Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1HXD25M26873PPHZXS3XVX

Run Details

Duration:
2m 52s
Cost:
$0.005733
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at quarter past midnight. Rory was on the floor with her back against the sofa, a law textbook open across her lap and a half-eaten plate of noodles balanced on the armrest. Ptolemy — Eva's tabby, the one Rory had cat-sat so few times recently that the cat still thought he lived here — lifted his head from the cushion beside her and turned his ears toward the door. "Probably Silas forgetting his keys again," she muttered. She set the textbook aside, picked her way around the stack of delivery receipts she kept meaning to sort, and opened the door. The man on the landing was not Silas. Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane as though it was the only thing holding him to the earth, which was funny, because the last time she'd seen him — six weeks and a small lifetime ago — he'd held himself like nothing in the world could touch him. The charcoal suit was immaculate. The platinum hair, slicked back from his forehead. The mismatched eyes, one amber and one black in the sickly light of the stairwell, fixed on her face with an expression she could not, for the life of her, read. "Rory," he said. Just her name. Nothing else. She did not step back to let him in. Her hand stayed on the doorframe, thumb pressed hard into the chipped wood. "How did you find out where I live?" "I asked Silas." A pause. "He was not happy to see me." "That makes two of us." The corner of his mouth twitched. Not a smile. Worse than a smile. He looked at her like he was cataloguing everything that had changed since the last time he'd seen her standing in a doorway, and everything that hadn't. She refused to let herself be catalogued. "You shouldn't be here," she said. "I know." "Then why—" "Because Eva called me." The name landed like a stone dropped into still water. Rory felt the ripples move through her. Eva. Who knew things before Rory did, who saw the shape of trouble coming long before it arrived, who had said only yesterday, offhand, *You know Lucien still asks after you, don't you*, and Rory had pretended not to hear. "About what?" she asked, though she was afraid she already knew. Lucien shifted his weight. The cane creaked under his palm. "There's a man from your past who's been making inquiries. Cardiff. A barrister's son. I believe you know him as Evan." Rory's grip on the doorframe tightened. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — the one she had told him about once, late, in a back room that smelled of cigarettes and something older — seemed suddenly to throb. "Evan doesn't know where I am." "Evan knows where you were. He has friends in the Met. They've been asking after a Miss Carter, last seen making deliveries for a Chinese restaurant in Whitechapel. I intercepted the inquiry this morning. I thought you would want to know before he got close enough to knock on a door himself." The world tilted, very slightly. Rory blinked, and the stairwell came back into focus — the worn carpet, the buzzing fluorescent, the silhouette of a man she had spent six weeks trying not to think about standing on her landing in the middle of the night. "Come in," she said, finally. "Before Silas sees you and calls the police." She stepped aside. Lucien crossed the threshold with the careful, measured steps of a man who knew he was trespassing and meant to leave as small a footprint as possible. Ptolemy, treacherous thing, dropped from the sofa and wound himself around Lucien's ankles, purring. "He remembers you," Rory said, and hated the way her voice caught. "He remembers anyone who scratches behind his left ear." "That's not — I didn't mean —" "I know what you meant." She shut the door. The three deadbolts she had insisted on — her addition, not the landlord's — slid home with a sound like a held breath. The flat was small: a kitchen that was mostly a hotplate, a bed that was mostly a mattress on the floor, the sofa, the stacked books, the receipts. Lucien's presence in it felt like a trick of perspective, a man too large for the room he stood in. He lowered himself onto the edge of the sofa and set the cane across his knees. Up close, she could see the small things. A graze along his jawline he had not bothered to conceal. The way his shoulders sat a fraction lower than she remembered. The faint herbal scent that clung to his collar — something from his world, from the parts of London that did not appear on any map she could buy. "Sit down," he said, looking up at her. "Please." She didn't. She leaned against the kitchen counter instead, arms folded, the hotplate digging into the small of her back. "Start from the beginning," she said. "Tell me about Evan. Tell me what you know." "I know he arrived in London four days ago. I know he has not yet found you. I know that if he does, he will not be coming alone, and the people he is travelling with are not the sort who take no for an answer." "Then why come to me? Why not handle it the way you usually handle things? Quieter. Cleaner. Without —" she gestured between them, "— whatever this is." "Without what, Rory?" She could have bitten her own tongue. *Without whatever this is.* As if she didn't know. As if the six weeks of silence hadn't been her own doing, her own self-preservation, the only way she could think of to put distance between herself and the way he looked at her when he thought she wasn't watching. She unfolded her arms. Refolded them. "Because I told you not to," she said, flatly. "Because the last time I saw you, I asked you to give me space, and you — you didn't. You came to Eva's. You sent flowers to the restaurant. You—" "I respected every boundary you set." "You sent flowers to my *work*." "It was your birthday." "That is not the point." He looked at her then with that unreadable expression, and something in it shifted, and for a moment she saw right through to the man underneath — tired, worried, sorry in a way he would never say out loud, because sorry was not a word he used, not a currency he traded in. "I did not know how else to be near you," he said, "without being in your way." The hotplate burned into her spine. Ptolemy, finished with his betrayals, leapt back onto the sofa and curled against Lucien's thigh, kneading the wool of his trousers. Outside, a fox screamed somewhere in the alley behind the bar. The fluorescent in the stairwell buzzed on and off, on and off. Rory's throat felt very small. "You could have just asked," she said, and her voice came out smaller than she meant it to. "You could have come to the door. You could have knocked." "I am at the door," he said, "and I am knocking." He lifted the cane slightly, as if to prove a point. She noticed, for the first time, that his hand on the ivory handle was shaking.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.649
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"treacherous"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"throb"
2"measured"
3"treacherous"
4"silence"
5"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences68
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords14
totalWords1235
ratio0.011
matches
0"You know Lucien still asks after you, don't you"
1"Without whatever this is."
2"work"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount889
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Rory9
Silas1
Moreau1
Lucien7
London1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.994
windowScore0.667
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a trick of perspective, a man"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1235
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean23.75
std22.9
cv0.964
sampleLengths
07
165
28
323
48
593
63
75
822
98
1012
115
1247
136
142
152
164
1757
1811
1931
2039
216
2252
2346
2413
2544
2612
279
287
295
3075
3175
329
3320
3415
3546
3627
373
3856
396
4039
416
426
434
445
4553
4617
4750
485
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
25.71% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was cataloguing"
1"was trespassing"
2"wasn't watching"
3"was shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences92
ratio0.076
matches
0"Ptolemy — Eva's tabby, the one Rory had cat-sat so few times recently that the cat still thought he lived here — lifted his head from the cushion beside her and turned his ears toward the door."
1"Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane as though it was the only thing holding him to the earth, which was funny, because the last time she'd seen him — six weeks and a small lifetime ago — he'd held himself like nothing in the world could touch him."
2"The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — the one she had told him about once, late, in a back room that smelled of cigarettes and something older — seemed suddenly to throb."
3"Rory blinked, and the stairwell came back into focus — the worn carpet, the buzzing fluorescent, the silhouette of a man she had spent six weeks trying not to think about standing on her landing in the middle of the night."
4"The three deadbolts she had insisted on — her addition, not the landlord's — slid home with a sound like a held breath."
5"The faint herbal scent that clung to his collar — something from his world, from the parts of London that did not appear on any map she could buy."
6"He looked at her then with that unreadable expression, and something in it shifted, and for a moment she saw right through to the man underneath — tired, worried, sorry in a way he would never say out loud, because sorry was not a word he used, not a currency he traded in."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount646
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.029411764705882353
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01238390092879257
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean13.42
std12.49
cv0.931
sampleLengths
07
128
237
38
423
58
649
75
88
931
103
113
122
139
1413
158
165
177
185
196
203
214
2227
237
246
252
262
274
2810
297
301
3139
3211
334
346
3521
366
3733
386
3952
405
4141
425
438
443
4527
4614
4712
489
497
55.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.391304347826087
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners36
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Just her name."
ratio0.018
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences57
matches
0"She set the textbook aside,"
1"She did not step back"
2"Her hand stayed on the"
3"He looked at her like"
4"She refused to let herself"
5"she asked, though she was"
6"she said, finally"
7"She stepped aside."
8"She shut the door."
9"He lowered himself onto the"
10"he said, looking up at"
11"She leaned against the kitchen"
12"She could have bitten her"
13"She unfolded her arms."
14"she said, flatly"
15"He looked at her then"
16"she said, and her voice"
17"He lifted the cane slightly,"
18"She noticed, for the first"
ratio0.333
30.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences57
matches
0"The knock came at quarter"
1"Rory was on the floor"
2"Ptolemy — Eva's tabby, the"
3"She set the textbook aside,"
4"The man on the landing"
5"Lucien Moreau leaned on his"
6"The charcoal suit was immaculate."
7"The platinum hair, slicked back"
8"The mismatched eyes, one amber"
9"She did not step back"
10"Her hand stayed on the"
11"The corner of his mouth"
12"He looked at her like"
13"She refused to let herself"
14"The name landed like a"
15"Rory felt the ripples move"
16"she asked, though she was"
17"Lucien shifted his weight."
18"The cane creaked under his"
19"Rory's grip on the doorframe"
ratio0.86
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"As if the six weeks"
ratio0.018
15.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane as though it was the only thing holding him to the earth, which was funny, because the last time she'd seen him —…"
1"He looked at her like he was cataloguing everything that had changed since the last time he'd seen her standing in a doorway, and everything that hadn't."
2"The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — the one she had told him about once, late, in a back room that smelled of cigarettes and something older — seemed s…"
3"Lucien crossed the threshold with the careful, measured steps of a man who knew he was trespassing and meant to leave as small a footprint as possible."
4"As if the six weeks of silence hadn't been her own doing, her own self-preservation, the only way she could think of to put distance between herself and the way…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, finally"
1"she said, flatly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.649
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.054
80.5753%