Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1J7B3FC208BWQZZYAGPZK2

Run Details

Duration:
4m 54s
Cost:
$0.011047
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of the Raven's Nest bled into the wet pavement, a sickly halo around the door. Rory stood on the opposite side of the street, collar turned up, keys in her pocket weighing nothing and everything. Three years. Three years since she had walked out of the flat above the bar with a rucksack and a one-way ticket to Cardiff, swearing she wouldn't come back. The sign flickered. Same as always. She crossed the street. Inside, the place smelled of polished wood and old smoke, the way it had the night she had first climbed those stairs with a suitcase and the taste of fear still on her tongue. The walls were still papered with maps and black-and-white photographs of men and women she had never asked about. The long mirror behind the bottles reflected a version of the room that looked more forgiving than it was. Silas stood at the far end of the bar, polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better decades. His hair had thinned at the temples, the grey spreading like frost on a window. The limp in his left leg seemed more pronounced, or she was just remembering it wrong. He didn't look up. She took a stool near the door, not too close. The wood was cold through her jeans. "Whatever you're having," he said, not looking up, "you're having on the house. House rules." She almost smiled. Almost. "Tea." He paused. The glass stopped moving. He looked up, and for a second, his face was the same — those hazel eyes that had watched her spiral and rebuild and spiral again — and then it wasn't. Lines around his mouth. A scar through his left eyebrow she didn't remember. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light and held it. "Christ," he said. "Rory." "In the flesh." He set the glass down. The cloth stayed where it was, draped over his shoulder. "Thought you'd gone for good." "Thought I had too." The silence that followed had texture — heavy, a little rough, the sort that presses against your eardrums. She studied the rows of bottles, the labels she didn't recognise, the new ones mixed in with the old. He poured her tea without asking, set it in front of her, and leaned against the back bar with his arms folded. The posture of a man waiting for a confession. "You look—" he started. "Different. I know." "I was going to say tired." She wrapped her hands around the mug. "That too." He shifted his weight off the bad leg, a gesture so familiar it hurt. "How long?" "Three years. Give or take." "And you come back to Soho. To this street." He gestured at the walls, the maps, the photographs of ghosts. "Some people would call that a sign." "Some people would call it stupidity." A ghost of a smile. "Always were honest." He looked at her, the way he used to when she came down at two in the morning, shaking, needing someone to tell her that the world was still in its socket. "You're not still—" "Evan?" The name left her mouth like something dropped into a well. "No. That ended. Properly." He nodded, but didn't relax. "And Cardiff?" "Cardiff was Cardiff." She took a sip. The tea was too strong, the way he always made it, and she let it burn. "I went back. Tried to be the daughter again. Tried to sit in my father's study and pretend the last five years hadn't happened." "Brendan." "You remember." "I remember everything, Rory. That's rather the problem." The words hung there. She watched his hands, the knuckles swollen, the veins standing out like rivers on a map. The hands of a man who had done things and hidden things and run out of hiding places. "I heard about Prague," she said. His jaw tightened. "News travels." "News travels when you make the papers." "It wasn't the papers. It was the subsequent silence." He picked up the cloth again, folded it, unfolded it. A habit she had never seen in him before. "After that, certain people decided I'd become a liability. A loose end that still drew breath." "And the bar?" "The bar is a front. It always was. You knew that." "I knew." He looked at her. "Did you?" She met his gaze. "Silas. I lived above it for two years. I saw the people who came through that back room. I saw you disappear for days and come back with that look." She touched her own face, miming it. "The look you have now." He laughed, a short, broken sound. "And you stayed." "I stayed because you gave me a key and a place to fall apart without questions." "That was the deal." "That was never the deal." Her voice came out harder than she intended. "The deal was I'd work the front, make myself useful, and you'd keep me out of Evan's orbit long enough to get a new identity. That was the deal. Everything after that—" She gestured between them. "Everything after that, you did for free." He set the cloth down. "Don't." "Don't what? Don't mention that you were the only person in London who didn't look at me like I was already broken? Don't mention the nights you sat on the stairs with a bottle of Bell's and told me stories about Lisbon and Istanbul and a woman in Vienna who could pick a lock with a hairpin?" Her throat tightened. "Don't mention that when I left, I didn't say goodbye because I knew if I did, I'd never go?" He was very still. The bar felt smaller, the walls closer, the maps on the walls like accusations. "You didn't say goodbye," he repeated. "I didn't." "I thought you were dead." "I know." "I sat in this room for six months, Rory. Six months. Every time the bell above that door rang, I thought he'd found you. Or that you'd done something stupid and irreversible. I thought—" "Don't." She held up a hand. "Don't you dare put that on me. I sent a postcard. From the airport. 'Gone to Cardiff. Don't follow.' You knew I was alive." "I knew you were alive. I didn't know you were okay." He leaned forward, and for the first time she saw how much the years had taken. Not just the limp, not just the grey. Something behind the eyes had shifted, had been replaced by a kind of watchfulness that never turned off. "There's a difference." She stared at the tea. The steam had stopped rising. The mug was cold in her hands, or her hands were cold around the mug. It was hard to tell where one ended and the other began. "I came back," she said. "That's got to count for something." "It counts." "Does it?" He was quiet for a long time. The clock behind the bar ticked, a sound she had forgotten, steady and indifferent. Outside, a car passed, its headlights sweeping the window. "Why now?" he asked. "Why tonight?" "Because the flat is still mine, isn't it? The lease—" "The lease is still in your name. I couldn't—" He stopped himself. "I couldn't bring myself to change it. Didn't seem right. Didn't seem final." She nodded. That was the thing about Silas. He never said the word goodbye. He just left doors unlocked and leases unaltered and tea bags in the cupboard, and hoped that the universe would do the rest. "I'm not the same person," she said. "I know." "I'm harder." "I can see that." "I don't need saving anymore." Something flickered across his face — relief, maybe, or its more dangerous cousin, regret. "Good," he said. "That's good." "It doesn't mean I don't—" She stopped. He waited. "It doesn't mean I don't remember." He reached across the bar and took her hand. His fingers were cold, the signet ring pressing into her knuckle. He didn't speak. He didn't need to. Some things, after years and years, you don't say out loud. You just sit with them, in a room full of ghosts and maps and the smell of polish, and let the silence be enough. Outside, the green neon buzzed. Inside, the clock ticked on.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.288
leniency0.575
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1377
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1377
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"eyebrow"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1381
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions5
wordCount861
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.23
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Cardiff1
Silas2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed more pronounced or she was just remembering it wrong"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1381
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences143
matches
0"hoped that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean19.18
std21
cv1.095
sampleLengths
067
110
272
355
417
515
65
764
84
93
1020
114
1268
134
143
156
169
1716
185
1927
206
2143
2216
237
2447
251
262
278
2838
296
305
317
3244
333
3411
352
366
3746
389
3916
404
4156
426
4379
4418
456
462
475
482
4934
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"was, draped"
1"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was just remembering"
82.92% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences143
ratio0.021
matches
0"He looked up, and for a second, his face was the same — those hazel eyes that had watched her spiral and rebuild and spiral again — and then it wasn't."
1"The silence that followed had texture — heavy, a little rough, the sort that presses against your eardrums."
2"Something flickered across his face — relief, maybe, or its more dangerous cousin, regret."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount860
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.029069767441860465
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011627906976744186
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean9.66
std9.31
cv0.964
sampleLengths
018
120
22
327
43
53
64
734
819
919
1020
1115
1216
134
1410
157
1615
173
181
191
202
214
2231
234
249
2514
263
271
283
295
3010
315
324
3318
3419
3522
369
374
383
396
407
412
4214
432
445
4520
467
476
485
4935
36.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.3006993006993007
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
7.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences77
matches
0"She crossed the street."
1"His hair had thinned at"
2"He didn't look up."
3"She took a stool near"
4"he said, not looking up"
5"She almost smiled."
6"He looked up, and for"
7"He set the glass down."
8"She studied the rows of"
9"He poured her tea without"
10"She wrapped her hands around"
11"He shifted his weight off"
12"He gestured at the walls,"
13"He looked at her, the"
14"He nodded, but didn't relax."
15"She took a sip"
16"She watched his hands, the"
17"His jaw tightened."
18"He picked up the cloth"
19"He looked at her."
ratio0.532
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences77
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Rory stood on the opposite"
2"The sign flickered."
3"She crossed the street."
4"The walls were still papered"
5"The long mirror behind the"
6"Silas stood at the far"
7"His hair had thinned at"
8"The limp in his left"
9"He didn't look up."
10"She took a stool near"
11"The wood was cold through"
12"he said, not looking up"
13"She almost smiled."
14"The glass stopped moving."
15"He looked up, and for"
16"Lines around his mouth."
17"A scar through his left"
18"The silver signet ring on"
19"He set the glass down."
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The long mirror behind the bottles reflected a version of the room that looked more forgiving than it was."
1"Silas stood at the far end of the bar, polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better decades."
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, not looking up,"
1"He gestured, the maps, the photographs of ghosts"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.11
leniency0.219
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.027
82.2662%