Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1HSKW80E0RKGP8TYQ1HZMQ

Run Details

Duration:
43.6s
Cost:
$0.065700
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The smell hit Quinn before the cold did—copper and something older, like wet stone that had never seen sun. She ducked under the strip of police tape strung across the disused service corridor and pressed a knuckle to her nose. "Mind the third step," called a uniform from below. "It's gone soft." She took it anyway, felt the concrete give beneath her boot like sponge. Eighteen years and she'd never been called to a Tube station that hadn't appeared on any map she'd pulled. Camden Council had no record of an entrance here. The door at street level had been bricked since 1962, according to the file, yet someone had walked through it tonight and left a body on the platform. DC Reyes met her at the bottom, torch beam jittering. Young. Pale in a way that had nothing to do with the dark. "Victim's male, forties, no ID. Throat's the obvious thing, but—" He swallowed. "You'll want to see it yourself, ma'am." "Tell me what you think it is first." "Ritual killing. Cult business. The markings, the candles, the way he's laid out." Reyes gestured down the platform, where the SOCO lamps threw a hard white pool across the tiles. "We've had three like it this year. Same MO." Quinn said nothing. She walked. The platform stretched into blackness on both sides, the rails below choked with decades of dust. No graffiti. That was the first wrong thing. Every abandoned station in London wore a skin of spray paint and bottle caps and the residue of urban explorers. This one looked sealed in amber. Clean. The body lay at the centre of the lamp's glare, arms folded across the chest, ankles together. Around him someone had arranged a ring of candles—nine of them, black wax, burned to even stubs. Between the candles, chalk symbols looped and intersected. "See?" Reyes crouched at the edge. "Pentagram, sort of. Sacrifice imagery. Cult." "Where's the blood?" He blinked. "The throat—" "His throat's been opened ear to ear." Quinn pulled a glove tight over each finger and lowered herself to a squat. "A wound like that, the carotid going, you'd have arterial spray two metres up that wall. You'd have a lake under him." She nodded at the tiles. "I see a smear. I see enough to fill a teacup. Where did the rest go?" Reyes opened his mouth. Closed it. "Cleaned up?" he managed. "Then why leave the candles? Why fold his hands so nice and forget the gallon of blood that should be soaking my knees right now?" She leaned closer. The man's skin had a grey cast, drawn tight over the cheekbones, lips pulled back from the teeth. "He's dry, Reyes. Not just the floor. Him." She lifted the dead man's wrist. It came up light, too light, the way a hollow thing comes up when you expect weight. The flesh dimpled under her thumb and stayed dimpled. "Like he's been left in the sun a week," she muttered. "He's been here, what, your call said six hours?" "Found at midnight. Coroner puts death within the hour before." "That's not a six-hour-old corpse." Quinn set the wrist down. "That's something else." She turned her attention to the chalk. Reyes saw a pentagram because he'd been told to see one in the briefing, because his brain reached for the shape it recognised from films. Quinn made herself unsee it. She traced the lines with her eyes, slow, the way she'd learned to read a scene before her gut started writing the story for her. It wasn't a pentagram. The strokes ran the wrong direction—drawn outward, from the body to the candles, not inward. Whoever made these marks hadn't been casting something toward the man. They'd been holding something back. The loops weren't decorative. They overlapped at the points where the candles sat, and each candle had been positioned with a draughtsman's care, not the wild theatre of a cult. "This isn't a sacrifice," she said. "Ma'am, the pattern—" "Is a fence." She stood, knees cracking. "You don't build an altar around something you've killed. You build a cage around something you're afraid of. These marks face out. They're defensive." Reyes shifted his weight. "Defending against what?" Quinn didn't answer. She'd crouched again, this time at the dead man's right hand, the one folded uppermost. The fingers were curled, and between them—she'd nearly missed it—a glint of dull metal. She eased the hand open. Stiff. Not the give-and-stay of fresh death but the resistance of something already half-mummified. A small brass compass sat in his palm. Old. The casing wore a crust of green corrosion, and across its face, instead of N-S-E-W, someone had etched a tangle of marks she didn't have words for—the same family of strokes as the chalk on the floor. The needle wasn't pointing north. It quivered, swung, settled toward the black tunnel mouth at the platform's eastern end. Then it twitched a quarter-turn and pointed back at the body itself. Quinn felt the hairs lift along her forearms. "Reyes. Has anyone been down that tunnel?" "No, ma'am. SOCO's still on the platform. We were waiting for—" "For me. Good." She didn't look up from the needle. It swung again, restless, like the thing it sought couldn't decide where to stand. Three years she'd carried a question with no shape to it—Morris, gone in a stairwell with no blood and no body and no reason, a case the brass had quietly buried. A bloodless death. A clean scene that should have been a slaughter. Her mouth had gone dry. "This man wasn't killed here," she said. "He came here to keep something in. He failed." She closed his fingers back over the compass, then thought better of it and slipped the instrument into an evidence bag, then into her coat. Reyes saw. Reyes said nothing—which told her the boy had instincts after all. "The cult line," she went on, standing, "goes in the file. It's tidy. It'll keep the super happy and the press off our backs." She turned to face him, and the lamp threw her shadow long across the chalk. "But you and I are going to stand here a minute longer and look at what's actually in front of us. Because someone built a wall on this platform, and walls only get built when something's coming through." The needle in her pocket twitched against her hip, insistent as a second pulse.
created_at"2026-06-01T12:16:03.98Z" 6/1/2026, 12:16:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.882
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"quivered"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"traced"
2"glint"
3"etched"
4"quivered"
5"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1075
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount763
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Reyes"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Reyes"
discoveredNames
Quinn7
Tube1
Council1
Reyes8
London1
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Council"
2"Reyes"
3"Morris"
places
0"Tube"
1"London"
globalScore0.976
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.93
wordCount1075
matches
0"Not the give-and-stay of fresh death but the resistance of something already half-mummified"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean29.05
std24.66
cv0.849
sampleLengths
040
112
269
323
419
58
639
75
851
942
1012
113
124
1364
146
154
1654
1732
1820
1910
2013
2162
2265
236
243
2531
267
2751
2877
298
307
3111
3267
335
3454
3577
3614
81.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences75
matches
0"been called"
1"been bricked"
2"been told"
3"been positioned"
4"were curled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs131
matches
0"wasn't pointing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences93
ratio0.075
matches
0"The smell hit Quinn before the cold did—copper and something older, like wet stone that had never seen sun."
1"Around him someone had arranged a ring of candles—nine of them, black wax, burned to even stubs."
2"The strokes ran the wrong direction—drawn outward, from the body to the candles, not inward."
3"The fingers were curled, and between them—she'd nearly missed it—a glint of dull metal."
4"The casing wore a crust of green corrosion, and across its face, instead of N-S-E-W, someone had etched a tangle of marks she didn't have words for—the same family of strokes as the chalk on the floor."
5"Three years she'd carried a question with no shape to it—Morris, gone in a stairwell with no blood and no body and no reason, a case the brass had quietly buried."
6"Reyes said nothing—which told her the boy had instincts after all."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount775
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.016774193548387096
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003870967741935484
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean11.56
std9.21
cv0.797
sampleLengths
019
121
29
33
413
519
69
728
810
91
1012
1112
127
138
1430
159
163
172
1816
192
206
2120
226
231
2417
2517
268
276
286
293
302
312
3221
3327
3416
354
362
374
3828
3918
408
416
4217
439
4411
459
4610
4710
483
497
79.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5053763440860215
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners47
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Then it twitched a quarter-turn"
ratio0.016
88.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences61
matches
0"She ducked under the strip"
1"She took it anyway, felt"
2"She nodded at the tiles"
3"She leaned closer"
4"She lifted the dead man's"
5"It came up light, too"
6"She turned her attention to"
7"She traced the lines with"
8"It wasn't a pentagram."
9"They'd been holding something back."
10"They overlapped at the points"
11"She stood, knees cracking"
12"She'd crouched again, this time"
13"She eased the hand open."
14"It quivered, swung, settled toward"
15"She didn't look up from"
16"It swung again, restless, like"
17"Her mouth had gone dry."
18"She closed his fingers back"
19"she went on, standing, She"
ratio0.328
33.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences61
matches
0"The smell hit Quinn before"
1"She ducked under the strip"
2"She took it anyway, felt"
3"Camden Council had no record"
4"The door at street level"
5"DC Reyes met her at"
6"Reyes gestured down the platform,"
7"Quinn said nothing."
8"The platform stretched into blackness"
9"That was the first wrong"
10"Every abandoned station in London"
11"This one looked sealed in"
12"The body lay at the"
13"Reyes crouched at the edge"
14"Quinn pulled a glove tight"
15"She nodded at the tiles"
16"Reyes opened his mouth."
17"She leaned closer"
18"The man's skin had a"
19"She lifted the dead man's"
ratio0.852
81.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Whoever made these marks hadn't"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The smell hit Quinn before the cold did—copper and something older, like wet stone that had never seen sun."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She stood, knees cracking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.176
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.059
89.2653%