| 69.57% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde glanced back [back]" | | 1 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.13 | | effectiveRatio | 0.13 | |
| 93.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1455 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 65.64% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1455 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "comfortable" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 1448 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "right" | | 1 | "thicken" | | 2 | "pay attention" | | 3 | "know" | | 4 | "unfurled" | | 5 | "comfortable" | | 6 | "eyes" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1089 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 10 | | Rory | 16 | | Heartstone | 4 | | London | 2 | | England | 1 | | October | 2 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 14 | | Shade | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "England" | | 2 | "October" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.765 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if passing through a curtain" | | 1 | "flowers that seemed to drink the light" | | 2 | "not quite their wings were too long, their bodies too thin, and they sang in intervals that almost made sense, as if a scale had been played in the wrong order" | | 3 | "looked like a thousand small lanterns tha" |
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| 61.88% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.381 | | wordCount | 1448 | | matches | | 0 | "neither Rory nor" | | 1 | "neither day nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 30.81 | | std | 26.87 | | cv | 0.872 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 97 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 125 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 63 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 79 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 96 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 51 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 50 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 59 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 47 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 10 |
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| 97.20% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "been played" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 90.71% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "was burning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "The last leg of the path was barely a path at all—just a thread of trampled bracken and old deer tracks winding between holly and silver birch." | | 1 | "\"Wrong?\" Nyx drifted forward, their form denser here than Rory had ever seen it—almost solid, almost a man in a dark coat, though no coat moved the way Nyx's edges did, rippling like ink dropped in still water." | | 2 | "They were ancient—older than the park, older than London, older than the idea of England—but what made them wrong was the way they stood." | | 3 | "She never asked questions; she made observations and let you decide what they meant." | | 4 | "The next step she was—" | | 5 | "Foxglove and ragged robin and things she couldn't name—tall spirals of pale gold, clusters of tiny black flowers that seemed to drink the light." | | 6 | "Their form, which had been holding almost-solid in the mortal park, now *unfurled*—taller, broader, the edges of their silhouette bleeding upward into the indigo sky as if the night itself had peeled off and stood up." | | 7 | "Insects moved in the flowers—not bees, not quite; their wings were too long, their bodies too thin, and they sang in intervals that almost made sense, as if a scale had been played in the wrong order." | | 8 | "Somewhere far off, in the direction of the distant oak-ring, something called out—a long, warbling note that climbed and climbed and then stopped, leaving a silence that rang." | | 9 | "She drew it out—the deep crimson stone on its silver chain, thumbnail-sized, glowing now with its own soft inner light." | | 10 | "The Shade met her eyes, and in the violet light of their gaze she thought she saw, for a moment, the shape of a man—younger, long-haired, wearing robes she didn't recognise." |
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| 99.37% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1105 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04072398190045249 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008144796380090498 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 13.28 | | std | 10.93 | | cv | 0.822 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 43 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 44 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 73.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.46788990825688076 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere far off, in the" | | 1 | "Then it was gone." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She rubbed the crescent scar" | | 1 | "They were ancient—older than the" | | 2 | "She wore a simple grey" | | 3 | "She never asked questions; she" | | 4 | "She looked at Nyx." | | 5 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 6 | "She couldn't help it." | | 7 | "Her mouth opened and closed" | | 8 | "Their form, which had been" | | 9 | "They looked, for the first" | | 10 | "She touched it through her" | | 11 | "She drew it out—the deep" | | 12 | "she said softly, before she" | | 13 | "She was standing at the" |
| | ratio | 0.189 | |
| 61.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The last leg of the" | | 1 | "Rory paused at the edge" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form" | | 3 | "She rubbed the crescent scar" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 5 | "They were ancient—older than the" | | 6 | "Moss climbed their bark in" | | 7 | "Isolde Varga waited at the" | | 8 | "The half-fae seer looked smaller" | | 9 | "She wore a simple grey" | | 10 | "She never asked questions; she" | | 11 | "Isolde tilted her head, listening" | | 12 | "Nyx made a sound like" | | 13 | "Isolde's bare foot lifted, came" | | 14 | "The Heartstone was warm now," | | 15 | "She looked at Nyx." | | 16 | "The Shade regarded the ring" | | 17 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 18 | "A whisper of a laugh" | | 19 | "Rory drew a breath, squared" |
| | ratio | 0.797 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 31.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Foxglove and ragged robin and things she couldn't name—tall spirals of pale gold, clusters of tiny black flowers that seemed to drink the light." | | 1 | "Their form, which had been holding almost-solid in the mortal park, now *unfurled*—taller, broader, the edges of their silhouette bleeding upward into the indig…" | | 2 | "The wildflowers came up to Rory's thighs in places, brushing against her hands as she pushed through, releasing small puffs of pollen that glowed faintly in the…" | | 3 | "Insects moved in the flowers—not bees, not quite; their wings were too long, their bodies too thin, and they sang in intervals that almost made sense, as if a s…" | | 4 | "Somewhere far off, in the direction of the distant oak-ring, something called out—a long, warbling note that climbed and climbed and then stopped, leaving a sil…" |
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| 81.52% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde glanced back, her pale eyes unreadable" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected, not looking back" |
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| 63.04% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.283 | | leniency | 0.565 | | rawRatio | 0.308 | | effectiveRatio | 0.174 | |