| 40.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said flatly [flatly]" | | 1 | "She looked once [once]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.16 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1116 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1116 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "crystalline" | | 1 | "resolved" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1130 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 849 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 8 | | Town | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Reyes | 6 | | Morris | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Compass | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Reyes" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Museum" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 4.425 | | wordCount | 1130 | | matches | | 0 | "not pain, not fear exactly, but something worse" | | 1 | "not fear exactly, but something worse" | | 2 | "no exit but" | | 3 | "not toward the tunnel, not toward the surface, but toward the centre of the circle" | | 4 | "not toward the surface, but toward the centre of the circle" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 37.67 | | std | 31.09 | | cv | 0.825 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 80 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 88 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 76 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 111 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 81 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 66 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 53 | | 29 | 11 |
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| 89.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "been sealed" | | 1 | "was frozen" | | 2 | "were curled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.15 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell hit Quinn before the lights did — copper and ozone and something older underneath, like wet stone that had never seen the sun." | | 1 | "His face was frozen in an expression Quinn had seen before — not pain, not fear exactly, but something worse." | | 2 | "Her knees protested; eighteen years on the job had a way of settling into the joints." | | 3 | "\"You said he wandered down here. Through the lift shaft, presumably, like the boy who found him. That's a rust-and-grease ladder forty feet down into a tunnel that floods. The explorer nearly broke his ankles. But look.\" She tapped the air above the soles of the man's brogues — leather soles, barely scuffed." | | 4 | "The dust lay smooth and grey as a frozen lake, broken only by the bright disturbance of recent boots — all of them coming from the tunnel mouth she herself had entered through." | | 5 | "She'd stopped trusting that word three years ago, the night DS Morris had walked into a derelict warehouse ahead of her and never walked out — no body, no blood, no exit but the one she'd been watching." | | 6 | "It was faint — so faint that Reyes's torch, propped and static, had washed it out entirely." | | 7 | "A ring perhaps eight feet across, scored into the grime by something, the line of it unnaturally clean, and within it markings she couldn't name — angular, deliberate, repeating." | | 8 | "She watched his face change as the circle resolved out of the dust — watched him open his mouth, then close it." | | 9 | "Her fingers found the small brass shape she'd carried since the Morris case — heavier than it looked, its casing furred green with verdigris, its face crowded with etched marks that mirrored, she now realised with a cold turn of the stomach, some of the symbols scored into the floor." | | 10 | "She held the Veil Compass flat in her palm and watched the needle drag itself around, hunting, until it locked — not toward the tunnel, not toward the surface, but toward the centre of the circle." | | 11 | "Some things you carried to the people who understood them — and she knew exactly the curly-haired researcher in the British Museum's basement who would." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 839 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.03098927294398093 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010727056019070322 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 14.13 | | std | 12.11 | | cv | 0.858 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 53 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 38 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 80.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.525 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 59.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere down the throat of" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 91.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She ducked beneath the police" | | 1 | "He was young, eager, the" | | 2 | "His face was frozen in" | | 3 | "Her knees protested; eighteen years" | | 4 | "She studied the man's hand," | | 5 | "She tapped the air above" | | 6 | "She swept the torch in" | | 7 | "She'd stopped trusting that word" | | 8 | "She'd learned, since then, to" | | 9 | "She turned her attention back" | | 10 | "It was faint — so" | | 11 | "Her voice had gone quiet" | | 12 | "She watched his face change" | | 13 | "Her fingers found the small" | | 14 | "She held the Veil Compass" | | 15 | "she said flatly, pocketing the" | | 16 | "She looked once more at" | | 17 | "He didn't ask why." |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 76.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell hit Quinn before" | | 1 | "She ducked beneath the police" | | 2 | "The old Tube station had" | | 3 | "The tiles were the colour" | | 4 | "DS Reyes stood at the" | | 5 | "He was young, eager, the" | | 6 | "Quinn liked him well enough." | | 7 | "That didn't mean she trusted" | | 8 | "Reyes nodded toward a corner" | | 9 | "Quinn crossed to the body" | | 10 | "The man lay on his" | | 11 | "His face was frozen in" | | 12 | "A kind of recognition." | | 13 | "Her knees protested; eighteen years" | | 14 | "She studied the man's hand," | | 15 | "The fingers were curled, and" | | 16 | "Quinn shone her torch along" | | 17 | "She tapped the air above" | | 18 | "Reyes came closer, frowning." | | 19 | "She swept the torch in" |
| | ratio | 0.768 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "As though he'd glimpsed the" | | 1 | "Now it was trembling." |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell hit Quinn before the lights did — copper and ozone and something older underneath, like wet stone that had never seen the sun." | | 1 | "The old Tube station had been sealed since the forties, according to the constable who'd waved her through." | | 2 | "Some things you carried to the people who understood them — and she knew exactly the curly-haired researcher in the British Museum's basement who would." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn straightened, her knees cracking, and reached into her coat" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.12 | | leniency | 0.24 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |