Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1HEN332KA7D1RG60J3TXMC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 58s
Cost:
$0.002823
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back and the door swung inward. Lucien filled the doorframe the way weather filled a sky — completely, without apology. Charcoal wool, rain-damp, the silver tip of his cane resting against the brick threshold. The light from Eva's hallway caught the gold in one eye and swallowed the other whole. He looked at her. Rory stood in the kitchen doorway with a chipped mug halfway to her mouth, a tabby cat wound between her ankles, and absolutely no idea what to do with her face. "Well," he said. The corner of his mouth moved, just barely. "This is not the errand I anticipated running tonight." Rory set the mug down on the counter behind her without looking. Ptolemy bolted for the bedroom at the sight of the cane. "You have got to be joking." "I never joke about door-to-door visits. Terrible for the brand." He didn't step inside. He waited, the way he always waited — for her to draw the line, or erase it. The hallway smelled of curry from downstairs and the wet wool of his coat and something underneath that was just him, sandalwood and something cooler, older. "Come in before the neighbours clock you," she said. "Mrs. Ahmed three floors up has been watching since you climbed the stairs." He stepped past her, careful to leave room. His gaze swept the flat in one practiced pass — the towers of books, the scattered scrolls, the dried sage Eva kept tied above the lintel. He removed his coat and hung it on the back of the only dining chair, then turned the chair to face her and sat, uninvited, the way a man sits in his own drawing room. "Lovely place," he said. "Bit of a step down from the bar." "Excuse me?" "Silas' rooms are larger. Warmer. You're sleeping on Eva's sofa, which means either she is out of town, or the two of you have had your first real row, and I am guessing which." He laid the cane across his knees. The ivory handle caught the lamplight. "Do tell." Rory picked the mug back up. The tea had gone cold while she was pretending to read the same page of a herbal index for forty minutes. She took a sip anyway to buy herself the time to assemble a lie that wouldn't fall apart the moment he smiled at it. "Eva's in Whitby. Some conference on coastal wards. She left me the cat and the keys." A pause. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "I needed a favour. The usual sort — discreet, well-compensated, no questions. I tried your number." He tilted his head. "You did not answer." "My phone is in a drawer in the bedroom and I forgot it existed." "Ah." Something flickered across his face, too quick to read. "And yet you remembered the cat." "Ptolemy is a person, Lucien." "Of course he is." The silence that followed had a shape. Rory knew its measurements by now. She had catalogued it once, a long evening in late autumn, in a borrowed room above a bookshop in Bloomsbury, when his hand had been on the small of her back and her mouth had been on his collar and the world outside had been on fire with something neither of them would name. That was six weeks ago. She had left before he woke. He had not chased her, which was the correct response from a man who understood how the world worked, and the unforgivable one from a man who had touched her like she was something worth keeping. She crossed her arms. "The favour." "Yes. There is a man in Whitechapel. He has been buying pieces of a thing he should not be able to name, and I would like you to ask around the kitchens for me. Cooks hear things. Delivery people hear more." He gestured to her with one long-fingered hand. "You have a face that makes people want to tell you things." "Charming." "I meant it as a compliment." "I know you did. That's the problem." He watched her. The gold eye did not blink. The black one, the one that had nothing human behind it, did. "You are still angry," he said, after a while. "I am not angry. Anger is a thing I do well and briefly. This is something else and I haven't named it yet and I would appreciate it if you didn't either." "Understood." He didn't move. The rain started up outside, a thin, mean drizzle that drummed against the window above the sink. The lamplight in the flat was the colour of weak tea, and in it his hair looked almost white, almost silver, and the lines of his suit looked like something drawn rather than sewn. Rory realised she was staring and looked away. "You could have sent a message," she said. "Through the usual channels. Ask one of your boys to knock." "I could have. I did not want to." He rose, the cane vertical, the blade still hidden. He came to stand by the kitchen counter, near her but not too near, and looked down at the mug in her hands. "May I?" She pushed it across to him. He did not drink. He wrapped his hand around it the way a man holds a hand that is not his. "Rory." "Don't." "I have not said anything." "You were about to. I can hear you getting ready to say something. It has a particular quality, the way you clear your throat when you are about to be honest. It is the only honest sound you make." That landed. She saw it land. He set the mug down and his expression rearranged itself into something less careful, and for a moment he looked exactly like the man she had met in March — too polite, too watchful, too hungry in a way he would never have admitted to. "I should not have let you leave the way you left," he said. "And I should not have let me leave the way I did. Either of those. Both at once." He exhaled. "I have been giving a great deal of thought to which was worse and I find I cannot decide." "You didn't chase me." "No." "That was the answer to the question I was asking." "I know." "Then you knew what you were doing." "Yes." He said it without flinching, which made it worse. "I knew what I was doing, and I did it anyway, and I have spent six weeks wishing I had not, and I do not know what to do with that, because wishing is a thing I do not usually permit myself, and you have made me — inconvenient." Rory's mouth went dry. "Inconvenient," she repeated. "A great inconvenience. To my work. To my sleep. To my —" He stopped. "To my posture, even. I have been slouching. Ask anyone. They will tell you. I have been a disaster of posture." "Get out." "I have not finished." "I don't care. Get out, Lucien." He looked at her. The gold eye was bright. The black one was a well. "Ask me again in a minute," he said, very quietly, "when you have finished deciding whether you mean it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"absolutely"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"absolutely"
1"flickered"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1214
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount685
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Bloomsbury1
March1
Rory6
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Bloomsbury"
1"March"
globalScore1
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like something drawn rather than s"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1214
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean21.68
std20.46
cv0.944
sampleLengths
010
144
235
320
423
56
657
722
869
912
102
1149
1251
1323
1424
1514
1616
175
184
1967
2047
214
222
2361
241
256
267
2721
289
2932
301
3154
328
3319
3442
3527
361
371
385
3939
4051
4152
424
431
4410
452
467
4759
484
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
87.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs118
matches
0"was pretending"
1"was staring"
25.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences97
ratio0.041
matches
0"Lucien filled the doorframe the way weather filled a sky — completely, without apology."
1"He waited, the way he always waited — for her to draw the line, or erase it."
2"His gaze swept the flat in one practiced pass — the towers of books, the scattered scrolls, the dried sage Eva kept tied above the lintel."
3"He set the mug down and his expression rearranged itself into something less careful, and for a moment he looked exactly like the man she had met in March — too polite, too watchful, too hungry in a way he would never have admitted to."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount700
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.037142857142857144
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007142857142857143
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean12.52
std11.96
cv0.956
sampleLengths
010
114
214
316
44
531
63
78
89
912
1011
116
1214
1317
1426
159
1613
178
1826
1935
204
218
222
2341
246
252
266
2721
2824
2918
305
3120
324
3314
3410
356
365
374
387
396
4054
415
426
4336
444
452
4649
4712
481
496
60.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4020618556701031
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences51
matches
0"He looked at her."
1"He didn't step inside"
2"He waited, the way he"
3"He stepped past her, careful"
4"His gaze swept the flat"
5"He removed his coat and"
6"He laid the cane across"
7"She took a sip anyway"
8"He tilted his head"
9"She had catalogued it once,"
10"She had left before he"
11"He had not chased her,"
12"She crossed her arms."
13"He gestured to her with"
14"He watched her."
15"he said, after a while"
16"He didn't move."
17"He rose, the cane vertical,"
18"He came to stand by"
19"She pushed it across to"
ratio0.529
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences51
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Lucien filled the doorframe the"
2"Charcoal wool, rain-damp, the silver"
3"The light from Eva's hallway"
4"He looked at her."
5"Rory stood in the kitchen"
6"The corner of his mouth"
7"Rory set the mug down"
8"Ptolemy bolted for the bedroom"
9"He didn't step inside"
10"He waited, the way he"
11"The hallway smelled of curry"
12"He stepped past her, careful"
13"His gaze swept the flat"
14"He removed his coat and"
15"He laid the cane across"
16"The ivory handle caught the"
17"Rory picked the mug back"
18"The tea had gone cold"
19"She took a sip anyway"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He had not chased her, which was the correct response from a man who understood how the world worked, and the unforgivable one from a man who had touched her li…"
1"The rain started up outside, a thin, mean drizzle that drummed against the window above the sink."
2"He wrapped his hand around it the way a man holds a hand that is not his."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.037
79.4552%