Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1GWE7ZS8KJK3CQV5DXCA44

Run Details

Duration:
3m 57s
Cost:
$0.008114
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones rose from the undergrowth, dark and patient, their surfaces furred with centuries of moss and lichen so old it had calcified into a pale crust. Aurora stopped at the edge of the clearing, breath catching. The air had changed. Woodruff and wet earth, yes, but beneath that something mineral and strange — the smell of rain on hot stone, though no rain had fallen for days. Isolde stepped past her, silver hair catching what little light filtered through the canopy. Her bare feet made no sound on the leaf litter. "Mind where I step," the Seer said. "And mind where I do not." "What does that—" "Question later." Isolde's pale lavender eyes swept the circle of stones. "Time folds here. An hour inside might be minutes outside, or it might be a week. I cannot say which until we are through." Nyx drifted forward, their silhouette flickering at the edges like a candle flame in a draft. The shadows beneath the oaks seemed to lean toward the Shade — curious, perhaps, or hungry. Hard to tell with shadows. "I feel the boundary." Nyx's voice came as a breath across dead leaves. "Thin as old parchment. Tempting to slip through and see what lies beyond." "Don't." Aurora's hand found the dagger at her hip — Isolde's gift, moonsilver and cold even through the leather sheath. The blade had a way of staying cold, as if it remembered a winter that had not ended. "You said you'd stay corporeal until we were back out." "I said I would try." "That's not the same thing." Isolde made a sound that might have been a laugh. She walked between two of the standing stones, and the air behind her shimmered, a heat-mirage in the wrong season. Aurora followed. The world tilted. Not violently — more the way a room tilts when you've stood up too fast. The trees were still oaks, still green, but the green was deeper, the bark darker, and the spaces between the trunks opened onto distances that did not belong to a London park. Sunlight fell in long parallel bars that did not match the angle of the sun above the canopy. Somewhere, a bird sang three notes and stopped, as if it had forgotten the rest of the song. "The Grove," Isolde said, though no one had asked. "What remains of it." Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colours Aurora had no names for. Not blue, not purple, but a thing between, and a yellow so bright it looked wet. The petals did not move in any breeze she could feel. They simply opened and closed in slow waves, like the breathing of something vast and sleeping. "It's watching us," Nyx murmured. Their form had thickened, more solid than Aurora had ever seen them — shoulders, the suggestion of a face, hands that gripped the air as if testing it for honesty. "The place. It knows we're here." "Good." Isolde pushed deeper, winding between the oaks. Her hair brushed the low branches and the branches leaned away, as if afraid of her, or respectful. "A place that does not know its visitors is a place that eats them. This one is old enough to have manners." Aurora touched a flower as she passed. The petal was warm, almost feverish. It curled around her fingertip, gentle as a child's hand, and she pulled back with a sharp breath. "It likes you." Isolde did not turn around. "Or it is tasting you. The Fae do not always know their own intentions." "How reassuring." "It is not meant to reassure. It is meant to inform." The path — if it could be called a path — wound between roots that humped the earth like the backs of buried whales. Aurora kept one hand on the dagger and the other trailing along the bark of the nearest oak. The wood hummed beneath her palm, a low vibration that travelled up her arm and settled somewhere behind her sternum. "Do you feel that?" She glanced at Nyx. The Shade had gone still, dark. "A heartbeat. The whole grove has one. Fae-touched land remembers what it was. This place was a meeting-ground once. Bargains struck, oaths sworn. The trees held the words." "And now?" "Now it holds silence. Which is worse." The canopy opened without warning into a clearing, and Aurora stopped so abruptly that Nyx nearly drifted through her. A circle of smaller stones stood in the centre, knee-high, each one carved with a symbol so worn it was more shadow than shape. In the middle of the circle, a single tree grew — silver-barked, leafless, its branches reaching upward like the fingers of a drowning woman. The wildflowers did not grow within twenty feet of it. The grass there was black, and dry, and it rustled though nothing moved. "This," Isolde said, "is where I see." "See what?" "What has been. What will be. What might be, if the wind changes." The Seer walked to the edge of the dead grass and stopped. She did not step onto it. "The tree is the ear. The stones are the mouth. The Grove is the throat. I am only the tongue." "That's—" Aurora laughed, a little too loud. The sound cracked against the silence and did not echo. "That's a terrible metaphor." "It is not a metaphor." Isolde turned, and for a moment her eyes were not lavender but the deep, bruised purple of a thunderhead. "It is anatomy." Something moved in the branches of the silver tree. Not wind. Not bird. A ripple of dark, quick as a weasel through undergrowth, and gone. Aurora's hand closed on the dagger's hilt and the moonsilver sang against her palm, a single high note that hung in the air. Nyx's form shredded, then pulled itself back together. "Something old," they said. "Older than the Shade. It was here before me." "The Grove has many tenants." Isolde's voice had gone flat, careful. "Most are content to watch. Some are not. Do not step into the circle. Do not touch the tree. Do not speak your true name aloud, or any name you wish to keep." "Any name I wish to keep," Aurora repeated. "So if I say a name I don't care about—" "Then you will lose it. And whatever it was tied to. Memory. Promise. Debt." Isolde's mouth curved, not quite a smile. "I lost my third name two hundred years ago. I do not remember what it opened. I am not certain I wish to." Aurora thought of Evan. Of the flat in Cardiff. Of the barrister father whose third letter she had not answered. She kept her mouth shut. Nyx drifted closer to the silver tree, drawn or curious or both. The shadows beneath its branches reached up, tasting the edges of the Shade's form. Nyx flinched — actually flinched, a reaction Aurora had never seen from them. "It knows what I am," Nyx whispered. "It knows what I was." "Aldric." Isolde said the name like a stone dropped into deep water. "Yes. The tree remembers the summoning. It was a young thing then. An acorn, perhaps. It grew through the scar." Aurora stared at the Shade. Nyx stared back, violet eyes burning in the hollow of their silhouette. "I did not know you were there," Nyx said. "I know." Isolde turned away, silver hair swinging. "I was not the only one watching. The Grove has many eyes, and most of them are kind. Some of them are not. We should go. The longer you stand in one place here, the more the place learns you." "And we don't want to be learned?" Aurora asked. "We want to be learned only as much as we choose. No more." Isolde began walking back the way they had come, but the path was no longer where they had left it. The oaks had shifted. The wildflowers had rearranged themselves into patterns that almost resolved into letters, then didn't. "Walk where I walk. Step only where I step. And if you hear your own voice calling from somewhere you have not been — do not answer." Aurora fell into step behind the Seer, moonsilver hilt warm now against her palm, the cold of it rising like a second heartbeat. Nyx drifted at her shoulder, more shadow than shape, the violet of their eyes dimmed to something cautious and watchful. The wildflowers closed behind them as they passed, petals folding in slow agreement. The path ahead curved into a deeper shadow, and from somewhere within it came the sound of water moving, though no stream had been there before.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.451
leniency0.902
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.039
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1433
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1433
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"could feel"
2"silence"
3"echo"
4"resolved"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1443
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount975
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.64
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Seer3
Isolde14
Nyx12
Shade4
Aurora16
London1
Wildflowers1
Evan1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Seer"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Aurora"
4"Wildflowers"
5"Evan"
places
0"Shade"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.679
windowScore0.5
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if testing it for honesty"
1"not quite a smile"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.079
wordCount1443
matches
0"Not blue, not purple, but a thing between"
1"not purple, but a thing between"
2"not lavender but the deep, bruised purple of a thunderhead"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean28.86
std21.39
cv0.741
sampleLengths
070
124
213
33
435
537
626
748
85
95
1030
112
123
1383
1413
1554
1641
1748
1831
1922
202
2111
2262
238
2434
252
267
2719
2871
297
302
3151
3221
3327
3448
3521
3644
3718
3844
3925
4039
4112
4232
4317
449
4548
469
4778
4843
4939
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences110
ratio0.073
matches
0"Woodruff and wet earth, yes, but beneath that something mineral and strange — the smell of rain on hot stone, though no rain had fallen for days."
1"The shadows beneath the oaks seemed to lean toward the Shade — curious, perhaps, or hungry."
2"\"Don't.\" Aurora's hand found the dagger at her hip — Isolde's gift, moonsilver and cold even through the leather sheath."
3"Not violently — more the way a room tilts when you've stood up too fast."
4"Their form had thickened, more solid than Aurora had ever seen them — shoulders, the suggestion of a face, hands that gripped the air as if testing it for honesty."
5"The path — if it could be called a path — wound between roots that humped the earth like the backs of buried whales."
6"In the middle of the circle, a single tree grew — silver-barked, leafless, its branches reaching upward like the fingers of a drowning woman."
7"Nyx flinched — actually flinched, a reaction Aurora had never seen from them."
98.88% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount969
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.0412796697626419
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005159958720330237
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean13.12
std8.39
cv0.64
sampleLengths
029
110
24
327
414
510
67
76
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911
1024
1116
1216
135
1413
1513
1620
1718
1810
195
205
2110
2220
232
243
2515
2632
2718
2818
299
304
3111
3216
3311
3416
355
3630
376
388
3918
4022
417
426
4318
448
4514
462
4711
4824
4918
59.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4090909090909091
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners45
46.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Somewhere, a bird sang three"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences72
matches
0"Her bare feet made no"
1"She walked between two of"
2"They simply opened and closed"
3"Their form had thickened, more"
4"Her hair brushed the low"
5"It curled around her fingertip,"
6"She glanced at Nyx"
7"She did not step onto"
8"She kept her mouth shut."
ratio0.125
8.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences72
matches
0"The oak standing stones rose"
1"Aurora stopped at the edge"
2"The air had changed."
3"Woodruff and wet earth, yes,"
4"Isolde stepped past her, silver"
5"Her bare feet made no"
6"the Seer said"
7"Isolde's pale lavender eyes swept"
8"Nyx drifted forward, their silhouette"
9"The shadows beneath the oaks"
10"Nyx's voice came as a"
11"Aurora's hand found the dagger"
12"The blade had a way"
13"Isolde made a sound that"
14"She walked between two of"
15"The world tilted."
16"The trees were still oaks,"
17"Sunlight fell in long parallel"
18"Isolde said, though no one"
19"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The trees were still oaks, still green, but the green was deeper, the bark darker, and the spaces between the trunks opened onto distances that did not belong t…"
1"Their form had thickened, more solid than Aurora had ever seen them — shoulders, the suggestion of a face, hands that gripped the air as if testing it for hones…"
2"Her hair brushed the low branches and the branches leaned away, as if afraid of her, or respectful."
3"The wood hummed beneath her palm, a low vibration that travelled up her arm and settled somewhere behind her sternum."
4"Aurora's hand closed on the dagger's hilt and the moonsilver sang against her palm, a single high note that hung in the air."
59.78% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Isolde's voice had, careful"
1"Isolde's mouth curved, not quite a smile"
2"Isolde began, but the path was no longer where they had left it"
71.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora laughed (laugh)"
2"Aurora repeated (repeat)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.431
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.157
76.6384%