Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1HNW5G3Y9ADE2J5S6MCS3S

Run Details

Duration:
2m 11s
Cost:
$0.003648
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past midnight, and Aurora Carter nearly dropped her mug of chamomile onto the stack of Sumerian cuneiform translations that Eva had left splayed across the kitchen table. She froze. Ptolemy, the tabby, froze too, his green eyes catching the light from the single bulb above the stove. Nobody knocked on Eva's door after dark. Not unless they knew the three deadbolts well enough to bypass the first two with a coin and the third with a flex of the wrist, and not unless they were willing to risk the small brass bell Eva had rigged to ring in the bedroom if the chain wasn't set. The chain was set. Aurora set the mug down, bare feet silent on the cold floor, and picked her way through the narrow corridor of books toward the front door. The peephole was a fish-eye smudge of hallway light. She pressed her eye to it, and the rest of the evening drained out of her head like bathwater. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor in a charcoal suit that had no business looking that pressed at this hour, his platinum hair slicked back from a face that the tabloid papers would have called aristocratic if they ever thought to print it. His cane — the ivory-handled one she had once watched him use to fend off a man in a car park in Soho — hung loose at his side. One eye amber, the other black, and both of them looking, with infuriating accuracy, directly into the peephole. He knew she was there. She thought, very clearly, about not opening the door. She thought about going back to the table, picking up her mug, climbing the narrow stairs to Eva's bedroom, pulling the quilt up to her chin, and pretending that the sound of her own heartbeat wasn't currently a small embarrassing disaster. She undid the chain. She undid the top deadbolt. She undid the second. She cracked the third and stopped, her palm flat against the wood, and said, through the gap, "You have got to be joking." "Aurora." His voice was the same low, faintly accented thing she remembered, the consonants landing soft and the vowels unhurried. "You are not Eva." "Eva is in Istanbul," she said, "and I am going to kill her when she gets back for not telling me you knew where to find me." "She did not tell me. I deduced." "Get better at deduction, Lucien. Deduce somewhere else." She should have closed the door. She knew she should have closed the door. Instead she stood there with her hand on the knob and her heart somewhere up in her throat, and she waited, because the worst part of Lucien Moreau had always been the way he could simply wait, too. He waited. The fluorescent tube in the hallway buzzed, and Ptolemy chose that moment to materialize at her ankle, winding between her feet and meowing with the kind of theatrical outrage only a cat who had been recently adopted could muster. The sound was so absurd that Aurora almost laughed. "Silas let me in downstairs," Lucien said. "I told him it was urgent." "Silas would let the Antichrist in if he had a twenty and a sad face." "I do have a sad face." "You have an extremely stupid face." "Rory." The nickname landed low in her chest, a small hot coal of a thing, and she hated — she absolutely hated — that her hand was already moving to undo the last bolt. She pulled the door open the rest of the way, stepped back, and jerked her chin toward the cramped chaos of the flat. "Come in, then. Don't touch anything. Don't talk to the cat. And if you ruin Eva's notes I will use that cane of yours on you." Something moved at the corner of his mouth. Not quite a smile. He stepped over the threshold the way he did everything, carefully, like a man who had learned long ago that thresholds meant something, and then he was inside, and the flat, which had been merely small before, became something close to claustrophobic. He looked different. Older, maybe, in the way half-demons aged — which was to say, not at all, but with more weight behind the eyes. He had a fresh nick along the line of his jaw where a razor had been unkind, and there was a faint bruise, yellowing at the edges, just visible above his collar. "You got hurt," she said. It came out more accusation than observation. "It is nothing." "That is not what I said." He turned, then, and looked at her properly. She was aware, suddenly, of what she was wearing — one of Eva's old jumpers, too big, slipping off one shoulder; leggings; her feet bare. She was aware that her hair was unbrushed, that there was a tea stain on the cuff, that the small crescent scar on her left wrist was visible where she'd pushed the sleeve up. She was aware that none of this should have mattered and that all of it did. "You look well," he said. "I look like I was about to go to bed, Lucien." "Yes," he said, and the way he said it made her feel seen in a way that scraped. "That is what I meant." She turned away from him before her face could do anything stupid. She moved back toward the kitchen, clearing a stack of leather-bound journals off a chair to give him somewhere to sit, very deliberately not looking to see if he took it. He did. She could hear the creak of the wood. "You shouldn't be here," she said, filling the kettle because she needed something to do with her hands. "You shouldn't know where I am. You shouldn't —" "Knock on your door at midnight?" "Exist in the same postcode as me, frankly." She heard the soft tap of his cane against the floor. "I have information." "I don't want it." "It is about the man from the alley in Borough. The one who followed you home from the restaurant two weeks ago." Her hands went still on the kettle. The alley. The man. The way she had walked faster and faster along Tower Bridge Road with her delivery bag clutched against her chest and the sound of his footsteps behind her in perfect, patient rhythm. She had not told Eva. She had not told Silas. She had certainly not told anyone who might tell the tall, dangerous Frenchman who had no business still being in her life. "How do you know about that," she said, and her voice had gone very flat and very calm, the way it always did when she was frightened. "I have eyes, Rory." "You have *spies*, is what you have." "Sometimes they are the same thing." A pause. "He has been dealt with. He will not trouble you again. I would have told you sooner, but I could not find you." She set the kettle down. She turned around. He was sitting with the cane across his knees, the lamplight catching the amber in one eye, and he looked, she thought, exactly as tired as she was. "You moved," he said. "I could not find you." "I moved because you—" She stopped. She had been about to say *because you were too much* or *because you were not enough* or *because I cannot tell the difference with you*. She had been about to say a dozen things that had been rattling around inside her ribcage for the better part of a year. She bit down on all of them. "I moved because I needed to," she said instead. He looked at her for a long moment. Then he said, very quietly, "You moved because of me." The kettle began to hiss behind her, the small domestic sound impossibly loud in the room. Ptolemy had jumped onto the table and was making his way through Eva's translations with the focused malice of a cat who knew exactly what he was doing. Somewhere in the walls, the curry house below was finally closing up, the heavy clatter of steel shutters going down. "Lucien," she said, and her voice came out softer than she wanted it to. "Why are you really here." He was quiet. He uncurled his fingers from the handle of the cane. He looked, for the first time since she had known him, as though he were about to say something honest. "Because I was told," he said, "that you had been hurt. And I discovered that I could not bear the thought of it. Even if you never wanted to see me again. Even if you hated me. Even if —" he made a small gesture with his hand, as if pushing something away "— even if you closed every door in London against me. I could not bear the thought of you being hurt and me not having done something about it." The kettle was screaming. She could not hear it. She could not hear anything except the way her own breath was coming in shallow now, and the small thunder of her pulse. "You don't get to do that," she said. "You don't get to disappear for nine months and then turn up at midnight and say something like that and expect me to —" "To what." "To just —" She gestured helplessly. "To *be fine* with it. To forgive you for leaving the way you did. To —" "I left," he said, "because I was not safe to be near. And I was right." She stared at him. "What does that mean." He lifted his chin slightly. He tugged, with one finger, at the edge of his collar. Beneath the bruise, beneath the edge of the shirt, she saw, for the first time, the pale ridge of a scar that had not been there a year ago. It ran the length of his collarbone and disappeared beneath the fabric. "Lucien," she breathed. "It is not your fault," he said, very quickly. "It is not. I would not let it be your fault. But there are people in my world who do not appreciate the way I have —" he paused, searching for the word "— attached myself to certain humans. And I thought, if I left, they would leave you alone." "And did they." "No," he said. "Which is why the man in the alley is dealt with. And the two men who sent him. And the woman who sent them." The kettle had stopped screaming. The flat was very quiet. Ptolemy had given up on the translations and was washing his face on Eva's reading list. "You should have told me," she said. "You would have tried to help. You would have put yourself in the middle of it. You would have been hurt." "I am not a child, Lucien." "No," he said. "You are not." He looked at her. "You are the most stubborn, infuriating, brilliant woman I have ever met. And I have met a great many women." She made a small, wet, surprised sound. It might have been a laugh. It might have been something else. "Stay for tea," she said, and the words felt enormous in her mouth. He nodded, once. She turned to the kettle with hands that were not quite steady, and behind her, in the lamplight, in the small wrecked room, she heard the soft sound of his cane being set aside.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.383
leniency0.767
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.033
63.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1919
totalAiIsmAdverbs14
found
0
adverb"very"
count7
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"helplessly"
count1
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
7
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"suddenly"
3"deliberately"
4"really"
5"helplessly"
6"slightly"
7"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1919
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"absolutely"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"absolutely"
1"weight"
2"footsteps"
3"perfect"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen82
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords21
totalWords1925
ratio0.011
matches
0"spies"
1"because you were too much"
2"because you were not enough"
3"because I cannot tell the difference with you"
4"be fine"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1352
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Aurora3
Carter1
Sumerian1
Eva8
Moreau2
Soho1
Lucien3
Ptolemy4
Tower1
Bridge1
Road1
Silas1
Frenchman1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Tower"
2"Bridge"
3"Road"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something close to claustrophobic"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.519
wordCount1925
matches
0"not at all, but with more weight behind the eyes"
94.72% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences139
matches
0"pretending that the"
1"chose that moment"
2"hated — that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean26.01
std22.54
cv0.866
sampleLengths
032
120
258
34
454
590
65
750
836
924
1027
117
128
1352
142
1548
1613
1715
186
196
201
2156
2226
2354
2457
2512
263
276
2883
295
3011
3123
3253
3327
346
358
3614
374
3822
3975
4027
414
427
4331
4436
459
464
4759
489
4918
98.45% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"was unbrushed"
1"was frightened"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount10
totalVerbs223
matches
0"were willing"
1"was already moving"
2"was wearing "
3"was sitting"
4"was making"
5"was doing"
6"was finally closing"
7"was screaming"
8"was coming"
9"was washing"
60.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences139
ratio0.029
matches
0"His cane — the ivory-handled one she had once watched him use to fend off a man in a car park in Soho — hung loose at his side."
1"The nickname landed low in her chest, a small hot coal of a thing, and she hated — she absolutely hated — that her hand was already moving to undo the last bolt."
2"Older, maybe, in the way half-demons aged — which was to say, not at all, but with more weight behind the eyes."
3"She was aware, suddenly, of what she was wearing — one of Eva's old jumpers, too big, slipping off one shoulder; leggings; her feet bare."
93.61% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1184
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.0472972972972973
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.014358108108108109
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean13.85
std12.73
cv0.919
sampleLengths
032
12
218
37
451
54
626
79
819
943
1029
1118
125
139
1441
154
165
174
1823
1920
204
2127
227
238
246
258
2638
272
2839
299
307
316
3215
336
346
351
3633
3723
3826
398
404
4142
423
4322
4432
455
467
473
486
498
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats35
diversityRatio0.2805755395683453
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences84
matches
0"Instead she stood there with"
1"Then he said, very quietly,"
2"Somewhere in the walls, the"
ratio0.036
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences84
matches
0"She pressed her eye to"
1"His cane — the ivory-handled"
2"He knew she was there."
3"She thought, very clearly, about"
4"She thought about going back"
5"She undid the chain."
6"She undid the top deadbolt."
7"She undid the second."
8"She cracked the third and"
9"His voice was the same"
10"She should have closed the"
11"She knew she should have"
12"She pulled the door open"
13"He stepped over the threshold"
14"He looked different."
15"He had a fresh nick"
16"It came out more accusation"
17"He turned, then, and looked"
18"She was aware, suddenly, of"
19"She was aware that her"
ratio0.69
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences84
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Ptolemy, the tabby, froze too,"
2"Nobody knocked on Eva's door"
3"The chain was set."
4"Aurora set the mug down,"
5"The peephole was a fish-eye"
6"She pressed her eye to"
7"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
8"His cane — the ivory-handled"
9"He knew she was there."
10"She thought, very clearly, about"
11"She thought about going back"
12"She undid the chain."
13"She undid the top deadbolt."
14"She undid the second."
15"She cracked the third and"
16"His voice was the same"
17"She should have closed the"
18"She knew she should have"
19"The fluorescent tube in the"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She thought about going back to the table, picking up her mug, climbing the narrow stairs to Eva's bedroom, pulling the quilt up to her chin, and pretending tha…"
1"The fluorescent tube in the hallway buzzed, and Ptolemy chose that moment to materialize at her ankle, winding between her feet and meowing with the kind of the…"
2"He stepped over the threshold the way he did everything, carefully, like a man who had learned long ago that thresholds meant something, and then he was inside,…"
3"She had certainly not told anyone who might tell the tall, dangerous Frenchman who had no business still being in her life."
4"Ptolemy had jumped onto the table and was making his way through Eva's translations with the focused malice of a cat who knew exactly what he was doing."
5"She turned to the kettle with hands that were not quite steady, and behind her, in the lamplight, in the small wrecked room, she heard the soft sound of his can…"
81.52% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"thing she remembered, the consonants landing soft and the vowels unhurried"
1"she said, and the words felt enormous in her mouth"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.033
78.1676%