Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1H7EZPGT32SW0T4X0TV704

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Duration:
3m 23s
Cost:
$0.006573
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Minimax

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at quarter past eleven on a Tuesday, which meant it was either Eva with wine or trouble with a capital T. Rory was halfway out of her work clothes, one leg still in her trousers, when she heard it — three measured raps against the wood of her door, the sound of a man who knew exactly how long to wait between knocks to make the silence feel deliberate. She froze with her thumb hooked in the waistband, listening. Below her, the muffled thrum of Silas' bar was winding down, glasses clinking their last orders, laughter curling up through the floorboards like smoke. She didn't get many visitors. She had made sure of that. The knocks didn't come again. Whoever it was, they were waiting. Patient. Certain. She pulled her trousers back up, grabbed the first thing that wasn't a weapon — a chipped mug of cold tea — and crossed to the peephole. Pressed her eye to it. The hallway beyond was dim, the single bulb at the top of the stairs flickering its usual half-dead flicker, and in the cone of sickly yellow light stood a man in a charcoal suit so well-cut it looked like it had been poured onto him. Her stomach dropped through the floor. Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane like it was the most natural thing in the world to be standing outside her door at eleven-fifteen on a Tuesday, his platinum hair combed back, his mismatched eyes — one amber, one black as a starless sky — lifted toward the peephole as though he could see straight through it. As though he always had. Rory set her jaw. Set the mug down. Unlocked the deadbolt. Opened the door exactly wide enough for her to be visible, not wide enough for him to come in without being invited. She had learned that lesson the hard way. Several of them, in fact. "Lucien," she said, and her voice came out flatter than she wanted. Good. Flat was safe. "It's been eight months." "It has," he agreed, in that accented murmur of his, the French curling through every consonant like smoke through a keyhole. "May I come in?" "You may not." He didn't flinch. Of course he didn't. He had the kind of face that took a punch and turned it into a compliment. Instead he inclined his head, just a fraction, and she watched the light from her flat catch the sharp line of his jaw, the pale column of his throat where his collar sat open — one button undone, always one button undone, even in January, as if the cold had personally wronged him and he refused to acknowledge it. "I can wait out here," he said. "I brought wine." He lifted a bottle from where it had been resting against his cane. A red, expensive, the kind of label she couldn't pronounce and wouldn't have been able to afford even if she could. She stared at it. She stared at him. She felt, with the precision of someone who had been ambushed before, the exact moment her defenses began to crack, and she hated him for it. "How did you find me?" "You moved, Rory." A faint smile. "You moved twice. I let you." The admission landed in her chest like a fist. She gripped the edge of the door harder. "Why are you here?" "Because I was wrong." He said it simply, the way he said most things — as if the truth were a small, polite guest he was introducing to the room for the first time. "And because you deserve to hear me say it to your face." She should have closed the door. She knew that. She had a whole list — a literal list, written on the back of a takeout menu and pinned above the kettle — of things she would say if she ever saw him again, and not one of them was kind. She had rehearsed them in the shower. She had rehearsed them on the back of her delivery moped, weaving through Soho traffic, the wind tearing the words from her mouth. Now he was here, and the words were gone. All of them. Replaced by the sight of him — the way the light caught the silver at his temples, the way his gloved hand rested on the head of his cane, the way he held himself a little off-balance, as though the leg he favored were a secret he was protecting. "Aurora," he said, softer. Her real name. The one he had never used in front of anyone else. "Five minutes. That is all I am asking for. Five minutes, and if you tell me to leave, I will go. I will not come back." The lie of that promise sat between them. She knew it was a lie. He probably knew she knew. That was the whole shape of them, wasn't it? Two people who could read each other's lies the way other people read the weather, and chose to stand in the rain anyway. She stepped back. She didn't say anything. She just stepped back, and the door swung open a little wider, and the hallway light pooled into her flat and caught the edge of the chipped mug, the stack of unopened mail on the table, the clean line of her unmade bed in the corner. Lucien crossed the threshold like a man stepping into a church. He set the wine down on the nearest surface. He did not look around. He had the decency, at least, not to look around — not to inventory the evidence of her small, careful life, the books borrowed from Eva and stacked by the radiator, the jacket slung over the back of a chair, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light as she folded her arms across her chest. He stopped in the middle of the room. He turned to face her. Up close, she could see what eight months had done to him. There was a tightness around his mouth that hadn't been there before. A new scar, pale and thin, running along the line of his left cheekbone like a question mark she hadn't been around to ask. He looked, for the first time since she had met him, like a man who had been losing. "Sit down," she said, and was annoyed to hear that her voice had gone hoarse. He did. He sat on the edge of the only chair that wasn't piled with laundry, and he set his cane across his knees, and he looked up at her, and the silence in the room was so loud she could have heard a pin drop a mile away. "I was not honest with you," he said. "About Avaros. About what I am. About why I was in London when I said I was in Marseille. You deserved honesty, and I gave you misdirection because I was afraid —" "Afraid of what?" The words came out sharper than she meant them to. She sat on the edge of the bed across from him, knees together, hands clasped. "That I wouldn't want you? Lucien, I wanted you. I wanted you so badly I didn't ask questions, and you —" She stopped. Breathed. "You let me not ask them." "Yes," he said. "I did." "That's not an apology." "No." He leaned forward, and the movement put a hand's width of distance between his face and hers. "It is not. I am not very good at apologies. I am better at—" He paused. Looked at the wine he had brought. Looked at the scar on her wrist. Looked at her. "—at being here. In person. Saying the wrong thing in the right way. I have been told this is a flaw." She laughed, in spite of herself. The sound came out jagged, half-broken, and he flinched at it like a man flinching at the sound of something he had broken. "Rory," he said. "I left because I thought it would keep you safe. I was wrong about what would keep you safe. I was wrong about a great many things." His gloved hand lifted, hovered, and then, slowly, as if asking permission, came to rest over her clasped hands. The leather was warm from his grip. She did not pull away. "I have spent eight months being wrong. I would very much like to stop." She looked at his hand. At the gold of his signet ring, the small chip in the enamel of his thumbnail. At the way his fingers curled, not gripping, just resting, just there, just asking. "You left me a note," she said. "Three lines. Three lines, Lucien. I kept it. I read it every day for the first month and I hated you, and then I stopped reading it and I hated you more." "Where is it?" "Where do you think?" His mouth curved, the smallest fraction, and there it was — the thing that had undone her the first time, the thing she had tried to outrun in two different flats in two different boroughs. The way he looked at her like she was the only honest thing in a city full of lies. The way he looked at her like he had been waiting his whole life to be caught. "Aurora," he said, and her name in his mouth still sounded like a confession. "May I stay?" She didn't answer. She got up. She went to the kitchen, and she got two glasses that didn't match, and she came back, and she opened the wine, and she poured. Outside, London hummed and murmured and went on being London. Below, Silas turned off the last of the bar lights and the floorboards settled into a long, creaking sigh. The radiator clanked. Somewhere down the street a car alarm started and stopped and started again, the kind of small, persistent nuisance that no one ever quite got around to fixing. Inside, the silence broke into something smaller, something they could both survive. She poured him a glass anyway, and when their fingers brushed over the stem, neither of them moved away. It was a start. It was, she thought, more than he deserved. It was also, she was beginning to suspect, more than she had ever really stood a chance of refusing.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"silence"
2"flicker"
3"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1735
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1449
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.21
worstName"Looked"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Looked"
discoveredNames
Tuesday2
Eva2
Moreau1
Good1
French1
January1
Soho1
Looked3
London2
Silas1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Looked"
3"Silas"
places
0"January"
1"Soho"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like it had been poured onto him"
1"as if asking permission, came to rest over her clasped hands"
2"sounded like a confession"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1735
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences128
matches
0"learned that lesson"
1"hear that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean36.91
std27
cv0.731
sampleLengths
024
182
211
313
477
56
658
75
846
920
1025
113
1282
1310
1468
155
1612
1717
184
1946
2080
2161
2244
2351
2453
2584
2679
2715
2849
2940
3058
315
324
3372
3429
3575
3635
3739
383
394
4071
4117
4231
4360
4412
4519
4631
89.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences109
matches
0"been poured"
1"been ambushed"
2"were gone"
3"was annoyed"
4"been told"
94.18% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs252
matches
0"were waiting"
1"was introducing"
2"was protecting"
3"was beginning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences128
ratio0.078
matches
0"Rory was halfway out of her work clothes, one leg still in her trousers, when she heard it — three measured raps against the wood of her door, the sound of a man who knew exactly how long to wait between knocks to make the silence feel deliberate."
1"She pulled her trousers back up, grabbed the first thing that wasn't a weapon — a chipped mug of cold tea — and crossed to the peephole."
2"Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane like it was the most natural thing in the world to be standing outside her door at eleven-fifteen on a Tuesday, his platinum hair combed back, his mismatched eyes — one amber, one black as a starless sky — lifted toward the peephole as though he could see straight through it."
3"Instead he inclined his head, just a fraction, and she watched the light from her flat catch the sharp line of his jaw, the pale column of his throat where his collar sat open — one button undone, always one button undone, even in January, as if the cold had personally wronged him and he refused to acknowledge it."
4"\"Because I was wrong.\" He said it simply, the way he said most things — as if the truth were a small, polite guest he was introducing to the room for the first time."
5"She had a whole list — a literal list, written on the back of a takeout menu and pinned above the kettle — of things she would say if she ever saw him again, and not one of them was kind."
6"Replaced by the sight of him — the way the light caught the silver at his temples, the way his gloved hand rested on the head of his cane, the way he held himself a little off-balance, as though the leg he favored were a secret he was protecting."
7"He had the decency, at least, not to look around — not to inventory the evidence of her small, careful life, the books borrowed from Eva and stacked by the radiator, the jacket slung over the back of a chair, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light as she folded her arms across her chest."
8"\"—at being here. In person. Saying the wrong thing in the right way. I have been told this is a flaw.\""
9"His mouth curved, the smallest fraction, and there it was — the thing that had undone her the first time, the thing she had tried to outrun in two different flats in two different boroughs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount556
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03597122302158273
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.007194244604316547
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean13.55
std13.37
cv0.987
sampleLengths
024
148
210
324
45
56
65
76
81
91
1027
115
1245
136
1458
155
164
174
183
1922
208
215
2212
231
243
254
2621
274
283
293
304
3116
3259
337
343
3513
3621
374
384
3926
405
416
426
439
448
454
4634
4712
486
493
47.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.40625
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"Of course he didn't."
1"Instead he inclined his head,"
2"Somewhere down the street a"
ratio0.031
11.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences98
matches
0"She froze with her thumb"
1"She didn't get many visitors."
2"She had made sure of"
3"She pulled her trousers back"
4"Her stomach dropped through the"
5"She had learned that lesson"
6"she said, and her voice"
7"he agreed, in that accented"
8"He didn't flinch."
9"He had the kind of"
10"He lifted a bottle from"
11"She stared at it."
12"She stared at him."
13"She felt, with the precision"
14"She gripped the edge of"
15"He said it simply, the"
16"She should have closed the"
17"She knew that."
18"She had a whole list"
19"She had rehearsed them in"
ratio0.52
87.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences98
matches
0"The knock came at quarter"
1"Rory was halfway out of"
2"She froze with her thumb"
3"She didn't get many visitors."
4"She had made sure of"
5"The knocks didn't come again."
6"She pulled her trousers back"
7"The hallway beyond was dim,"
8"Her stomach dropped through the"
9"Lucien Moreau leaned on his"
10"Rory set her jaw."
11"She had learned that lesson"
12"Several of them, in fact."
13"she said, and her voice"
14"he agreed, in that accented"
15"He didn't flinch."
16"He had the kind of"
17"He lifted a bottle from"
18"A red, expensive, the kind"
19"She stared at it."
ratio0.745
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"Whoever it was, they were"
1"As though he always had."
2"Now he was here, and"
ratio0.031
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory was halfway out of her work clothes, one leg still in her trousers, when she heard it — three measured raps against the wood of her door, the sound of a ma…"
1"Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane like it was the most natural thing in the world to be standing outside her door at eleven-fifteen on a Tuesday, h…"
2"Instead he inclined his head, just a fraction, and she watched the light from her flat catch the sharp line of his jaw, the pale column of his throat where his …"
3"Replaced by the sight of him — the way the light caught the silver at his temples, the way his gloved hand rested on the head of his cane, the way he held himse…"
4"His mouth curved, the smallest fraction, and there it was — the thing that had undone her the first time, the thing she had tried to outrun in two different fla…"
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, softer"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.611
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.056
86.1956%