| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.381 | | leniency | 0.762 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "shattered" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 114 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1334 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.13% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1150 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Veil | 2 | | December | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Fae | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.891 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "indigo that seemed to swallow light rather than reflect it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.75 | | wordCount | 1334 | | matches | | 0 | "not depressions but impressions, lighter than the surrounding growth, as though" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 31.02 | | std | 23.59 | | cv | 0.761 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 71 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 62 | | 29 | 58 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 65 | | 32 | 75 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 51 | | 38 | 45 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 15 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "were trampled" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "been laid" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "She could see it now — a shimmering distortion in the air between two of the largest stones, like heat rising off tarmac in summer." | | 1 | "Not violently — nothing tore or shattered." | | 2 | "Bluebells and foxgloves and blooms she couldn't name — petals in colours that didn't exist under any sun she'd ever seen, spiralling shades of violet and gold and a deep indigo that seemed to swallow light rather than reflect it." | | 3 | "They extended one hand — barely a hand, more the suggestion of one — and let a flower stem pass through their fingers." | | 4 | "The wildflowers gave way to moss — silver-green moss that carpeted stones arranged in spirals across the clearing floor." | | 5 | "She straightened, rubbing her wrist — the crescent scar there, old and familiar, a grounding touch." | | 6 | "Just — present." | | 7 | "And underneath the silence — beneath it, not within it — she heard it." | | 8 | "Not in the way forests were alive — not the aggregate life of roots and mycelium and insects." | | 9 | "The water reflected a sky that didn't match the one above — this reflection showed stars, thousands of them, burning in a velvet darkness that the grove's milk-white sky didn't contain." | | 10 | "Bare marks in the moss — not depressions but impressions, lighter than the surrounding growth, as though something had brushed past without weight." | | 11 | "Then the air between two ancient oaks shimmered — not like the Veil, not like heat — and a woman stepped out of nothing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1141 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.021910604732690624 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0043821209465381246 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 10.5 | | std | 8.63 | | cv | 0.822 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 56.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3937007874015748 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a diffuse glow, sourceless" | | 1 | "Just — present." | | 2 | "Then it was gone, and" | | 3 | "Then the air between two" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She could see it now" | | 1 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 2 | "They grew thick and tangled," | | 3 | "she said, and the words" | | 4 | "They extended one hand —" | | 5 | "It didn't bend." | | 6 | "It hummed beneath her fingertips," | | 7 | "She straightened, rubbing her wrist" | | 8 | "She saw it now, the" | | 9 | "Their leaves were silver on" | | 10 | "She caught it once, maybe." | | 11 | "Her voice didn't carry the" | | 12 | "Their form rippled." | | 13 | "She pressed forward." | | 14 | "They circled the pool, crossed" | | 15 | "She lowered the blade but" | | 16 | "She walked across the moss" | | 17 | "It was the smile of" |
| | ratio | 0.189 | |
| 75.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones rose" | | 1 | "Rory stopped at the threshold," | | 2 | "The Veil here was thin." | | 3 | "She could see it now" | | 4 | "Nyx's whisper carried past her" | | 5 | "Rory touched the Fae blade" | | 6 | "The moonsilver drank what little" | | 7 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 8 | "The world folded." | | 9 | "The next, that sound vanished," | | 10 | "The air here tasted of" | | 11 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 12 | "Bluebells and foxgloves and blooms" | | 13 | "They grew thick and tangled," | | 14 | "None of them were trampled." | | 15 | "None of them bore frost." | | 16 | "she said, and the words" | | 17 | "Nyx materialised beside her, their" | | 18 | "They extended one hand —" | | 19 | "It didn't bend." |
| | ratio | 0.768 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 6.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Bluebells and foxgloves and blooms she couldn't name — petals in colours that didn't exist under any sun she'd ever seen, spiralling shades of violet and gold a…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers gave way to moss — silver-green moss that carpeted stones arranged in spirals across the clearing floor." | | 2 | "It hummed beneath her fingertips, a vibration that traveled up her arm and settled in her chest." | | 3 | "A weight in the air at the edge of her vision that vanished when she turned her head." | | 4 | "The pendant's warmth stabilized into something bearable, a low heat that matched her own body temperature." | | 5 | "The water reflected a sky that didn't match the one above — this reflection showed stars, thousands of them, burning in a velvet darkness that the grove's milk-…" | | 6 | "Bare marks in the moss — not depressions but impressions, lighter than the surrounding growth, as though something had brushed past without weight." | | 7 | "The moonsilver caught that sourceless light and blazed, a cold white fire that cast shadows in directions that made no sense." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, and the words sounded foolish the moment they left her mouth" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |