| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1291 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "lazily" | | 2 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1291 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "charged" | | 8 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 135 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 137 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1302 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "Come to the grove. Midnight. Bring the stone. Answers wait where the oaks stand." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1284 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.55 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 7 | | November | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Friday | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | London | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "November" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 80.56% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed fixed as though someone had painted them on the ground" | | 1 | "Something between a hum and a word, repeating," |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.768 | | wordCount | 1302 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 28.93 | | std | 25.75 | | cv | 0.89 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 75 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 61 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 74 | | 34 | 55 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 85 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 73 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 71 | | 44 | 6 |
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| 97.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "was flattened" | | 1 | "being lowered" | | 2 | "were arranged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 215 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "weren't falling " |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 137 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park had been quiet on the walk in — too quiet for a Friday night, even in winter." | | 1 | "Not colder — different." | | 2 | "A sound reached her — faint, rhythmic." | | 3 | "The air at her back had changed — grown heavier, denser, charged with something that made the fine hairs on her neck stand rigid." | | 4 | "But the ground where the presence had been was flattened, the grass pressed down in the shape of footprints — long, narrow, with too many toes." | | 5 | "They fell in a spiral, lazily, catching the moonlight, and she realised they weren't falling — they were being lowered." | | 6 | "A gap had opened in the canopy, roughly circular, and through it she could see the sky — except it wasn't the sky." | | 7 | "They weren't scattered; they were arranged, forming a pattern she almost recognised, a constellation that pulsed in time with the stone against her chest." | | 8 | "Not awareness — recognition." | | 9 | "The note, the dried wildflower, the pull she'd felt all evening that she'd mistaken for curiosity — none of it had been an invitation." | | 10 | "The stars disappeared one by one, and as the last sliver of sky vanished, a sound filled the grove — low, resonant, felt more than heard." | | 11 | "And from every direction, from the spaces between the trees and the gaps in the roots and the shadows pooling at the grove's edge, she heard it — the sound of breathing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 179 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.0335195530726257 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 137 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 137 | | mean | 9.5 | | std | 7.85 | | cv | 0.826 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 42.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.34306569343065696 | | totalSentences | 137 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the crunch of frost" | | 1 | "Just a sprig of dried" | | 2 | "Of course it had." | | 3 | "Even the shadows cast by" | | 4 | "Just the oaks, their bark" | | 5 | "Then the flowers moved." | | 6 | "Just wildflowers, straightening slowly back" | | 7 | "Just oak trees and moonlight" | | 8 | "Deliberately placed in the air" |
| | ratio | 0.076 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 1 | "She touched the pendant through" | | 2 | "She should have thrown it" | | 3 | "She should have stayed in" | | 4 | "She was alone." | | 5 | "She didn't expect an answer." | | 6 | "She didn't get one." | | 7 | "Her phone read 11:58." | | 8 | "She checked it twice, then" | | 9 | "She walked further in." | | 10 | "She snapped her head to" | | 11 | "She held her breath." | | 12 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 13 | "She became aware of her" | | 14 | "She didn't turn." | | 15 | "She could feel a presence" | | 16 | "Her body resisted, muscles locking," | | 17 | "She turned anyway, because she" | | 18 | "She tracked it with her" | | 19 | "They fell in a spiral," |
| | ratio | 0.227 | |
| 90.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "Richmond Park had been quiet" | | 3 | "She touched the pendant through" | | 4 | "The crimson gem pulsed once," | | 5 | "The message had been simple." | | 6 | "A folded note tucked into" | | 7 | "Answers wait where the oaks" | | 8 | "She should have thrown it" | | 9 | "She should have stayed in" | | 10 | "That's what a sensible person" | | 11 | "Aurora stepped between the stones." | | 12 | "The temperature shifted." | | 13 | "The biting London winter softened" | | 14 | "The clearing beyond the stones" | | 15 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 16 | "The moon hung lower than" | | 17 | "She was alone." | | 18 | "The word fell flat, swallowed" | | 19 | "She didn't expect an answer." |
| | ratio | 0.739 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 36.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in defiance of the season, their pale petals luminous under a sky that held too many stars." | | 1 | "The grass was soft and warm underfoot, almost spongy, and the wildflowers brushed against her ankles with a familiarity that made her skin prickle." | | 2 | "The wildflowers near the northern tree line bent inward, one by one, as though something unseen was walking through them." | | 3 | "The air at her back had changed — grown heavier, denser, charged with something that made the fine hairs on her neck stand rigid." | | 4 | "She tracked it with her eyes, watching the branches shudder and sway, watching something she couldn't see push through the canopy overhead." | | 5 | "She released the pendant and it hung there against her chest, glowing a deep arterial red, the light pulsing faster now." | | 6 | "Something between a hum and a word, repeating, looping, a single syllable spoken in a register that made her teeth ache." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |