Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1HEZ7MZJPMTNRGT2JVQEDS

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Duration:
39.2s
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$0.083520
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Anthropic

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts slid back one by one. Rory yanked the door open with her free hand, the other still clutching a half-eaten apple. "Eva, I swear if you've lost your keys aga—" Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe, one shoulder propped, his ivory-handled cane balanced between two fingers. The amber eye caught the hallway light. The black one swallowed it. "Disappointing. You were expecting someone else." She didn't move. The apple hung in the air between them, ridiculous, a bite-mark crescent showing white flesh. Behind her, Ptolemy threaded between her ankles and let out a low, suspicious sound. "How did you get this address?" "You leave a generous trail, Aurora. A delivery girl who tips the wrong people." He tilted his head toward the stairwell, where the curry smell drifted up thick and warm. "Charming building. The aroma alone could feed a man." "You don't get to be charming. Not after Whitechapel." "Ah." A pause. He examined the silver head of the cane as if it had said something interesting. "So we're starting there." "We're not starting anywhere." She set her hand against the frame, blocking him. "You walked. You had what you needed and you walked, and you let me think—" "What did you think?" The question landed soft. Too soft. She hated how it caught under her ribs. "Doesn't matter." "It clearly does, or you'd have shut the door already." She glared at him. He had the decency, at least, not to smile. The platinum hair was slicked back the same as ever, the charcoal suit pressed to a knife's edge, but there was something under the polish she hadn't seen before. A tightness around the mouth. He'd come in a hurry, and Lucien Moreau did not do anything in a hurry. "You're bleeding," she said. He glanced down at his sleeve. A dark stain spread along the charcoal, almost invisible against the fabric, betrayed only by the way the cloth clung. "A scratch." "That's not a scratch." "It will keep." "Through my front door it won't." She stepped back, the movement sharp, furious at herself even as she did it. "Get in. Bleed somewhere I can clean." He crossed the threshold like a man entering a church he didn't believe in. His gaze swept the flat in a single pass: the towers of books, the scrolls unspooled across the table, the research notes pinned three-deep on the walls. Eva's chaos. He took it in and said nothing, which was somehow worse than any remark. Rory shoved a stack of paperbacks off the chair and pointed. "Sit." He sat. She fetched the box from under the sink, the one Eva kept stocked for nights that ended badly. Antiseptic. Gauze. A bottle of something that wasn't strictly medicinal. When she turned back he'd already shrugged the jacket from one shoulder, rolled the sleeve to the elbow. The cut ran along his forearm, clean-edged, deep. "Blade," she said. "Observant." "Whose?" "That," he said, "is a longer conversation." She knelt beside the chair and pressed the gauze to the wound. He didn't flinch. She watched his jaw, waiting for it, and got nothing, and that annoyed her too. "You vanished," she said, not looking up. "Three weeks. Not a word." "I was occupied." "You were a coward." The cane stilled in his good hand. "I left," he said slowly, "because staying made you a target. Whatever you imagine happened in Whitechapel, Aurora, the version in your head is kinder than the truth." "Don't." She pressed harder than she needed to. He let her. "Don't dress it up as protecting me. You don't get to do that." "And yet here I am." His voice dropped. "Bleeding in your friend's chair, with a knife wound I earned keeping a particular name out of a particular ledger. Your name." Her hands went still. The copper smell rose between them, sharp and intimate. "What name." "Malphora." He said it carefully, as though the word had edges. "Someone is asking. Someone with the means to ask very loudly. I came to tell you before they found the address I found in twenty minutes." She sat back on her heels. The apple, abandoned on the table, had begun to brown. "I don't know what that means. Malphora." "No." His mismatched eyes held hers, and for once neither half of him was performing. "But you will. And when you do, you'll wish I'd kept walking." The flat ticked around them, pipes settling, the curry house below muffled and ordinary. Ptolemy leapt onto the table and sat among the scrolls, tail curled, watching them both like a judge. "Why come at all, then?" she asked. "If walking was so much wiser." Something crossed his face. He looked at her hand, still resting against his forearm, the gauze gone red at the edges. The crescent scar on her wrist caught the light. "I asked myself the same question," he said, "the entire way here." "And?" "I didn't like the answer." The honesty undid something. She felt it loosen in her chest, dangerous and warm, the exact feeling she'd spent three weeks teaching herself to distrust. She reached for the tape, cut a strip with her teeth, smoothed it over the gauze. Her fingers lingered a beat too long against his skin. He noticed. Of course he noticed. "Done," she said, and didn't pull away. "Aurora." "Don't." "You keep saying that." "Because every time you say my name like that I forget you're the man who left." His good hand rose, slow enough to give her time to stop him. She didn't. His thumb brushed the scar on her wrist, the old crescent, and she felt the touch travel the length of her arm. "I am also," he said, "the man who came back." Three sharp knocks struck the door. They both froze. Ptolemy's ears flattened. The knocks came again, harder, and a voice slid through the wood, smooth and unhurried and entirely unfamiliar. "Miss Carter. Or should I say Malphora. Open the door. We'd hate to make a mess of such a lovely building."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"he said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.627
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.078
85.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1015
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"carefully"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1015
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1015
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount681
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Moreau"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Ptolemy3
Lucien2
Eva2
Three1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1015
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean16.92
std15.67
cv0.926
sampleLengths
024
19
228
36
432
56
639
79
822
928
104
1114
122
1310
1462
154
1626
172
184
193
2027
2157
2211
231
2456
253
261
271
287
2930
3012
313
324
337
3428
3524
3630
3713
382
3937
4016
417
4227
4332
4413
4530
4612
471
485
4957
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs127
matches
0"was performing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences109
ratio0
matches(empty)
98.01% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount686
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.04227405247813411
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008746355685131196
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean9.31
std7
cv0.752
sampleLengths
08
116
29
316
47
55
66
73
815
914
106
1130
129
139
143
1515
164
1713
1815
194
204
212
228
232
2410
254
269
2729
285
2915
304
316
3220
332
344
353
3620
377
3814
3927
402
4114
4211
431
442
4518
461
471
488
4918
73.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.45871559633027525
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners50
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Of course he noticed."
ratio0.016
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences61
matches
0"She didn't move."
1"He tilted his head toward"
2"He examined the silver head"
3"She set her hand against"
4"She hated how it caught"
5"She glared at him."
6"He had the decency, at"
7"He'd come in a hurry,"
8"He glanced down at his"
9"She stepped back, the movement"
10"He crossed the threshold like"
11"His gaze swept the flat"
12"He took it in and"
13"She fetched the box from"
14"She knelt beside the chair"
15"He didn't flinch."
16"She watched his jaw, waiting"
17"she said, not looking up"
18"he said slowly"
19"She pressed harder than she"
ratio0.557
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences61
matches
0"The three deadbolts slid back"
1"Rory yanked the door open"
2"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
3"The amber eye caught the"
4"The black one swallowed it."
5"She didn't move."
6"The apple hung in the"
7"He tilted his head toward"
8"He examined the silver head"
9"She set her hand against"
10"The question landed soft."
11"She hated how it caught"
12"She glared at him."
13"He had the decency, at"
14"The platinum hair was slicked"
15"A tightness around the mouth."
16"He'd come in a hurry,"
17"He glanced down at his"
18"A dark stain spread along"
19"She stepped back, the movement"
ratio0.934
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He examined the silver head of the cane as if it had said something interesting."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, not looking up"
1"He said, as though the word had edges"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.431
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.039
85.8026%