Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1J5FMM507KGH9716FW73YN

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Duration:
1m 27s
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$0.002223
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the heather like broken teeth. Rory counted them by habit. Seven. The same seven she had walked past a dozen times in daylight, when the park belonged to dog-walkers and the distant clatter of cyclists on the ridge. Tonight the stones had no audience. Tonight they had her. She pulled her jacket tighter and checked the pendant at her throat. The Heartstone sat against her collarbone, the silver chain cold where it touched the nape of her neck, but the stone itself was not cold. It had not been cold since she had passed the third stone. The glow was faint. She had to angle her chin down to see it, a dim crimson pulse like a heartbeat drawn in miniature. It quickened as she stepped between the fourth and fifth stone, and the air changed. Not temperature. Pressure. The way her ears felt on a descent in a plane, only sharper, as though someone had pressed two palms flat against the sides of her skull and squeezed. She swallowed. The sensation passed. The wildflowers were already underfoot, even though it was October, even though the grass of Richmond Park behind her had been winter-brown and damp. The grove opened ahead of her in a wash of pale moonlight that should not have existed. The canopy above was thick enough to block any view of the sky. The light came from nowhere and everywhere, a silver wash that picked out the small white blooms nodding in a wind she could not feel. Rory had been told to come at night. She had been told, by a voice on a phone that had no caller ID, that the answer to the questions she had been asking would be here. She had not been told what the questions were yet. She walked. The grass was springy, almost bouncy under her boots, and her footprints filled in behind her as she passed. She did not look back to confirm this. She had learned, in the weeks since the pendant had first warmed against her skin, that some things were better noticed and not spoken to. A bird called. Then another. Then silence, the kind of silence that had weight to it, that pushed back against the sound of her own breathing. Rory stopped. She turned her head, slowly, the way you turn your head in a dream when you know something is in the room with you but you do not yet want to give it permission to exist. Nothing. The wildflowers. The pale light. The faint suggestion of trees at the edge of her vision, their trunks too straight, too evenly spaced, like a theatre flat painted to suggest a forest. The pendant pulsed. Once. Twice. Three times in quick succession, like a hand tightening around a small living thing. She took another step. The grass made no sound. Her boots made no sound. The air made no sound, although the leaves of the nearest not-quite-tree moved in a pattern that implied wind, and the pattern repeated, and repeated, and did not change. "Rory." Her name. Her actual name, spoken in a voice she almost recognised. She turned toward it and the grove stretched, the trees at the far end drawing back like curtains, the path before her lengthening by some impossible geometry. She had not moved. She had taken one step and the world had rearranged itself. The voice had come from her left. She was sure of it. She turned back. Nothing. Only the wildflowers, and the pale light, and the standing stones behind her, and between them a strip of darkness that had not been there before. She raised her hand. Held it out in front of her. Five fingers, all present, all behaving. The pendant hung below her collarbone and its glow was brighter now, a small coal burning in the hollow of her throat. She pressed her thumb against it and the warmth spread up her wrist, over the crescent-shaped scar there, a line of heat that traced the old injury like a finger drawn along a groove. "Don't," she said, to no one, to the grove, to the voice that had used her name. "I'm here for a reason. I don't know it yet, but I know I have one." The wildflowers nodded. All of them. At once. A single coordinated movement, like a hundred small heads bowing in greeting, or in warning. She walked. The path beneath her boots was no longer grass but a hard pale surface, smooth as bone, and her steps made the small tapping sound of heel on tile. She did not look down to confirm this. She had decided, somewhere in the last thirty seconds, that looking down would be a concession she was not yet ready to make. The trees drew closer. The trunks were pale, almost white, and the bark was smooth, without the usual furrows and ridges of English oak. They looked polished. They looked, in the back of her mind where the thoughts she did not want to look at lived, like the legs of something large and jointed, bent and waiting. A sound. Small. Close. The sound of a fingernail tapped against glass. Rory stopped. The pendant stopped. The grove, for one long held breath, stopped. Then the tapping came again, and this time it moved. From her left to directly behind her, traveling along the curve of her skull the way a sound can in these conditions, in the dark, in a place that is not quite the place it pretends to be. She did not turn. She held her breath and counted. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. The tapping stopped. Something exhaled, very close to her left ear, a long soft breath that smelled of wet earth and something sweeter beneath it, something like overripe pears left to ferment in a closed room. "Find the door," the voice said, and the voice was hers. Her own voice, her own Welsh-inflected vowels, her own cadence. "Find the door before it finds you." Rory turned. The grove behind her was empty. The pale trees. The nodding flowers. The strip of darkness between the standing stones, which had widened. Which was widening still, a slow patient opening like a mouth preparing to speak. The pendant flared. She gasped, more at the heat than the light, and pressed her palm flat against her chest to hold it there, to keep it from burning through her shirt. It pulsed against her palm in a rhythm she had begun to dread, because the rhythm was not hers, and it was getting faster, and somewhere in the dark between the stones something was matching it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"quickened"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"quickened"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
6"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tends to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1120
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount1092
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
October1
Richmond1
Park1
English1
Welsh-inflected1
Rory5
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not-quite tree moved in a pattern that implied wind, and the pattern repeated, and repeated, and did not change"
1"not quite the place it pretends to be"
2"something like overripe pears left to fermen"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.893
wordCount1120
matches
0"no longer grass but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean37.33
std19.23
cv0.515
sampleLengths
010
143
249
339
461
555
646
754
826
938
1033
1119
1243
131
1454
1515
1627
1773
1833
1923
2062
2157
2212
2313
2458
255
2636
2728
2839
2968
94.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences102
matches
0"been told"
1"been told"
2"been told"
88.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was widening"
1"was getting"
2"was matching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences105
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1098
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"own Welsh-inflected vowels,"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03460837887067395
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004553734061930784
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean10.67
std10.38
cv0.973
sampleLengths
010
15
21
327
46
54
612
725
812
94
1020
1115
122
131
1429
152
163
1724
1817
1913
2025
218
2228
2310
242
2519
268
2725
283
292
3021
312
3236
331
342
353
3627
373
381
391
4014
414
425
435
4429
451
462
4710
4827
494
27.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.3047619047619048
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then silence, the kind of"
1"Only the wildflowers, and the"
2"Then the tapping came again,"
ratio0.039
69.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences77
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter"
1"It had not been cold"
2"She had to angle her"
3"It quickened as she stepped"
4"She had been told, by"
5"She had not been told"
6"She did not look back"
7"She had learned, in the"
8"She turned her head, slowly,"
9"She took another step."
10"Her boots made no sound."
11"Her actual name, spoken in"
12"She turned toward it and"
13"She had not moved."
14"She had taken one step"
15"She was sure of it."
16"She turned back."
17"She raised her hand."
18"She pressed her thumb against"
19"she said, to no one,"
ratio0.377
18.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences77
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Rory counted them by habit."
2"The same seven she had"
3"Tonight the stones had no"
4"Tonight they had her."
5"She pulled her jacket tighter"
6"The Heartstone sat against her"
7"It had not been cold"
8"The glow was faint."
9"She had to angle her"
10"It quickened as she stepped"
11"The way her ears felt"
12"The sensation passed."
13"The wildflowers were already underfoot,"
14"The grove opened ahead of"
15"The canopy above was thick"
16"The light came from nowhere"
17"Rory had been told to"
18"She had been told, by"
19"She had not been told"
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Then silence, the kind of silence that had weight to it, that pushed back against the sound of her own breathing."
1"Only the wildflowers, and the pale light, and the standing stones behind her, and between them a strip of darkness that had not been there before."
2"She pressed her thumb against it and the warmth spread up her wrist, over the crescent-shaped scar there, a line of heat that traced the old injury like a finge…"
3"From her left to directly behind her, traveling along the curve of her skull the way a sound can in these conditions, in the dark, in a place that is not quite …"
4"Something exhaled, very close to her left ear, a long soft breath that smelled of wet earth and something sweeter beneath it, something like overripe pears left…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the voice said, and the voice was hers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.2172%