Run: 2026-06-01-01KT1JA7EG43SNZMXCRKG7CHK1

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Duration:
18m 4s
Cost:
$0.005152
Provider:
Minimax

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The name hit her like a slap. "Rory." She had one foot on the brass rail of the barstool, mid-motion, when the sound of it stopped her. Not the syllables themselves, which any stranger could speak. The shape of the vowels. The way the second syllable dropped, like a stone into still water. She knew that voice the way she knew the smell of her father's study, pipe tobacco and leather, the way a child learns the architecture of home before she learns the word for it. The bar was nearly empty. A man in a rain-soaked overcoat nursed something amber at the far end. A couple argued softly in the corner, their mouths close, their words invisible. The walls were papered with old maps and black-and-white photographs, faces she did not recognise peering down from a century she had not lived. The green neon of the sign outside bled faintly through the window, casting the room in the colour of deep water. Behind the bar, a man stood with a glass in one hand and a cloth in the other. He was perhaps sixty, though it was the sort of face that had stopped keeping score. Grey-streaked auburn hair, cropped close, a beard to match, trimmed with the kind of precision that suggested he had nothing better to do, or everything better to hide. His left leg held his weight a fraction longer than his right, a small dishonesty the body tells when it has been broken and mended wrong. She had not seen him in eight years. Silas Blackwood. The last time, he had been standing in her father's kitchen in Cardiff, drinking a glass of red and making Brendan laugh. He had no limp then. No grey. He had been a man of measured movements and easy silences, the sort who said little and meant it, and who had, for reasons Rory had never understood, taken an interest in a sharp-mouthed girl of seventeen who wanted to be a barrister like her father. She lowered her foot from the rail. Stood very still. "Silas." He set the glass down. The cloth went over his shoulder. He did not smile, but something in his face rearranged itself, the way a coastline shifts at low tide. Not gone. Different. "You changed your hair." "You changed your face," she said. A breath of something, almost a laugh. He gestured to the stool she had been reaching for. "Sit. I'll pour you something that isn't a question." She sat. She had not meant to. The stool was high, and the leather was cracked in a pattern that looked like the map of somewhere she had never been. He reached for a bottle she did not recognise, poured two fingers, slid the glass across the wood. The whisky caught the green light and held it. "You look," he said, and stopped. Started again. "Older." "You're one to talk." He poured himself a measure. Raised it a fraction. She returned the gesture, and they drank in the kind of silence two people share when they are remembering, simultaneously, the same room from different years. The last time she had seen him, she had been a girl in a school uniform with a half-finished UCAS form on her desk and a world that still believed in her. She had wanted to stand in courtrooms and tear lies apart the way her father did, with his careful hands and his Irish vowels. She had wanted to be someone who found the seams in things and pulled. She was twenty-five now. The uniform was in a landfill outside Reading. The UCAS form had been thrown out the window of a flat in Clapham on a Tuesday in November, the night she left Evan and everything that had come with him, the night she had walked out with the clothes on her back and the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, which she had told the hospital was from a childhood accident, which was a lie she had refined so many times it now felt like a fact. "You're in London," Silas said. It was not a question. "I'm in London." "Working?" "Delivering. Chinese. For a woman called Yu-Fei who thinks sleep is a character flaw." He nodded. He did not ask why. He never had, even when they were younger, even when she had come to his hotel room in Prague with a red dress and a story she was running from. He had simply handed her a coffee, told her the bed was made, and asked if she wanted the window open or shut. He had not tried to fix her. That was the thing she had remembered, all these years later, when she had forgotten the other things. The way the curtains had been the colour of unripe apples. The way the radiator had ticked like a clock that had lost the hour. The way he had sat in the armchair by the door and read a book in a language she did not speak until she had fallen asleep and woken to find him gone, and a plate of bread and cheese on the side table, and a fifty-euro note she had not asked for, and which she had kept in the back of her wallet for years before spending it on a train ticket to Vienna, for reasons she had never fully understood. She had written to him, once. A postcard from the airport. No address on the envelope. She had licked the stamp and dropped it into a blue postbox in a city whose name she could not pronounce, and she had never known if it arrived. "You were different," she said. "Before." "Before when?" "Before the leg. Before the grey." She turned the glass. "Before the bar." He looked at her for a long moment. The kind of look that, in another man, would have been a question. From him, it was an inventory. "Prague," he said. "I know about Prague." "You know a story. I know the floor plan." She did not ask which floor plan. The old rules, the ones he had taught her without ever using the word, said you did not ask a man about the shape of the room where he was broken. You asked him about the weather in the city. You asked him what he was reading. You asked him if he took sugar. She had not known, then, that he was teaching her. She knew now. She knew it the way you know, in your thirties, that the things your parents did that maddened you were the things that kept you alive. "You were in Prague," she said carefully. "In a hotel with green curtains. You had a book in a language I couldn't read. I was nineteen and stupid." "You were not stupid. You were young. They are not the same thing, though they rhyme." "And you were kind. Which surprised me." "Why?" "Because you weren't kind to my father." His mouth did something complicated. "Your father did not require kindness. He required an audience." She laughed, and the sound was so unexpected, so foreign in her own throat, that she stopped. He watched her. He had always watched her the way a man watches a fire he did not start, with respect, and a little fear, and a refusal to look away. "What are you doing here, Rory?" "Drinking your whisky." "In London." "I told you. Delivering Chinese." "No." He set his glass down. "In this bar. Tonight. This stool." She did not have an answer. She had walked in because Eva's flat was being painted and the smell of turpentine had made her think of the curtains in Prague, which had made her think of Silas, which had made her think of a man in a cardigan in a kitchen in Cardiff who had once said, to her father, of her, "She'll either break your heart or break a case, Brendan. I cannot decide which I am hoping for." She had not known, then, that the answer was both. "I don't know," she said, and the words tasted like the lie they were. He let it sit. He poured her another measure without asking. Outside, a car alarm began to wail, then stopped, then began again, the city losing its mind in three-part harmony. "Your father still drinks the red?" "He still drinks the red. He still votes Labour. He still reads The Guardian and leaves the crossword half-finished and says he'll come back to it." "And your mother?" "She still teaches. She still says 'like' every third word. She still believes I am pre-law." "You should call her." "I know." "You won't." "No." He nodded. The radiator behind the bar ticked. The neon outside hummed. The man at the far end of the room stood, left a note on the counter, and disappeared into the wet dark of Soho. The arguing couple in the corner had stopped arguing and started, instead, to hold each other, which Rory chose not to look at, because the sight of two people agreeing to stay was, tonight, an assault. "You live nearby?" he asked. "Above a chip shop in Whitechapel. The landlady leaves prayer cards under my door." "Charming." "Devout." He almost smiled. The nearest his face had come, in eight years, to the expression she remembered from the kitchen in Cardiff, the one he had worn when Brendan had said something unexpectedly good and Silas had not wanted to give him the satisfaction of seeing it land. She turned the glass again. The whisky was low. The green light moved across her knuckles. "Why did you help me?" she asked. "That night. In Prague. You didn't know me." "I knew your father." "That's not an answer." "No," he said. "It isn't." The door opened. A woman came in, mid-forties, dark hair pulled back, a coat that had seen better decades. She did not look at Rory. She looked at Silas, and the look was a key turning in a lock Rory had not known was there. "Silas," the woman said. "We have a problem with the shipment." The air in the room changed. It did not move. It tightened, the way a rope tightens before the knot is tied. Rory felt it in her teeth, in the small bones of her wrist where the scar lived, in the back of her throat where a question had been waiting, for eight years, to be asked. Silas set down his glass. The cloth came off his shoulder. He did not look at the woman. He looked, instead, at Rory, and in his eyes was the look of a man calculating the cost of every door he had ever opened, and the cost of every door he had not. "Excuse me," he said. "A moment." He walked to the back of the bar. The woman followed. The bookshelf at the rear of the room swung open on a hinge that had no business being there, and the two of them stepped through, and the shelf swung shut, and the green neon hummed on, and the radiator ticked, and Rory sat alone in a bar in Soho with a glass of whisky and the slow, sickening certainty that the man she had come in to find was not, and had never been, the man she remembered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.035
92.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1901
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1901
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"calculating"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"measured"
2"silence"
3"calculating"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
70.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences119
filterMatches
0"know"
1"think think think"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen83
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1901
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1600
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Blackwood1
Cardiff3
Brendan2
Rory7
Started1
Irish1
Reading1
Clapham1
Tuesday1
November1
Evan1
Prague2
Vienna1
Eva1
Silas6
Soho2
You3
persons
0"Blackwood"
1"Brendan"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
6"You"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Reading"
2"Clapham"
3"November"
4"Prague"
5"Vienna"
6"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
47.26% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like the map of somewhere she had"
1"felt like a fact"
2"tasted like the lie they were"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1901
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean24.37
std28.87
cv1.185
sampleLengths
07
11
279
376
488
58
62
775
810
91
1033
114
126
1317
149
1557
169
174
1835
1970
2090
2110
223
231
2414
2560
26132
2745
286
292
3013
3127
323
334
349
3561
3639
3728
3816
397
401
417
4215
4348
446
453
462
475
4812
4980
90.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences119
matches
0"were papered"
1"been broken"
2"was cracked"
3"been thrown"
4"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs275
matches
0"was running"
1"was reading"
2"was teaching"
3"was being"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences161
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1612
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.02729528535980149
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.004962779156327543
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean11.81
std14.14
cv1.198
sampleLengths
07
11
219
39
45
512
634
75
813
913
1024
1121
1218
1316
1428
1526
168
172
1822
195
202
2146
227
233
241
255
266
2719
282
291
304
316
327
3310
349
352
365
3723
3818
399
406
412
421
434
445
454
4626
4732
4824
4914
29.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats33
diversityRatio0.2422360248447205
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
2.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences103
matches
0"She had one foot on"
1"She knew that voice the"
2"He was perhaps sixty, though"
3"His left leg held his"
4"She had not seen him"
5"He had no limp then."
6"He had been a man"
7"She lowered her foot from"
8"He set the glass down."
9"He did not smile, but"
10"He gestured to the stool"
11"She had not meant to."
12"He reached for a bottle"
13"he said, and stopped"
14"He poured himself a measure."
15"She returned the gesture, and"
16"She had wanted to stand"
17"She had wanted to be"
18"She was twenty-five now."
19"It was not a question."
ratio0.544
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences103
matches
0"The name hit her like"
1"She had one foot on"
2"The shape of the vowels."
3"The way the second syllable"
4"She knew that voice the"
5"The bar was nearly empty."
6"A man in a rain-soaked"
7"A couple argued softly in"
8"The walls were papered with"
9"The green neon of the"
10"He was perhaps sixty, though"
11"His left leg held his"
12"She had not seen him"
13"The last time, he had"
14"He had no limp then."
15"He had been a man"
16"She lowered her foot from"
17"He set the glass down."
18"The cloth went over his"
19"He did not smile, but"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He had been a man of measured movements and easy silences, the sort who said little and meant it, and who had, for reasons Rory had never understood, taken an i…"
1"The UCAS form had been thrown out the window of a flat in Clapham on a Tuesday in November, the night she left Evan and everything that had come with him, the n…"
2"She knew it the way you know, in your thirties, that the things your parents did that maddened you were the things that kept you alive."
3"A woman came in, mid-forties, dark hair pulled back, a coat that had seen better decades."
4"The bookshelf at the rear of the room swung open on a hinge that had no business being there, and the two of them stepped through, and the shelf swung shut, and…"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, and the words tasted like the lie they were"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.7481%