| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.441 | | leniency | 0.882 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1267 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1267 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "fluttered" | | 1 | "predictable" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "database" | | 6 | "pristine" | | 7 | "blown wide" | | 8 | "sense of" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 30 | | totalWords | 1277 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva. I need you. Don't ask why. Bring everything you have on symbols, rifts, and things that live under London. And bring wine. It's going to be a long night." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 916 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.31 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 2 | | Davies | 10 | | Victorian | 1 | | Morris | 4 | | Wapping | 1 | | Quinn | 12 | | Camden | 1 | | Northern | 1 | | Line | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Davies" | | 1 | "Victorian" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Quinn" |
| | places | | 0 | "Wapping" | | 1 | "Camden" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.845 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if arranging something invisible" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.783 | | wordCount | 1277 | | matches | | 0 | "not toward the collapsed tunnel, but down through the concrete platform, into the earth itself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 33.61 | | std | 21.64 | | cv | 0.644 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 76 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 62 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 63 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 52 | | 35 | 57 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 36 |
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| 97.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "were blown" | | 1 | "been carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station smelled of rust and something older — stone dust, perhaps, or the memory of a million hurried commutes that had ended long before she was born." | | 1 | "Just that posture — fingers curled like he had been holding something delicate and precious and had only just released it." | | 2 | "The man's shoes were pristine — no Tube grime, no Camden street dust." | | 3 | "The tiles here were different — newer, the grout still pale." | | 4 | "Concrete blocks, rebar, dust — yes." | | 5 | "It was warm, warmer than it should have been, and the needle — she had assumed it had frozen during transit — began to move." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 913 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.029572836801752465 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009857612267250822 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 11.5 | | std | 8.46 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 80.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5045045045045045 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 79.37% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Just that posture — fingers" | | 1 | "Somewhere below them, something was" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Her watch ticked against her" | | 1 | "He was a good man," | | 2 | "She crouched, studying the man's" | | 3 | "It was recognition." | | 4 | "She had seen that symbol" | | 5 | "She leaned closer." | | 6 | "Her voice was level, betraying" | | 7 | "She did not turn" | | 8 | "She pulled out her phone" | | 9 | "He had laughed and said" | | 10 | "They walked in silence, their" | | 11 | "It was deliberate, a wall" | | 12 | "She knelt, brushing away dust." | | 13 | "She held up her phone." | | 14 | "It was warm, warmer than" | | 15 | "She slipped the compass into" | | 16 | "She could feel it in" | | 17 | "She paused, weighing her next" | | 18 | "She stepped out of the" | | 19 | "She ignored them all and" |
| | ratio | 0.274 | |
| 73.10% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn descended the broken escalator" | | 1 | "The abandoned Tube station smelled" | | 2 | "Her watch ticked against her" | | 3 | "The crime scene tape fluttered" | | 4 | "Sergeant Davies stood at the" | | 5 | "He was a good man," | | 6 | "Everything she had been before" | | 7 | "Quinn's gaze swept the platform" | | 8 | "The body lay near the" | | 9 | "She crouched, studying the man's" | | 10 | "The expression was not fear." | | 11 | "It was recognition." | | 12 | "Davies held up an evidence" | | 13 | "The casing carried a greenish" | | 14 | "Quinn's pulse quickened." | | 15 | "She had seen that symbol" | | 16 | "The night Morris walked into" | | 17 | "Davies scratched his jaw" | | 18 | "Quinn stood slowly, her mind" | | 19 | "The man's shoes were pristine" |
| | ratio | 0.774 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station smelled of rust and something older — stone dust, perhaps, or the memory of a million hurried commutes that had ended long before she…" | | 1 | "The crime scene tape fluttered in a draft that had no business existing this far underground." | | 2 | "The body lay near the tracks, a man in his fifties, expensive overcoat, hands positioned as if arranging something invisible." | | 3 | "The pupils were blown wide, the irises rimmed with a faint iridescence that caught the platform's emergency lighting and held it." | | 4 | "And beside it, a single bone token, carved with the same symbols that decorated the walls." | | 5 | "Bring everything you have on symbols, rifts, and things that live under London." | | 6 | "The compass pulsed once against her chest, warm as a living thing, and somewhere beneath her feet, the hum deepened into a rhythm that sounded almost like breat…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.059 | | leniency | 0.118 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |