Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1GXGCQH1YCVJXHBF73G84K

Run Details

Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.002875
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knocking came at quarter past midnight, three sharp raps that cut through the thin walls of the flat like gunshots. Aurora froze on the stairs, a half-eaten bowl of instant noodles balanced in one hand. The curry house below had closed two hours ago. The street outside should have been empty. Three more knocks. Deliberate. Patient. She set the bowl on the landing and crossed to the door, the worn carpet cold under her bare feet. The peephole showed a distorted slice of the hallway — a shoulder clad in charcoal wool, a pale hand, the glint of an ivory handle. Her stomach dropped. She didn't open it. She stood there, palm flat against the wood, breathing through her mouth, counting the seconds the way her mother had taught her when she was small and the panic came. In for four. Hold for seven. Out for eight. "Aurora." His voice came through the wood, low and unhurried, carrying that particular French inflection that turned her name into something she didn't recognise. "I can hear you breathing." She unlatched the chain. Turned the deadbolt. Pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim corridor of Silas' building, looking like he'd stepped out of a magazine spread and into the wrong postcode. The charcoal three-piece was immaculate, the silver pocket watch chain catching what little light the single bulb overhead offered. His cane rested against the wall beside him, and his eyes — one amber, one black — found hers with the precision of a compass needle. "You have got to be joking," she said. He tilted his head. A smile ghosted across his mouth, there and gone. "May I come in?" "No." "It's nearly freezing out here." "Good." He didn't move. Neither did she. The standoff lasted perhaps five heartbeats, and in each of them she catalogued the things she had worked very hard to forget. The way his hair fell across his forehead when he'd been running. The scar that bisected his left eyebrow. The particular stillness he carried into a room, as though the air rearranged itself around him rather than the other way around. She stepped back. Held the door wider than she needed to. He picked up his cane and crossed the threshold without waiting for a second invitation, the way he always did, and she shut the door behind him harder than necessary. The lock clicked. The chain rattled. "Don't," he said, without turning round. "I heard the gun tucked under your jacket when you shifted. I'd rather you didn't reach for it." "How—" "I also heard you earlier. In the stairwell. Counting." He turned, then, and looked at her. The half-smile had gone. "You still do that." She pressed her lips together. Moved past him into the kitchen alcove, putting the counter between them like a barricade. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "You left something at the Whitmore. The night you—" He paused. Selected his next word with visible care. "Departed." "I didn't leave anything at the Whitmore. I left you at the Whitmore. Those are different things." His jaw tightened. A small movement, almost invisible if you didn't know to look for it. She had spent months learning the geography of that face, and the knowledge sat in her chest like a stone she couldn't cough up. "You left without a word," he said. "Three in the morning. I woke and the bed was cold and your coat was gone. No note. No message. Nothing." "I sent Eva." "Eva is not you." The counter was small. Her hip pressed against the edge of the kettle. He had not moved from the centre of the room, but he occupied it entirely — the way he always had. The half-demon thing, she supposed. Some trick of presence that made spaces feel smaller when he was in them. "You knew why I had to go." She kept her voice flat. "You knew what was in the envelope you'd shown me that night. What it would mean if I stayed." "I knew what it would mean for you. I did not know it required vanishing in the dark like a thief." "I was protecting—" "Don't." The word came out sharp enough to cut. He closed his eyes. Opened them. The amber one seemed to glow faintly in the low light, and she hated that she still noticed. "Do not finish that sentence with the word *you*. You were not protecting me. I am not a child. I am not a thing that requires sheltering." The kettle sat between them, chrome and absurd. Ptolemy chose that moment to appear from wherever cats disappeared to in this flat, winding once around Lucien's ankles before padding off to investigate the empty noodle bowl on the stairs. The domesticity of the gesture was so incongruous that Aurora almost laughed. Almost. She didn't. "Then what was I doing?" "Leaving. That's all. You were leaving." "You make it sound simple." "It was. That is what made it unforgivable." She flinched. He saw it. Something shifted in his expression — not softness, exactly, but a crack in the marble, a hairline fracture running from his mouth to the place where his eyebrows drew together. "I have a job for you," he said. "You came to my flat at midnight. After four months. For a job." "I came to your flat at midnight because I have spent four months not coming to your flat, and I find I am not as patient as I believed myself to be. The job is incidental." The honesty of it stole the breath from her lungs. She gripped the counter behind her, knuckles whitening, and watched him watch her watch him. "Take the job or leave it," he continued. "But either way, we are going to stop pretending the other one does not exist. It is exhausting, and I have a very full schedule." "You are unbelievable." "Yes." A beat. "And yet here I am." He reached into his jacket — slowly, deliberately, letting her see every movement — and produced a slim manila folder, which he set on the counter between them. Then he turned, collected his cane from where he'd leaned it, and walked to the door. "Lucien." He stopped. Didn't turn. "You used to say my name differently." The words came out before she could stop them. She wanted to bite her tongue. "Before. You said it like—" "Like what?" She swallowed. "Like it belonged to you." He was still facing the door. His reflection was a ghost in the small mirror by the coat hooks — a smear of pale hair, a sliver of that unreadable face. He turned the handle. "Goodnight, Aurora." The door clicked shut behind him. The chain rattled. The lock engaged. And she stood in her small kitchen, the manila folder sitting unopened on the counter, the cat purring on the stairs, and the ghost of his voice still lingering in the air like woodsmoke.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned then [then]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.045
82.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"marble"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"stomach"
2"eyebrow"
3"marble"
4"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
23.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"feel"
2"watch watch"
3"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1165
ratio0.001
matches
0"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount809
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.25
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
French1
Moreau1
Selected1
Lucien2
Aurora2
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.858
wordCount1165
matches
0"not softness, exactly, but a crack in the marble, a hairline fracture running from his"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"hated that she"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean21.57
std19.08
cv0.885
sampleLengths
052
15
245
33
443
529
611
769
88
917
101
115
121
1369
1411
1536
1624
171
1824
1925
2019
2117
2240
2328
243
254
2653
2731
2821
293
3060
3152
327
336
345
358
3635
378
3813
3936
4025
4133
423
438
4444
451
464
4727
482
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was still facing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences116
ratio0.052
matches
0"The peephole showed a distorted slice of the hallway — a shoulder clad in charcoal wool, a pale hand, the glint of an ivory handle."
1"His cane rested against the wall beside him, and his eyes — one amber, one black — found hers with the precision of a compass needle."
2"He had not moved from the centre of the room, but he occupied it entirely — the way he always had."
3"Something shifted in his expression — not softness, exactly, but a crack in the marble, a hairline fracture running from his mouth to the place where his eyebrows drew together."
4"He reached into his jacket — slowly, deliberately, letting her see every movement — and produced a slim manila folder, which he set on the counter between them."
5"His reflection was a ghost in the small mirror by the coat hooks — a smear of pale hair, a sliver of that unreadable face."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount448
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.013392857142857142
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.002232142857142857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean10.04
std8.98
cv0.894
sampleLengths
021
115
29
37
43
51
61
720
825
93
104
1130
123
133
143
1524
165
174
183
194
2024
2119
2226
238
244
259
264
271
285
291
303
313
3222
3312
347
3522
363
378
3830
393
403
416
4218
431
4416
454
464
475
4815
495
58.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4051724137931034
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners47
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then he turned, collected his"
ratio0.014
63.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences69
matches
0"She set the bowl on"
1"Her stomach dropped."
2"She didn't open it."
3"She stood there, palm flat"
4"His voice came through the"
5"She unlatched the chain."
6"His cane rested against the"
7"He tilted his head."
8"He didn't move."
9"She stepped back."
10"He picked up his cane"
11"he said, without turning round"
12"He turned, then, and looked"
13"She pressed her lips together."
14"His jaw tightened."
15"She had spent months learning"
16"Her hip pressed against the"
17"He had not moved from"
18"She kept her voice flat"
19"He closed his eyes."
ratio0.391
39.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences69
matches
0"The knocking came at quarter"
1"Aurora froze on the stairs,"
2"The curry house below had"
3"The street outside should have"
4"She set the bowl on"
5"The peephole showed a distorted"
6"Her stomach dropped."
7"She didn't open it."
8"She stood there, palm flat"
9"His voice came through the"
10"She unlatched the chain."
11"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
12"The charcoal three-piece was immaculate,"
13"His cane rested against the"
14"He tilted his head."
15"A smile ghosted across his"
16"He didn't move."
17"Neither did she."
18"The standoff lasted perhaps five"
19"The way his hair fell"
ratio0.841
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The knocking came at quarter past midnight, three sharp raps that cut through the thin walls of the flat like gunshots."
1"She stood there, palm flat against the wood, breathing through her mouth, counting the seconds the way her mother had taught her when she was small and the pani…"
2"The particular stillness he carried into a room, as though the air rearranged itself around him rather than the other way around."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, without turning round"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.227
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.045
81.3031%