Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1GPD0881WC5RK2EF5NQHCC

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Duration:
2m 5s
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$0.003387
Provider:
Minimax

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The entrance to Chalk Farm station had been sealed for half a century, but someone had unsealed it. Detective Harlow Quinn noted the fresh scrape marks on the padlock — not forced, exactly, but handled. Recently. She ducked under the police tape that PC Dawson had strung between the rust-bitten railings and descended the steps into the dark, her torch cutting a narrow corridor through the black. She did not like undergrounds. That was not a fear she would have admitted to anyone, not even the duty sergeant, but her shoulders had been climbing toward her ears since the call had come in at half past four that morning, and they had not come down. Three years ago, in a place not so different from this one — a disused service tunnel near King's Cross — her partner had walked into a wall of fog that had no business existing and had not come back out. DS Morris's body had been found three days later. The post-mortem had said heart failure. Quinn had read the report four times and had never believed a word of it. Now she descended another flight of tiled stairs, and the air changed. It grew thicker, warmer. The station stretched out before her, broad platform still bearing the ghosts of advertisements for wartime holidays and Bovril, the tiled walls slick with condensation that caught the torchlight in long, wet slivers. The tracks were gone, of course, lifted years ago, but the darkness in the tunnel mouths looked too clean. Too deliberate. Like a mouth waiting. DC Reeves met her at the bottom of the stairs, his notebook already half-full, his expression the particular shade of unsettled that Quinn had learned to read over eighteen years on the job. Reeves was young. He still believed the world could be tidied into incident reports. "Morning, guv." He fell into step beside her. "Victim's male, mid-thirties, no ID on him. Found him there, about twenty yards down the platform, near the second arch. Forensics are on their way but it's slow going — the track access road is a mess." "ID how?" "Dental will take weeks, but the super wants a name by lunchtime." Reeves paused. "He's been dead a while, guv. The state of him." Quinn said nothing. She let the silence do what silence did best, which was to make younger officers talk. "There's something else," Reeves added, almost relieved to have it off his chest. "The way he's positioned. It doesn't — it doesn't look right." "Define 'not right.'" Reeves glanced over his shoulder, as if to confirm they were still alone. "You'll see." They did see. Quinn stopped at the edge of the pool of light cast by the SOCO lamps, and she looked, and she made herself breathe. The body lay on its back in the centre of a circle that had been scratched into the concrete of the old platform. The lines were not random. They curved and interlocked with a precision that suggested the hand that drew them had known exactly what it was doing, had perhaps done it many times before. Inside the circle, the man lay with his arms folded neatly across his chest, as if he had been laid out by a careful mortician. He had been a big man once, broad through the shoulders, but the flesh had sunken and the skin had gone the colour of tallow. His eyes were closed. His mouth was set in something that was not quite a smile. No wounds. No blood. No ligature marks on the wrists or ankles. His clothes — a dark coat, a woollen jumper, good shoes — were undisturbed. Quinn crouched at the edge of the circle and did not step into it. Her torch beam moved methodically. The scratches in the concrete were deep, and the dust from the scoring had been brushed outward, away from the body, not toward it. A small leather satchel lay open at the man's hip, the contents spilled: a wallet, a few coins, a notebook with a cracked spine, and a brass object that caught the light and threw it back. She leaned closer without touching. It was a compass. Small, palm-sized, the brass gone green with age, the glass face etched with symbols she did not recognise. The needle did not point north. It pointed, with the quiet insistence of a finger, down the dark throat of the tunnel. "Bit odd, isn't it," said Reeves, appearing at her shoulder. "No violence. No drugs in his system as far as the scene suggests. Position's ritualistic, but there's no obvious cult angle — we've canvassed the locals, nobody saw anything. My guess? Transient, got turned around in there, fell, hit his head." He gestured vaguely at the tracks. "Happens more than you'd think. The homeless find these places, sleep in them, never come out." "His shoes are clean," Quinn said. Reeves blinked. "What?" "His shoes." She did not look up. "The platform's covered in sixty years of grime. The tracks — what there is of them — are worse. The dust inside the circle has been disturbed around the body, but the soles of his shoes are polished. Someone carried him here. Or he walked here through a route that didn't dirty them." She rose, knees protesting, and moved to the tunnel mouth where the compass needle pointed. The air here was different again. Warmer. Almost sweet, like woodsmoke and something else, something she could not name. She trained the torch down the tunnel and the beam seemed to shorten, eaten by the dark a few yards in. "There's no wind," she said, half to herself. "Stations like this, even sealed ones, you get a draught. Something breathing down there. There's nothing." "Maybe a good thing," Reeves offered. "Fewer rats." Quinn looked at the circle again. At the careful lines. At the body, posed like an offering. At the brass compass, its needle unwavering, pointing at whatever it was pointing at. Morris had carried a compass, too. Not brass — plastic, a cheap thing from a petrol station. But three days after he vanished, when they had finally pulled his body from the service tunnel near King's Cross, it had been found clenched in his fist. The needle had been spinning. The post-mortem had said heart failure. The post-mortem had said a great many things. She looked at the watch on her left wrist. The leather was cracked, the face scratched. She had been wearing it the night Morris died, and she had been wearing it the day they found him, and she had not taken it off since. It had never lost a minute. It was losing a minute now. She watched the second hand hesitate, skip, resume. "Guv?" Reeves was watching her. She looked at the circle. She looked at the compass. She looked at the dark mouth of the tunnel, breathing its strange, sweet breath. "Get Forensics up here fast," she said quietly. "And tell them to bring UV. And Reeves — nobody goes down that tunnel. Nobody." "But if he came from—" "Nobody," she said, and her voice carried the particular weight of a woman who had learned, at terrible cost, that some doors were better left shut. She looked once more at the body, at the peaceful arrangement of its hands, at the slight, almost-smile on its face, and felt the hairs rise along her forearms. Something had been in this station. Something that cleaned the shoes of its dead and pointed compasses at tunnels that breathed. Reeves was wrong. This was not a transient who had fallen in the dark. This was a transaction. And somewhere, she thought, somewhere at the end of that needle, someone was waiting to collect.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
40.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.88
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.16
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"unsettled"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"unwavering"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"unsettled"
1"silence"
2"etched"
3"unwavering"
4"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1296
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1041
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Reeves"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Reeves"
discoveredNames
Chalk1
Farm1
Harlow1
Quinn8
Dawson1
King2
Cross2
Morris3
Bovril1
Reeves10
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Dawson"
3"King"
4"Cross"
5"Morris"
6"Reeves"
places
0"Chalk"
1"Farm"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.315
wordCount1296
matches
0"not forced, exactly, but handled"
1"not a fear she would have admitted to anyone, not even the duty sergeant, but her shoulders had been climbing toward her ears since the ca"
2"not even the duty sergeant, but her shoulders had been climbing toward her ears since the ca"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean38.12
std30.82
cv0.808
sampleLengths
067
1119
274
347
445
52
624
719
824
93
1015
1126
12122
1326
1484
1544
1673
176
183
1960
2055
2124
228
2331
2464
2550
2614
275
2824
2923
305
3155
3239
3316
73.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences88
matches
0"been sealed"
1"been found"
2"were gone"
3"been scratched"
4"been laid"
5"been brushed"
6"been found"
7"was cracked"
6.20% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was doing"
1"was pointing"
2"was losing"
3"was watching"
4"was waiting"
29.70% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences101
ratio0.04
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn noted the fresh scrape marks on the padlock — not forced, exactly, but handled."
1"Three years ago, in a place not so different from this one — a disused service tunnel near King's Cross — her partner had walked into a wall of fog that had no business existing and had not come back out."
2"His clothes — a dark coat, a woollen jumper, good shoes — were undisturbed."
3"Not brass — plastic, a cheap thing from a petrol station."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1042
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03166986564299424
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007677543186180422
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean12.83
std11.04
cv0.861
sampleLengths
018
117
21
331
45
543
641
79
86
915
1012
114
1233
1319
142
154
1633
173
1811
198
2037
212
2214
2310
243
2516
2613
2711
283
2913
302
313
3223
3323
345
3528
3625
3725
384
3912
402
412
428
4314
4414
455
4624
4736
485
494
62.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.46534653465346537
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners47
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Almost sweet, like woodsmoke and"
ratio0.013
57.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences79
matches
0"She ducked under the police"
1"She did not like undergrounds."
2"It grew thicker, warmer."
3"He still believed the world"
4"He fell into step beside"
5"She let the silence do"
6"They did see."
7"They curved and interlocked with"
8"He had been a big"
9"His eyes were closed."
10"His mouth was set in"
11"His clothes — a dark"
12"Her torch beam moved methodically."
13"She leaned closer without touching."
14"It was a compass."
15"It pointed, with the quiet"
16"He gestured vaguely at the"
17"She did not look up"
18"She rose, knees protesting, and"
19"She trained the torch down"
ratio0.405
48.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences79
matches
0"The entrance to Chalk Farm"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn noted the"
2"She ducked under the police"
3"She did not like undergrounds."
4"That was not a fear"
5"DS Morris's body had been"
6"The post-mortem had said heart"
7"Quinn had read the report"
8"It grew thicker, warmer."
9"The station stretched out before"
10"The tracks were gone, of"
11"DC Reeves met her at"
12"Reeves was young."
13"He still believed the world"
14"He fell into step beside"
15"Quinn said nothing."
16"She let the silence do"
17"Reeves added, almost relieved to"
18"Reeves glanced over his shoulder,"
19"They did see."
ratio0.823
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Now she descended another flight"
ratio0.013
46.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Three years ago, in a place not so different from this one — a disused service tunnel near King's Cross — her partner had walked into a wall of fog that had no …"
1"The station stretched out before her, broad platform still bearing the ghosts of advertisements for wartime holidays and Bovril, the tiled walls slick with cond…"
2"They curved and interlocked with a precision that suggested the hand that drew them had known exactly what it was doing, had perhaps done it many times before."
3"At the brass compass, its needle unwavering, pointing at whatever it was pointing at."
4"Something that cleaned the shoes of its dead and pointed compasses at tunnels that breathed."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, half to herself"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Reeves added (add)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.08
76.9963%