Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1H7GVY7M2D0F195QC96T7H

Run Details

Duration:
40.6s
Cost:
$0.060370
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came sideways, hammering the awnings of Camden High Street and turning the gutters into black rivers. Detective Harlow Quinn ran with her coat plastered to her shoulders, boots slapping puddles that swallowed the neon glow of shuttered shopfronts. Twenty metres ahead, the man kept his lead. "Police! Stop!" He didn't. He'd never stopped, not since she'd spotted him outside the Raven's Nest with that leather satchel clutched against his chest, not since he'd clocked her watching from across the road and bolted like a hare. Tomás Herrera. She knew the face from the file. Former paramedic, struck off, now running with the crowd she'd spent two years building a case against. He vaulted a row of bins and cut down a side alley. Quinn followed, her shoulder clipping brick, her breath sawing. The watch on her wrist ticked against her pulse. Eighteen years on the job had taught her bodies, taught her how a man moved when he had something to lose. Herrera moved like that now—frantic, but with purpose. He knew where he was going. The alley dead-ended at a chain-link fence. He hit it without slowing, fingers hooking the wire, and hauled himself up and over. Quinn reached the base as his boots dropped to the far side. "You're making this worse for yourself!" "You don't understand what's down there," he shouted back, already moving. "Go home, Detective." She climbed. The fence bit her palms and she came down hard, ankle protesting, but she kept her feet. He'd ducked through a gap where a hoarding had peeled away from a brick arch—an old Underground entrance, boarded for decades, the tiles behind the slats furred with grime. A draught breathed out of the dark, warm and sweetish, carrying something that wasn't quite sewer and wasn't quite smoke. Quinn slowed at the threshold. Her hand found the grip of the torch clipped to her belt. The beam swept down a staircase that descended further than any disused station had a right to, the steps slick with condensation, the walls scrawled with symbols she didn't recognise—not gang tags, not the usual scrawl. Spirals. Eyes. A language of hooks and lines. Three years ago she'd stood at the mouth of a place like this. DS Morris had gone down ahead of her, torch in hand, telling her to wait. She'd waited. He hadn't come back—not as himself. The report said he'd vanished. The report was a lie she'd signed because the truth had no box to tick. Down below, Herrera's footsteps faded. She should call it in. Standard procedure: secure the scene, request backup, log the location. Her radio was already in her hand. But she knew how the call would go. She knew what dispatch would make of an underground market beneath Camden, of bone tokens and a fence and a man who'd told her she didn't understand what was down there. They'd send a unit to an empty stairwell. They always found empty stairwells. Quinn keyed the radio anyway. "DI Quinn, requesting backup, my location is—" Static swallowed the rest. The display flickered, the signal bars collapsing to nothing the moment she crossed beneath the arch. She tried again. Dead air. The dark drank the words. She stood there, rain dripping off her jaw, and weighed it. Go back, do it by the book, lose Herrera and whatever was in that satchel. Or go down, alone, into the kind of place that had taken Morris and given her nothing back but paperwork. "Damn it." She went down. The staircase curved. Her torch picked out the bones first—small ones, finger-length, threaded on wire and hung from the ceiling in clusters that clicked when the draught moved them. Then the booth. A figure squatted behind a table at the foot of the stairs, hooded, hands folded. As Quinn approached, the figure lifted its head, and the torchlight found a face that was mostly ordinary except for the eyes, which caught the light wrong, like a cat's. "Token," the figure said. "I don't have one." "Then you don't pass." The voice had no anger in it, only the flatness of a rule. "No token, no Market. Those are the terms. Go back up, warm-blood, before the terms decide for you." Quinn pulled her warrant card from her coat and held it open. The laminate gleamed, useless. "Metropolitan Police. A man came through here thirty seconds ago. Dark curls, leather bag, scar on his left arm. Where did he go?" The figure's gaze didn't move to the card. It stayed on her, patient and ancient. "Many come through. The Market doesn't keep names for the likes of you." "He had a token." "He had standing." A pause. "You have a torch and a piece of paper. They mean nothing past this line." Beyond the booth the passage opened, and Quinn could see it now—stalls strung with lanterns that burned colours fire shouldn't burn, green and bruise-purple, a corridor of canvas and salvaged timber stretching into a dark too deep for an abandoned platform. Figures moved among the lights. Something was being weighed on a brass scale, something that struggled. The air tasted of copper and crushed herbs and underneath it all that sweetish rot from the stairs. Herrera was in there. She caught a flash of him—the satchel, the curve of his shoulder—before the crowd folded around him and he was gone. "I need to follow him." "You need to leave." The figure unfolded a hand, and a single finger-bone dropped from its sleeve to roll across the table and stop against her warrant card. "You may borrow a way in. But know what you spend. Down here, debts are paid in kind, and the Market always collects. Your partner learned that. The tall one. The one with the steady hands and the bad habit of waiting at the top of stairs." Quinn went still. The lanterns hissed. The bones clicked overhead. "What did you say?" "I said the choice is yours, Detective Quinn." The eyes caught the light again, amused now. "He came down too. He didn't believe either." Her hand hovered over the bone token. Behind her, the stairs climbed back up toward the rain and the failing radio and the world where reports got filed and lies got signed. Ahead, the green light, the crowd, the man with the answers in his bag. She picked up the token.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he shouted back [back]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.095
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1077
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1077
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"footsteps"
2"standard"
3"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1069
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount882
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Raven1
Nest1
Herrera5
Underground1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Raven"
globalScore0.99
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite sewer and wasn't quite smoke"
1"quite smoke"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1069
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean31.44
std26.25
cv0.835
sampleLengths
048
12
263
365
434
56
614
768
861
956
105
1174
125
1337
1446
152
163
1777
184
194
2035
2139
2228
234
2420
2575
2625
275
2875
2910
304
3124
3246
335
91.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences79
matches
0"being weighed"
1"was gone"
2"got filed"
3"got signed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs166
matches
0"was going"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences93
ratio0.075
matches
0"Herrera moved like that now—frantic, but with purpose."
1"He'd ducked through a gap where a hoarding had peeled away from a brick arch—an old Underground entrance, boarded for decades, the tiles behind the slats furred with grime."
2"The beam swept down a staircase that descended further than any disused station had a right to, the steps slick with condensation, the walls scrawled with symbols she didn't recognise—not gang tags, not the usual scrawl."
3"He hadn't come back—not as himself."
4"Her torch picked out the bones first—small ones, finger-length, threaded on wire and hung from the ceiling in clusters that clicked when the draught moved them."
5"Beyond the booth the passage opened, and Quinn could see it now—stalls strung with lanterns that burned colours fire shouldn't burn, green and bruise-purple, a corridor of canvas and salvaged timber stretching into a dark too deep for an abandoned platform."
6"She caught a flash of him—the satchel, the curve of his shoulder—before the crowd folded around him and he was gone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount895
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.026815642458100558
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0022346368715083797
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean11.49
std9.51
cv0.828
sampleLengths
018
122
28
32
42
535
62
77
817
912
109
119
1221
138
146
157
1615
1712
186
1911
203
212
2217
2329
2420
255
2612
2736
281
291
306
3113
3215
332
346
355
3615
375
385
3910
407
418
4231
438
445
455
4611
4716
483
492
65.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.44086021505376344
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners41
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Then the booth."
ratio0.014
96.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences71
matches
0"He'd never stopped, not since"
1"She knew the face from"
2"He vaulted a row of"
3"He knew where he was"
4"He hit it without slowing,"
5"he shouted back, already moving"
6"He'd ducked through a gap"
7"Her hand found the grip"
8"He hadn't come back—not as"
9"She should call it in."
10"Her radio was already in"
11"She knew what dispatch would"
12"They'd send a unit to"
13"They always found empty stairwells."
14"She tried again."
15"She stood there, rain dripping"
16"She went down."
17"Her torch picked out the"
18"It stayed on her, patient"
19"She caught a flash of"
ratio0.31
58.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences71
matches
0"The rain came sideways, hammering"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ran with"
2"He'd never stopped, not since"
3"She knew the face from"
4"He vaulted a row of"
5"Quinn followed, her shoulder clipping"
6"The watch on her wrist"
7"Herrera moved like that now—frantic,"
8"He knew where he was"
9"The alley dead-ended at a"
10"He hit it without slowing,"
11"Quinn reached the base as"
12"he shouted back, already moving"
13"The fence bit her palms"
14"He'd ducked through a gap"
15"A draught breathed out of"
16"Quinn slowed at the threshold."
17"Her hand found the grip"
18"The beam swept down a"
19"A language of hooks and"
ratio0.803
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ran with her coat plastered to her shoulders, boots slapping puddles that swallowed the neon glow of shuttered shopfronts."
1"The beam swept down a staircase that descended further than any disused station had a right to, the steps slick with condensation, the walls scrawled with symbo…"
2"She knew what dispatch would make of an underground market beneath Camden, of bone tokens and a fence and a man who'd told her she didn't understand what was do…"
3"As Quinn approached, the figure lifted its head, and the torchlight found a face that was mostly ordinary except for the eyes, which caught the light wrong, lik…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he shouted back (shout)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.19
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.095
86.4489%