Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1H5VMNDD5YPPH4QRBWASRB

Run Details

Duration:
2m 58s
Cost:
$0.006248
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at quarter past midnight. Rory was cross-legged on Eva's worn sofa, Ptolemy a warm weight across her ankles, a half-empty mug of tea gone cold on the floor beside a stack of Welsh-language grammar books she'd been pretending to read. Eva was out — some séance in Walthamstow, back by two, don't wait up — and the flat had the particular hush of a space borrowed from someone else's life. Three sharp raps. Not a delivery. Not a neighbour. The rhythm was too deliberate, too patient between each strike. She set the book down. Ptolemy's ears flicked but he didn't stir. The deadbolts were Eva's idea of charm — three of them, stacked up the door like a nervous tic. Rory undid them one at a time, the brass mechanisms clicking in the quiet, and pulled the door open with the chain still on. Amber. Black. The same heterochromatic gaze she'd spent three weeks telling herself she'd imagined. Lucien stood in the hallway under the flickering bulb, rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal coat, his cane tucked beneath one arm like a gentleman waiting for a hansom cab. The tips of his platinum hair had gone damp. He looked at her through the gap in the chain as though the four inches of steel between them were nothing at all. "You shouldn't be here," Rory said. "And yet." He lifted one shoulder. The motion cost him — she could see it in the way his jaw tightened, the way his gloved hand adjusted its grip on the cane. "May I come in, or shall we conduct this in the corridor where your neighbour's cat can judge us?" "There's no cat." "A figure of speech, Rory. You used to be fluent in them." She shut the door. Undid the chain. Opened it again. He stepped past her without being invited twice, and the flat shrank. That was the thing about Lucien — he didn't take up space so much as rearrange it, made rooms feel like they belonged to him. The smell of him came with him, something woodsmoke and old paper, undercut by the wet wool of his coat. Ptolemy lifted his head, considered the newcomer, and then vacated the sofa entirely to wind between Lucien's ankles. "Traitor," Rory muttered. Lucien bent to scratch behind the cat's ears, and the motion put a strand of damp hair across his brow. When he straightened, he did not sit. He stood in the middle of Eva's cluttered floor and looked at the books, the candles, the scatter of research notes, as though reading the room like a page in a language he was translating. "You've been busy," he said. "I've been alive. It turns out that's a full-time job." "Evidently." The laugh that escaped her surprised them both. She pressed her knuckles to her mouth, caught it, swallowed it back down. Three weeks. Twenty-two days, if she was counting, and she had been, every morning when she woke in Eva's spare room and reminded herself that the silence where his voice used to be was a feature, not a flaw. She had been counting. "You're hurt," she said. It wasn't a question. The cane, the tightness, the way he'd favoured his left side stepping over the threshold. "A misunderstanding with a client in Soho." He set the cane against the bookshelf. His fingers worked the buttons of his coat — three, precise, the gloves coming off after. Beneath, his waistcoat was dark with rain. "Nothing that won't keep." "That's not an answer." "It's the one I'm offering." She watched him hang the coat on the back of Eva's chair, the careful domesticity of it, the way his hands lingered on the collar to straighten it. He had always done that — small acts of order in a life that dealt mostly in chaos. The first time she'd noticed it, they'd been standing in a rain-slicked alley off Whitechapel, and he'd adjusted his cuffs while a man two feet away bled out from a wound Rory had helped inflict. She'd found it unbearable. She'd found it necessary. "Sit down, Lucien." "I'd rather stand." "I didn't ask what you'd rather." Something shifted in his expression. Not quite a smile. The ghost of one, maybe, the sort of thing that haunted a face rather than lived on it. He lowered himself into the chair she'd indicated, and Ptolemy, sensing a lap in the offing, immediately claimed it. Rory stayed standing. She wrapped her arms around herself, then thought better of it and dropped them to her sides. She had worn an old Cardiff University t-shirt to bed and a pair of joggers that Eva had lent her, and she felt, suddenly, absurdly underdressed for whatever this was. "I told you not to come back," she said. "You told me a great many things." "That one in particular." He stroked the cat. The purring filled the flat, a low mechanical rumble, and neither of them spoke for a long moment. The candle on the mantel guttered. Rain tapped at the window. "You left your scarf," he said, at last. "I didn't leave it. You kept it." "Semantics." "Everything with you is semantics." His eyes lifted to hers. The amber one caught the candlelight and threw it back, warm and wrong, the colour of things that shouldn't exist. The black one gave nothing away. "I kept it," he conceded, "because you were wearing it the night you told me about Cardiff. About your father. About the way he used to—" He stopped. His thumb stilled on Ptolemy's skull. "I kept it because it smelled like you, and I am not, despite what you may think, a man who is good at letting go of things that matter." The words landed somewhere in her chest, low and hot. She turned away from them, toward the window, toward the rain streaking the glass in long diagonals. "You could have called." "I could have." "You could have explained. About Marseille. About why you disappeared for nine days in March. About the thing with the — whatever her name was." "Antoinette." A pause. "It wasn't what you thought." "I know what I saw." "You saw a woman leaving my flat. You did not see her stay. You did not see what we discussed, which was a debt her brother owed me, and the terms of its repayment." He leaned forward. Ptolemy grumbled at the disturbance. "You saw what you had already decided to see, Rory, because deciding was easier than asking." She spun back. "Don't." "Don't what?" "Don't make this about me." "Then what shall we make it about? The rain? The cat? My very polite and entirely one-sided interrogation of your evening?" "You broke into a place I was staying—" "You gave me the key." "—and you waited until I'd fallen asleep—" "You looked peaceful. I didn't want to wake you." "—and you stood in the doorway like some kind of very tall, very wet apology, and then you left, Lucien. You left, and in the morning there was a cup of tea on the counter and a note that said nothing, and I haven't heard from you since." The cat, sensing the shift in atmosphere, dropped from Lucien's lap and retreated beneath the sofa. A small betrayal, but a practical one. "How did you know I was here?" she asked. "I didn't. I came to your flat above the bar. The landlady — Silas, I believe — informed me you'd moved out two weeks ago, and that if I came back asking after you, she'd remove my kneecaps with a corkscrew. Charming woman. I may have to employ her." "You came to my flat." "I came to find you." "Why?" He looked at her then, and whatever wall he'd been building — the charm, the formality, the careful distance of a man who spoke four languages and used none of them to say what he meant — thinned. She could see through it. She could see the exhaustion beneath, and the hurt, and the thing he would not name, sitting behind his ribs like a coal that wouldn't catch. "Because I am not, as I said, good at letting go," he said. "And because I have spent twenty-two days being very efficient and very successful at every single thing I do, except the one thing that matters, which is telling you that the night I left was the worst decision I have made in a decade, and I have made some spectacularly poor ones." The flat was very quiet. The candle had burned down to a stub. Ptolemy, from beneath the sofa, began to clean one paw with great deliberation. Rory breathed in. Breathed out. "The tea's cold," she said. "I can make fresh." "You don't know where anything is." "Then show me." She stood there a moment longer, arms at her sides, the rain still tapping, the cat still pretending none of this was happening. Then she crossed the room, bare feet on cold floorboards, and pulled open the cupboard where Eva kept the mugs. "This one," she said, and set it on the counter. "The kettle's the kettle. You can manage the rest." He rose from the chair slowly, favouring the left side again, and joined her at the counter. Their shoulders did not touch. The space between them hummed. "Rory." "Don't." "I haven't said anything yet." "You were about to." "I was about to ask if you had sugar." She looked at him. He looked at her. The corner of his mouth twitched, and this time it was a real smile, small and lopsided and entirely without permission. "We don't have sugar," she said. "Then black it is." She filled the kettle. He found a clean spoon. Outside, the rain kept falling, and somewhere in Walthamstow, Eva was most likely raising something from the dead, and in this cramped flat above a curry house, two people who had not managed to say a single necessary thing in twenty-two days began, at last, to say them.
created_at"2026-06-01T12:05:16.572Z" 6/1/2026, 12:05:16 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.27
leniency0.54
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1673
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count6
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1673
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"charm"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"mechanical"
count1
5
word"efficient"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicked"
2"charm"
3"silence"
4"mechanical"
5"efficient"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1683
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1175
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva9
Ptolemy7
Welsh-language1
Walthamstow2
Lucien6
Whitechapel1
Rory7
Cardiff1
University1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"Walthamstow"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though reading the room like a page in a language he was translating"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1683
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean20.52
std22.5
cv1.096
sampleLengths
07
166
219
312
443
514
663
76
851
93
1012
1110
1275
133
1462
155
1610
171
1860
194
2023
2141
224
235
2489
253
263
276
2846
2950
309
317
324
3333
348
357
361
375
3831
3963
4027
414
423
4325
448
455
4658
474
482
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"being invited"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs208
matches
0"was translating"
1"was counting"
2"was happening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences145
ratio0.062
matches
0"Eva was out — some séance in Walthamstow, back by two, don't wait up — and the flat had the particular hush of a space borrowed from someone else's life."
1"The deadbolts were Eva's idea of charm — three of them, stacked up the door like a nervous tic."
2"The motion cost him — she could see it in the way his jaw tightened, the way his gloved hand adjusted its grip on the cane."
3"That was the thing about Lucien — he didn't take up space so much as rearrange it, made rooms feel like they belonged to him."
4"His fingers worked the buttons of his coat — three, precise, the gloves coming off after."
5"He had always done that — small acts of order in a life that dealt mostly in chaos."
6"\"—and you waited until I'd fallen asleep—\""
7"\"—and you stood in the doorway like some kind of very tall, very wet apology, and then you left, Lucien. You left, and in the morning there was a cup of tea on the counter and a note that said nothing, and I haven't heard from you since.\""
8"He looked at her then, and whatever wall he'd been building — the charm, the formality, the careful distance of a man who spoke four languages and used none of them to say what he meant — thinned."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1133
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03000882612533098
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00706090026478376
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean11.61
std11.19
cv0.964
sampleLengths
07
136
230
33
43
53
610
75
87
919
1024
111
121
1312
1431
159
1623
176
186
1926
2019
213
2212
234
243
253
2612
2725
2820
2918
303
3120
327
3335
345
3510
361
378
3813
392
4037
414
424
434
4415
4514
4616
477
484
494
42.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.30344827586206896
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners44
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then she crossed the room,"
ratio0.012
47.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences86
matches
0"She set the book down."
1"He looked at her through"
2"He lifted one shoulder"
3"She shut the door."
4"He stepped past her without"
5"He stood in the middle"
6"She pressed her knuckles to"
7"She had been counting."
8"It wasn't a question."
9"He set the cane against"
10"His fingers worked the buttons"
11"She watched him hang the"
12"He had always done that"
13"She'd found it unbearable."
14"She'd found it necessary."
15"He lowered himself into the"
16"She wrapped her arms around"
17"She had worn an old"
18"He stroked the cat."
19"he said, at last"
ratio0.43
23.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences86
matches
0"The knock came at quarter"
1"Rory was cross-legged on Eva's"
2"Eva was out — some"
3"The rhythm was too deliberate,"
4"She set the book down."
5"Ptolemy's ears flicked but he"
6"The deadbolts were Eva's idea"
7"Rory undid them one at"
8"The same heterochromatic gaze she'd"
9"Lucien stood in the hallway"
10"The tips of his platinum"
11"He looked at her through"
12"He lifted one shoulder"
13"The motion cost him —"
14"She shut the door."
15"He stepped past her without"
16"That was the thing about"
17"The smell of him came"
18"Ptolemy lifted his head, considered"
19"Lucien bent to scratch behind"
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He stood in the middle of Eva's cluttered floor and looked at the books, the candles, the scatter of research notes, as though reading the room like a page in a…"
1"He looked at her then, and whatever wall he'd been building — the charm, the formality, the careful distance of a man who spoke four languages and used none of …"
2"She could see the exhaustion beneath, and the hurt, and the thing he would not name, sitting behind his ribs like a coal that wouldn't catch."
3"Outside, the rain kept falling, and somewhere in Walthamstow, Eva was most likely raising something from the dead, and in this cramped flat above a curry house,…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"he conceded (concede)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.063
82.6125%