| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.324 | | leniency | 0.649 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1222 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 75.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1222 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "measured" | | 3 | "treacherous" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1235 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "You know Lucien still asks after you, don't you" | | 1 | "Without whatever this is." | | 2 | "work" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 889 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Rory | 9 | | Silas | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 7 | | London | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.994 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 94.44% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a trick of perspective, a man" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1235 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 23.75 | | std | 22.9 | | cv | 0.964 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 93 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 57 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 75 | | 31 | 75 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 46 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 56 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 39 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 53 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 50 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.71% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "was cataloguing" | | 1 | "was trespassing" | | 2 | "wasn't watching" | | 3 | "was shaking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.076 | | matches | | 0 | "Ptolemy — Eva's tabby, the one Rory had cat-sat so few times recently that the cat still thought he lived here — lifted his head from the cushion beside her and turned his ears toward the door." | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane as though it was the only thing holding him to the earth, which was funny, because the last time she'd seen him — six weeks and a small lifetime ago — he'd held himself like nothing in the world could touch him." | | 2 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — the one she had told him about once, late, in a back room that smelled of cigarettes and something older — seemed suddenly to throb." | | 3 | "Rory blinked, and the stairwell came back into focus — the worn carpet, the buzzing fluorescent, the silhouette of a man she had spent six weeks trying not to think about standing on her landing in the middle of the night." | | 4 | "The three deadbolts she had insisted on — her addition, not the landlord's — slid home with a sound like a held breath." | | 5 | "The faint herbal scent that clung to his collar — something from his world, from the parts of London that did not appear on any map she could buy." | | 6 | "He looked at her then with that unreadable expression, and something in it shifted, and for a moment she saw right through to the man underneath — tired, worried, sorry in a way he would never say out loud, because sorry was not a word he used, not a currency he traded in." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 646 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.029411764705882353 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01238390092879257 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 13.42 | | std | 12.49 | | cv | 0.931 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 52 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 55.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.391304347826087 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "She set the textbook aside," | | 1 | "She did not step back" | | 2 | "Her hand stayed on the" | | 3 | "He looked at her like" | | 4 | "She refused to let herself" | | 5 | "she asked, though she was" | | 6 | "she said, finally" | | 7 | "She stepped aside." | | 8 | "She shut the door." | | 9 | "He lowered himself onto the" | | 10 | "he said, looking up at" | | 11 | "She leaned against the kitchen" | | 12 | "She could have bitten her" | | 13 | "She unfolded her arms." | | 14 | "she said, flatly" | | 15 | "He looked at her then" | | 16 | "she said, and her voice" | | 17 | "He lifted the cane slightly," | | 18 | "She noticed, for the first" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 30.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at quarter" | | 1 | "Rory was on the floor" | | 2 | "Ptolemy — Eva's tabby, the" | | 3 | "She set the textbook aside," | | 4 | "The man on the landing" | | 5 | "Lucien Moreau leaned on his" | | 6 | "The charcoal suit was immaculate." | | 7 | "The platinum hair, slicked back" | | 8 | "The mismatched eyes, one amber" | | 9 | "She did not step back" | | 10 | "Her hand stayed on the" | | 11 | "The corner of his mouth" | | 12 | "He looked at her like" | | 13 | "She refused to let herself" | | 14 | "The name landed like a" | | 15 | "Rory felt the ripples move" | | 16 | "she asked, though she was" | | 17 | "Lucien shifted his weight." | | 18 | "The cane creaked under his" | | 19 | "Rory's grip on the doorframe" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 15.31% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane as though it was the only thing holding him to the earth, which was funny, because the last time she'd seen him —…" | | 1 | "He looked at her like he was cataloguing everything that had changed since the last time he'd seen her standing in a doorway, and everything that hadn't." | | 2 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — the one she had told him about once, late, in a back room that smelled of cigarettes and something older — seemed s…" | | 3 | "Lucien crossed the threshold with the careful, measured steps of a man who knew he was trespassing and meant to leave as small a footprint as possible." | | 4 | "As if the six weeks of silence hadn't been her own doing, her own self-preservation, the only way she could think of to put distance between herself and the way…" |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, finally" | | 1 | "she said, flatly" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.324 | | leniency | 0.649 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.054 | |