| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde turned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.514 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 93.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1483 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.17% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1483 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "electric" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "cascading" | | 8 | "intensity" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "crystal" | | 12 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 53 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1495 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1159 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.55 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 18 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Shade | 2 | | Nyx | 6 | | December | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Clenched | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 0.723 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "something between wood and rock, their surfaces" | | 1 | "body that seemed to forget its own edges" | | 2 | "smelled like growing things even in the de" | | 3 | "not quite human" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.676 | | wordCount | 1495 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the hard-packed earth of Richmond Park but something looser, richer, the kind of soil" | | 1 | "Neither fully Earth nor" | | 2 | "not cold but temperate, like a spring evening held permanently in amber" | | 3 | "neither kind nor" |
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| 74.07% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "routes that cut" | | 1 | "see that the" | | 2 | "noticed that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 42.71 | | std | 25.87 | | cv | 0.606 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 81 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 73 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 87 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 79 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 76 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 88 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 64 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 74 | | 34 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "were waiting" | | 1 | "were deepening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd walked Richmond Park a hundred times, maybe more — delivery routes that cut through the green on quiet afternoons, jogs on mornings when the flat above Silas' bar felt too small." | | 1 | "The air around them tasted different — green and electric, like the moment before a storm, though the sky above London was clear and grey and ordinary." | | 2 | "\"Because we are close.\" Nyx tilted their head — a gesture that was becoming familiar, that small avian motion." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in waves of colour — bluebells and foxgloves and flowers she couldn't name, species that didn't exist in any book she'd ever seen, their petals iridescent, catching light from a source she couldn't identify." | | 4 | "Nyx materialised beside her — not walked, not stepped, simply was there, their shadow-form drinking in the strange twilight and seeming to grow more solid, more defined." | | 5 | "She touched the small crescent scar on her left wrist without thinking — an old habit, a self-soothing gesture she'd never been able to break." | | 6 | "Rory followed the gesture and saw it — a pool of perfectly still water at the grove's heart, ringed by more of the bone-white stones." | | 7 | "The Shade had gone very still — as still as shadow could be, which was profoundly still, their violet eyes fixed on Isolde with something that might have been recognition." | | 8 | "She gestured, and the water rippled without being touched, colours blooming in its depths — amber and gold, the warm tones of a sky that wasn't this one." | | 9 | "\"Few who carry keys ever do.\" Isolde turned back to the pool, where the colours were deepening, forming shapes — towers of crystal and vine, tables groaning under impossible feasts, figures moving through amber light with the jerky grace of something not quite human." | | 10 | "Rory stood in the violet twilight of an impossible place, a burning stone against her heart and a shadow at her shoulder, and understood — with the cold certainty that had always set her apart — that the life she'd built in London, the small quiet life of deliveries and dodging memories, was already over." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 299 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.023411371237458192 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006688963210702341 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 13.84 | | std | 11.47 | | cv | 0.829 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 61.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.42592592592592593 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 43.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the Half-Fae woman looked" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 84.94% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd walked Richmond Park a" | | 1 | "She knew these paths." | | 2 | "They stood in a loose" | | 3 | "Their voice arrived like wind" | | 4 | "They hadn't crossed the boundary" | | 5 | "They were waiting." | | 6 | "She crouched and touched the" | | 7 | "She stood and brushed her" | | 8 | "She stepped between two of" | | 9 | "It wasn't gradual." | | 10 | "It was the deep violet" | | 11 | "Their bark was pale as" | | 12 | "She gasped and pressed her" | | 13 | "She touched the small crescent" | | 14 | "She'd imagined someone old, hunched," | | 15 | "She wore a simple dress" | | 16 | "She didn't stand." | | 17 | "She simply spoke." | | 18 | "Her head tilted" | | 19 | "Her voice sounded too loud" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 57.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones were older" | | 1 | "She'd walked Richmond Park a" | | 2 | "She knew these paths." | | 3 | "They stood in a loose" | | 4 | "The air around them tasted" | | 5 | "Rory's hand drifted to her" | | 6 | "A heartbeat that wasn't hers." | | 7 | "Their voice arrived like wind" | | 8 | "The Shade stood at the" | | 9 | "They hadn't crossed the boundary" | | 10 | "They were waiting." | | 11 | "Nyx tilted their head —" | | 12 | "Rory studied the stones." | | 13 | "She crouched and touched the" | | 14 | "She stood and brushed her" | | 15 | "She stepped between two of" | | 16 | "It wasn't gradual." | | 17 | "The next, she was somewhere" | | 18 | "The grove opened before her" | | 19 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" |
| | ratio | 0.805 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "As though the Seer floated" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade stood at the edge of the stones, their humanoid form a column of living darkness against the grey afternoon, those faintly glowing violet eyes the onl…" | | 1 | "Not the hard-packed earth of Richmond Park but something looser, richer, the kind of soil that smelled like growing things even in the dead season." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in waves of colour — bluebells and foxgloves and flowers she couldn't name, species that didn't exist in any book she'd ever see…" | | 3 | "It was the deep violet of twilight, though no sun or moon hung in it, and stars she didn't recognise burned in constellations that made her eyes water if she lo…" | | 4 | "And beside it, sitting on a flat rock as though she'd been waiting for centuries, a woman." | | 5 | "Instead, the Half-Fae woman looked no older than thirty, her silver hair cascading to her waist like poured mercury, her pale lavender eyes fixed on Rory with a…" | | 6 | "The Shade had gone very still — as still as shadow could be, which was profoundly still, their violet eyes fixed on Isolde with something that might have been r…" | | 7 | "She gestured, and the water rippled without being touched, colours blooming in its depths — amber and gold, the warm tones of a sky that wasn't this one." | | 8 | "Rory stood in the violet twilight of an impossible place, a burning stone against her heart and a shadow at her shoulder, and understood — with the cold certain…" |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, and the word skated across Rory's skin like cold water" | | 1 | "Isolde's voice carried, each word placed with deliberate weight" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |