Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1G6EQW2HBNBM6WC46WJT1Q

Run Details

Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.003060
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The standing stones announced themselves before Aurora saw them. It started as a pressure behind her eyes, a dull throb that matched the rhythm of the Heartstone pendant warming against her collarbone. She'd followed the path Nyx indicated—a deer trail cutting east through the ancient oaks of Richmond Park, the kind of track that only existed if you knew to look for it—but the deeper she walked, the more the modern world fell away. The distant hum of traffic on the A307 thinned to a whisper. The joggers and dog walkers she'd passed at the gate simply weren't here. Even the birdsong had changed, retreating to a higher register, as though the birds themselves didn't want to get too close. "Aldric," Aurora murmured, using the name she knew Nyx preferred when they were being serious. "Do you feel that?" The Shade didn't answer in words. They flowed forward through a gap between two holly bushes, their humanoid form stretched thin and elongated, the violet glow of their eyes leaving faint trails in Aurora's vision. When they did speak, it sounded like wind through dead leaves. "The Veil is thin here. Older than thin. Worn." Aurora pushed through the last of the undergrowth and stopped. The stones rose out of the earth like broken teeth. Twelve of them, maybe more—she couldn't count them properly because her eyes kept sliding off, finding it difficult to hold more than three in focus at a time. They were oak, not granite, impossibly old oak, grey and silvered and carved with spirals that seemed to move when she wasn't looking directly at them. Moss crept up their flanks in patterns too deliberate to be natural. Between them, the air shimmered the way hot asphalt shimmers on a July afternoon, except it was October, and the air should have been cold enough to see her breath. The Heartstone pulsed once, hard, and Aurora touched it through her shirt. "This is it," she said. "This is the boundary." Nyx drifted closer to one of the stones, their form rippling at the edges where the shadow met the strange light. They didn't touch it. "Isolde will not come to us." "I know." "She never does." "I know that too." Aurora took a breath. The air tasted of honey and woodsmoke and something older, something her body recognized before her mind did—a smell like the inside of her grandmother's house in Cardiff, the dresser where the old photographs sat, the dust of decades. The smell of time made physical. It made her want to weep, and she didn't understand why. She stepped forward. The world did not end. That was the strange part. There was no flash of light, no roar of sound, no dramatic tearing. One moment she was standing in the deer path with her trainers sinking into the soft leaf litter, and the next moment she was standing in a different deer path, and the only difference was everything. The trees were the same kind of oak, but they were not the same. Their branches arched overhead in a perfect vault, each one meeting its neighbor to form a living cathedral ceiling, and through the gaps between the leaves the sky was the wrong color—a pale, luminous green, like light filtered through a glass of absinthe. The light itself didn't behave properly. It came from no clear source, casting no real shadows, and yet it was warm on her skin, warm in the way of spring, even though the calendar said October and the calendar was right. Wildflowers carpeted the ground. Not a meadow. A carpet—thick, ankle-deep, dense as wool, and every color she could name and several she couldn't. The air hummed with insects, but when Aurora looked down she couldn't see them, only the suggestion of motion among the petals. "Aurora Carter." Nyx's whisper came from somewhere to her left. "Do not move." She froze. A woman was standing ten feet away, and Aurora hadn't heard her arrive. Hadn't seen her. The woman was silver-haired, pale as birch bark, dressed in a gown that seemed to be woven from the same impossible light as the air itself. She was smiling, but her lavender eyes held the particular distance of someone watching from a great height. "Welcome to my home," said Isolde Varga. "You came faster than the last one. I do appreciate efficiency." Aurora's mouth opened. Closed. She was distantly aware that her hand had gone to the hilt of the slender moonsilver dagger at her hip—Isolde's own gift, returned, somehow, across years that hadn't happened yet—and she forced herself to uncurl her fingers. "You're not real," Aurora said. "You can't be. I haven't—I'm not here for you. I'm not here for anything. I'm just—" "Looking," Isolde finished, still smiling. "They always are. Come. Walk with me. The grove is best understood through the feet." She turned and moved deeper into the trees, and Aurora watched her go, and felt a chill climb her spine that had nothing to do with the moonsilver at her hip. There were no footprints behind Isolde. None at all. The wildflowers closed softly back into place as she passed, leaving no mark of her passage, and the grass didn't even bend. Aurora looked at Nyx. Nyx's violet eyes had narrowed to slits. "She is what she says," the Shade offered. "That is the problem." "Yeah," Aurora breathed. "I was sort of hoping you'd tell me she was a trick." They walked. The grove unfolded around them in layers, each one stranger than the last. The first clearing gave way to a stand of silver birches, their trunks gleaming like polished metal, their leaves chiming faintly in a wind Aurora couldn't feel on her skin. The second gave way to a slow, wide stream that ran in the wrong direction—uphill, away from the distant sound of falling water—and the water was warm, and it tasted of mint and something older than mint. Aurora knelt to touch it, and when she lifted her fingers the droplets rose back to the stream on their own, defying gravity with the casual indifference of a thing that had never learned the rule. She thought of Evan then. She wished she hadn't. The thought came and went like a bird startled from a branch, and she let it go. "The Veil," she said, more to herself than to either of her companions, "is thinner here than anywhere I've felt." Nyx was watching the treeline, their form even more attenuated than usual, stretched like smoke caught in a draft. "The Veil," they said, "is not a wall. It is a wound. And wounds take longest to heal where they were first made." Isolde, ahead, laughed—a sound like silver bells dropped into deep water. "Such poetry, little shadow. I had forgotten how the lost ones speak." She stopped at the edge of another clearing, smaller, more intimate, where a single oak grew at the center, its trunk so vast that four people holding hands could not have ringed it. Beneath it, a stone bench waited, though no one had been here in—Aurora didn't know. Couldn't know. The grove kept its own time. "Sit," Isolde said, and gestured. "What you came to ask, I will answer. Not because you ask it. Because it is time for the asking." Aurora sat. The stone was warm. Nyx did not sit. They stood at the edge of the clearing, their form solid for the first time since they'd entered the grove, every line of them sharp and defined, and they were watching the spaces between the trees as though something might come out of them. The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora's chest, and she understood, suddenly, that this place was not a hiding place. It was a hinge. A point where the world bent. And everything—every step, every breath, every question asked beneath this ancient, watching oak—would push the door a little further open. She looked up at Isolde's lavender eyes. "I need to know," Aurora said, "how to keep the door closed."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"gleaming"
count1
7
word"casual indifference"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"whisper"
2"shimmered"
3"pulsed"
4"perfect"
5"chill"
6"gleaming"
7"casual indifference"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"felt a chill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1342
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1156
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.64
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora19
Heartstone3
Nyx8
Richmond1
Park1
Shade2
July1
October2
Cardiff1
Isolde7
Varga1
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Isolde"
4"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.678
windowScore0.667
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like wind through dead leaves"
1"spirals that seemed to move when she wasn't looking directly at them"
2"gown that seemed to be woven from the same impossible light as the air itself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1342
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean31.21
std30.46
cv0.976
sampleLengths
09
1111
219
346
49
510
6106
712
89
931
102
113
124
1360
143
1559
1698
1745
1813
192
2060
2118
2241
2321
2420
2531
2631
2711
2812
2915
302
31116
3226
3320
3442
3511
3668
3725
386
3948
4048
417
4212
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs189
matches
0"were being"
1"wasn't looking"
2"was standing"
3"was standing"
4"was watching"
5"were watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences98
ratio0.102
matches
0"She'd followed the path Nyx indicated—a deer trail cutting east through the ancient oaks of Richmond Park, the kind of track that only existed if you knew to look for it—but the deeper she walked, the more the modern world fell away."
1"Twelve of them, maybe more—she couldn't count them properly because her eyes kept sliding off, finding it difficult to hold more than three in focus at a time."
2"The air tasted of honey and woodsmoke and something older, something her body recognized before her mind did—a smell like the inside of her grandmother's house in Cardiff, the dresser where the old photographs sat, the dust of decades."
3"Their branches arched overhead in a perfect vault, each one meeting its neighbor to form a living cathedral ceiling, and through the gaps between the leaves the sky was the wrong color—a pale, luminous green, like light filtered through a glass of absinthe."
4"A carpet—thick, ankle-deep, dense as wool, and every color she could name and several she couldn't."
5"She was distantly aware that her hand had gone to the hilt of the slender moonsilver dagger at her hip—Isolde's own gift, returned, somehow, across years that hadn't happened yet—and she forced herself to uncurl her fingers."
6"The second gave way to a slow, wide stream that ran in the wrong direction—uphill, away from the distant sound of falling water—and the water was warm, and it tasted of mint and something older than mint."
7"Isolde, ahead, laughed—a sound like silver bells dropped into deep water."
8"Beneath it, a stone bench waited, though no one had been here in—Aurora didn't know."
9"And everything—every step, every breath, every question asked beneath this ancient, watching oak—would push the door a little further open."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1172
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.032423208191126277
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.011945392491467578
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean13.69
std11.55
cv0.843
sampleLengths
09
123
242
312
413
521
615
74
86
929
1011
119
1210
1310
1428
1526
1612
1730
1812
195
204
2121
224
236
242
253
264
274
2839
296
3011
313
325
335
3413
3536
3614
3743
386
3935
404
413
4216
4322
4410
453
462
4713
483
4926
53.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3673469387755102
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners36
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Even the birdsong had changed,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences74
matches
0"It started as a pressure"
1"She'd followed the path Nyx"
2"They flowed forward through a"
3"They were oak, not granite,"
4"They didn't touch it."
5"It made her want to"
6"She stepped forward."
7"Their branches arched overhead in"
8"It came from no clear"
9"She was smiling, but her"
10"She was distantly aware that"
11"She turned and moved deeper"
12"She thought of Evan then."
13"She wished she hadn't."
14"she said, more to herself"
15"She stopped at the edge"
16"They stood at the edge"
17"It was a hinge."
18"She looked up at Isolde's"
ratio0.257
41.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences74
matches
0"The standing stones announced themselves"
1"It started as a pressure"
2"She'd followed the path Nyx"
3"The distant hum of traffic"
4"The joggers and dog walkers"
5"Aurora murmured, using the name"
6"The Shade didn't answer in"
7"They flowed forward through a"
8"Aurora pushed through the last"
9"The stones rose out of"
10"They were oak, not granite,"
11"Moss crept up their flanks"
12"The Heartstone pulsed once, hard,"
13"Nyx drifted closer to one"
14"They didn't touch it."
15"Aurora took a breath."
16"The air tasted of honey"
17"The smell of time made"
18"It made her want to"
19"She stepped forward."
ratio0.838
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"It started as a pressure behind her eyes, a dull throb that matched the rhythm of the Heartstone pendant warming against her collarbone."
1"Even the birdsong had changed, retreating to a higher register, as though the birds themselves didn't want to get too close."
2"They were oak, not granite, impossibly old oak, grey and silvered and carved with spirals that seemed to move when she wasn't looking directly at them."
3"One moment she was standing in the deer path with her trainers sinking into the soft leaf litter, and the next moment she was standing in a different deer path,…"
4"The woman was silver-haired, pale as birch bark, dressed in a gown that seemed to be woven from the same impossible light as the air itself."
5"She was distantly aware that her hand had gone to the hilt of the slender moonsilver dagger at her hip—Isolde's own gift, returned, somehow, across years that h…"
6"The first clearing gave way to a stand of silver birches, their trunks gleaming like polished metal, their leaves chiming faintly in a wind Aurora couldn't feel…"
7"The second gave way to a slow, wide stream that ran in the wrong direction—uphill, away from the distant sound of falling water—and the water was warm, and it t…"
8"They stood at the edge of the clearing, their form solid for the first time since they'd entered the grove, every line of them sharp and defined, and they were …"
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, more to herself than to either of her companions,"
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.148
74.4003%