Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1GCGEGZKVJ7F4XVGS2FGJN

Run Details

Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.002301
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the earth like rotten teeth, their surfaces furred with moss that glowed faintly green in the moonlight. Aurora counted them as she stepped through the gap between the two largest oaks. Seven. She had counted seven the last time, too, the night Eva had brought her here and whispered that Isolde's grove was real, that the wildflowers that bloomed in December were not a dream, that the air tasted of copper and honey and something older. That had been spring. This was November, and the meadow beyond the stones should have been dead. It was not dead. Rory stopped at the threshold, boot heel catching on a root that hadn't been there a moment ago. The meadow stretched before her in a wash of pale blue and violet, flowers she had no name for nodding in a wind she could not feel. Their stems were too white. Their petals caught the moonlight and held it, then released it in slow pulses, like the breathing of something vast and patient beneath the soil. She swallowed. Her hand went to the chain at her throat. The Heartstone Pendant hung against her collarbone, the small crimson gem cool and inert. She had worn it for three years now, ever since the stranger in the leather coat had pressed it into her palm outside the tube station and vanished into the crowd before she could ask why. It had never done anything. It was a pretty stone on a silver chain. She wore it because it was pretty, and because sometimes, late at night, when the silence in the flat above Silas' bar grew too thick, she liked to pretend it was a gift from someone who had loved her. Tonight, the gem was not cool. Rory drew it out from beneath her jumper. The crimson had deepened, darkened to something closer to old blood, and at its center, a faint light moved. Not a reflection. A pulse. Slow, then faster, then slow again, in a rhythm that did not match her own heartbeat. She held it in her palm and felt the warmth of it, felt the way the metal of the chain tried to tighten against the back of her neck. She should not have come. The thought arrived clean and unadorned, and she let it sit there for a moment, turning it over like a coin in her hand. Eva had texted at half past nine. *Richmond. Tonight. Don't ask, just come. Wear the pendant.* And because Eva had never once in fifteen years of friendship asked her to do something without reason, Rory had pulled on her boots and her jacket and walked the long way along the river, past the closed boathouses and the sleeping willows, to the place in the park where the path forked and the right-hand fork was not, strictly speaking, on any map. Eva was not here. Rory had known she would not be, somewhere beneath the decision to come. Eva's text had carried the cadence of someone being watched while they typed. Rory had not wanted to admit that to herself until now, standing in a meadow that should not exist in November, holding a stone that should not be warm. She stepped forward. The flowers parted around her ankles without bending, their stems straightening behind her as if they had never moved. The air tasted of copper and honey. Eva had been right about that, too. The pendant pulsed. Rory lifted her head. The grove was not large. She had walked its edges a dozen times in daylight and known it for a small, secret place, a clearing no bigger than a tennis court ringed by oaks so old their bark had split into vertical strips like weathered columns. Tonight the oaks seemed further away. The clearing had stretched, the way a room stretches in a dream, and the standing stones at her back had thinned to smudges of grey in the dark. She took another step. Then another. The flowers whispered against each other, a dry papery sound, and beneath it she heard something else. A sound like someone drawing a long breath through teeth. She stopped. Listened. The sound did not repeat. *Get it together, Carter.* She walked on. The centre of the grove was marked by a single oak older than the others, its trunk so wide she could not have circled it with her arms. Its roots humped the ground in pale arches, and between two of the largest she had sat with Eva that first night, sharing a flask of tea gone cold, listening to Eva explain that the Fae were not a myth, that they were a border, that the grove was a seam in the world and the flowers grew because something on the other side was bleeding into this one. Rory had laughed. Then she had not laughed. Now she stood before the oak and pressed her palm flat against its bark. The wood was warm. Living things in November are not warm in this way. She pulled her hand away and the bark held the ghost of her touch, a faint darkening that faded slowly. The pendant pulsed again, harder, and this time the warmth climbed her wrist, circled her forearm, settled in the hollow of her throat. She touched the gem with her thumb and felt it move beneath the skin of the setting, a tiny rotation, a tick of alignment. As if it were pointing. She followed its direction with her eyes. North, perhaps. Or east. Somewhere into the deeper dark beyond the great oak, where the meadow should have ended at the ring of standing stones and instead continued, the pale flowers thinning but not stopping, opening out into a space she did not recognise. She had never seen this part of the grove. She was certain of it. Something moved at the edge of her vision. Rory turned. The standing stones were where they should be, seven grey shapes against the darker trees. The flowers swayed in their slow, windless rhythm. The oak stood behind her, solid and enormous, its roots gripping the earth like knuckles. Nothing. She turned back. The meadow beyond the oak was empty. The pendant's warmth had climbed to her jaw. She took a step toward the unseen extension of the grove, then stopped. Listened. The papery whisper of the flowers had not changed, but beneath it now she could hear a new layer, something rhythmic and low, like a heartbeat transmitted through soil. It was not her heartbeat. The pendant was beating in her palm, and this sound was answering it from somewhere ahead, somewhere in the dark where the flowers grew sparse and the moonlight did not quite reach. The sound of a breath through teeth again. Closer this time. Just behind the oak's furthest root. Rory did not turn around. She stood very still and watched the dark ahead of her, and the dark watched her back, and somewhere in the space between the two, the heartbeat in the earth grew louder, and the pendant grew warmer, and the flowers at the edge of the clearing began, one by one, to close their petals.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1206
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1206
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"pulsed"
4"whisper"
5"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords13
totalWords1206
ratio0.011
matches
0"Richmond. Tonight. Don't ask, just come. Wear the pendant."
1"Get it together, Carter."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1187
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva8
Isolde1
December1
November3
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Tonight3
Rory9
Fae1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Isolde"
2"Pendant"
3"Rory"
places
0"December"
1"November"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite reach"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1206
matches(empty)
93.41% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"whispered that Isolde's"
1"explain that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean38.9
std33.93
cv0.872
sampleLengths
081
117
24
375
411
5103
66
777
85
9104
104
1155
1236
133
1484
1541
164
17100
188
1948
2052
2151
2214
238
2440
251
2618
2780
2817
295
3054
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"was marked"
13.78% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was not, strictly speaking"
1"was bleeding"
2"were pointing"
3"was beating"
4"was answering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences91
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount272
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.029411764705882353
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.003676470588235294
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean13.25
std14.12
cv1.066
sampleLengths
022
114
21
344
44
513
64
718
827
95
1025
112
129
1314
1436
155
169
1739
186
198
2019
213
222
2316
2429
255
2624
277
281
291
304
3167
324
3313
3413
3529
363
3719
387
397
403
414
425
4341
446
4528
464
472
4817
4910
48.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3516483516483517
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then she had not laughed."
1"Somewhere into the deeper dark"
2"Just behind the oak's furthest"
ratio0.038
91.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences78
matches
0"She had counted seven the"
1"It was not dead."
2"Their stems were too white."
3"Their petals caught the moonlight"
4"Her hand went to the"
5"She had worn it for"
6"It had never done anything."
7"It was a pretty stone"
8"She wore it because it"
9"She held it in her"
10"She should not have come."
11"She stepped forward."
12"She had walked its edges"
13"She took another step."
14"She walked on."
15"Its roots humped the ground"
16"She pulled her hand away"
17"She touched the gem with"
18"She followed its direction with"
19"She had never seen this"
ratio0.321
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences78
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Aurora counted them as she"
2"She had counted seven the"
3"That had been spring."
4"This was November, and the"
5"It was not dead."
6"Rory stopped at the threshold,"
7"The meadow stretched before her"
8"Their stems were too white."
9"Their petals caught the moonlight"
10"Her hand went to the"
11"The Heartstone Pendant hung against"
12"She had worn it for"
13"It had never done anything."
14"It was a pretty stone"
15"She wore it because it"
16"Tonight, the gem was not"
17"Rory drew it out from"
18"The crimson had deepened, darkened"
19"She held it in her"
ratio0.846
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Now she stood before the"
1"As if it were pointing."
ratio0.026
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The standing stones rose from the earth like rotten teeth, their surfaces furred with moss that glowed faintly green in the moonlight."
1"She had counted seven the last time, too, the night Eva had brought her here and whispered that Isolde's grove was real, that the wildflowers that bloomed in De…"
2"The flowers parted around her ankles without bending, their stems straightening behind her as if they had never moved."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.1895%