks," she said. "I forgot, and I pushed it the wrong way, and then I was in, and I could smell the polish, and I could see the maps, and I thought—if I leave now, I'll spend another three years not writing and not ringing and not coming in. And I'm tired of that. I'm tired of us both being too proud and too careful and too whatever-we-are to stand in the same room." He picked up the whisky. He looked at it for a long time. Then he set it back down, untouched, and put both hands flat on the bar, mirroring her, and she saw the tremor in his left hand that he used to be able to hide. "Stay," he said. "Not tonight. Not forever. Just—stay for the spring rolls. Stay for an hour. Let me make you something to eat that isn't out of a delivery bag. Let me be sorry in a way that isn't a letter you'll never read." She looked at him. The grey. The limp he was leaning off of more than he used to. The way the bar had held him in the same shape for a decade, and the way the shape had begun to give. "The spring rolls will get cold," she said. "I'll ring Mrs. Patterson. I'll tell her Yu-Fei sends her apologies. I'll tell her the delivery girl got lost." "She won't believe you." "No. She won't." Rory took off her jacket. She folded it over the back of the stool. She sat down properly, both feet on the rail, and she waited for him to come back from the kitchen, and the clock ticked, and the sign hummed, and outside, the night pressed its face against the window like an old friend who had been standing there for some time, hoping to be let in.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.297
leniency0.594
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1794
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1794
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count2
2
word"calculate"
count1
3
word"clenching"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"flicker"
2"calculate"
3"clenching"
4"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1785
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount1134
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Nest1
Tuesday1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Prague1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nest"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
places
0"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like a key turned in a lock she'd"
1"not quite nausea and not quite grief"
2"not quite grief"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1785
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"made that morning"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean26.25
std24.42
cv0.93
sampleLengths
068
150
273
354
451
518
68
763
84
936
1012
1124
124
132
1453
154
162
174
185
1962
206
217
2236
2367
244
255
263
272
283
294
3062
314
321
3313
3424
3512
3625
3722
386
393
4023
4156
424
431
4457
4532
4617
473
4848
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs203
matches
0"were perpetually winking"
1"was nursing"
2"was holding"
31.25% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences128
ratio0.039
matches
0"She stood on the pavement with her hands buried in the pockets of her jacket, watching the letters flicker through condensation—RAVEN'S NEST, the R and the S always the dimmest, as if the whole establishment were perpetually winking at some private joke."
1"A Tuesday, half-eight, and the place was nearly empty—a couple in the far booth murmuring over their pints, a man at the bar reading a paperback with a whisky he was nursing the way one nurses a grudge."
2"The name came out before the joke could catch it, and she watched his face do something complicated—hurt, recognition, the flicker of a laugh he didn't let through."
3"He looked at her properly then, the way he used to, that quiet inventory he did of everyone who came through his door—threat level, tells, the story written in the set of the jaw and the cut of the coat."
4"\"—tired,\" he finished, quieter."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1192
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.024328859060402684
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0041946308724832215
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean13.95
std15.16
cv1.087
sampleLengths
026
142
26
324
47
59
64
729
844
95
102
119
1238
1316
147
1514
1614
179
189
192
206
2112
226
2334
246
255
263
271
288
2928
307
315
3217
337
344
352
3640
375
385
393
404
412
424
435
4414
4548
466
477
4819
4917
35.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.28125
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners36
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then he set it back"
ratio0.014
5.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences69
matches
0"She stood on the pavement"
1"She had delivered to worse"
2"His shoulders sat lower in"
3"She watched him for a"
4"he said without looking up"
5"His hand slowed on the"
6"He turned, and the rest"
7"He looked at her the"
8"She had not aged in"
9"She hadn't meant to say"
10"He set the glass down"
11"She lifted the insulated bag"
12"He looked at her properly"
13"She let him do it."
14"She had nothing to hide."
15"He set the cloth on"
16"He poured her a glass"
17"He nodded, as if she'd"
18"She took a sip of"
19"He turned the glass in"
ratio0.536
10.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences69
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"She stood on the pavement"
2"She had delivered to worse"
3"This was not one of"
4"The Nest had never been"
5"That was the problem."
6"The door stuck, the way"
7"The maps were still there."
8"The same battered stools with"
9"A Tuesday, half-eight, and the"
10"Silas was behind the bar,"
11"The grey in his hair"
12"His shoulders sat lower in"
13"She watched him for a"
14"he said without looking up"
15"His hand slowed on the"
16"He turned, and the rest"
17"The cloth dangled from two"
18"He looked at her the"
19"She had not aged in"
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She stood on the pavement with her hands buried in the pockets of her jacket, watching the letters flicker through condensation—RAVEN'S NEST, the R and the S al…"
1"Inside, the air hit her: stale beer, wood polish, the ghost of cigarettes from before the ban, and beneath it all, something warm and human that she couldn't na…"
2"He looked at her the way a man looks at a photograph he's been carrying in his wallet, expecting the paper to have yellowed, expecting the face in it to have ag…"
3"The stool creaked under her in exactly the way it used to, and she put her hands flat on the bar to steady herself against a wave of something that was not quit…"
4"He nodded, as if she'd confirmed something he'd been turning over for longer than she wanted to calculate."
5"She sat down properly, both feet on the rail, and she waited for him to come back from the kitchen, and the clock ticked, and the sign hummed, and outside, the …"
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, finally"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.031
78.6956%