Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1J54S96JKDP9STXRKVSBR5

Run Details

Duration:
1m 34s
Cost:
$0.002316
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone flared against her collarbone, a sharp pulse of heat that made Aurora flinch and press her palm flat to her sternum. The silver chain bit into the back of her neck, cold where the gem was not. She had not expected the pendant to react. Isolde had said only that the stones marked a path. Had not mentioned warmth. Had not mentioned the way the air inside the ring of oaks tasted older than the park around it, like a library left sealed for decades. She lowered her hand. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the moonlight as she flexed her fingers, a thin white comma she had not thought about in years. Tonight it itched. Beyond the standing stones, the grove opened into a clearing she could not have predicted from the outside. Wildflowers crowded the grass in a riot of colour that had no business blooming in late October. She had walked through the dead bracken of Richmond Park, past the dark shapes of deer that had bolted at her approach, through the gap between two oaks whose bark had grown together in a rough arch. And now she stood in summer. The pendant pulsed again. Aurora swallowed. She had come because Isolde had asked. That was the shape of it, the simple answer she had given herself on the tube, on the bus, on the long walk from the gate. Isolde, who knew things. Isolde, who had pressed the pendant into her palm that morning in the flat above Silas' bar and said only, *Bring it to the stones. Wait. Watch what moves.* Aurora had not asked what Isolde expected her to see. She had learned, in the months since leaving Evan, that certain questions were heavier than they looked. The clearing breathed. That was the first wrong thing, the one she could not name. The flowers did not sway. There was no wind. Yet the air moved, a slow inhale-exhale against the bare skin of her forearms, carrying a sweetness that reminded her of the garden her mother had kept in Cardiff, the lavender border she had not thought of in years. The scent made her chest ache without cause. She stepped off the path. The grass gave under her boot, softer than it should have been, and she had the sudden, unreasonable thought that she had not actually been walking at all. That she had stepped sideways out of the world she knew and into a different one, and the path was now behind her, and she could not see it. She turned. The standing stones stood in a crooked line, silver-grey in the moonlight. The gap between the two oaks was still there. She could see the dead bracken beyond, a smear of brown. The path was still there. The pendant burned. Aurora hissed through her teeth and tugged the chain over her head, holding the Heartstone in her palm. The gem glowed faintly, a deep crimson ember, and the warmth spread through her fingers, up her wrist, into the scar that still itched. The glow pulsed in a rhythm. Not her heartbeat. Slower. Something else's. She looked up. A flower had moved. She was certain of it. A stem of something white and bell-shaped, on the far side of the clearing, near a clump of hazel, had been at an angle when she looked away. It was upright now. She stared until her eyes watered, and it stayed upright, innocent, a painted thing in the moonlight. The pendant pulsed. *Watch what moves.* A sound came from the hazel. Not a crack of branch. Not an animal. A hum, low and tuneless, the kind a person makes when they think no one is listening. Aurora's hand closed around the Heartstone. The warmth flared, almost unbearable, and the hum stopped. Silence. Then the hum again, from the other side of the clearing. Behind her. Aurora turned. Nothing. Flowers, hazel, the dark shapes of the standing stones. The moon hung fat and yellow above the gap in the oaks, too bright, too low, the colour of old paper. A drop of sweat rolled down the back of her neck. The air had gone still, the sweetness curdling into something cloying, the lavender smell sharpening into rot. She took a step back. The grass whispered under her boot, a wet sound, and she realised with a lurch of nausea that the ground was soft. Not soft with rain. Soft in the way a throat is soft. She lifted her foot and did not look down at what clung to the sole. A breath. Right beside her ear. Aurora's whole body clenched. She whipped her head sideways and saw nothing, only the dark space between two hazel stems where a face should have been. The pendant seared her palm. She opened her fingers. The gem's glow had intensified, a steady red wash that painted her wrist and the nearest flowers in the colour of arterial blood. Something stood at the edge of the light. She could not see it. She could not not see it. A shape, darker than the dark around it, occupying the corner of her vision the way a word sits on the tip of the tongue. When she looked directly, there was only hazel. When she looked away, it was there. A laugh. A child's laugh, somewhere among the standing stones, bright and lilting, and completely wrong in this place where no children should be. Aurora's mouth opened. No sound came out. The laugh went on, peeling through the clearing, and the flowers around the stones began to turn, slowly, all of them, as if tracking something she could not perceive. The Heartstone pulsed. The shape at the edge of her vision stepped closer. The child laughed again, and this time the laugh answered itself, a chorus of two, then three, layered, multiplying, spreading through the grove until the air itself seemed to giggle. Aurora ran. The grass caught at her boots. The wildflowers reached for her ankles, pale hands in the moonlight, and she kicked through them, gasping, the Heartstone clutched so hard in her fist that the chain cut into the meat of her palm. The standing stones loomed. The gap between the oaks gaped ahead of her, the dead bracken of Richmond Park visible beyond, the ordinary world she had walked out of an hour ago or a day ago or a year ago. She did not slow down. The child's laughter chased her, and beneath it, in the spaces between the giggles, she heard the hum. Tuneless. Patient. Closer than before. Aurora plunged through the arch of bark and into the bracken and did not stop until she reached the tarmac path at the edge of the park, where the streetlamps buzzed and a late bus ground past with its headlights full on. She bent double, hands on her knees, the Heartstone dangling from her bleeding palm, still faintly warm. Behind her, in the dark, something that was not a child laughed one last time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"pulsed"
count4
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"lurch"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"pulsed"
3"silence"
4"lurch"
5"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords12
totalWords1179
ratio0.01
matches
0"Bring it to the stones. Wait. Watch what moves."
1"Watch what moves."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1169
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Heartstone6
Aurora10
October1
Richmond2
Park2
Isolde5
Wait1
Evan1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if tracking something she could not perceive"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1179
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"thought that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean35.73
std27.59
cv0.772
sampleLengths
087
133
278
36
466
527
63
768
862
939
103
1154
123
134
1454
153
163
1746
181
1913
2061
2154
226
2358
248
2551
2660
2743
282
2981
3028
3159
3215
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences106
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount256
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.01171875
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.00390625
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean11.12
std10.11
cv0.909
sampleLengths
023
116
28
310
44
526
64
726
83
918
1017
1137
126
134
142
157
1626
174
1825
191
203
2110
2217
233
2412
255
264
2739
288
295
3028
3129
322
3312
349
3511
365
373
3818
3924
406
413
421
432
443
454
465
4728
484
4917
34.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.29245283018867924
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners31
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Then the hum again, from"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences92
matches
0"She had not expected the"
1"She lowered her hand."
2"She had walked through the"
3"She had come because Isolde"
4"She had learned, in the"
5"She stepped off the path."
6"She could see the dead"
7"She looked up."
8"She was certain of it."
9"It was upright now."
10"She stared until her eyes"
11"She took a step back."
12"She lifted her foot and"
13"She whipped her head sideways"
14"She opened her fingers."
15"She could not see it."
16"She could not not see"
17"She did not slow down."
18"She bent double, hands on"
ratio0.207
74.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences92
matches
0"The Heartstone flared against her"
1"The silver chain bit into"
2"She had not expected the"
3"Isolde had said only that"
4"She lowered her hand."
5"The crescent scar on her"
6"Tonight it itched."
7"Wildflowers crowded the grass in"
8"She had walked through the"
9"The pendant pulsed again."
10"She had come because Isolde"
11"That was the shape of"
12"Isolde, who knew things."
13"Isolde, who had pressed the"
14"Aurora had not asked what"
15"She had learned, in the"
16"The clearing breathed."
17"That was the first wrong"
18"The flowers did not sway."
19"The scent made her chest"
ratio0.772
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The Heartstone flared against her collarbone, a sharp pulse of heat that made Aurora flinch and press her palm flat to her sternum."
1"She had walked through the dead bracken of Richmond Park, past the dark shapes of deer that had bolted at her approach, through the gap between two oaks whose b…"
2"Yet the air moved, a slow inhale-exhale against the bare skin of her forearms, carrying a sweetness that reminded her of the garden her mother had kept in Cardi…"
3"The gem's glow had intensified, a steady red wash that painted her wrist and the nearest flowers in the colour of arterial blood."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.7769%