| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.324 | | leniency | 0.649 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1235 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1235 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "depths" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1254 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 927 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.83 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | December | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 17 | | London | 2 | | Isolde | 12 | | Nyx-cold | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Chinese | 1 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Hel" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Chinese" |
| | globalScore | 0.583 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like green velvet" | | 1 | "seemed almost architectural as though the trees had been trained over centuries into living cathedrals" | | 2 | "looked like polished glass" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.987 | | wordCount | 1254 | | matches | | 0 | "not the faint pulse it gave near Hel portals, but something different" | | 1 | "not unstable, but alive, the moss compressing" | | 2 | "not Nyx-cold, not the absence of warmth, but the sharp, clean cold of spring water" | | 3 | "not the absence of warmth, but the sharp, clean cold of spring water" | | 4 | "not on the wind but through the water itself, as though the pool had become a wi" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 29.86 | | std | 24.86 | | cv | 0.833 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 60 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 70 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 91 | | 26 | 56 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 49 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 41 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 57 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant hung warm against her sternum — not the faint pulse it gave near Hel portals, but something different." | | 1 | "Not gradually, not like passing through a doorway — it simply stopped, replaced by air that was warm and heavy with the scent of honeysuckle and wet earth and something older, something mineral and sweet that she couldn't name." | | 2 | "Nyx solidified enough for Aurora to see the tension in their jaw — or the suggestion of a jaw, the hint of features in the dark." | | 3 | "The clouds had dissolved into a wash of colour that couldn't decide if it was dusk or dawn — violet bleeding into gold bleeding into a green so pale it was almost white." | | 4 | "They carpeted the ground in drifts, bluebells and foxgloves and species she didn't recognise — petals spiralling in fractal patterns, stems that bent toward her as she moved." | | 5 | "\"You're welcome.\" Isolde tilted her head, studying Aurora the way a jeweller studies a stone — looking for flaws, inclusions, the angle that would split the light." | | 6 | "The ground shifted beneath Aurora's feet — not unstable, but alive, the moss compressing and rebounding with a softness that felt deliberate." | | 7 | "The sky — that impossible, sourceless sky — reflected perfectly in its surface." | | 8 | "Her touch was cold — not Nyx-cold, not the absence of warmth, but the sharp, clean cold of spring water." | | 9 | "No — not a fox." | | 10 | "The surface rippled — the first disturbance Aurora had seen — and the image clarified into a view of London." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 920 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.02717391304347826 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005434782608695652 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 12.42 | | std | 9.99 | | cv | 0.805 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 75.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4752475247524752 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 49.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Just light, sourceless and diffuse," |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned back." | | 1 | "Their whisper carried on a" | | 2 | "It wasn't London's sky anymore." | | 3 | "They carpeted the ground in" | | 4 | "She hadn't been there a" | | 5 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 6 | "It pulsed once, bright, and" | | 7 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 8 | "They passed through a natural" | | 9 | "Her touch was cold —" | | 10 | "Her vision swam." | | 11 | "She braced a hand against" | | 12 | "She didn't cast a reflection." | | 13 | "It was fox-shaped, but its" | | 14 | "It rubbed against her ankle" | | 15 | "She pulled the Fae blade" | | 16 | "She pressed her hand over" |
| | ratio | 0.254 | |
| 42.09% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Oak roots had wrapped around" | | 2 | "Aurora stopped at the edge" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant hung warm" | | 4 | "A steady, insistent heat, like" | | 5 | "Nyx materialized from the shadow" | | 6 | "Aurora stepped between two of" | | 7 | "The cold vanished." | | 8 | "She turned back." | | 9 | "Nyx hadn't followed." | | 10 | "Their whisper carried on a" | | 11 | "The shadow stretched toward the" | | 12 | "Nyx solidified enough for Aurora" | | 13 | "Aurora nodded and turned back" | | 14 | "The first thing she noticed" | | 15 | "It wasn't London's sky anymore." | | 16 | "The clouds had dissolved into" | | 17 | "The second thing she noticed" | | 18 | "They carpeted the ground in" | | 19 | "Aurora's hand froze an inch" |
| | ratio | 0.836 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Not gradually, not like passing through a doorway — it simply stopped, replaced by air that was warm and heavy with the scent of honeysuckle and wet earth and s…" | | 1 | "The clouds had dissolved into a wash of colour that couldn't decide if it was dusk or dawn — violet bleeding into gold bleeding into a green so pale it was almo…" | | 2 | "Her pale lavender eyes held Aurora's with an expression that was equal parts amusement and warning." | | 3 | "The ground shifted beneath Aurora's feet — not unstable, but alive, the moss compressing and rebounding with a softness that felt deliberate." | | 4 | "Ancient oaks arched overhead, their branches twisted into shapes that seemed almost architectural, as though the trees had been trained over centuries into livi…" | | 5 | "Vines hung between them, threaded with bioluminescent fungi that cast the canopy in a soft blue-green glow." | | 6 | "They passed through a natural arch formed by two oaks that had grown together, their trunks fused into a single living column." | | 7 | "She pressed her hand over it and felt the gemstone's pulse sync with her heartbeat, a double rhythm that made her teeth ache." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.054 | | leniency | 0.108 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |