| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.421 | | leniency | 0.842 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1251 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.03% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1251 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "wavered" | | 3 | "predator" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "resolved" | | 8 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1264 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1085 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.2 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 7 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Ring | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | October | 2 | | British | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Ring" | | 2 | "Road" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.901 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 98.98% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to breathe in the failing light" |
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| 41.77% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.582 | | wordCount | 1264 | | matches | | 0 | "not what she saw, but what she felt against her skin" | | 1 | "not the pale, halfhearted rings of British woodland, but vivid purple caps edged in white, each one pulsing faintly w" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 39.5 | | std | 25.63 | | cv | 0.649 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 86 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 84 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 79 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 70 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 79 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 60 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 57 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 18 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.122 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory counted seven of them — no, eight — no, seven again as she blinked, her count slipping each time her eyes moved away from the stone she'd just fixed on." | | 1 | "That was the first thing — not what she saw, but what she felt against her skin." | | 2 | "They carpeted the ground in drifts that should not have been possible in late October — late October outside, anyway." | | 3 | "Beyond it, a sprawl of mushrooms grew in a perfect ring — not the pale, halfhearted rings of British woodland, but vivid purple caps edged in white, each one pulsing faintly with a light that matched the rhythm of the pendant at her throat." | | 4 | "The metal — if it was metal — was cold even through her jeans where her ankle brushed it." | | 5 | "The path — if it was a path — wound between the ancient oaks, and the wildflowers grew taller here, brushing her hips, their petals furred and trembling though there was no wind." | | 6 | "Its trunk was wider than she could have wrapped her arms around, and where it had torn from the earth, a hollow remained — a hollow that breathed, a slow expansion and contraction like the ribs of something sleeping." | | 7 | "The golden light thinned to green-gold, then to green, then to something darker, until the only illumination came from the fungi clustered at the roots of the trees and the faint, trailing luminescence of a thread of something — pollen?" | | 8 | "— that drifted across the path like a single bright thread of silk." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1079 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.025023169601482854 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004633920296570899 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 17.08 | | std | 11.13 | | cv | 0.652 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 69.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4594594594594595 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "They stood in a hush" | | 1 | "they called back, the whisper" | | 2 | "They carpeted the ground in" | | 3 | "She turned a slow circle" | | 4 | "She watched it move with" | | 5 | "She looked down." | | 6 | "She crouched slowly, heart beating" | | 7 | "She slid the dagger into" | | 8 | "They moved deeper." | | 9 | "Its trunk was wider than" | | 10 | "She looked away." | | 11 | "She had already seen." | | 12 | "They walked on." | | 13 | "Her hair fell to her" | | 14 | "Her eyes were the pale" | | 15 | "She smiled, though her mouth" | | 16 | "She bowed her head, the" |
| | ratio | 0.288 | |
| 36.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory counted seven of them" | | 2 | "Nyx stood beside her, their" | | 3 | "Rory laughed, though it came" | | 4 | "The amber pendant at her" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei had insisted she take" | | 6 | "The crimson stone had done" | | 7 | "The hum of the Ring" | | 8 | "They stood in a hush" | | 9 | "Nyx stepped through the gap" | | 10 | "The shadow that formed their" | | 11 | "they called back, the whisper" | | 12 | "Rory stepped forward." | | 13 | "The air changed." | | 14 | "That was the first thing" | | 15 | "A pressure, gentle but undeniable," | | 16 | "The pendant flared hot enough" | | 17 | "They carpeted the ground in" | | 18 | "The grove was a cathedral," | | 19 | "She turned a slow circle" |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 84.75% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them, a clearing opened" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The shadow that formed their body bent like smoke passing through a doorway that was narrower than it should have been, and for a heartbeat they were nothing bu…" | | 1 | "The pendant flared hot enough that she hissed, her hand flying to it, and then the sensation passed and she was standing in another world." | | 2 | "The grove was a cathedral, and the air smelled of honey and rain and something greener than either, a greenness that had no name in any language Rory spoke." | | 3 | "Beyond it, a sprawl of mushrooms grew in a perfect ring — not the pale, halfhearted rings of British woodland, but vivid purple caps edged in white, each one pu…" | | 4 | "Rory took a step back from the mushrooms, and her heel found something that was not the soft give of moss." | | 5 | "A dagger lay nestled in a tangle of roots as though it had grown there, leaf-shaped and slender, its blade the colour of moonlight caught in ice." | | 6 | "The blade was freezing against Rory's palm, a cold that went deeper than temperature and settled somewhere near her ribs." | | 7 | "Its trunk was wider than she could have wrapped her arms around, and where it had torn from the earth, a hollow remained — a hollow that breathed, a slow expans…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.74% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they called back (call back)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.211 | | leniency | 0.421 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.211 | |