| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.44% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1405 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1405 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 129 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 68 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1421 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Come alone. Midnight. The Grove will open for the Heartstone's bearer." | | 1 | "Malphora." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1357 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Three" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | August | 1 | | January | 1 | | London | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Three | 2 | | Rory | 9 | | Aurora | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "August" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Whitechapel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 73.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed feeble against the darkness pressing in from the treeline — if you could call it a treeline" | | 1 | "felt like a hand reaching through all t" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.111 | | wordCount | 1421 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the orange-grey wash of London's light pollution but a deep, depthless black pricked with stars she had never see" | | 1 | "Not the gentle warmth of before but a sharp heat" | | 2 | "not a sound but a knowing" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 30.89 | | std | 26.82 | | cv | 0.868 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 97 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 53 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 49 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 68 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 117 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 45 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 74 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 19 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "being followed" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "was breathing" | | 1 | "was looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 129 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory counted them as she passed — seven oaks, ancient and gnarled, their bark stripped pale in places where centuries of wind had scoured them smooth." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground — white and violet and gold — though it was January and frost should have killed anything this delicate." | | 2 | "The screen's glow seemed feeble against the darkness pressing in from the treeline — if you could call it a treeline." | | 3 | "It was the silence of a full one — the held breath before something speaks." | | 4 | "Three months since the pendant appeared on her doorstep in a box with no return address, three months since it started glowing at odd hours and burning her skin when she walked past certain places in the city — the cellar of the British Museum, a chip shop in Whitechapel, an unmarked door in the basement of Silas' bar that she'd always assumed led to a boiler room." | | 5 | "She reached the center of the clearing where the flowers formed a circle — a perfect ring perhaps ten feet across, the ground inside it bare and dark." | | 6 | "A shape — tall, thin, gone when she turned her head." | | 7 | "She whipped her head around and caught it — a silhouette, humanoid, too tall, standing just inside the edge where flowers met dark." | | 8 | "And in that rhythm, Rory became aware of another pulse beneath it — a vibration she felt through the soles of her boots, through the bones of her feet, climbing her legs." | | 9 | "High above her, impossibly far and impossibly close, something opened a single eye the color of old bruises — yellow and violet and ringed with red — and looked down at her." | | 10 | "Not a wind, not a sound from the treeline — the flowers themselves, every bloom in the clearing, opened their petals and from each one came a thin high keening that harmonized into a single note that hit Rory's chest like a physical blow." | | 11 | "Her shadow stretched long across the bare circle — and behind it, a second shadow." | | 12 | "The screen lit up — 12:03 AM." | | 13 | "And then, from every direction at once, from the sky and the earth and the dark and the space behind the dark, came a sound that was not a sound but a knowing — the clear and certain understanding that whatever had called her here had not done so to give answers." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 369 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.018970189701897018 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005420054200542005 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 129 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 129 | | mean | 11.02 | | std | 12.4 | | cv | 1.126 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 68 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 48.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3643410852713178 | | totalSentences | 129 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 33.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Just wildflowers and the absolute" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She touched the pendant at" | | 1 | "She stepped through." | | 2 | "Her voice fell flat." | | 3 | "It was the silence of" | | 4 | "She had come because the" | | 5 | "Her footsteps made no sound" | | 6 | "She reached the center of" | | 7 | "She stopped at its edge." | | 8 | "Her pulse kicked against her" | | 9 | "She turned in a slow" | | 10 | "Her breath misted in front" | | 11 | "It glowed brighter, the crimson" | | 12 | "She whipped her head around" | | 13 | "It had no features she" | | 14 | "Her mother used to tell" | | 15 | "She had always thought it" | | 16 | "She spoke to herself, keeping" | | 17 | "She looked up." | | 18 | "She tracked it as it" | | 19 | "It wasn't a star." |
| | ratio | 0.27 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory counted them as she" | | 2 | "The trail from Richmond Park's" | | 3 | "The Grove will open for" | | 4 | "She touched the pendant at" | | 5 | "The crimson gem pulsed once" | | 6 | "She stepped through." | | 7 | "The clearing opened around her." | | 8 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground —" | | 9 | "The sky above was wrong." | | 10 | "The air tasted of green" | | 11 | "Rory checked her phone." | | 12 | "The screen's glow seemed feeble" | | 13 | "The clearing had no visible" | | 14 | "The wildflowers simply ended and" | | 15 | "Her voice fell flat." | | 16 | "The silence that followed wasn't" | | 17 | "It was the silence of" | | 18 | "She had come because the" | | 19 | "The note had felt like" |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in this clearing" | | 1 | "To the left, where the" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The trail from Richmond Park's main path had been easy enough to find, exactly where the note said it would be: folded into a cleft of the seventh stone, writte…" | | 1 | "Not the orange-grey wash of London's light pollution but a deep, depthless black pricked with stars she had never seen, stars that formed no constellation she r…" | | 2 | "Her breath misted in front of her face, a small cloud that lingered too long before dissolving." | | 3 | "It glowed brighter, the crimson light spilling between her fingers, painting her hand red." | | 4 | "All of them at once, a ripple that started at the far edge of the clearing and moved inward toward the bare circle, as if something vast had exhaled across the …" | | 5 | "Not a wind, not a sound from the treeline — the flowers themselves, every bloom in the clearing, opened their petals and from each one came a thin high keening …" | | 6 | "The pendant flared white-hot against her skin and she smelled her own flesh scorching but couldn't bring herself to let go of it because the gem was the only li…" | | 7 | "Wrong in its proportions, the arms too long, the head too narrow, the body bent at angles that vertebrae didn't allow." | | 8 | "At the long fingers that spread from the shadow's hand, reaching past her own shadow's shoulder, reaching toward the shadow of the pendant at her throat." | | 9 | "And then, from every direction at once, from the sky and the earth and the dark and the space behind the dark, came a sound that was not a sound but a knowing —…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |