Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1HGJGBZS66AF3BFDESBJT8

Run Details

Duration:
2m 57s
Cost:
$0.006199
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The platform curved away into darkness beyond the reach of the portable floodlights. Quinn descended the last of the concrete steps, her boots finding purchase on grit and decades of dust. The station had been closed since '79, a tiled tomb buried beneath Camden's music shops and kebab houses, and the air tasted of rust and something older. She checked her watch. The leather had cracked at the clasp, but the second hand still swept its reliable arc. Forty-three minutes since the call. Forty-three minutes since the duty sergeant had used the word "unusual" in a way that made Quinn's jaw tighten. Uniformed officers parted as she reached the platform edge. One of them — young, spotty, probably still thinking about his probation — stepped forward with a clipboard and a face that wanted approval. "Detective Quinn. The body is this way." "Show me." They walked single-file past a row of bricked-up archways, their shadows stretching and warping under the sodium glare. Someone had tagged the tiled walls in silver spray paint — a series of angular symbols that caught the light at certain angles. Quinn's gaze snagged on them, filed them away. The body lay between the platform edge and what had once been a ticket office. A man, mid-forties, well-dressed in a charcoal coat that didn't belong underground. His shoes were clean. His hands were clean. That was the first wrong thing. "No mud," Quinn said. "Ma'am?" "The whole platform is covered in dust and debris. His shoes should be filthy. They're not." The young officer blinked. Quinn crouched, knees protesting, and studied the man's face. He looked calm. That was the second wrong thing. People who died badly in abandoned places did not look calm. She tilted her head. The skin at his temples had a faint iridescence, like oil on water. "What was he doing down here?" "That's the thing, ma'am. The station's been sealed for years. There's no forced entry, no sign of a break-in at any of the access points." Quinn stood, scanning the platform. The symbols on the walls repeated — not random tagging, then. A pattern. "Who found him?" "A woman. She came through one of the service hatches about an hour ago, said she was looking for her cat." The officer paused. "She was, um. A bit odd, ma'am. Kept talking about 'the Market.'" Something cold moved through Quinn's chest. She kept her face still. "Where is she now?" "Held in one of the patrol cars up top. We've been waiting for you to—" "I'm coming." But a voice from the ticket office stopped her. "Detective Quinn, I think you should see this before you go anywhere." She turned. A woman stood in the ruined doorway, green eyes catching the floodlight, a leather satchel slung across her body. Round glasses. Red curls escaping a hasty ponytail. Freckled complexion that gave her a look of permanent surprise. Quinn did not recognize her. The young officer cleared his throat. "Ma'am, this is Eva Kowalski. She was with the body when we arrived. Says she's a researcher." "Researcher." Quinn let the word hang. "British Museum. Restricted archives." Kowalski tucked a curl behind her left ear, a gesture that repeated itself like a nervous metronome. "I'm not a suspect. I have a key to the service entrance because I'm studying the site." "Studying what, exactly?" "The station. Its history. The architecture. And certain features of the platform that aren't in any official survey." Kowalski stepped aside, gesturing Quinn into the ticket office. "Like this." The room beyond was small, windowless, thick with shadow. Kowalski produced a torch and aimed it at the floor. In the beam's white circle, Quinn saw a pattern carved into the concrete. A circle, bisected by lines. Sigils of some kind. They looked fresh — the dust around them disturbed but not yet settled. "This wasn't here last week," Kowalski said. "I'm in here almost daily." Quinn crouched again. The sigils were precise. Too precise. Whoever had made them had taken their time, or had known exactly what they were doing. "What do you think they are?" Kowalski hesitated. "Off the record?" "Ms. Kowalski. This is a crime scene." "Off the record, those are protective marks. Old ones. The kind you find in medieval grimoires, or in the margins of alchemical texts from the seventeenth century. They're meant to contain something. Or to mark a threshold." "Threshold to what?" Kowalski's mouth thinned. She glanced toward the platform, where the body lay. "I think you already suspect." "I don't suspect anything. I observe. I follow the evidence." Quinn looked at Kowalski with an expression that had ended careers. "What I observe is a dead man with clean shoes, in a sealed station, with no sign of forced entry. I observe symbols on the walls and a circle on the floor that a researcher with daily access didn't report." "I didn't know about the circle until tonight." "Convenient." "It's not convenient, Detective. It's frightening." Kowalski's voice had lost its academic polish. "That man didn't get here alone. He didn't get here through any door you can see. And those marks — someone is trying to seal something off. Or seal something in." Quinn straightened slowly. Her gaze drifted to the brass object on the ticket counter, half-hidden beneath a torn tarpaulin. A compass. Old. The casing had gone green with verdigris, and when she drew closer she saw that the face was etched with the same symbols that crawled along the platform walls. She did not touch it. Not yet. "Whose is this?" "I don't know." Kowalski moved beside her, eyes widening slightly. "But that's not from any collection I know of. That craftsmanship — the patina, the sigil work — I'd need to examine it properly to be sure, but..." "But what?" "Detective, have you heard of the Veil Market?" The cold in Quinn's chest spread. "No." "Then I'll tell you about it. But not here." Kowalski's gaze dropped to the body visible through the doorway. "Not with him listening." Quinn's jaw set. She looked at the compass. She looked at the dead man. She looked at the symbols on the floor, the symbols on the walls, the clean shoes, the impossible calm of the corpse's face. The third wrong thing occurred to her. The man's pockets. She stepped around Kowalski, crouched beside the body, and used the end of a pen to ease open the coat. A wallet, a phone, a folded receipt. Nothing else. No keys. No loose change. "He's been searched," Quinn said. "Ma'am?" "Whatever he came here to do, he came prepared to leave. But someone went through his pockets first. Took what they wanted." She stood, brushing dust from her knee. "And the compass is still here. Which means either they missed it, or they didn't want it." "Or it doesn't belong to him," Kowalski said quietly. Quinn looked at her. "You think he was meeting someone." "I think he was meeting something. And I think the meeting ended the way it always ends, in places like this." Kowalski's hand found her satchel strap, gripping it. "The Market moves, Detective. Every full moon. But it leaves traces. Anchors. And this station has been one of them for a very long time." The uniform officer's radio crackled. A voice from the surface, indistinct, asking for an update. Quinn ignored it. She was watching the compass. The needle had not stopped moving. It tracked slowly across the etched face, brushing past sigil after sigil, as if searching for alignment. It swung toward Kowalski. It swung toward the officer. It swung toward the far archway, where the darkness pooled thick as tar. Then it settled. Quinn's breath caught. The needle pointed at the body. At the man's face. At the place where, even in the cold station air, a faint iridescence still shimmered beneath the skin. "Detective?" Kowalski's voice came from very far away. "Get back from him," Quinn said. "Now." She drew her torch, thumbed it on, and aimed the beam at the corpse. The iridescence did not reflect. It moved. A slow, deliberate drift beneath the man's jaw, down his throat, pooling in the hollow of his collarbone. "He's not dead," Kowalski whispered. "He's not alive," Quinn corrected. "Not anymore." The needle on the brass compass held its point. The sigils on the floor caught the torchlight and seemed, just for an instant, to pulse. "Ms. Kowalski." Quinn's voice was steady. "Start talking. And don't leave anything out."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Kowalski stepped aside [aside]"
1"Kowalski said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.067
82.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1412
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1412
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"etched"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"etched"
2"shimmered"
3"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1420
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.12% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount859
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity2.68
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Kowalski"
discoveredNames
Quinn23
Kowalski16
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.161
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if searching for alignment"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1420
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences149
matches
0"saw that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean21.85
std17.38
cv0.795
sampleLengths
058
144
233
37
42
549
641
74
81
916
1033
1117
126
1325
1421
1536
1615
1715
182
1921
2039
2128
226
2338
243
2529
2654
2712
2825
296
305
317
3237
333
3417
3561
368
371
3844
3951
4010
4138
422
438
447
4523
4637
4744
485
491
98.83% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"been closed"
1"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs145
matches
0"were doing"
1"was watching"
66.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences149
ratio0.027
matches
0"One of them — young, spotty, probably still thinking about his probation — stepped forward with a clipboard and a face that wanted approval."
1"Someone had tagged the tiled walls in silver spray paint — a series of angular symbols that caught the light at certain angles."
2"The symbols on the walls repeated — not random tagging, then."
3"They looked fresh — the dust around them disturbed but not yet settled."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount696
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.021551724137931036
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007183908045977011
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean9.53
std8.16
cv0.856
sampleLengths
013
118
227
34
416
55
619
79
824
97
102
1118
1223
138
1415
1512
164
174
186
194
201
2116
224
239
243
256
2611
274
2813
296
3025
315
3211
332
343
3524
3612
376
385
394
4015
412
429
4312
442
4519
462
476
4810
495
51.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.37583892617449666
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners56
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Then it settled."
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences92
matches
0"She checked her watch."
1"They walked single-file past a"
2"His shoes were clean."
3"His hands were clean."
4"He looked calm."
5"She tilted her head."
6"She kept her face still."
7"They looked fresh — the"
8"She glanced toward the platform,"
9"Her gaze drifted to the"
10"She did not touch it."
11"She looked at the compass."
12"She looked at the dead"
13"She looked at the symbols"
14"She stepped around Kowalski, crouched"
15"She stood, brushing dust from"
16"She was watching the compass."
17"It tracked slowly across the"
18"It swung toward Kowalski."
19"It swung toward the officer."
ratio0.239
30.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences92
matches
0"The platform curved away into"
1"Quinn descended the last of"
2"The station had been closed"
3"She checked her watch."
4"The leather had cracked at"
5"They walked single-file past a"
6"Someone had tagged the tiled"
7"Quinn's gaze snagged on them,"
8"The body lay between the"
9"A man, mid-forties, well-dressed in"
10"His shoes were clean."
11"His hands were clean."
12"That was the first wrong"
13"The young officer blinked."
14"Quinn crouched, knees protesting, and"
15"He looked calm."
16"That was the second wrong"
17"People who died badly in"
18"She tilted her head."
19"The skin at his temples"
ratio0.859
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Whoever had made them had"
ratio0.011
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"One of them — young, spotty, probably still thinking about his probation — stepped forward with a clipboard and a face that wanted approval."
1"A man, mid-forties, well-dressed in a charcoal coat that didn't belong underground."
2"The casing had gone green with verdigris, and when she drew closer she saw that the face was etched with the same symbols that crawled along the platform walls."
3"It tracked slowly across the etched face, brushing past sigil after sigil, as if searching for alignment."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Kowalski moved, eyes widening slightly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Kowalski whispered (whisper)"
1"Quinn corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.117
leniency0.233
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.067
85.3214%