Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1G6YDG0SKSGSMP9CP1MMW9

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Duration:
40.1s
Cost:
$0.063515
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon hummed above the door, throwing a sickly wash across the wet pavement. Rory shook the rain from her jacket and stepped inside, expecting nothing more than the usual quiet of a Tuesday night—Silas behind the bar, two regulars nursing pints, the smell of furniture polish and old paper. What she didn't expect was the woman at the far end of the counter, turning at the sound of the door, recognition cracking across her face like ice underfoot. "Rory? God. Rory Carter." The voice landed somewhere beneath her ribs before her brain caught up. She knew that voice from a hundred late nights, from a flat in Cardiff with damp walls and a kettle that whistled too long. "Mara." But it wasn't quite Mara. The girl Rory remembered had worn charity-shop cardigans and bitten her nails to nothing, who'd talked about saving the world with the certainty of someone who'd never tried. This woman wore a tailored coat draped over the stool beside her, and her nails were lacquered the colour of dried blood. Her hair, once a wild copper tangle, had been cut into something sharp and expensive. "Come here. Come *here*." The embrace was brief and stiff, two bodies that had forgotten how to fit. Rory pulled back first. "You look—" Rory stopped. "Different." "That's the kind word for it." Mara laughed, and even the laugh had changed, lower now, more practised. She patted the stool. "Sit. Let me buy you something. What do you drink these days?" Silas materialised, cloth over his shoulder, his hazel eyes moving between them with that unhurried attention Rory had learned not to mistake for idleness. "Whisky," Rory told him. "Whatever's open." "She'll have the Springbank," Mara cut in. "On me. And another for myself." Silas inclined his head and turned to the bottles, but Rory caught the slight pause, the way he set the glasses down with deliberate care, listening. "You don't have to do that," Rory muttered. "I want to. Christ, I haven't seen you since—" Mara waved her hand, the gesture taking in years. "Since that thing at Eva's. The leaving party. When was that?" "Six years." "Six." Mara said the word like she was testing its weight. "Feels like a different life." "It was." The whisky arrived, amber under the dim lights. Mara lifted hers and Rory followed, the clink of glass too loud in the near-empty room. "To old friends," Mara offered. "To time." They drank. The peat burned pleasantly. Rory studied the woman beside her over the rim of the glass—the coat, the manicure, the watch that probably cost more than three months of delivery shifts. "So what is it now?" Rory asked. "Last I knew you were doing pro bono work. Immigration cases. You used to ring me at two in the morning ranting about the Home Office." Something flickered behind Mara's eyes. She set her glass down and turned it a quarter-turn, then another. "I moved on from that." "Moved on to what?" "Corporate. Consultancy, mostly. I advise firms on compliance, regulatory exposure." She delivered it smoothly, a line worn smooth by repetition. "The pay's obscene. I won't pretend it isn't." "The same firms you used to fight." "Some of them." Mara met her eyes, and for a moment the polish slipped, revealing something raw beneath. "Don't. Don't look at me like that." "Like what?" "Like Eva would've. Like I sold something I shouldn't have." Rory turned her glass on the bar, mirroring the gesture without meaning to. Behind the counter, Silas had drifted to the far end, polishing a glass that didn't need it, granting them the privacy of his pretended distance. "I'm not looking at you like anything," Rory said. "I'm a delivery girl, Mara. I carry noodles up four flights of stairs for tips. I'm not in a position to judge anybody's choices." "You? Delivery?" Mara's brow creased. "You were going to be a barrister. Your dad—" "My dad wanted that. I wanted out." Rory drank again. "Funny, isn't it. You ran toward the thing I ran from." The silence stretched. Somewhere a glass clinked, the murmur of the two regulars rising and falling. Rain ticked against the window in the alcove, where an old map of Prague curled at the corners. "I think about her sometimes," Mara said. "Eva. Whether she'd recognise either of us now." "She wouldn't recognise you." "That's harsh." "You asked." Mara laughed again, but it broke in the middle, and underneath it Rory heard something she remembered—the girl who'd cried over deportation letters, who'd given her last twenty quid to a stranger at a bus stop because the stranger had cried first. "You know what the worst part is?" Mara said. "I'm good at it. I'm *brilliant* at it. I walk into a room full of men twice my age and I take it apart. I find the loophole nobody else sees. And every time, I think—God, imagine what I could've done with that. For people who actually needed it." "So go back." "To what? The two a.m. phone calls? The losing? Because I lost, Rory, I lost almost every case, and I watched people get put on planes and I couldn't stop it. At least now—" She stopped. Pressed her lips together. "At least now I win." "For people who don't need winning." "For people who pay." Mara's voice hardened, then softened just as fast. "I'm not the only one who changed. Look at you. The Rory I knew would've told me exactly what she thought by now. Loudly. You used to have opinions like other people have organs." Rory smiled, faint and tired. "I had a man who didn't like my opinions. Took a while to want them back." The words dropped between them. Mara's hand moved across the bar, stopping just short of Rory's wrist, where the small crescent scar caught the light. "Evan?" "You remember him." "I remember not trusting him. I should've said something." "You did. I didn't listen." Rory turned her wrist over, hiding the scar. "We don't, do we. At that age. We think we've got all the time in the world to be wrong." Mara withdrew her hand. She lifted her whisky, found it empty, signalled to Silas with two fingers. He came without being told. "Same again," she said. "For both of us." He poured, watching, saying nothing, and Rory understood that he was filing it all away the way he filed everything—the names, the silences, the things people couldn't bring themselves to say across two inches of mahogany and six years of distance.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory drank again [again]"
1"Mara's voice hardened then [then]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.328
leniency0.655
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.069
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1104
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1104
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flickered"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1099
ratio0.002
matches
0"here"
1"brilliant"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
2.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount645
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Silas5
Cardiff1
Mara16
Rory19
Prague1
Pressed1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Mara"
2"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Prague"
globalScore0.027
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1099
matches(empty)
94.98% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"knew that voice"
1"understood that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean19.63
std16.51
cv0.842
sampleLengths
051
129
24
336
41
570
64
718
85
934
1024
116
1213
1326
148
1529
162
1716
182
1924
205
212
2233
2333
2417
255
264
2728
287
2925
302
3110
3238
3333
3414
3521
3634
3715
384
392
402
4142
4258
433
4445
456
4646
4721
4825
491
92.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences55
matches
0"were lacquered"
1"being told"
89.81% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs121
matches
0"was testing"
1"was filing"
19.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences93
ratio0.043
matches
0"Rory shook the rain from her jacket and stepped inside, expecting nothing more than the usual quiet of a Tuesday night—Silas behind the bar, two regulars nursing pints, the smell of furniture polish and old paper."
1"Rory studied the woman beside her over the rim of the glass—the coat, the manicure, the watch that probably cost more than three months of delivery shifts."
2"Mara laughed again, but it broke in the middle, and underneath it Rory heard something she remembered—the girl who'd cried over deportation letters, who'd given her last twenty quid to a stranger at a bus stop because the stranger had cried first."
3"He poured, watching, saying nothing, and Rory understood that he was filing it all away the way he filed everything—the names, the silences, the things people couldn't bring themselves to say across two inches of mahogany and six years of distance."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount652
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.032208588957055216
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006134969325153374
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean11.82
std10.39
cv0.879
sampleLengths
015
136
229
34
412
524
61
75
828
922
1015
114
1214
134
144
151
1618
174
1812
1924
204
212
227
236
2426
258
2618
2711
282
2911
305
312
328
3316
345
352
362
374
3827
397
4026
415
4212
435
444
4520
468
477
4818
497
73.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4838709677419355
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners45
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Somewhere a glass clinked, the"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences45
matches
0"She knew that voice from"
1"Her hair, once a wild"
2"She patted the stool."
3"She set her glass down"
4"She delivered it smoothly, a"
5"She lifted her whisky, found"
6"He came without being told."
7"He poured, watching, saying nothing,"
ratio0.178
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences45
matches
0"The green neon hummed above"
1"Rory shook the rain from"
2"The voice landed somewhere beneath"
3"She knew that voice from"
4"The girl Rory remembered had"
5"This woman wore a tailored"
6"Her hair, once a wild"
7"The embrace was brief and"
8"Rory pulled back first."
9"Mara laughed, and even the"
10"She patted the stool."
11"Silas materialised, cloth over his"
12"Rory told him"
13"Mara cut in"
14"Silas inclined his head and"
15"Mara waved her hand, the"
16"Mara said the word like"
17"The whisky arrived, amber under"
18"Mara lifted hers and Rory"
19"The peat burned pleasantly."
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The girl Rory remembered had worn charity-shop cardigans and bitten her nails to nothing, who'd talked about saving the world with the certainty of someone who'…"
1"Behind the counter, Silas had drifted to the far end, polishing a glass that didn't need it, granting them the privacy of his pretended distance."
2"Mara laughed again, but it broke in the middle, and underneath it Rory heard something she remembered—the girl who'd cried over deportation letters, who'd given…"
72.37% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Mara waved, the gesture taking in years"
1"She delivered, a line worn smooth by repetition"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Mara laughed (laugh)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.155
leniency0.31
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.069
82.2320%