| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1225 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1225 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "electric" | | 3 | "resonance" | | 4 | "glint" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1236 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1025 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Had | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | Welsh | 1 | | Fair | 1 | | Folk | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.963 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 38.19% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.618 | | wordCount | 1236 | | matches | | 0 | "not worn by feet, since the grass parted but wasn't crushed, more a direction pressed into the landscape" | | 1 | "not music, exactly, but a resonance, as if the grove itself hummed at a frequency ju" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 30.9 | | std | 24.21 | | cv | 0.784 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 74 | | 12 | 70 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 69 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 60 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 65 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 80 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.118 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here sat differently against her skin - heavier, expectant." | | 1 | "Beneath the scent of wet grass and distant woodsmoke from the park's edge, something older moved - a mineral coolness, a faint sweetness like overripe fruit." | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant at her throat lay quiet against her skin, which surprised her; she'd grown used to its low warmth in places where the city's magic bled through cracks in the world." | | 3 | "One moment her foot pressed into mossy soil, the next it pressed into something softer - spongier, giving like the forest floor after long rain, though the sky above had not changed." | | 4 | "In its place stretched a meadow of wildflowers - poppies, cornflowers, foxgloves - blooming in colours that didn't belong to any season she recognised." | | 5 | "The meadow gave way to a suggestion of path - not worn by feet, since the grass parted but wasn't crushed, more a direction pressed into the landscape." | | 6 | "From somewhere distant came a sound she couldn't place - not music, exactly, but a resonance, as if the grove itself hummed at a frequency just below hearing." | | 7 | "Beyond them, the trees grew closer together, their trunks spiralling with bark that gleamed faintly in the perpetual twilight, and the hum grew stronger - less a sound now, more a presence." | | 8 | "She thought of the stories her mother used to tell - the old Welsh ones, about the Fair Folk and their deals." | | 9 | "It was a stone in the path - no, not in the path." | | 10 | "The grove held its breath around her - or so it seemed, the hum dipping lower, the pollen hanging motionless in the air, the willows going still." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1021 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.022526934378060724 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007835455435847209 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 13.29 | | std | 9.28 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 34 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 70.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.46236559139784944 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 92.59% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere, distantly, she heard what" | | 1 | "Simply observed, with eyes the" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She rubbed the back of" | | 1 | "It wasn't a transition she" | | 2 | "She looked back." | | 3 | "She felt it in her" | | 4 | "She thought of the stories" | | 5 | "She'd dismissed them as a" | | 6 | "She stopped, and Nyx stopped" | | 7 | "It was a stone in" | | 8 | "She crouched, ignoring the warning" | | 9 | "She hesitated, the feather cold" | | 10 | "Their gaze had dropped to" | | 11 | "She stood where the path" | | 12 | "she said, and her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.181 | |
| 98.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak stones rose from" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted closer, their form" | | 3 | "She rubbed the back of" | | 4 | "The air here sat differently" | | 5 | "Nyx tilted their head, violet" | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 7 | "Here it held its silence." | | 8 | "Aurora hadn't wanted to come" | | 9 | "A woman with silver hair" | | 10 | "A voice like wind through" | | 11 | "Nyx's form solidified, taking on" | | 12 | "Aurora stepped through the standing" | | 13 | "The world shifted." | | 14 | "It wasn't a transition she" | | 15 | "The amber light of sunset" | | 16 | "She looked back." | | 17 | "The standing stones remained, but" | | 18 | "Some were the deep burgundy" | | 19 | "Nyx had crossed after her," |
| | ratio | 0.722 | |
| 69.44% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 30.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak stones rose from the earth like fingers pressing up through the soil, each one gnarled and ancient, bark still clinging to weathered surfaces that shoul…" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant at her throat lay quiet against her skin, which surprised her; she'd grown used to its low warmth in places where the city's magic bled t…" | | 2 | "The amber light of sunset still filtered through the canopy, but it came from a sun that hung lower than it should, swollen and copper-coloured at the horizon o…" | | 3 | "From somewhere distant came a sound she couldn't place - not music, exactly, but a resonance, as if the grove itself hummed at a frequency just below hearing." | | 4 | "Beyond them, the trees grew closer together, their trunks spiralling with bark that gleamed faintly in the perpetual twilight, and the hum grew stronger - less …" | | 5 | "Silver hair spilled past her waist, catching the copper light in ways that made it seem almost liquid." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx had, their shadow stretching long across the impossible meadow" | | 1 | "she said, and her voice was wind through hollow reeds, and the words were not a question" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.04 | | leniency | 0.08 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |