Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1HJQXZPBTSKV06CT6G3321

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5m 1s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked back, one after another. Three turns. A small ritual that had not changed in the three years since Aurora last stood on this worn doormat, smelling curry from the restaurant below and something older, dustier, distinctly Eva. The door swung open. Eva stood in the narrow hallway, backlit by the warm amber glow of a room crammed with paper. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, yowling his displeasure at the interruption. He was thinner than Aurora remembered, and his fur had gone grey around the muzzle. He stared up at her with the slow, offended dignity of a cat who had been personally inconvenienced. "You are not supposed to be here." Eva's voice came out flat. Practised. The way she delivered information she did not want to believe. "I know." Silence stretched between them. The sounds of Brick Lane filtered up: a motorbike, someone laughing in Bengali, the distant clatter of plates from the curry house below. Aurora gripped the strap of her bag tighter and tried to find the words she had rehearsed on the Tube. They had all evaporated. "You are soaking." Eva stepped back. Not quite an invitation, but not a refusal either. "There is tea. If you want." Aurora crossed the threshold. The flat hit her like a memory she had not earned. Stacks of books lined every wall, balanced in precarious towers that obeyed laws of physics only Eva understood. Scrolls competed for space with takeaway containers, and a patchwork of Post-it notes covered the kitchen counter in a colour-coded system that meant something to one person on earth. It meant something to two, once. There was a new bookshelf near the window. Hardback, second-hand, filled with texts Aurora did not recognise. The curry house below had repainted its sign. The clock on the wall had stopped at 3:17. Small evidence of a life Aurora had been edited out of. "Three years." Eva filled the kettle with her back turned. "You could have called." "I know." "You keep saying that." "Would you prefer I lied?" Eva's hand paused on the kettle. Just for a moment. Then she set it to boil. "Sit down. You are dripping on my notes." Aurora perched on the arm of the sofa, the only available surface that was not buried under a research paper. Ptolemy regarded her from the back of a chair, yellow eyes accusatory. "He missed you," Eva said, not turning around. "I missed him too." "That is not what I asked." The kettle screamed. Eva poured with hands that did not shake, which meant they wanted to. Aurora watched the familiar movements, the way Eva's hair fell across her face when she concentrated, the way she pushed it back with her wrist because her fingers were always full of something. Some things had not changed. "You look good," Aurora said, and immediately wished she had not. "I look tired. I am tired." Eva set the mug on the one clear corner of the coffee table. "London tired. The kind that does not sleep." "It is not London. It is you." Eva sat across from her, knees drawn up, mug cradled between both palms. The distance between them could have been an ocean. A few months ago, it had been. "I heard about Evan." Eva's eyes lifted, met hers. "From your mother. She rang mine." The name landed like a slap. Aurora set her bag down slowly, buying time. "That was not why I came." "No?" "No." "Then why?" The question sat in the air. Aurora had a hundred answers ready, all of them lies she had told herself on the way over. None of them were the truth. The truth was this: three years ago, she had chosen a man who put bruises on her wrist over the only person who had ever really seen her. She had told herself it was love. She had told herself Eva was jealous, possessive, difficult. She had told herself a lot of things to justify walking out that door. And then Evan had shown her what love actually looked like, and she had finally understood what Eva had been trying to tell her. "I came to say I was sorry." The words tasted foreign. "For leaving the way I did. For not believing you. For," "Stop." Eva's mug trembled. Just slightly. A hairline crack in the composure she had spent three years perfecting. "You do not get to do that." Eva's voice was quiet, which was worse than shouting. "You do not get to show up with your big blue eyes and your wet coat and your 'I am sorry' like it is enough." "Then what do I do?" "Survive without me, Aurora. That is what I did." The words hung between them. Ptolemy jumped down from his chair and padded over, settling at Aurora's feet with the casual betrayal only a cat could manage. "I tried to survive without you." Aurora's voice was barely above a breath. "Every day. Every day I picked up the phone to call you, and every day I put it back down, because I knew I did not deserve to." "And now?" "Now I am done deciding what I deserve." Eva set her mug down. Her eyes were bright, and Aurora knew enough not to mistake the shine for anything other than fury. "You left me." Eva's voice cracked. "You left me to go back to him. I begged you, Aurora. I got on my knees." "I know." "I loved you." The world stopped. Eva's hand flew to her mouth, as if she could catch the words and shove them back in. But they were out, three years of silence torn open in a cramped flat above a curry house on a Tuesday night in November. "I know," Aurora said. "I loved you too. I was just too stupid to see it." "Do not." "Do not what? Do not tell you the truth?" "Do not make this into something it is not." Eva stood, moved to the window, her back to Aurora. The streetlight caught the tears she could not hide. "You came here for absolution. I cannot give you that." "I came here for you." Eva turned. Her face was wrecked, mascara smudged, the careful composure in pieces at her feet. "I cannot do this again, Rory. I cannot watch you leave." "Then I will stay." "You said that before." "I meant it more then than I knew." Aurora stood, crossed the room in two steps, and stopped just short of touching her. "I mean it differently now. In the way that actually matters." Eva's hand found her wrist, her thumb tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on the left side. The childhood accident Eva had bandaged herself, so many years ago. The first time Aurora had trusted her with something broken. "You are sure?" Eva's voice was small. "I should have been sure three years ago." "You were twenty-two." "I am twenty-five now. Old enough to know better. Old enough to do better." Eva pulled her in. The kiss tasted like tea and salt and three years of silence. Ptolemy yowled in protest at their feet, and somewhere below, the curry house played a song Aurora half-remembered from a happier time. This time, when Eva let go, Aurora did not. The phone in her bag buzzed. Once. Twice. A name she had not yet deleted glowing through the canvas. Eva felt her stiffen. Pulled back. "Who is it?" Aurora reached into the bag. The screen lit up her face, blue and cold. Evan. She switched the phone off. Set it face-down on the coffee table, next to Eva's cooling tea. "Not anymore," she said. Ptolemy's ears flattened against his skull. A low, throaty growl rolled out of him, fixed on the front door. Neither of them moved to answer it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.232
leniency0.464
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.036
88.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"coded"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"coded"
2"familiar"
3"trembled"
4"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences97
matches
0"was jealous"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1309
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount955
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity3.04
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Aurora21
Eva29
Practised1
Brick1
Lane1
Bengali1
Tube1
Post-it1
Evan2
Tuesday1
November1
Ptolemy5
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Post-it"
3"Evan"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Bengali"
3"November"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"Not quite an invitation, but not a refusal either"
1"looked like, and she had finally understo"
2"tasted like tea and salt and three years"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.764
wordCount1309
matches
0"Not quite an invitation, but not a refusal either"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"out that door"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean16.16
std15.29
cv0.946
sampleLengths
040
14
262
324
42
547
64
721
84
958
106
1134
1211
1314
142
154
165
1716
188
1932
208
214
226
2349
245
2511
2627
277
2829
2915
3014
316
321
331
342
3530
3658
3724
3822
391
4017
4141
425
439
4427
4541
462
478
4823
4923
98.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"been edited"
1"was wrecked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences137
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount961
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03954214360041623
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013527575442247659
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean9.55
std7.01
cv0.734
sampleLengths
07
12
231
34
418
511
615
718
812
91
1011
112
124
1323
1420
154
166
179
186
194
2011
2118
2229
236
248
259
268
279
2811
2910
304
312
324
335
346
354
366
378
3820
3912
408
414
426
433
4413
4533
465
4711
4819
498
47.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.34306569343065696
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners47
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Just for a moment."
1"Then she set it to"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences87
matches
0"He was thinner than Aurora"
1"He stared up at her"
2"They had all evaporated."
3"It meant something to two,"
4"She had told herself it"
5"She had told herself Eva"
6"She had told herself a"
7"Her eyes were bright, and"
8"Her face was wrecked, mascara"
9"She switched the phone off."
ratio0.115
11.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences87
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked back, one"
1"A small ritual that had"
2"The door swung open."
3"Eva stood in the narrow"
4"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
5"He was thinner than Aurora"
6"He stared up at her"
7"Eva's voice came out flat"
8"The way she delivered information"
9"Silence stretched between them."
10"The sounds of Brick Lane"
11"Aurora gripped the strap of"
12"They had all evaporated."
13"Eva stepped back"
14"Aurora crossed the threshold."
15"The flat hit her like"
16"Stacks of books lined every"
17"Scrolls competed for space with"
18"It meant something to two,"
19"Hardback, second-hand, filled with texts"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A small ritual that had not changed in the three years since Aurora last stood on this worn doormat, smelling curry from the restaurant below and something olde…"
1"Stacks of books lined every wall, balanced in precarious towers that obeyed laws of physics only Eva understood."
2"Scrolls competed for space with takeaway containers, and a patchwork of Post-it notes covered the kitchen counter in a colour-coded system that meant something …"
3"Eva's hand flew to her mouth, as if she could catch the words and shove them back in."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva said, not turning around"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.4839%