Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1J87070D7RNR42H66C9TWF

Run Details

Duration:
3m 14s
Cost:
$0.006382
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed out of the mist like crooked teeth biting into the grey sky. Aurora stopped at the invisible line, her breath fogging in air that had grown ten degrees colder in the span of a single step. The Heartstone pendant at her throat pulsed. Not the gentle warmth she had grown used to since the night it appeared beneath her pillow, wrapped in black silk, accompanied by a note she still could not bring herself to read aloud. This was different. The crimson gem flared hot enough to sting, and the silver chain bit into the nape of her neck. "Feel that?" She didn't look at Nyx. She didn't need to. The Shade stood at the edge of her vision, a silhouette of living shadow that bent the failing light around itself. "Feel what, little delivery girl?" Nyx's voice arrived before they did, carried on a wind that smelled of woodsmoke and something sweeter beneath it, something floral and old. "I feel the Veil thinning. I feel the boundary breathing. I feel three centuries of accumulated time pressing against a membrane that has forgotten how to hold." "That," Aurora said. "All of that." The standing stones — seven ancient oaks, their bark silvered by age and the touch of something not entirely of this world — formed a ragged circle in the heart of Richmond Park. Tourists never noticed them. Joggers veered around without slowing. Dogs crossed the line and emerged confused, shaking their heads, tongues lolling as though they had swallowed something unexpected. Only those who knew what to look for could see the path. And even then, only when the light allowed. Nyx drifted forward, their form solidifying as they passed between two of the great oaks. The shadow stretched, thickened, took on the suggestion of shoulders and a long, narrow face. Violet light gathered in the hollows where eyes should have been. "Come," they said. "The Seer is expecting you." Aurora's boots sank into moss that had no business being this green in November. The mist closed behind her, swallowing the distant hum of the city, the orange sodium glow of the streetlamps along the park's edge, the low thrum of traffic on the Richmond Hill. One moment she could hear London breathing. The next, she could hear nothing but the whisper of the wind through the oaks and the soft, arrhythmic pulse of her own heart. The grove opened before her. She had imagined something smaller. Something intimate. A clearing, perhaps, with a crooked cottage and a fence strung with dried herbs. What she saw made her take a step backward, and her heel met Nyx's insubstantial form with a cold that climbed her ankle like frost. The space was impossible. The oaks arched overhead in a cathedral vault, their branches weaving together so tightly that only a green twilight filtered through. Beneath them, a meadow stretched in every direction, carpeted with wildflowers that had no business blooming in unison in the last week of autumn. Bluebells nodded beside late roses beside snowdrops beside a profusion of blooms she could not name, petals the colour of moonlight and the deep bruise-purple of storm clouds. The air tasted of honey and rain. The pendant flared again. Aurora pressed her palm against it through her shirt, feeling the heat bleed into her fingers. "Time," she said. "Someone told me time moves differently here." "It does not move," Nyx corrected, drifting past her. Their form flickered at the edges, shadow-wisps trailing behind them like the train of a courtly gown. "It pools. It thickens. An hour beneath these branches might be a minute on the streets above. Or it might be a day. The grove does not care to be consistent." "Comforting." "It is not meant to be comfortable. It is meant to be old." They walked. The grass was soft enough that Aurora's footsteps made no sound at all, and after a moment she noticed that neither did Nyx's — though that, she suspected, was simply the nature of being made of shadow. The air pressed against her skin with a weight she could not place, a pressure like the moment before a storm breaks, when the barometric reading drops and every hair on your arms stands at attention. Somewhere ahead, she heard water. Not the rush of a river or the drip of a spring, but a low, continuous murmur, like rain falling into a basin. As they drew closer, she caught a flash of silver between the trunks — a stream that moved in the wrong direction, flowing gently uphill, its surface catching the strange green light and throwing it back in rippled patterns across the bark of the nearest oak. "Stay on the path," Nyx murmured, though Aurora could see no path. "There is no path." "There is always a path. You simply cannot see it yet." The wildflowers parted as they passed, though no breeze stirred them. Aurora felt the air shift around her shoulders, a gentle insistence, as though the grove itself was guiding her forward. Once, her foot came down on what felt like solid ground, and the next step sank ankle-deep into something that gave way beneath her with a soft, sucking sigh. She stumbled, caught herself against a trunk, and found the bark warm under her palm — too warm for a November night, warm the way living skin is warm. "Careful," Nyx said. "The boundary is thicker here. The rules are different." "What rules?" "The rules of before and after. Of up and down." The violet light in their eye-sockets flickered with what might have been amusement. "The rules of cause and effect, of truth and falsehood. The Fae are children of an older grammar. They did not learn physics. They invented it." A sound reached them from somewhere deeper in the grove. Aurora's first thought was singing, but the word wasn't right. The voice — if it was a voice — did not move through the air the way sound should. It moved through her. It settled into the bones of her skull and hummed there, resonant, patient, as old as the stones and twice as stubborn. The trees thinned. The meadow widened. And in the centre of the clearing stood a woman. She was tall and slight, her silver hair falling in a single, unbroken sheet to her waist, though the air in the clearing was still. Her eyes were the colour of dried lavender pressed into wax, and when she turned to look at Aurora, the girl felt something in her chest give way, a recognition she could not name. The Seer smiled. It was not a warm smile. It was the smile of someone who had seen the ending of the book before the first page had been written. "You came," Isolde Varga said. Her voice arrived in pieces, each syllable landing separately, as though the words were being placed rather than spoken. "I had begun to wonder if the Veil would hold you back. It almost did. It almost tried." "I don't understand," Aurora said. "No," Isolde agreed. "You don't. Not yet. But you will, child of the in-between place. You will, and soon, and then you will wish you hadn't." She turned and walked toward a low stone at the edge of the clearing, her bare feet leaving no impression on the moss, and Aurora understood at last why Nyx had brought her here. Not for prophecy. Not for the cryptic warnings the Seer was famous for. For something else. Something the pendant knew, something the Veil could feel, something the wildflowers in this impossible place had been quietly preparing for since before she was born. The Heartstone flared once more, brighter than before, bright enough to throw her shadow long across the moss.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1297
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1297
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"comfortable"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"silk"
4"whisper"
5"pulse"
6"flickered"
7"comforting"
8"comfortable"
9"footsteps"
10"weight"
11"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1304
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.49% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1089
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Nyx9
Shade1
Aurora11
Richmond2
Park1
November2
Hill1
London1
Seer2
Varga1
Isolde2
Veil1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Aurora"
4"Seer"
5"Varga"
6"Isolde"
7"Veil"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
3"Hill"
4"London"
globalScore0.995
windowScore1
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared beneath her pillow, wrapped in black silk, accompanied by a note she still could not bring herself to read aloud"
1"felt like solid ground, and the next st"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.767
wordCount1304
matches
0"Not the rush of a river or the drip of a spring, but a low, continuous murmur, like rain falling into a basin"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"noticed that neither"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean36.22
std27.19
cv0.751
sampleLengths
040
163
232
355
46
561
620
741
88
977
105
1146
1284
1320
1410
1557
161
1713
1875
1974
2012
214
2211
2389
2412
252
2649
2765
2816
2959
3030
3142
325
3326
3476
3518
91.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences76
matches
0"being made"
1"been written"
2"being placed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was guiding"
1"was singing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences90
ratio0.056
matches
0"The standing stones — seven ancient oaks, their bark silvered by age and the touch of something not entirely of this world — formed a ragged circle in the heart of Richmond Park."
1"The grass was soft enough that Aurora's footsteps made no sound at all, and after a moment she noticed that neither did Nyx's — though that, she suspected, was simply the nature of being made of shadow."
2"As they drew closer, she caught a flash of silver between the trunks — a stream that moved in the wrong direction, flowing gently uphill, its surface catching the strange green light and throwing it back in rippled patterns across the bark of the nearest oak."
3"She stumbled, caught herself against a trunk, and found the bark warm under her palm — too warm for a November night, warm the way living skin is warm."
4"The voice — if it was a voice — did not move through the air the way sound should."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1086
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03222836095764273
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009208103130755065
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean14.49
std10.74
cv0.741
sampleLengths
016
124
27
334
43
519
67
74
821
928
1027
113
123
1333
144
155
1619
1712
188
1915
2015
2111
223
235
2414
2532
267
2724
285
295
302
3114
3225
334
3421
3524
3628
377
384
3916
403
417
429
4317
4431
451
4613
472
4837
4936
60.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.43333333333333335
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"Only those who knew what"
1"Somewhere ahead, she heard water."
2"Once, her foot came down"
ratio0.044
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences68
matches
0"She didn't look at Nyx"
1"She didn't need to."
2"She had imagined something smaller."
3"Their form flickered at the"
4"She stumbled, caught herself against"
5"It moved through her."
6"It settled into the bones"
7"She was tall and slight,"
8"Her eyes were the colour"
9"It was not a warm"
10"It was the smile of"
11"Her voice arrived in pieces,"
12"She turned and walked toward"
ratio0.191
62.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences68
matches
0"The standing stones loomed out"
1"Aurora stopped at the invisible"
2"The Heartstone pendant at her"
3"This was different."
4"The crimson gem flared hot"
5"She didn't look at Nyx"
6"She didn't need to."
7"The Shade stood at the"
8"Nyx's voice arrived before they"
9"The standing stones — seven"
10"Tourists never noticed them."
11"Joggers veered around without slowing."
12"Dogs crossed the line and"
13"Nyx drifted forward, their form"
14"The shadow stretched, thickened, took"
15"Violet light gathered in the"
16"Aurora's boots sank into moss"
17"The mist closed behind her,"
18"The next, she could hear"
19"The grove opened before her."
ratio0.794
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Aurora stopped at the invisible line, her breath fogging in air that had grown ten degrees colder in the span of a single step."
1"Dogs crossed the line and emerged confused, shaking their heads, tongues lolling as though they had swallowed something unexpected."
2"What she saw made her take a step backward, and her heel met Nyx's insubstantial form with a cold that climbed her ankle like frost."
3"Beneath them, a meadow stretched in every direction, carpeted with wildflowers that had no business blooming in unison in the last week of autumn."
4"As they drew closer, she caught a flash of silver between the trunks — a stream that moved in the wrong direction, flowing gently uphill, its surface catching t…"
5"Aurora felt the air shift around her shoulders, a gentle insistence, as though the grove itself was guiding her forward."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
34.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx corrected (correct)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"Isolde agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.231
82.7152%