Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1HKHSTZ5160GHK1FZRJJJW

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Duration:
3m 43s
Cost:
$0.009409
Provider:
Minimax

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The service elevator shuddered to a stop at the bottom of the access shaft, and Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out into a tunnel that smelled of damp concrete and something older underneath. She flicked on her torch, and the beam cut through the dark, picking out the curve of a forgotten platform. The enamel tiles read CHALK FARM in a faded blue, though the station had been officially closed for over forty years. She pushed a hand through her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair and set off down the platform, her stride carrying the military precision that eighteen years on the job had worn into her bones. Yellow tape had been strung between the rotting struts of a former ticket booth. Beyond it, a forensics team in white suits moved with the careful choreography of people who did not yet understand what they were looking at. "Morning, guv." The officer at the tape — a young constable whose name Quinn had already forgotten — lifted the cordon for her. "DS Farrow's already inside. Got a bit of a situation." Quinn ducked under. Her boots crunched on grit and decades of settled dust. "Define situation." "Bit hard to, if I'm honest." The platform stretched ahead of her, illuminated now by the portable lamps the forensics team had rigged along its length. A row of wooden crates had been stacked against the far wall, their lids pried open and their contents — small glass vials, what looked like dried herbs, bundles wrapped in black cloth — laid out on a groundsheet for cataloguing. Quinn's brown eyes moved across them without focusing. She'd seen black markets before. What stopped her was the man on the floor. He lay on his back near the centre of the platform, arms outstretched, sightless eyes fixed on the vaulted ceiling. He was mid-fifties, grey at the temples, dressed in a dark coat that had cost more than Quinn's monthly salary. No visible wounds. No blood. No gun in his hand, no weapon near him, no needle mark on the exposed skin of his forearm. Just a man, very dead, in a place he should not have been. DS Farrow crouched beside him. He looked up as Quinn approached, and the expression on his face was one she had only seen twice in eighteen years of service. It sat somewhere between confusion and the suspicion that the world was not, in fact, the place he had always believed it to be. "Quinn." He rose, knees popping. "Glad you're here. I've been at this an hour and I haven't made a single piece of it fit." "Tell me what you've got." "Victim is one Marcus Devine. Fifty-four. Solicitor, Mayfair address, the kind of client list that doesn't appear in print." Farrow gestured to the body. "Security guard at the access shaft above found the platform door ajar at five this morning. Called it in. Devine's wallet, watch, phone — all present. No sign of struggle. No obvious cause of death." "Pathologist?" "En route. Forty minutes, maybe more. Traffic." Farrow rubbed the back of his neck. "That's not the bit that's bothering me, though." Quinn waited. "It's the other one." "Other one?" Farrow pointed further down the platform, towards the dark mouth of a disused tunnel. A second set of lamps had been set up there, illuminating another figure — this one sitting upright, back against the tiled wall, legs stretched out in front of her as though she had simply sat down to rest. A woman. Young. Curly red hair escaping from under a woollen hat. Round glasses catching the lamplight. A constellation of freckles across a pale, tired face. A worn leather satchel clutched to her chest like a shield. "Name of Eva Kowalski. Twenty-six. Research assistant at the British Museum, the restricted archives wing. She had a torch, a notebook, and three of these." Farrow held up an evidence bag. Inside was a small brass disc, palm-sized, its face etched with markings Quinn did not recognise — intricate, hand-cut lines that looped and intersected like the trails of a hundred tiny rivers. The casing had gone green with verdigris, a patina of age. "Compass?" Quinn asked. "That's what I thought. Except it doesn't point north. We checked. We've checked it four times." Quinn took the bag from him, turned it in her hand. The needle inside sat at a slight angle, trembling faintly, pointing not at the wall behind her but down — towards the floor, towards the dark below the platform, towards whatever tunnels lay beneath the tunnels. "Who found whom?" Quinn asked. "That's the question, isn't it. She says she came down here alone, last night, around eleven. Says she was following a lead. Refuses to say what kind of lead, but she's got a written statement from the museum authorising her access to this site as part of an ongoing research project. Some kind of folklore survey of disused stations. I've checked with her supervisor — it checks out." "And Devine?" "No connection. No appointment. Nothing in his diary, nothing on his phone. He's not a client of hers, he's not mentioned in her notes, he's nothing to her." Farrow paused. "She says she found him. Says she touched his hand and he was cold. Says she sat down and waited for someone to come." Quinn looked down the platform at the young woman. Kowalski was staring straight ahead, fingers curled tight around the strap of her satchel. She did not look frightened. She looked tired, and certain, and very deliberately still. "Has she been interviewed?" "Briefly. She keeps saying we need to call someone. Won't say who. Keeps using the phrase 'someone who knows what this is'." Farrow lowered his voice. "I put it down to shock, but guv — I've seen shock. That woman in there is not in shock." Quinn handed the evidence bag back and walked down the platform. Her boots echoed. Kowalski tracked her approach without turning her head, only shifting her green eyes behind the round lenses of her glasses. "Ms Kowalski." Quinn stopped a few feet away. "I'm Detective Quinn. I understand you've spoken to my colleague." "You need to listen to me." Kowalski's voice was low, even, as though she had rehearsed this several times already in the dark. "Whatever your pathologist says about the body, it won't be right. Not completely. There will be a cause on the certificate and it will be wrong." Quinn said nothing. She waited. The trick, with witnesses, was to let the silence do the work. Kowalski broke first. They always did. "Mr Devine was not killed by a person." Kowalski's chin lifted. "He was killed by something that came through the wall. I saw the residue. I smelt it. I have spent four years studying the literature of rifts and doorways and passages between — " "Passages between what, Ms Kowalski?" The young woman's mouth closed. Her hand went to her hair, tucking a curl behind her left ear — a small, unconscious gesture, repeated. Quinn noted it, filed it away. "Between," Kowalski said, very quietly. "Places that are not usually places." Quinn crouched, bringing herself to Kowalski's eye level. She kept her voice flat, reasonable, the voice she had used on a thousand frightened witnesses before. "And you came down here last night because of these — passages." "I came down here because there is a market. It moves. It has moved before, in the old records. The full moon was two nights ago. I believed it might be here." Kowalski glanced at the crates, at the vials, at the dried bundles on the groundsheet. "I was right. I just was not the only one who knew." Quinn straightened. She looked at the crates again. Then at the body. Then at the brass compass in Farrow's evidence bag, its needle pointing down into the dark beneath the platform. The pathologist would arrive in forty minutes. The official photographer was already circling the body. Farrow's team was cataloguing the contents of the crates, labelling each item, treating it all as evidence of a smuggling operation, a contraband ring, a case that would close itself with paperwork and patience. Quinn walked back to the body. She stood over Marcus Devine and looked. The coat was unbuttoned. The shirt beneath it was buttoned to the throat. The shoes were polished, the kind a man wears to court. There was no blood, but there was a mark on the back of his left hand — a small discolouration, the skin slightly raised, in the shape of a crescent. She had not noticed it from the doorway. She crouched. Farrow came to stand beside her. "That," Quinn said quietly, pointing, "is not a wound I have ever seen before. Is that on your list?" Farrow bent closer. His mouth thinned. "No." "Get the photographer over here. Now. Before anyone touches him again." Quinn stood, and as she did, her eye caught on something she had missed. Tucked into the inner pocket of Devine's coat, the corner of a paper — a receipt, a note, something. She did not reach for it. She looked at it the way she had trained herself to look at everything: as though it were a sentence in a language she had not yet learned. "Quinn." Kowalski's voice carried down the platform. "The needle. You see where it points." Quinn looked at the compass. Then at the floor. Then at the dark mouth of the tunnel. "Yes," she said. "I see where it points." She did not, yet, say anything else.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Quinn had already [already]"
1"Quinn said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.091
81.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1585
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"deliberately"
2"completely"
3"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1585
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"intricate"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"etched"
2"intricate"
3"echoed"
4"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1601
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1072
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn22
Farrow11
Kowalski9
Marcus1
Devine2
Tucked1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Farrow"
3"Kowalski"
4"Marcus"
5"Devine"
places(empty)
globalScore0.474
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like dried herbs, bundles wrapped"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.625
wordCount1601
matches
0"not at the wall behind her but down"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean30.21
std25.97
cv0.86
sampleLengths
0106
139
233
315
46
583
677
753
824
95
1059
111
1222
132
144
152
1653
1737
1874
193
2016
2147
225
2368
242
2554
2637
274
2846
2934
3018
3149
3217
336
3445
355
3630
3711
3837
3959
4031
4149
426
437
4462
458
4619
477
4878
4914
90.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences95
matches
0"been stacked"
1"was unbuttoned"
2"was buttoned"
3"were polished"
40.32% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs167
matches
0"were looking"
1"was staring"
2"was already circling"
3"was cataloguing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences121
ratio0.066
matches
0"\"Morning, guv.\" The officer at the tape — a young constable whose name Quinn had already forgotten — lifted the cordon for her."
1"A row of wooden crates had been stacked against the far wall, their lids pried open and their contents — small glass vials, what looked like dried herbs, bundles wrapped in black cloth — laid out on a groundsheet for cataloguing."
2"A second set of lamps had been set up there, illuminating another figure — this one sitting upright, back against the tiled wall, legs stretched out in front of her as though she had simply sat down to rest."
3"Inside was a small brass disc, palm-sized, its face etched with markings Quinn did not recognise — intricate, hand-cut lines that looped and intersected like the trails of a hundred tiny rivers."
4"The needle inside sat at a slight angle, trembling faintly, pointing not at the wall behind her but down — towards the floor, towards the dark below the platform, towards whatever tunnels lay beneath the tunnels."
5"Her hand went to her hair, tucking a curl behind her left ear — a small, unconscious gesture, repeated."
6"There was no blood, but there was a mark on the back of his left hand — a small discolouration, the skin slightly raised, in the shape of a crescent."
7"Tucked into the inner pocket of Devine's coat, the corner of a paper — a receipt, a note, something."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1067
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03467666354264293
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011246485473289597
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean13.23
std11.58
cv0.875
sampleLengths
032
120
221
333
414
525
623
710
83
910
102
116
1220
1341
148
155
169
1720
1820
193
202
2119
2213
235
2424
2524
265
2719
285
2924
3035
311
3214
338
342
354
362
3714
3839
392
401
419
425
439
4411
4531
4632
4711
483
4916
58.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.4214876033057851
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences84
matches
0"Just a man, very dead,"
1"Then at the body."
2"Then at the brass compass"
3"Then at the floor."
4"Then at the dark mouth"
ratio0.06
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences84
matches
0"She flicked on her torch,"
1"She pushed a hand through"
2"Her boots crunched on grit"
3"She'd seen black markets before."
4"He lay on his back"
5"He was mid-fifties, grey at"
6"He looked up as Quinn"
7"It sat somewhere between confusion"
8"He rose, knees popping"
9"She did not look frightened."
10"She looked tired, and certain,"
11"Her boots echoed."
12"They always did."
13"Her hand went to her"
14"She kept her voice flat,"
15"She looked at the crates"
16"She stood over Marcus Devine"
17"She had not noticed it"
18"His mouth thinned."
19"She did not reach for"
ratio0.262
49.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences84
matches
0"The service elevator shuddered to"
1"She flicked on her torch,"
2"The enamel tiles read CHALK"
3"She pushed a hand through"
4"The officer at the tape"
5"Quinn ducked under."
6"Her boots crunched on grit"
7"The platform stretched ahead of"
8"A row of wooden crates"
9"Quinn's brown eyes moved across"
10"She'd seen black markets before."
11"He lay on his back"
12"He was mid-fifties, grey at"
13"DS Farrow crouched beside him."
14"He looked up as Quinn"
15"It sat somewhere between confusion"
16"He rose, knees popping"
17"Farrow gestured to the body"
18"Farrow rubbed the back of"
19"Farrow pointed further down the"
ratio0.821
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The service elevator shuddered to a stop at the bottom of the access shaft, and Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out into a tunnel that smelled of damp concrete a…"
1"Beyond it, a forensics team in white suits moved with the careful choreography of people who did not yet understand what they were looking at."
2"He was mid-fifties, grey at the temples, dressed in a dark coat that had cost more than Quinn's monthly salary."
3"A second set of lamps had been set up there, illuminating another figure — this one sitting upright, back against the tiled wall, legs stretched out in front of…"
4"Inside was a small brass disc, palm-sized, its face etched with markings Quinn did not recognise — intricate, hand-cut lines that looped and intersected like th…"
5"Farrow's team was cataloguing the contents of the crates, labelling each item, treating it all as evidence of a smuggling operation, a contraband ring, a case t…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.227
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.1404%