| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx's whisper scattered like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.304 | | leniency | 0.609 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 92.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1413 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1413 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "dance" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "crystalline" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "carried the weight" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "structure" | | 11 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1429 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Ripples spread outward, but instead of distorting the reflection, they revealed something else — images, layered and shi…" |
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| 98.29% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1257 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.03 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Rory | 13 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Moss | 1 | | London | 4 | | Isolde | 8 | | Nyx | 6 | | Shade | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 7 | | Recognition | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Ripples | 1 | | Aldric | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Moss" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.983 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 51.32% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking through a curtain of" | | 1 | "glyphs that seemed to rearrange themselves when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 2 | "looked like roots radiating outward from" |
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| 60.04% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.4 | | wordCount | 1429 | | matches | | 0 | "not London's grey overcast but a deep, crystalline blue scattered with stars, even though i" | | 1 | "not the faint pulse she'd grown used to but a steady, deep crimson radiance" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "offered that kind" | | 1 | "reflected that alien" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 31.76 | | std | 24.3 | | cv | 0.765 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 80 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 79 | | 22 | 77 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 57 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 67 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 61 | | 32 | 70 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 45 | | 38 | 52 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 47 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | |
| 55.07% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "weren't triggering" | | 2 | "was glowing" | | 3 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.134 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm flat against it through the fabric of her jacket, feeling that deep crimson pulse — slow, steady, insistent, like a second heartbeat synced to something on the other side of the air itself." | | 1 | "She saw nothing but more parkland beyond — the skeletal shapes of winter trees, a distant bench, the orange smear of London's light pollution against the clouds." | | 2 | "Not violently — slowly, a shimmer that built from the edges inward, a distortion that made the parkland beyond waver and dissolve the way heat haze dissolved a horizon." | | 3 | "The crossing felt like walking through a curtain of warm water — pressure on every inch of her skin, a brief moment where sound vanished entirely and her ears filled with a low, resonant hum that vibrated in her molars." | | 4 | "Not London summer — not petrol and concrete and the stale exhale of eight million people." | | 5 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in every direction — species she recognized and species she didn't." | | 6 | "Richmond Park was behind her, through the archway that now shimmered like a soap film — still visible, still there, but already feeling distant." | | 7 | "The canopy above was dense enough to block most of the sky, but what sky she could see through the gaps was wrong — not London's grey overcast but a deep, crystalline blue scattered with stars, even though it had been nearly dawn on the other side." | | 8 | "\"The between-realm reflects what it wishes.\" Nyx's whisper carried a strange note — longing, perhaps." | | 9 | "Something small and winged darted past her ear — not an insect, not a bird." | | 10 | "The water was so clear she could see the bottom — smooth stones, pale sand, and something that looked like roots radiating outward from the spring's center in concentric circles, pulsing with a faint green-gold light." | | 11 | "Ripples spread outward, but instead of distorting the reflection, they revealed something else — images, layered and shifting." | | 12 | "The Heartstone was glowing now — not the faint pulse she'd grown used to but a steady, deep crimson radiance that threw red light across her hands and the stones beneath her." | | 13 | "Their shadow-form rippled, and for a moment Rory saw something beneath the surface of their silhouette — a hint of bone, of human structure, of the sorcerer named Aldric who had been lost between realms nearly four hundred years ago." | | 14 | "She wrapped her fingers around the pendant, feeling its heat against her palm, and watched the wildflowers turn their faces toward her — all of them, simultaneously, like a field of tiny observers." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 412 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slow, steady, insistent, like" |
| | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.03155339805825243 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007281553398058253 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 12.76 | | std | 9.62 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 57.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.4107142857142857 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she reached up and" | | 1 | "Then the world assembled itself" | | 2 | "Then she looked down at" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 1 | "They had solidified enough to" | | 2 | "Their shadow-form rippled where it" | | 3 | "Her silver hair caught nothing" | | 4 | "She moved with the certainty" | | 5 | "She probably had." | | 6 | "She saw nothing but more" | | 7 | "She bit back the retort" | | 8 | "She looked at Nyx." | | 9 | "She stepped forward before she" | | 10 | "Her vision whited out." | | 11 | "They were ancient, these stones," | | 12 | "Their bark was silver-white, their" | | 13 | "They stared upward." | | 14 | "She wasn't sure she wanted" | | 15 | "It hovered near her face" | | 16 | "She reached the pool and" | | 17 | "Their shadow-form rippled, and for" | | 18 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 19 | "She looked back at the" |
| | ratio | 0.242 | |
| 3.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant burned against" | | 1 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 2 | "The Fae-Forged Blade hung cold" | | 3 | "Nyx's whisper scattered like leaves" | | 4 | "They had solidified enough to" | | 5 | "Their shadow-form rippled where it" | | 6 | "Isolde walked ahead, leaving no" | | 7 | "Her silver hair caught nothing" | | 8 | "She moved with the certainty" | | 9 | "She probably had." | | 10 | "Isolde stopped between two ancient" | | 11 | "Moss climbed the bark in" | | 12 | "Rory stared at the gap" | | 13 | "She saw nothing but more" | | 14 | "She bit back the retort" | | 15 | "The pendant flared." | | 16 | "The air between the oaks" | | 17 | "Colors Rory had no names" | | 18 | "The temperature shifted." | | 19 | "Isolde said, and stepped through" |
| | ratio | 0.912 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Her silver hair caught nothing of the light and yet seemed to glow anyway, as though the strands carried their own faint luminescence." | | 1 | "Not violently — slowly, a shimmer that built from the edges inward, a distortion that made the parkland beyond waver and dissolve the way heat haze dissolved a …" | | 2 | "The Shade tilted their head, a gesture that was almost human in its uncertainty." | | 3 | "The crossing felt like walking through a curtain of warm water — pressure on every inch of her skin, a brief moment where sound vanished entirely and her ears f…" | | 4 | "Something tall and violet with petals that spiraled like galaxies, each one rotating on its axis in a slow, hypnotic dance." | | 5 | "They were ancient, these stones, worn smooth by time, their surfaces carved with spirals and glyphs that seemed to rearrange themselves when she wasn't looking …" | | 6 | "The shadows that composed them moved with greater definition, sharper at the edges, and their violet eyes burned brighter." | | 7 | "The water was so clear she could see the bottom — smooth stones, pale sand, and something that looked like roots radiating outward from the spring's center in c…" | | 8 | "Tables groaning under the weight of food that looked beautiful and obscene in equal measure." | | 9 | "The Heartstone was glowing now — not the faint pulse she'd grown used to but a steady, deep crimson radiance that threw red light across her hands and the stone…" | | 10 | "Their shadow-form rippled, and for a moment Rory saw something beneath the surface of their silhouette — a hint of bone, of human structure, of the sorcerer nam…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx's whisper carried, perhaps" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, and the word carried the weight of memory" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.087 | | leniency | 0.174 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |