Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1GQ4X316M3N1WVB12E35BW

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Duration:
2m 49s
Cost:
$0.005636
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn descended the broken escalator steps, each boot-fall crunching against decades of grime and old transit cards turned to mulch. The abandoned Tube station smelled of rust and something older — stone dust, perhaps, or the memory of a million hurried commutes that had ended long before she was born. Her watch ticked against her wrist, the leather strap worn soft from eighteen years of bad days and longer nights. The crime scene tape fluttered in a draft that had no business existing this far underground. "Detective Quinn." Sergeant Davies stood at the platform's edge, his high-visibility vest looking absurd against the crumbling Victorian tiles. He was a good man, thorough, predictable. Everything she had been before Morris. "Thanks for coming down personally. It's... it's a strange one." Quinn's gaze swept the platform before she'd finished the sentence. The body lay near the tracks, a man in his fifties, expensive overcoat, hands positioned as if arranging something invisible. No obvious wounds. No blood. Just that posture — fingers curled like he had been holding something delicate and precious and had only just released it. "Strange how?" She crouched, studying the man's face. The expression was not fear. It was recognition. Welcome, almost. "No ID on him, but we found this." Davies held up an evidence bag. Inside, a small brass compass, its face etched with markings that looked almost like writing. The casing carried a greenish patina, ancient. Verdigris. Quinn's pulse quickened. She had seen that symbol before. Three years ago. The night Morris walked into a warehouse in Wapping and did not walk out. "Fingerprint analysis came back clean — no matches in any database, UK or Interpol. And get this — the victim has no dental records either. We've got a John Doe who doesn't exist in any system." Davies scratched his jaw. "My guess? Some kind of high-end forgery. Identity theft gone wrong, maybe? The body's been here less than twelve hours based on lividity, but the place is spotless otherwise. Whoever did this cleaned up after themselves." Quinn stood slowly, her mind already cataloging details Davies had glossed over. The man's shoes were pristine — no Tube grime, no Camden street dust. The overcoat was wool, hand-stitched, but the label had been cut away with surgical precision. And his eyes. She leaned closer. The pupils were blown wide, the irises rimmed with a faint iridescence that caught the platform's emergency lighting and held it. Not drugs. Not any medical condition she had ever seen in eighteen years on the force. "Where was this compass found?" Her voice was level, betraying nothing. "Two feet from his right hand. Like he dropped it." Davies gestured toward the tunnel mouth. "We've got officers canvassing the area, but there's nothing down here but old advertising and the rats. Place hasn't been used in decades. No signs of forced entry — the maintenance hatch was rusted shut until we cut through." Quinn walked the perimeter, her fingertips trailing along the curved tiled wall. Halfway down the platform, her hand stopped. The tiles here were different — newer, the grout still pale. Someone had repaired a section recently. And behind that fresh patch, barely visible in the flickering light, a symbol had been carved into the original tilework. The same symbol that marked the compass face. "Sergeant." She did not turn. "When you cut through the maintenance hatch, did you notice any markings on the interior? Symbols, scratches?" "Just rust and old graffiti. Why?" She pulled out her phone and snapped a photo. The flash illuminated more carvings stretching down the tunnel, sigils she did not have names for but recognized in her bones. Each one matched a page in a notebook Morris had kept, a notebook the coroner had never been able to explain and that Quinn had hidden in her desk drawer ever since. "Detective?" Davies had moved closer, concern creasing his forehead. "You've got that look. The one you had when you were working the Wapping case." Quinn's jaw tightened. Morris had called her the night before he died. Said he had found something in the archives, something that did not fit the profile. Said he was going to meet a source in a place that "moved." She had told him to wait for backup. He had laughed and said she had lost her sense of adventure. "Tell me about the tunnel," she said. "Did your officers go down it?" "End of the line, literally. Collapsed about two hundred meters in. Rubble, old concrete, nothing worth documenting. We photographed it for the file." "I want to see." Davies hesitated, then nodded. They walked in silence, their footsteps echoing. The air grew colder as they approached the collapse. Quinn studied the rubble with growing unease. Concrete blocks, rebar, dust — yes. But arranged wrong. The collapse was not natural. It was deliberate, a wall built to block something. Or to hide something behind it. She knelt, brushing away dust. A bone lay half-buried beneath a chunk of concrete. Small, knobbly, not human. And beside it, a single bone token, carved with the same symbols that decorated the walls. "Sergeant." Quinn's voice was very quiet. "Tell me again about the graffiti you found on the hatch." "Just tags. Squiggles. Looked like kids messing about—" "Squiggles like these?" She held up her phone. Davies stared at the image, his face draining of color. "Those weren't there when we came through." "I know." Quinn pocketed the phone and took the compass from the evidence bag, turning it over in her palm. It was warm, warmer than it should have been, and the needle — she had assumed it had frozen during transit — began to move. Slowly. Deliberately. Pointing not toward the collapsed tunnel, but down through the concrete platform, into the earth itself. Davies made a small sound in his throat. "That's not possible. Compasses don't work underground. The interference alone—" "Sergeant." Quinn cut him off, her eyes fixed on the needle. "Get your men out of the station. All of them. Now." "Quinn, we're in the middle of a crime scene. The body—" "Is the least of our problems." She slipped the compass into her coat pocket, feeling its warmth press against her ribs. "Whatever happened here, it wasn't theft gone wrong. It wasn't forgery. It wasn't anything in your training manual or mine." Somewhere below them, something was moving. She could feel it in the bones of the station, a low vibration, a hum that had nothing to do with the Northern Line. Davies reached for his radio. Quinn caught his wrist. "Not yet," she said. "If I'm right, and I pray I'm not, we don't want to attract attention. Not from down there." She paused, weighing her next words carefully. "And not from above, either. I need to make a call first. Someone who might be able to explain what we're looking at." She stepped out of the tunnel mouth, back onto the platform, and pulled out her phone. The screen showed three missed calls from the office and a text from an old number she had never deleted. She ignored them all and opened a new message, her thumbs moving before her mind had fully committed to the words. *Eva. I need you. Don't ask why. Bring everything you have on symbols, rifts, and things that live under London. And bring wine. It's going to be a long night.* She hit send and slipped the phone away. The compass pulsed once against her chest, warm as a living thing, and somewhere beneath her feet, the hum deepened into a rhythm that sounded almost like breathing.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.882
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1267
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"deliberately"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1267
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"predictable"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"database"
count1
6
word"pristine"
count1
7
word"blown wide"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"predictable"
2"etched"
3"pulse"
4"quickened"
5"database"
6"pristine"
7"blown wide"
8"sense of"
9"silence"
10"footsteps"
11"echoing"
12"warmth"
13"could feel"
14"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords30
totalWords1277
ratio0.023
matches
0"Eva. I need you. Don't ask why. Bring everything you have on symbols, rifts, and things that live under London. And bring wine. It's going to be a long night."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount916
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Davies10
Victorian1
Morris4
Wapping1
Quinn12
Camden1
Northern1
Line1
London1
persons
0"Davies"
1"Victorian"
2"Morris"
3"Quinn"
places
0"Wapping"
1"Camden"
2"London"
globalScore0.845
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if arranging something invisible"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.783
wordCount1277
matches
0"not toward the collapsed tunnel, but down through the concrete platform, into the earth itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"seen that symbol"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean33.61
std21.64
cv0.644
sampleLengths
070
116
242
356
418
563
676
743
840
911
1055
1164
1222
136
1462
1524
1660
1713
1823
194
2056
2134
2217
238
243
2515
267
2763
2818
2922
3011
3141
3230
339
3452
3557
3630
3736
97.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"were blown"
1"been carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences111
ratio0.054
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled of rust and something older — stone dust, perhaps, or the memory of a million hurried commutes that had ended long before she was born."
1"Just that posture — fingers curled like he had been holding something delicate and precious and had only just released it."
2"The man's shoes were pristine — no Tube grime, no Camden street dust."
3"The tiles here were different — newer, the grout still pale."
4"Concrete blocks, rebar, dust — yes."
5"It was warm, warmer than it should have been, and the needle — she had assumed it had frozen during transit — began to move."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount913
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.029572836801752465
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009857612267250822
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean11.5
std8.46
cv0.736
sampleLengths
020
130
220
316
419
57
66
710
810
920
103
112
1221
138
145
153
162
1714
1815
197
201
213
226
233
2414
2540
2636
2712
2813
2915
303
313
3221
332
3414
3511
3616
3739
3812
397
4011
416
4220
438
445
4517
466
479
4821
4932
80.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5045045045045045
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners56
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"Just that posture — fingers"
1"Somewhere below them, something was"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences84
matches
0"Her watch ticked against her"
1"He was a good man,"
2"She crouched, studying the man's"
3"It was recognition."
4"She had seen that symbol"
5"She leaned closer."
6"Her voice was level, betraying"
7"She did not turn"
8"She pulled out her phone"
9"He had laughed and said"
10"They walked in silence, their"
11"It was deliberate, a wall"
12"She knelt, brushing away dust."
13"She held up her phone."
14"It was warm, warmer than"
15"She slipped the compass into"
16"She could feel it in"
17"She paused, weighing her next"
18"She stepped out of the"
19"She ignored them all and"
ratio0.274
73.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences84
matches
0"Quinn descended the broken escalator"
1"The abandoned Tube station smelled"
2"Her watch ticked against her"
3"The crime scene tape fluttered"
4"Sergeant Davies stood at the"
5"He was a good man,"
6"Everything she had been before"
7"Quinn's gaze swept the platform"
8"The body lay near the"
9"She crouched, studying the man's"
10"The expression was not fear."
11"It was recognition."
12"Davies held up an evidence"
13"The casing carried a greenish"
14"Quinn's pulse quickened."
15"She had seen that symbol"
16"The night Morris walked into"
17"Davies scratched his jaw"
18"Quinn stood slowly, her mind"
19"The man's shoes were pristine"
ratio0.774
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled of rust and something older — stone dust, perhaps, or the memory of a million hurried commutes that had ended long before she…"
1"The crime scene tape fluttered in a draft that had no business existing this far underground."
2"The body lay near the tracks, a man in his fifties, expensive overcoat, hands positioned as if arranging something invisible."
3"The pupils were blown wide, the irises rimmed with a faint iridescence that caught the platform's emergency lighting and held it."
4"And beside it, a single bone token, carved with the same symbols that decorated the walls."
5"Bring everything you have on symbols, rifts, and things that live under London."
6"The compass pulsed once against her chest, warm as a living thing, and somewhere beneath her feet, the hum deepened into a rhythm that sounded almost like breat…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.5022%