Run: 2026-06-24-01KVX2GBG5MMD7XJYF0BDYF39W

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.011710
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck the way it always did, and Rory swore under her breath as she wrenched it sideways. She expected Eva on the other side, arms full of takeaway, or maybe Ptolemy making another bid for freedom. The ivory-handled cane came first into view, then the charcoal sleeve, then the face she had spent eleven weeks training herself not to think about. "What the hell are you doing here?" Lucien's mismatched eyes — one amber, one a black so deep it swallowed light — tracked past her shoulder into the flat. "May I come in?" "No." "It's raining." "Then you should have brought an umbrella." She gripped the door's edge. The flat behind her smelled of old paper and the curry house downstairs, a warm, close smell that had become familiar over the four nights she'd been staying here while Eva was in Bristol. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring, and she stepped back just enough to keep the cat from bolting. That was all the opening Lucien needed. He moved past her with the fluid grace that made her teeth ache, folding his cane and tucking it beneath his arm as he crossed the threshold. Water dripped from the shoulders of his suit. His platinum hair, usually so precise, had gone dark at the temples where the rain had found it. He looked human. That was the worst part — he looked human and tired and like someone she might have let in willingly if she hadn't already learned what it cost. "You can't just show up at someone's flat." "Eva's flat. Not yours." He surveyed the chaos of books and scrolls covering every surface, the takeaway containers stacked beside the sofa, the research notes pinned to the walls with coloured tacks. "She keeps the deadbolts, I see." "Three of them. Doesn't answer the question." He turned. This close, she could see the faint shadow beneath his amber eye, the one that passed for sleeplessness on a face that didn't quite manage to be either fully human or fully other. He had a cut along his jaw she didn't recognise. New. It had healed to a thin pink line that stood out against his pale skin. "There's a situation in Southwark. I need someone who can think on her feet." "You need a lot of things. Doesn't mean you get them." Rory crossed her arms. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light from the kitchenette, and she shifted her weight to cover it with her sleeve. "You have contacts. Hundreds of them. Go bother one of them." "I did. They're either dead or compromised." The word landed between them like a stone in water. Rory felt the ripple move through her chest, through the place she had walled off after the last time, after the warehouse in Bermondsey, after she had stood in the rain and watched him walk away without looking back. "Whose funeral?" "Gerald Ashby's. Yesterday. And Marcus Fell this morning." His voice carried no grief, just the clipped precision of someone reading a grocery list. But his hand, the one not holding the cane, had curled into a fist at his side. "The pattern suggests Selene Varga's people are cleaning house." Ptolemy jumped onto the kitchen counter. Rory opened her mouth to shoo him down, then closed it. The cat could sit where he pleased. The flat wasn't hers. "And you think that involves me because?" "Because you were the one who identified Varga's ledger three months ago. Because you're the one who noticed the discrepancy in the summoning records." He paused. "Because you're the one she'll come for next." The air in the flat felt thick. Rory became aware of the rain hitting the window, the muffled clatter of pans from the curry house below, the warm pressure of Ptolemy's gaze from the counter as if the cat understood every word and was waiting for her to do something stupid. "I told you I was done. After Bermondsey. I told you." "You did." "So why are you here?" Lucien set his cane against the wall. The ivory handle gleamed against the peeling wallpaper. He reached into his jacket, and Rory's hand went to the knife she kept in her back pocket — Eva's knife, really, borrowed and not returned, but close enough. He produced a photograph instead, worn at the edges as if it had been carried and unfolded many times. He held it out. She didn't take it. "What is it?" "The warehouse where Ashby died. Look at the wall. The symbol carved into the concrete." Rory looked at the photograph because her eyes couldn't help themselves. The symbol was there, scratched deep into the warehouse wall: a circle bisected by three lines, each ending in a curve. She recognised it. Her stomach dropped through the floor. "That's not possible. I destroyed those records." "You destroyed your copies. Varga kept her own." The rain intensified. Water began to seep through the old window frame, pooling on the sill beside a stack of Eva's research scrolls. Rory grabbed a tea towel and pressed it against the gap, buying herself a few seconds where she didn't have to look at him. "You could have called." "I tried. You changed your number." "Imagine that." "I also tried the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei told me you'd taken a leave of absence." A pause. "She seemed concerned." Rory turned from the window. "You went to my work? To ask about me? After everything?" "I went to your work because you weren't answering any of the channels I still had access to." His jaw tightened. The cut along his jawline stretched. "I didn't come here to argue about methods." "Then why did you come? Really." She stepped closer. Close enough to see the rain still beaded on his eyelashes, the way his amber eye reflected the yellow kitchen light while the black one absorbed it whole. Close enough to smell wet wool and something beneath it, something warm and dark that she had buried her face in once, in a different life, on a night that had started with adrenaline and ended with her back against a wall and his mouth on her throat. He didn't step back. "I came because you're the only person I trust to watch mine." "You lost the right to ask for that when you left me in that warehouse with a broken rib and a debt collector's knife." His expression shifted. The mask slipped, just for a moment, and she saw something raw beneath it — not guilt, because guilt would have been too simple, too clean. Something closer to the expression of a man standing at the edge of a cliff and knowing he would jump. "I didn't leave you. I drew Varga's people away from you. There's a difference." "There's not, Lucien. Not from where I was lying." Ptolemy knocked a scroll off the counter. It hit the linoleum with a soft thud, and neither of them moved to pick it up. Rory pressed her palm flat against the counter. The formica was cool and slightly sticky, and she focused on that sensation — the texture, the temperature — because the alternative was focusing on the half-step between them, the way his breathing had changed, the fact that she could count the drops of water still clinging to his collar if she wanted to. "How long?" "One job. Forty-eight hours. After that, I walk away for good if that's what you want." He reached for the photograph still in his hand, then seemed to think better of it and set it on the counter beside Ptolemy, who sniffed it once and turned away in disdain. "I'm not asking you to forgive me." "Good. Because I haven't." "I'm asking you to survive." The words settled into the room. Rory picked up the photograph. Studied the symbol again, the familiar lines, the implications that unspooled from it like thread from a spool. Three months of work, three months of danger, three months of lying to herself about why she had kept going back to Lucien's side when every rational part of her brain screamed to run. She set the photograph down. Picked up Ptolemy and held him against her chest, the cat's warm weight a buffer between her and the man in the doorway. "If I do this — if — you answer every question I ask. Truthfully. No half-answers. No 'I'll tell you later.' You tell me or I walk." "Agreed." "And you don't leave me behind again. Whatever happens, we move together." Lucien reached for his cane. His fingers wrapped around the ivory handle, and she watched the tension leave his shoulders by degrees, the way a man might exhale after holding his breath underwater. "Together." Rory set Ptolemy on the sofa. The cat circled twice and collapsed into a tabby puddle. She grabbed her jacket from the hook by the door — Eva's spare, too big in the shoulders, but it would do — and checked that the knife was secure in her back pocket. "Forty-eight hours," she said. "Starting now." Lucien opened the door. The rain had softened to a mist that clung to the streetlamps on Brick Lane, turning them into halos. He stepped aside to let her pass, and as she moved through the doorway, his hand brushed her elbow. Brief. Barely there. The kind of touch that meant nothing and everything, that said I know I don't have the right and I'm doing it anyway. She didn't pull away. She didn't lean in. She locked the three deadbolts behind them and walked into the rain.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.18
leniency0.36
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1601
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1601
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"stomach"
3"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
73.17% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"manage to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1612
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1203
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Eva5
Ptolemy8
Bristol1
Lucien6
Bermondsey1
Close2
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Bristol"
1"Bermondsey"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite manage to be either fully human or fully other"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.62
wordCount1612
matches
0"not returned, but close enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"checked that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean26
std23.83
cv0.916
sampleLengths
064
17
226
31
42
571
684
78
838
97
1061
1114
1250
137
1449
152
1649
1728
187
1934
2051
2111
222
235
2463
254
267
2715
2841
297
308
3147
324
336
342
3520
3616
3735
3885
3916
4024
4149
4214
439
4424
4562
462
4756
484
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"been carried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was focusing"
2.34% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences122
ratio0.049
matches
0"Lucien's mismatched eyes — one amber, one a black so deep it swallowed light — tracked past her shoulder into the flat."
1"That was the worst part — he looked human and tired and like someone she might have let in willingly if she hadn't already learned what it cost."
2"He reached into his jacket, and Rory's hand went to the knife she kept in her back pocket — Eva's knife, really, borrowed and not returned, but close enough."
3"The mask slipped, just for a moment, and she saw something raw beneath it — not guilt, because guilt would have been too simple, too clean."
4"The formica was cool and slightly sticky, and she focused on that sensation — the texture, the temperature — because the alternative was focusing on the half-step between them, the way his breathing had changed, the fact that she could count the drops of water still clinging to his collar if she wanted to."
5"She grabbed her jacket from the hook by the door — Eva's spare, too big in the shoulders, but it would do — and checked that the knife was secure in her back pocket."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1196
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03595317725752508
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005852842809364548
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean13.21
std11.31
cv0.856
sampleLengths
020
119
225
37
422
54
61
72
812
934
1018
117
1227
138
1418
153
1628
178
1832
196
207
212
2233
2310
241
2515
2614
2715
2824
2911
307
3110
3239
332
3423
3517
369
376
3811
397
404
417
4226
438
447
4544
4611
472
485
497
53.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3524590163934426
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
70.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences75
matches
0"She expected Eva on the"
1"She gripped the door's edge"
2"He moved past her with"
3"His platinum hair, usually so"
4"He looked human."
5"He surveyed the chaos of"
6"He had a cut along"
7"It had healed to a"
8"His voice carried no grief,"
9"He reached into his jacket,"
10"He produced a photograph instead,"
11"He held it out."
12"She didn't take it."
13"She recognised it."
14"Her stomach dropped through the"
15"His jaw tightened"
16"She stepped closer"
17"He didn't step back."
18"His expression shifted."
19"It hit the linoleum with"
ratio0.373
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences75
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck the"
1"She expected Eva on the"
2"The ivory-handled cane came first"
3"Lucien's mismatched eyes — one"
4"She gripped the door's edge"
5"The flat behind her smelled"
6"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
7"That was all the opening"
8"He moved past her with"
9"Water dripped from the shoulders"
10"His platinum hair, usually so"
11"He looked human."
12"That was the worst part"
13"He surveyed the chaos of"
14"This close, she could see"
15"He had a cut along"
16"It had healed to a"
17"Rory crossed her arms"
18"The crescent scar on her"
19"The word landed between them"
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The flat behind her smelled of old paper and the curry house downstairs, a warm, close smell that had become familiar over the four nights she'd been staying he…"
1"Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring, and she stepped back just enough to keep the cat from bolting."
2"He moved past her with the fluid grace that made her teeth ache, folding his cane and tucking it beneath his arm as he crossed the threshold."
3"This close, she could see the faint shadow beneath his amber eye, the one that passed for sleeplessness on a face that didn't quite manage to be either fully hu…"
4"It had healed to a thin pink line that stood out against his pale skin."
5"Rory became aware of the rain hitting the window, the muffled clatter of pans from the curry house below, the warm pressure of Ptolemy's gaze from the counter a…"
6"Close enough to smell wet wool and something beneath it, something warm and dark that she had buried her face in once, in a different life, on a night that had …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.04
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.9645%