Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1H9W5CNNFM8STRQAV1XCJ9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 44s
Cost:
$0.002972
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the gap between the two largest oaks and felt the air change. The night behind her had been ordinary enough for late October—damp, a little cold, the distant wash of London's light pollution turning the clouds a sickly amber. The trees of Richmond Park had been familiar shapes in a familiar dark, and she had walked the path from the gate with her hands shoved deep in her jacket pockets, the Heartstone pendant a cold coin of silver and crimson against her collarbone. Now the cold was gone. Not warmth, exactly. Just the absence of cold. The air sat against her skin like something that had been waiting, and the wind she had been walking into for the last twenty minutes was nowhere. The wildflowers underfoot—she could see them in the strange light, white and blue and a yellow so pale it looked bleached—were open. All of them. As if it were noon in June. The smell that rose from them was sweet and thick and slightly wrong, the way lilies smell right before they turn. She stopped walking. Listened. The silence was too complete. No traffic, no planes, no foxes. Even her own breathing sounded muffled, as though the air had grown heavier in the last few seconds. She turned back toward the gap in the oaks and saw only more oaks, the trunks pale in a light that had no source she could identify. "Brilliant," she said to herself. "Just brilliant." She had not meant to come this late. The plan had been a daytime recce, a quick look at the stones Eva had mentioned, a photograph to send to the odd little bookseller in Kensal Rise who had been so insistent that she come alone, that she come at dusk, that she bring the pendant. The bookseller's name had been something Welsh and unpronounceable, and he had smelled of pipe tobacco and wet wool, and his eyes had not sat right in his face. Rory had agreed because she was tired and the rent was late and the pendant had been warm against her skin the entire conversation, pulsing in time with a heartbeat that was not hers. Now it was warm again. Warmer than it had been in the flat. Warmer than it had been in the restaurant kitchen, warmer than it had been in Eva's hallway that morning when she had pressed it into Rory's palm and told her, with a look that had nothing of Eva's usual softness in it, to go. To go now. To go alone. The wildflowers brushed her ankles as she moved forward, because forward was the only direction that made sense. The clearing—if it was a clearing—opened around her in a way that felt more suggested than seen. She could make out the edge of it as a darkening of the air, a place where the pale light simply stopped, and the standing stones at the rim stood in a ragged circle like teeth in an old mouth. Twelve of them, maybe. She counted twice and got two different numbers. She tried her phone. No signal. The time on the screen read 9:47. She had left the gate at nine. "Okay," she said. "Okay, Rory. Eyes open. Ears open. Don't be stupid." She was being stupid. She knew she was being stupid the way a person knows they are out of their depth in a swimming pool, by the sudden absence of the bottom under their foot. The wildflowers gave off a faint glow she had not noticed at first, a soft bioluminescence that painted her shoes and the hems of her jeans in something that was almost, but not quite, light. She crouched and touched one of the white blossoms. It was cool and very slightly damp and it closed under her fingertip, slowly, like a small mouth. She stood up again. Fast. The first sound came from somewhere to her left. A creak, like a tree trunk settling. Except the trunks she could see were still. She looked anyway, scanning the dark between two of the standing stones, and saw nothing, and then saw something, and then saw nothing again. A shape. Taller than a person. Wrong in the shoulders. It had been there for the length of a blink and then it had not. Rory's hand went to the pendant. It was hot now, almost too hot to hold, and the faint inner glow had brightened to a steady pulse that lit the hollow of her throat. "Hello?" The word came out smaller than she had intended. She cleared her throat and tried again, louder. "Is someone there?" No answer. The silence pressed back, the way silence does when it is full of something it is choosing not to share. A beat passed. Two. On the third, the wildflowers all turned their heads. She saw it happen in her peripheral vision—a slow, coordinated rotation, dozens of stems swiveling on their stalks to point in the same direction, away from her, toward the far side of the clearing. Toward the darkest of the standing stones. Toward the shape. It was there again. Or it was a different shape. Rory could not tell, and the not telling was worse than either possibility. It was tall and narrow and it did not move the way a person moves, or the way a deer moves, or the way anything she had a name for moves. It was simply there, and then it had been there in a different place, and the distance between the two positions had not been crossed. Rory took a step back. The pendant flared. The heat of it went through the chain and into the skin at the back of her neck, and for a moment she could have sworn she felt a second pulse in the silver, quicker than her own, urgent. "Don't," she said, and she didn't know who she was saying it to. The shape did not advance. It stood between two of the standing stones and it watched her with something that was not eyes—she was sure of that, sure in a way that went past thinking and into the body, into the animal part of her that had kept humans alive on this kind of ground for a very long time. It watched her the way the clearing watched her. The way the flowers watched her. Patiently. Without blinking. Without breath. A sound reached her then, from very far away or very close, she could not tell which. A low, continuous note, like a single string being bowed at the bottom of a well. It was not music. It was the suggestion of music, the way the wildflowers were the suggestion of light. It went through the soles of her feet and up into her chest and it sat there, vibrating, and her heart tried to match it and her heart could not. She started to run. She made it three steps before the ground changed. The wildflowers were gone. The grass was gone. Beneath her boots was something that felt like packed earth and also like nothing at all, and the pale light from nowhere pulsed once, twice, in time with the pendant, and the far edge of the clearing was no longer the far edge. It was nearer. It was much nearer. The shape that was not a shape stood almost within arm's reach, and the thing it watched her with was lower now, nearer the ground, and it was patient, and it was glad, and it had been waiting a long time. Rory's hand closed around the pendant. The heat of it was a brand. The crimson of it lit her palm from the inside, and in that small red light she saw, just for an instant, what stood before her. Not a shape. Not a person. A space where a person had been, hollowed out and filled with something older and much, much less kind. The low note rose. The wildflowers, somewhere behind her, opened again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count4
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"scanning"
4"pulse"
5"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1342
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1324
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
October1
London1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
June1
Eva3
Kensal1
Rise1
Welsh1
Rory7
persons
0"October"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"June"
4"Kensal"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like packed earth and also like no"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1342
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean44.73
std37.32
cv0.834
sampleLengths
015
171
25
388
44
556
67
7118
863
987
1020
1112
1297
135
1473
1533
161
1717
183
1976
203
2179
2247
2313
2480
2582
264
27108
2864
2911
84.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences101
matches
0"was gone"
1"been crossed"
2"being bowed"
3"were gone"
4"was gone"
5"been, hollowed"
98.99% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was being"
1"was being"
2"was saying"
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences105
ratio0.048
matches
0"The night behind her had been ordinary enough for late October—damp, a little cold, the distant wash of London's light pollution turning the clouds a sickly amber."
1"The wildflowers underfoot—she could see them in the strange light, white and blue and a yellow so pale it looked bleached—were open."
2"The clearing—if it was a clearing—opened around her in a way that felt more suggested than seen."
3"She saw it happen in her peripheral vision—a slow, coordinated rotation, dozens of stems swiveling on their stalks to point in the same direction, away from her, toward the far side of the clearing."
4"It stood between two of the standing stones and it watched her with something that was not eyes—she was sure of that, sure in a way that went past thinking and into the body, into the animal part of her that had kept humans alive on this kind of ground for a very long time."
94.90% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1331
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.04583020285499624
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.007513148009015778
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean12.78
std12.74
cv0.997
sampleLengths
015
127
244
35
43
55
627
722
83
97
1021
113
121
135
146
1518
1627
175
182
198
2047
2129
2234
235
248
2544
263
273
2818
2917
3040
314
328
334
342
357
367
373
389
394
4031
4135
429
4318
444
451
469
477
488
4924
28.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.3047619047619048
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners32
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Just the absence of cold."
1"Even her own breathing sounded"
ratio0.022
83.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences91
matches
0"She stopped walking."
1"She turned back toward the"
2"she said to herself"
3"She had not meant to"
4"She could make out the"
5"She counted twice and got"
6"She tried her phone."
7"She had left the gate"
8"She was being stupid."
9"She knew she was being"
10"She crouched and touched one"
11"It was cool and very"
12"She stood up again."
13"She looked anyway, scanning the"
14"It had been there for"
15"It was hot now, almost"
16"She cleared her throat and"
17"She saw it happen in"
18"It was there again."
19"It was tall and narrow"
ratio0.341
86.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences91
matches
0"Rory pushed through the gap"
1"The night behind her had"
2"The trees of Richmond Park"
3"The air sat against her"
4"The wildflowers underfoot—she could see"
5"The smell that rose from"
6"She stopped walking."
7"The silence was too complete."
8"She turned back toward the"
9"she said to herself"
10"She had not meant to"
11"The plan had been a"
12"The bookseller's name had been"
13"Rory had agreed because she"
14"The wildflowers brushed her ankles"
15"The clearing—if it was a"
16"She could make out the"
17"She counted twice and got"
18"She tried her phone."
19"The time on the screen"
ratio0.747
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences91
matches
0"Now the cold was gone."
1"As if it were noon"
2"Now it was warm again."
3"To go now."
4"To go alone."
ratio0.055
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The air sat against her skin like something that had been waiting, and the wind she had been walking into for the last twenty minutes was nowhere."
1"Even her own breathing sounded muffled, as though the air had grown heavier in the last few seconds."
2"The plan had been a daytime recce, a quick look at the stones Eva had mentioned, a photograph to send to the odd little bookseller in Kensal Rise who had been s…"
3"Rory had agreed because she was tired and the rent was late and the pendant had been warm against her skin the entire conversation, pulsing in time with a heart…"
4"Warmer than it had been in the restaurant kitchen, warmer than it had been in Eva's hallway that morning when she had pressed it into Rory's palm and told her, …"
5"The wildflowers brushed her ankles as she moved forward, because forward was the only direction that made sense."
6"The wildflowers gave off a faint glow she had not noticed at first, a soft bioluminescence that painted her shoes and the hems of her jeans in something that wa…"
7"It was hot now, almost too hot to hold, and the faint inner glow had brightened to a steady pulse that lit the hollow of her throat."
8"It stood between two of the standing stones and it watched her with something that was not eyes—she was sure of that, sure in a way that went past thinking and …"
9"Beneath her boots was something that felt like packed earth and also like nothing at all, and the pale light from nowhere pulsed once, twice, in time with the p…"
10"The shape that was not a shape stood almost within arm's reach, and the thing it watched her with was lower now, nearer the ground, and it was patient, and it w…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.4786%