Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1H0FCXB01B98SGKV9R9M63

Run Details

Duration:
2m 3s
Cost:
$0.003415
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half eleven, three sharp raps that cut through the muffled thump of bass from Silas' bar downstairs. Rory paused over the chipped mug of chamomile balanced on her knee, the steam curling against her chin. Ptolemy lifted his tabby head from the sofa cushion and stared at the front door with the slow blink of supreme disinterest. No one knocked on her door at half eleven. Delivery drivers phoned. Eva texted first, always, a string of warning emojis before she even left Brick Lane. Silas used his own key. She set the mug down on the cluttered coffee table, pushing past a stack of library books and a half-eaten bowl of noodles, and crossed the narrow length of the flat. The hallway smelled of damp plaster and the curry house two doors down, the same smell that had greeted her the night she'd fled Cardiff with a single suitcase and a name she refused to say out loud. Another knock. Softer this time. Patient. Rory undid the first of the three deadbolts. The second. Her fingers hesitated on the third. "Who is it?" "The Frenchman." A pause, weighted with something she didn't want to name. "Open the door, petit rossignol." Her hand moved before the thought finished forming. The third deadbolt clicked, and she pulled the door open just wide enough to fill the frame. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim corridor like he'd been stitched into it. The charcoal of his three-piece suit caught the weak hallway bulb in a way that made the fabric look almost liquid, the shoulders cut sharp, the waist nipped in. His cane — ivory-handled, that ridiculous, beautiful cane — was hooked over his forearm. Platinum hair pushed back from his brow, not a strand out of place. And his eyes, one amber, one inkwell black, found hers in the half-light and stayed. They didn't move for a long moment. Ptolemy yawned audibly from the sofa. "You're in London," Rory said. "Evidently." "I thought you were in Marseille." "I was." He tilted his head, the ghost of something at the corner of his mouth. "Boat was delayed. So I came here instead." "To my flat." "It appears so." She should have closed the door. She'd thought about it often enough in the months since Geneva — the precise choreography of a slammed door, the satisfying click of a lock, the silence that followed. She'd rehearsed it on the walk home from Yu-Fei's. She'd practised it in the shower. "You can't just turn up." "And yet." He shifted his weight, and the cane caught the light. "Here I am." Rory stepped back. Not an invitation, exactly. More the absence of one. The door drifted open wide enough for him to slip through, and he did, moving with that careful, fluid economy that had always made her wonder which parts of him were human and which were something else entirely. The flat swallowed them both — too small, too warm, smelling of chamomile and takeaway and the lavender candle Eva had left behind in June. Lucien surveyed the room the way he surveyed every room. Cataloguing. The books. The scrolls. The soft hum of the fridge. The narrow bed shoved against the wall under the window, the duvet pulled back on one side where she'd been almost asleep. The mug with her lipstick on the rim. His gaze returned to her. "You've been working." "It's called having a job." "I didn't say otherwise." He leaned the cane against the wall, and the absence of it in his hand changed his silhouette, made him look less like a man on his way somewhere and more like a man who had arrived. "The restaurant. Yu-Fei's. Eva mentioned." Rory folded her arms. "Of course she did." "She worries." "She doesn't need to." "No." He looked at her thenreally looked, the way he used to, the way that made the back of her neck prickle and her palms go damp and her brain go traitorously quiet. "She does." The fridge hummed. Somewhere below, Silas dropped a glass and swore colourfully in Greek. "Sit down," Rory said, because standing in the middle of her own flat arguing with a half-demon about her friends' concerns felt absurd even by her standards. She dropped back onto the sofa. Ptolemy immediately reclaimed her lap, a warm, purring barricade. She stroked his ears without thinking. Lucien did not sit. He moved to the window instead, drawing back the thin curtain an inch. The sodium glow of the street painted his profile in orange and shadow. From this angle she could see the faint line of a scar at his collar — old, silvered, the kind that didn't come from a kitchen knife. "You look tired," he said to the glass. "That's rich, coming from you." "I sleep." "When you can." He turned the cane over in his hands — no, he wasn't holding the cane, she'd left it by the door. He turned his signet ring instead, a habit she'd catalogued months ago and tried very hard to forget. The ruby caught the light like a drop of old blood. "I had a job in Marseille," he said. "It went sideways. A client who talked too much, a payment that didn't arrive. The kind of thing that makes a man reconsider his winter plans." "And you reconsidered to my hallway." "I reconsidered to several hallways." He let the curtain fall. "Yours was the only one I knocked on." The admission landed somewhere beneath her ribs, in a place she'd been pretending didn't exist. Rory kept her eyes on Ptolemy's ears. "You left." The words came out flatter than she meant them to. She'd practised them softer, cleverer, wrapped in the kind of wit that had carried her through Cardiff and London and the long, grey months after Geneva. In the end they were just words, small and blunt and entirely inadequate. "Yes." "You left in the morning. I woke up and you were gone and there was a note on the pillow that said *business in Vienna* in handwriting I later found out wasn't even yours." He was quiet for a long time. The fridge clicked off, then on again. "I wrote the note," he said finally. "You didn't sign it." "Because signing it would have made it real." She looked up. He was watching her with that particular stillness he had, the kind that made her feel like every thought in her head was being quietly translated into a language she didn't speak. She hated it. She had missed it so badly her teeth ached. "Real," she repeated. "The thing where you stay. The thing where you say goodbye. The thing where you don't vanish like smoke because your *business* in Vienna couldn't wait until I'd put the kettle on." "I thought it would be easier for you." "Easier." She laughed, a short, broken sound. "Lucien. Nothing about you has ever been easy." He crossed the room then. Not quickly — Lucien never did anything quickly — but with a deliberation that pressed all the air out of the space between them. He stopped at the edge of the coffee table, close enough that she could smell his cologne, something warm and spiced that she had tried to find at Liberty once and given up on. "I shouldn't have come," he said. "No." "I'll go, if you want." "That's what you do." Something flickered across his face. She had spent a great deal of time studying that face and was still, she suspected, a poor translator. The amber eye caught the light. The black one gave nothing away. "I came," he said quietly, "because I owed you the truth before I left it on a pillow. And I came because I have not slept properly in four months, and every hotel room in Europe smells like your shampoo, and I am told — by people who know me better than they should — that I am a coward." Ptolemy purred on, oblivious. "You're not a coward," Rory said. "You're just very good at leaving." "I am." He crouched then, slowly, the way a man crouches who knows his knees will object. He brought himself level with her, the ring on his finger inches from her knee. "I am very good at it. And I have done it to people I loved less than you, which is to say almost everyone I have ever met. And I am asking you, Aurora, in your own hallway, in your own flat, above a bar that smells of aniseed — I am asking if there is a version of this where I am allowed to stay." Her name in his mouth did something structural to her chest. Ptolemy stretched, extended a paw, and placed it deliberately on Lucien's knee. The half-demon looked down at the tabby with the bewildered expression of a man who had just been judged and found sufficient. "He doesn't usually like strangers," Rory said. "I'm not a stranger." "No." She swallowed. "You're really not." The kettle, without anyone having touched it, began to whistle on the hob. Rory didn't move to get it. Lucien stayed where he was, one hand resting gently over Ptolemy's paw, his strange mismatched gaze lifted to hers, and the distance between them shrank to something measured in breaths.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
92.86% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"He crouched then [then]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.107
67.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count3
2
adverb"quickly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
2"quickly"
3"slowly"
4"deliberately"
5"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"flickered"
3"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
56.28% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"look"
1"wonder"
2"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1565
ratio0.003
matches
0"business in Vienna"
1"business"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1147
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Brick1
Lane1
Cardiff2
Moreau1
Geneva2
Yu-Fei1
Eva2
June1
Silas2
Greek1
Ptolemy7
London1
Lucien6
Liberty1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
3"Geneva"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"June"
6"Greek"
7"London"
8"Liberty"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1565
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences136
matches
0"spiced that she"
1"studying that face"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean23.36
std23.78
cv1.018
sampleLengths
061
132
269
36
416
53
617
725
884
913
105
111
126
1324
143
153
1650
175
1815
1975
2051
218
225
2346
248
252
264
2737
2814
2948
3057
318
325
332
343
3550
3634
376
3818
3922
402
4149
421
4334
4414
457
464
478
4847
4935
98.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"been stitched"
1"been judged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs181
matches
0"wasn't holding"
1"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences136
ratio0.051
matches
0"His cane — ivory-handled, that ridiculous, beautiful cane — was hooked over his forearm."
1"She'd thought about it often enough in the months since Geneva — the precise choreography of a slammed door, the satisfying click of a lock, the silence that followed."
2"The flat swallowed them both — too small, too warm, smelling of chamomile and takeaway and the lavender candle Eva had left behind in June."
3"\"No.\" He looked at her then — really looked, the way he used to, the way that made the back of her neck prickle and her palms go damp and her brain go traitorously quiet."
4"From this angle she could see the faint line of a scar at his collar — old, silvered, the kind that didn't come from a kitchen knife."
5"He turned the cane over in his hands — no, he wasn't holding the cane, she'd left it by the door."
6"Not quickly — Lucien never did anything quickly — but with a deliberation that pressed all the air out of the space between them."
90.70% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount316
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.05063291139240506
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.012658227848101266
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean11.51
std11.34
cv0.986
sampleLengths
021
118
222
39
43
515
65
731
838
92
103
111
128
132
146
153
1612
175
188
1917
2013
2129
2214
2313
2415
257
266
275
281
296
3016
318
323
333
346
3529
369
376
385
3912
403
413
424
435
4438
4525
4610
471
482
492
42.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3161764705882353
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners43
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"More the absence of one."
1"Somewhere below, Silas dropped a"
ratio0.023
52.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences86
matches
0"She set the mug down"
1"Her fingers hesitated on the"
2"Her hand moved before the"
3"His cane — ivory-handled, that"
4"They didn't move for a"
5"He tilted his head, the"
6"She should have closed the"
7"She'd thought about it often"
8"She'd rehearsed it on the"
9"She'd practised it in the"
10"He shifted his weight, and"
11"His gaze returned to her."
12"He leaned the cane against"
13"He looked at her then"
14"She dropped back onto the"
15"She stroked his ears without"
16"He moved to the window"
17"he said to the glass"
18"He turned the cane over"
19"He turned his signet ring"
ratio0.419
12.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences86
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory paused over the chipped"
2"Ptolemy lifted his tabby head"
3"Delivery drivers phoned."
4"Eva texted first, always, a"
5"Silas used his own key."
6"She set the mug down"
7"The hallway smelled of damp"
8"Rory undid the first of"
9"Her fingers hesitated on the"
10"A pause, weighted with something"
11"Her hand moved before the"
12"The third deadbolt clicked, and"
13"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
14"The charcoal of his three-piece"
15"His cane — ivory-handled, that"
16"Platinum hair pushed back from"
17"They didn't move for a"
18"Ptolemy yawned audibly from the"
19"He tilted his head, the"
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
11.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The hallway smelled of damp plaster and the curry house two doors down, the same smell that had greeted her the night she'd fled Cardiff with a single suitcase …"
1"The charcoal of his three-piece suit caught the weak hallway bulb in a way that made the fabric look almost liquid, the shoulders cut sharp, the waist nipped in…"
2"She'd thought about it often enough in the months since Geneva — the precise choreography of a slammed door, the satisfying click of a lock, the silence that fo…"
3"The door drifted open wide enough for him to slip through, and he did, moving with that careful, fluid economy that had always made her wonder which parts of hi…"
4"She'd practised them softer, cleverer, wrapped in the kind of wit that had carried her through Cardiff and London and the long, grey months after Geneva."
5"He was watching her with that particular stillness he had, the kind that made her feel like every thought in her head was being quietly translated into a langua…"
6"The half-demon looked down at the tabby with the bewildered expression of a man who had just been judged and found sufficient."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He tilted, the ghost of something at the corner of his mouth"
1"He shifted, and the cane caught the light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.393
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.071
78.8005%