| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1010 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1010 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 999 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove. Alone. The pendant will explain." | | 1 | "Aurora." | | 2 | "Aurora. You came." | | 3 | "You're not finished." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 5 | | wordCount | 958 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.1 | | worstName | "Richmond" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0 | | worstWindowName | (null) | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | December | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 999 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 28.54 | | std | 22.52 | | cv | 0.789 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 48 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 62 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 70 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 73 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 75 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones caught the moonlight first—five oaks petrified into grey, their bark turned to something harder than wood, ringed around the clearing like teeth in an open mouth." | | 1 | "The traffic that had followed her across Richmond Park, the distant grind of the city—gone." | | 2 | "Foxgloves, cornflowers, things she had no name for—all of them blooming in the dead of winter, all of them turned toward her like an audience." | | 3 | "Behind her—a soft, dragging shush, the way long fabric moves across stone." | | 4 | "Not a breeze—a single line of motion, a furrow pushing through the wildflowers as though something low and unseen slid between the stems." | | 5 | "Eva had taught her that, after the worst nights with Evan—name what's real, hold to it." | | 6 | "The thing in the grass—" | | 7 | "Two arms, her arms, swinging at her sides exactly where they should be—and a third, faint, pooled off her left shoulder, reaching." | | 8 | "Crushed green things, and beneath that, sweeter—rot, the cloying ferment of fruit left too long." | | 9 | "She started toward the nearest gap and her foot caught—the grass had grown, threaded itself around her ankle, thin green wire that tightened when she pulled." | | 10 | "The clearing stretched—she'd swear it stretched, the gap between the stones pulling away from her with every stride, the bare earth lengthening like pulled toffee." | | 11 | "The crimson stone burned like a coal—and in its light, thrown up against the inside of her closed fingers, she saw the clearing properly for one heartbeat." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 969 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.029927760577915376 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006191950464396285 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 10.41 | | std | 8.3 | | cv | 0.797 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 56.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3958333333333333 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a stone the colour" | | 1 | "Almost her name." | | 2 | "Then her hand reached the" |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 81.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt it on her" | | 1 | "Her breath didn't fog, though" | | 2 | "She'd half expected it to" | | 3 | "She knelt and brushed a" | | 4 | "It was warm." | | 5 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 6 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 7 | "It fell off her lips" | | 8 | "It stopped three feet from" | | 9 | "She made herself breathe." | | 10 | "She drew the word out," | | 11 | "She walked toward the centre" | | 12 | "Her shadow stretched ahead of" | | 13 | "She watched it slide across" | | 14 | "It had the wrong number" | | 15 | "She said it loud, to" | | 16 | "It rolled over her from" | | 17 | "She covered her nose with" | | 18 | "She was certain." | | 19 | "Her own voice cracked." |
| | ratio | 0.347 | |
| 66.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones caught the" | | 1 | "Rory stepped between two of" | | 2 | "She felt it on her" | | 3 | "The traffic that had followed" | | 4 | "Her breath didn't fog, though" | | 5 | "The pendant lay cool against" | | 6 | "She'd half expected it to" | | 7 | "Wildflowers grew at her feet." | | 8 | "Foxgloves, cornflowers, things she had" | | 9 | "She knelt and brushed a" | | 10 | "It was warm." | | 11 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 12 | "The note had told her" | | 13 | "A scrap of paper slipped" | | 14 | "The pendant will explain.* She'd" | | 15 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 16 | "It fell off her lips" | | 17 | "A sound came back." | | 18 | "The gap between the two" | | 19 | "The grass to her left" |
| | ratio | 0.787 | |
| 66.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the stones crowded closer," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 27.03% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a breeze—a single line of motion, a furrow pushing through the wildflowers as though something low and unseen slid between the stems." | | 1 | "Two arms, her arms, swinging at her sides exactly where they should be—and a third, faint, pooled off her left shoulder, reaching." | | 2 | "A laugh built in her chest, the kind that comes before panic, and she swallowed it." | | 3 | "She started toward the nearest gap and her foot caught—the grass had grown, threaded itself around her ankle, thin green wire that tightened when she pulled." | | 4 | "The stems wept a clear sap that stung her fingers, and from somewhere close, so close she felt it move the hair beside her ear, came a sound she'd never heard f…" | | 5 | "It carried a warmth the night didn't have, the gentleness of someone who'd been waiting a long while and was glad, so glad, to finally be found." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.231 | | leniency | 0.462 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |