Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1GSZJSEYK5EA8D58Z8CQ21

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Duration:
1m 41s
Cost:
$0.002771
Provider:
Minimax

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the heath like fingers of a buried hand, their surfaces carved with spirals that seemed to breathe in the failing light. Rory counted seven of them — no, eight — no, seven again as she blinked, her count slipping each time her eyes moved away from the stone she'd just fixed on. "Don't look at them directly," came the voice at her shoulder, soft as a draft through a cracked window. Nyx stood beside her, their violet-lit eyes fixed on the gap between the two largest oaks. "The stones test intent. If you mean to cross, you cross. If you waver, the Grove will not know what to do with you." "And if I mean to cross but I'm also terrified?" "Then you're human, and that is reason enough." Rory laughed, though it came out thin. The amber pendant at her throat pulsed with a heat she hadn't felt since she'd first slipped it from the anonymous parcel tucked behind the till at the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei had insisted she take it home. *For luck*, the old woman had said, in a tone that made clear it was not a request. The crimson stone had done nothing for three days, and now it burned against her collarbone like a coal drawn fresh from a hearth. Behind them, the city was already a memory. The hum of the Ring Road had dimmed to nothing, the distant clatter of the last Richmond Park gates had long since faded. They stood in a hush so complete that Rory could hear the blood moving in her own ears. Nyx stepped through the gap first. The shadow that formed their body bent like smoke passing through a doorway that was narrower than it should have been, and for a heartbeat they were nothing but a ripple in the air. "Keep moving," they called back, the whisper of their voice arriving a half-second late, as though the words had taken the long way round. "Do not stop on the threshold." Rory stepped forward. The air changed. That was the first thingnot what she saw, but what she felt against her skin. A pressure, gentle but undeniable, as though she had walked into the surface of a lake and the water had decided to let her through. The pendant flared hot enough that she hissed, her hand flying to it, and then the sensation passed and she was standing in another world. Wildflowers. They carpeted the ground in drifts that should not have been possible in late October — late October outside, anyway. In here the light was the colour of mid-July, golden and syrupy, slanting through a canopy of oaks so old their lowest branches had rooted into the earth and risen again as new trunks. The grove was a cathedral, and the air smelled of honey and rain and something greener than either, a greenness that had no name in any language Rory spoke. "It's..." She turned a slow circle. "It's not the same season." "Time is a courtesy in this place." Nyx had solidified beside her, though their edges still wavered like ink dropped in water. "The Grove was old when the Romans built their first road through yonder hill. It will be old when the last road falls to dust." A beetle the size of Rory's thumbnail crawled across the toe of her boot, its shell a luminous copper. She watched it move with the deliberate pace of something that had never known a predator. Beyond it, a sprawl of mushrooms grew in a perfect ring — not the pale, halfhearted rings of British woodland, but vivid purple caps edged in white, each one pulsing faintly with a light that matched the rhythm of the pendant at her throat. "What are those?" she asked. "Boundary markers. We are well inside. The Grove knows we are guests now, and not intruders." Nyx tilted their head, listening to something Rory could not hear. "We should not linger near them. The Fae that tend this place are curious about new faces." Rory took a step back from the mushrooms, and her heel found something that was not the soft give of moss. She looked down. A dagger lay nestled in a tangle of roots as though it had grown there, leaf-shaped and slender, its blade the colour of moonlight caught in ice. The metal — if it was metal — was cold even through her jeans where her ankle brushed it. She crouched slowly, heart beating high in her throat. "Isolde's," Nyx said. There was a weight to the word, a recognition. "She leaves it for those who will need it. Take it. Do not thank her aloud — the Fae do not love gratitude from strangers." The blade was freezing against Rory's palm, a cold that went deeper than temperature and settled somewhere near her ribs. The pendant's heat and the blade's chill warred at her sternum, two opposites holding her body as the ground of their disagreement. She slid the dagger into the back of her jeans, and stood. They moved deeper. The path — if it was a path — wound between the ancient oaks, and the wildflowers grew taller here, brushing her hips, their petals furred and trembling though there was no wind. A bird sang somewhere in the canopy, three notes repeated over and over in a pattern that almost resolved but never quite did. After the fifth repetition, Rory realised the pattern had changed without her noticing, and she could not have said when. A tree had fallen across their way. Its trunk was wider than she could have wrapped her arms around, and where it had torn from the earth, a hollow remained — a hollow that breathed, a slow expansion and contraction like the ribs of something sleeping. "Don't look in," Nyx murmured, and the urgency in their whisper was the first urgency Rory had heard from them. "Whatever it dreams, we are not part of it." She looked away. She had already seen. Inside the hollow, a small light had kindled at the sound of her attention, a light the colour of foxgloves, and it had almost, almost taken the shape of a face she almost recognised. They walked on. The canopy thickened. The golden light thinned to green-gold, then to green, then to something darker, until the only illumination came from the fungi clustered at the roots of the trees and the faint, trailing luminescence of a thread of something — pollen? spore? — that drifted across the path like a single bright thread of silk. "Here." Nyx stopped. Before them, a clearing opened in the wood, and in its centre stood a woman. Her hair fell to her waist in a fall of silver that caught no light because there was no light to catch. Her eyes were the pale lavender of wisteria, and where her feet met the ground, the grass did not bend. She smiled, though her mouth did not move, and her voice came from no place Rory could locate. "You have come at last. I had almost stopped expecting you." Rory opened her mouth. The blade at her back thrummed once against her spine, the pendant at her throat answered, and she understood, suddenly, that she had been expected before she had known she was coming, and the understanding sat in her chest like a stone dropped into still water. She bowed her head, the way one does in a place older than one's own manners, and waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"wavered"
count1
3
word"predator"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"resolved"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"whisper"
2"wavered"
3"predator"
4"perfect"
5"weight"
6"chill"
7"resolved"
8"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1264
ratio0.002
matches
0"For luck"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1085
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nyx7
Golden1
Empress1
Ring1
Road1
Richmond1
Park1
Rory13
October2
British1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
places
0"Golden"
1"Ring"
2"Road"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
globalScore0.901
windowScore1
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"spirals that seemed to breathe in the failing light"
41.77% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.582
wordCount1264
matches
0"not what she saw, but what she felt against her skin"
1"not the pale, halfhearted rings of British woodland, but vivid purple caps edged in white, each one pulsing faintly w"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean39.5
std25.63
cv0.649
sampleLengths
057
159
210
38
486
549
640
730
83
970
1084
1111
1247
1379
145
1544
1670
179
1837
1942
2012
2179
2246
2329
2441
2560
263
2757
2818
2911
3050
3118
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"been expected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs170
matches
0"was standing"
1"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences74
ratio0.122
matches
0"Rory counted seven of them — no, eight — no, seven again as she blinked, her count slipping each time her eyes moved away from the stone she'd just fixed on."
1"That was the first thing — not what she saw, but what she felt against her skin."
2"They carpeted the ground in drifts that should not have been possible in late October — late October outside, anyway."
3"Beyond it, a sprawl of mushrooms grew in a perfect ring — not the pale, halfhearted rings of British woodland, but vivid purple caps edged in white, each one pulsing faintly with a light that matched the rhythm of the pendant at her throat."
4"The metal — if it was metal — was cold even through her jeans where her ankle brushed it."
5"The path — if it was a path — wound between the ancient oaks, and the wildflowers grew taller here, brushing her hips, their petals furred and trembling though there was no wind."
6"Its trunk was wider than she could have wrapped her arms around, and where it had torn from the earth, a hollow remained — a hollow that breathed, a slow expansion and contraction like the ribs of something sleeping."
7"The golden light thinned to green-gold, then to green, then to something darker, until the only illumination came from the fungi clustered at the roots of the trees and the faint, trailing luminescence of a thread of something — pollen?"
8"— that drifted across the path like a single bright thread of silk."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1079
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.025023169601482854
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004633920296570899
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean17.08
std11.13
cv0.652
sampleLengths
026
131
219
316
424
510
68
77
830
97
1018
1124
128
1323
1418
156
1634
1724
186
193
203
2117
2225
2325
241
2520
2634
2729
286
295
3022
3125
3219
3316
3444
355
3627
3717
3821
393
4027
4119
429
433
449
4525
4620
4722
4812
493
69.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4594594594594595
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences59
matches
0"They stood in a hush"
1"they called back, the whisper"
2"They carpeted the ground in"
3"She turned a slow circle"
4"She watched it move with"
5"She looked down."
6"She crouched slowly, heart beating"
7"She slid the dagger into"
8"They moved deeper."
9"Its trunk was wider than"
10"She looked away."
11"She had already seen."
12"They walked on."
13"Her hair fell to her"
14"Her eyes were the pale"
15"She smiled, though her mouth"
16"She bowed her head, the"
ratio0.288
36.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences59
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Rory counted seven of them"
2"Nyx stood beside her, their"
3"Rory laughed, though it came"
4"The amber pendant at her"
5"Yu-Fei had insisted she take"
6"The crimson stone had done"
7"The hum of the Ring"
8"They stood in a hush"
9"Nyx stepped through the gap"
10"The shadow that formed their"
11"they called back, the whisper"
12"Rory stepped forward."
13"The air changed."
14"That was the first thing"
15"A pressure, gentle but undeniable,"
16"The pendant flared hot enough"
17"They carpeted the ground in"
18"The grove was a cathedral,"
19"She turned a slow circle"
ratio0.847
84.75% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Before them, a clearing opened"
ratio0.017
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The shadow that formed their body bent like smoke passing through a doorway that was narrower than it should have been, and for a heartbeat they were nothing bu…"
1"The pendant flared hot enough that she hissed, her hand flying to it, and then the sensation passed and she was standing in another world."
2"The grove was a cathedral, and the air smelled of honey and rain and something greener than either, a greenness that had no name in any language Rory spoke."
3"Beyond it, a sprawl of mushrooms grew in a perfect ring — not the pale, halfhearted rings of British woodland, but vivid purple caps edged in white, each one pu…"
4"Rory took a step back from the mushrooms, and her heel found something that was not the soft give of moss."
5"A dagger lay nestled in a tangle of roots as though it had grown there, leaf-shaped and slender, its blade the colour of moonlight caught in ice."
6"The blade was freezing against Rory's palm, a cold that went deeper than temperature and settled somewhere near her ribs."
7"Its trunk was wider than she could have wrapped her arms around, and where it had torn from the earth, a hollow remained — a hollow that breathed, a slow expans…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"they called back (call back)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.211
80.6079%