Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1G4HZEWWZ9B5YXE43PC5MY

Run Details

Duration:
42.8s
Cost:
$0.064395
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain came down in sheets, turning the Soho pavement into a black mirror that fractured every streetlight into shards. Detective Harlow Quinn ran through it, her boots slapping puddles, her breath ragged in her throat. Twenty feet ahead, the figure in the long coat ducked between two parked cars and vanished into an alley. "Police! Stop running!" The figure didn't stop. They never did. Quinn cut the corner, shoulder scraping brick, and burst into the alley just in time to see the coat flap around the far end. She'd been tailing the man for forty minutes, ever since he'd slipped out the back of a bar with a green neon sign she'd marked weeks ago. The Raven's Nest. She'd watched that place long enough to know the people who came and went weren't ordinary. This one had clocked her the moment she'd stepped from the shadows, and he'd bolted like a man with something worse than a parking ticket to hide. Her watch dug into her wrist as she pumped her arms. Forty-one years old and still faster than half the constables on the force. She kept the suspect's silhouette in her sights, the rhythm of the pursuit settling into her bones the way it had a thousand times before. Left at the bins. Right past the shuttered kebab shop. Down a flight of slick stone steps she hadn't known existed. The man hit a gate at the bottom—an old iron thing, padlocked, rusted into the stone of a railway arch. Quinn slowed, certain she had him cornered. He pressed something to his palm. A pale chip of something, bone-white in the gloom. The padlock fell open on its own. "What the hell—" The gate swung wide, and the man dropped through into darkness. Quinn reached the bottom of the steps and grabbed the iron bars. Cold air poured up from below, carrying smells that didn't belong under a London street: woodsmoke, something floral and rotten, the tang of metal she couldn't name. A staircase descended into the earth. Tiled walls, the kind she recognised from disused Tube stations—white ceramic gone yellow with age, a fragment of old signage half-peeled. CAMDEN. But this station had been sealed since before she joined the force. Down there, light flickered. Not electric. Warmer, redder, moving. Quinn's hand went to the radio clipped at her shoulder. She thumbed it. "This is DI Quinn requesting backup, location—" Static answered her. A wash of white noise, then nothing. She tried again. The radio spat a sound like distant voices speaking backwards and died. She let it go. Her thumb found the grip of her sidearm instead, the familiar weight a small mercy. Three years she'd been chasing the edges of this thing. Three years since Morris had walked into a building like this and never walked out, and the report had said *missing, presumed dead*, and nobody could tell her why his blood had been on the walls in patterns that made her stomach turn when she looked too long. She'd promised herself she'd find the door. Now one stood open in front of her, breathing. Rain hammered the steps behind her. Ahead, the dark. Quinn went down. The staircase curved, and the temperature changed with each step—colder, then suddenly warm, as if she'd passed through an invisible membrane. The tiled walls gave way to brick, then to stone that looked older than the city above it. At the bottom, the platform of the dead station spread out before her, and Quinn stopped breathing for a moment. Stalls. Dozens of them, crammed along where the rails should have been, lit by lanterns that held no flame she could identify—just light, hanging captive in glass. Figures moved between them, hooded, cloaked, some that walked wrong, on too many joints. A woman with eyes like polished coins weighed dried things on a brass scale. A man sold bottles that glowed and shifted colour. The air thrummed with low conversation in languages that scraped at the inside of her skull. The Veil Market. She'd heard the name whispered by an informant who'd recanted everything the next morning, terrified, begging her to forget she'd ever heard it. Her suspect cut through the crowd ahead, glancing back once. His face caught the lantern light—pale, sweating, scared of her in a place where she had every reason to be the one afraid. "Stop!" Quinn pushed forward. Heads turned. The coin-eyed woman tracked her with a smile that showed too many teeth. A figure draped in grey stepped into Quinn's path, and she shouldered past it, ignoring the cold that bled through her coat at the contact. Her badge was useless here. Her gun, maybe less so. She kept her hand on it and didn't draw. The suspect knocked over a table of trinkets. Bone tokens scattered across the platform, clicking like dice. A vendor shrieked something, and hands reached for Quinn from the dark beneath the stalls—she felt fingers brush her ankle and kicked free. "Detective." A voice cut across the noise, low and accented, urgent. "You shouldn't be here." A man stepped out from behind a pillar, blocking her view of the fleeing suspect. Olive skin, dark curls plastered to his forehead from the rain he'd carried down with him, a saint's medallion bright at his throat. Young. A scar ran the length of his left forearm where his sleeve was pushed up. "Out of my way." Quinn tried to step around him. He moved with her, hands raised, palms open. "You don't understand what this place is. These people—they don't follow your laws. They'll take an eye, a name, a year of your life, and call it fair trade. You walk through here like that and you won't walk out." "Like Morris didn't walk out?" The name left her before she'd decided to say it, sharp as a blade. "You know that name? Any of you know that name down here?" Something flickered across the man's face—not recognition, but fear of recognition, the look of someone who knew more than was safe. "My name's Tomás." He glanced over his shoulder, scanning the crowd, then back to her. "And the man you're chasing is already gone. Look." She looked. The platform stretched away into a tunnel mouth, and the long coat had melted into the dark where the lanterns didn't reach. The crowd had closed behind it like water. "He went into the tunnel," Quinn said. "Where does it go?" "Nowhere you can follow without a token. And nowhere you'd want to." Tomás lowered his hands. Rain dripped from his sleeve onto the ancient stone. "You've got maybe two minutes before the market decides you're a problem. I can get you back to the steps. That's the only offer worth taking." Quinn stared past him into the dark, every nerve in her body screaming to follow, to finally chase this thing to its end. Her hand tightened on the grip of her gun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"gloom"
2"flickered"
3"electric"
4"familiar"
5"weight"
6"stomach"
7"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1162
ratio0.003
matches
0"missing, presumed dead"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1023
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Tube1
Morris1
Veil1
Market1
Heads1
Tomás1
Rain3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
4"Heads"
5"Tomás"
6"Rain"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.865
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.861
wordCount1162
matches
0"not recognition, but fear of recognition, the look of someone who knew more than"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"watched that place"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean33.2
std24.27
cv0.731
sampleLengths
054
13
27
397
470
527
622
73
850
940
109
1113
1232
1377
1416
159
163
1759
1880
1926
2033
214
2259
2340
2415
2554
2610
2748
2831
2921
3024
3132
3211
3351
3432
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"been sealed"
1"been, lit"
2"was pushed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs174
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences95
ratio0.074
matches
0"The man hit a gate at the bottom—an old iron thing, padlocked, rusted into the stone of a railway arch."
1"Tiled walls, the kind she recognised from disused Tube stations—white ceramic gone yellow with age, a fragment of old signage half-peeled."
2"The staircase curved, and the temperature changed with each step—colder, then suddenly warm, as if she'd passed through an invisible membrane."
3"Dozens of them, crammed along where the rails should have been, lit by lanterns that held no flame she could identify—just light, hanging captive in glass."
4"His face caught the lantern light—pale, sweating, scared of her in a place where she had every reason to be the one afraid."
5"A vendor shrieked something, and hands reached for Quinn from the dark beneath the stalls—she felt fingers brush her ankle and kicked free."
6"Something flickered across the man's face—not recognition, but fear of recognition, the look of someone who knew more than was safe."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1034
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02804642166344294
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019342359767891683
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean12.23
std8.84
cv0.723
sampleLengths
019
116
219
33
44
53
624
727
83
916
1027
1111
1213
1325
144
156
1611
1720
187
196
209
217
223
2311
2412
2527
266
2721
281
2912
304
312
323
3310
343
3510
367
373
3812
394
4015
4110
4248
437
449
456
463
473
4821
4918
70.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4631578947368421
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences80
matches
0"They never did."
1"She'd been tailing the man"
2"She'd watched that place long"
3"Her watch dug into her"
4"She kept the suspect's silhouette"
5"He pressed something to his"
6"She thumbed it."
7"She tried again."
8"She let it go."
9"Her thumb found the grip"
10"She'd promised herself she'd find"
11"She'd heard the name whispered"
12"Her suspect cut through the"
13"His face caught the lantern"
14"Her badge was useless here."
15"Her gun, maybe less so."
16"She kept her hand on"
17"He moved with her, hands"
18"He glanced over his shoulder,"
19"Her hand tightened on the"
ratio0.25
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences80
matches
0"Rain came down in sheets,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ran through"
2"The figure didn't stop."
3"They never did."
4"Quinn cut the corner, shoulder"
5"She'd been tailing the man"
6"The Raven's Nest."
7"She'd watched that place long"
8"This one had clocked her"
9"Her watch dug into her"
10"She kept the suspect's silhouette"
11"The man hit a gate"
12"Quinn slowed, certain she had"
13"He pressed something to his"
14"A pale chip of something,"
15"The padlock fell open on"
16"The gate swung wide, and"
17"Quinn reached the bottom of"
18"A staircase descended into the"
19"Quinn's hand went to the"
ratio0.8
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now one stood open in"
ratio0.013
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Cold air poured up from below, carrying smells that didn't belong under a London street: woodsmoke, something floral and rotten, the tang of metal she couldn't …"
1"The staircase curved, and the temperature changed with each step—colder, then suddenly warm, as if she'd passed through an invisible membrane."
2"The air thrummed with low conversation in languages that scraped at the inside of her skull."
3"She'd heard the name whispered by an informant who'd recanted everything the next morning, terrified, begging her to forget she'd ever heard it."
4"The coin-eyed woman tracked her with a smile that showed too many teeth."
5"Something flickered across the man's face—not recognition, but fear of recognition, the look of someone who knew more than was safe."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"The name left (leave)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.125
85.2861%