Run: 2026-06-24-01KVX31YNW9HQYRK4Y6WCZPQBZ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.012638
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, as it always did, and Rory cursed under her breath as she wrestled it open. She expected Eva on the other side, back from the corner shop with milk and those awful ginger biscuits she loved. She expected Ptolemy to make his usual break for the hallway. She did not expect Lucien Moreau. He stood in the narrow stairwell, collar turned up against the November damp, his ivory-handled cane hooked over one arm. Rain had darkened the shoulders of his charcoal suit. One amber eye caught the light from the flat. The other — the black one — swallowed it whole. "Rory." Her hand tightened on the door frame. The crescent scar on her left wrist prickled, a phantom ache she hadn't felt in months. Behind her, Ptolemy arched his back and hissed at the intruder, which felt appropriate. "You have thirty seconds before I close this door." "I need your help." "No." She started pushing the door shut. His cane shot out, the ivory handle catching the edge of the wood with a precision that bordered on surgical. "It concerns the Empress." Her jaw tightened. Yu-Fei had been good to her. Better than good — the woman had given her a job when no one else would touch a stranger with no references and a face that flinched at loud voices. Rory's hand stalled on the door. "Yu-Fei can call me herself." "She can't. That's rather the point." Lucien's voice dropped, losing its usual theatrical polish. The mask slipped, just a fraction. "She's missing." The words hung between them like smoke. Rory studied his face — the sharp jaw, the platinum hair plastered to his temples by the drizzle, the way his mouth had pressed into a line that had nothing to do with his usual sardonic drawl. He looked tired. She'd never seen him look tired before. Ptolemy had stopped hissing and was now winding between her ankles, apparently having decided the visitor was tolerable. Traitor. She stepped back and let the door swing open. Lucien crossed the threshold like a man entering a minefield, his gaze sweeping the cramped flat — the books stacked on every surface, the scrolls pinned to the walls with thumbtacks, the research notes spread across Eva's tiny kitchen table in a cascade of highlighters and tea rings. He took it all in without comment. His nostrils flared once, and Rory knew he was cataloguing scents. Demon blood did that. Half-demon blood, anyway. Enough to be useful, enough to be dangerous. "Sit down. Don't touch anything." She pulled out the kitchen chair across from the table and dropped into it, folding her arms. Lucien remained standing, which irritated her more than it should have. He rested both hands on the handle of his cane, the concealed blade within it catching a dull gleam through the seams. "When?" "Forty-eight hours. She was meant to deliver something for me. A document. She never arrived at the drop point." "And you waited two days to come here?" "I waited two days to find you." His mismatched eyes locked onto hers. "You've moved. The flat above Silas' bar — you haven't been there in a week." The observation landed like a slap. She kept her expression flat, but heat crept up the back of her neck. So he'd been looking for her. Had come to her place first. Had noted her absence like a man checking a box on a list, or like a man who'd spent sleepless nights pacing a floor he wouldn't admit to pacing. "I'm house-sitting." "For how long?" "That's not why you're here." A muscle in his jaw flexed. He reached inside his jacket and produced a folded sheet of paper, which he laid on the table between them. Rory didn't touch it. She read the symbols inked across its surface — angular, dense, written in a script she recognized from Eva's research but couldn't translate. Old magic. The kind that left marks. "What is it?" "A contract. Yu-Fei agreed to courier it because the sender trusted her. The sender is now dead, and the contract is the only evidence of what was agreed upon." "And whoever killed the sender wants it back." "Three of my contacts have been compromised in the last two days. Two are dead. One is missing. The pattern suggests someone is tracing the document's path through the city." He paused. "You were the last person to see Yu-Fei before she left the restaurant." The implication settled over the room like frost. Rory unfolded her arms and leaned forward, elbows on the table. Her heart had picked up its pace, a steady drum against her ribs, but her voice came out level. "Are you asking if I did something, or telling me I did?" "I'm asking if you noticed anything." She had. That was the problem. Tuesday evening — three days ago now — she'd dropped off the last delivery of the night and found Yu-Fei in the kitchen, staring at a sealed envelope with an expression the older woman had never worn before. Fear. Rory had asked about it. Yu-Fei had tucked the envelope into her coat and waved her off with a joke about late-night dumplings and early-morning regrets. Rory had let it go, because that was what you did when someone didn't want to talk. She'd learned that skill in a flat in Cardiff, perfected it in a relationship that had left its marks in places no one could see. But this wasn't about Evan. This was about Yu-Fei, who had fed her soup on her first night in London and never once asked why she flinched. "There was a man. Standing across the street when I left. I didn't recognize him." "What did he look like?" "Tall. Dark coat. He was watching the restaurant, not me. I figured he was waiting for someone." Lucien's knuckles whitened around the cane's handle. "Did he see you?" "I don't know. Maybe." She met his gaze and held it. "What's on that contract, Lucien?" "Something worth killing for." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one I have." The flat felt smaller suddenly. The walls pressed in, stacked high with Eva's books and Eva's knowledge, none of which could help her now. Ptolemy jumped onto the counter and knocked a mug to the floor. It shattered. Neither of them moved. "Why me?" Rory asked. "You have resources. Contacts. Four languages and a blade in your cane. Why come to a delivery girl in a borrowed flat?" Something shifted behind his eyes — the amber one, the one that still carried something human. He looked at her the way he had that night six months ago, across a crowded room in Silas' bar, when she'd been three drinks in and he'd been two shadows deep in a corner booth. The night he'd walked her home and stopped at her door and almost — almost — leaned in. The night she'd shut the door in his face because she'd recognized the hunger in him and it reminded her of a hunger she'd sworn never to feed again. "Because you notice things," he said. "Because Yu-Fei trusts you. Because—" "Because I'm expendable?" "Because you're the only person in this city I trust not to sell me out." The confession sat between them, raw and unintended. Lucien's expression hardened, as if he could retroactively sand down the edges of what he'd just admitted. He straightened, adjusted his cuffs, became the immaculate fixer again. But the crack was there. She'd seen it. Rory picked up the folded paper. The ink was cold against her fingers, the script crawling with faint, residual energy that made her skin crawl. She turned it over. On the back, in a hand she didn't recognize, someone had written a single word in English. Avaros. She looked up. Lucien had gone still, the kind of stillness that preceded violence or confession. His black eye reflected nothing. His amber one burned. "That's where your father's from." "That's where this contract leads. And that's where Yu-Fei has gone, whether she knows it or not." Ptolemy mrowwed and butted his head against Rory's elbow. Rain streaked the single window, blurring the lights of Brick Lane into smears of amber and red. Somewhere below, the curry house cranked up its exhaust fans, filling the flat with the ghost of cardamom and ghee. Rory set the paper down and stood. Lucien tracked the movement, his gaze following her hands as she reached for her jacket on the back of the chair — the worn leather one with the broken zipper she'd been meaning to fix for months. She shrugged it on. "I need to change my shoes. And we're taking Eva's car." "You can't drive." "Eva can." She pulled open a drawer and fished out a set of keys. "She's in Bristol until Thursday. She won't mind." Lucien watched her with an expression she couldn't read — something between admiration and exasperation, the same look he'd worn the night she'd picked the lock on a safe he'd spent an hour trying to crack. "You're not coming with me." "I'm not staying here." She met him at the door, close enough to smell rain and charcoal wool and something underneath that was just him — something sharp and dark and electric. The scar on her wrist pulsed. "Yu-Fei gave me a job when I had nothing. She fed me. She never once asked me what I was running from." "And if this gets dangerous?" "I've survived dangerous." "Rory—" "Are we going, or are you going to stand in Eva's kitchen and tell me all the reasons I should stay behind?" She held up the keys, letting them jingle between them. "Because I've heard that speech before. From a man with nicer suits and worse intentions. And I didn't listen to him, either." The corner of his mouth twitched. Not a smile — Lucien Moreau didn't smile — but the ghost of one, the memory of a shape his face might one day learn. He stepped aside to let her through the door. Ptolemy watched from the counter, tail flicking, as the deadbolts clicked home one by one behind them.
created_at"2026-06-24T15:12:54.472Z" 6/24/2026, 3:12:54 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.415
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1690
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1690
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"implication"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"implication"
2"shattered"
3"electric"
4"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1707
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1246
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Eva5
Ptolemy6
Lucien10
Moreau2
November1
Yu-Fei4
Cardiff1
Evan1
London1
English1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"November"
6"Yu-Fei"
7"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"English"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"en her ankles, apparently having decided the"
1"something between admiration and exasperation,"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1707
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences146
matches
0"learned that skill"
1"had that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean24.39
std23.95
cv0.982
sampleLengths
051
16
248
31
437
59
64
727
84
945
105
1122
1254
1319
149
1581
165
1750
181
1919
208
2128
2261
232
243
255
2660
273
2829
298
3045
3138
3212
336
34113
3527
3615
375
3817
3911
4016
414
424
436
4442
4526
4699
4711
483
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs218
matches
0"was cataloguing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences146
ratio0.082
matches
0"The other — the black one — swallowed it whole."
1"Better than good — the woman had given her a job when no one else would touch a stranger with no references and a face that flinched at loud voices."
2"Rory studied his face — the sharp jaw, the platinum hair plastered to his temples by the drizzle, the way his mouth had pressed into a line that had nothing to do with his usual sardonic drawl."
3"Lucien crossed the threshold like a man entering a minefield, his gaze sweeping the cramped flat — the books stacked on every surface, the scrolls pinned to the walls with thumbtacks, the research notes spread across Eva's tiny kitchen table in a cascade of highlighters and tea rings."
4"She read the symbols inked across its surface — angular, dense, written in a script she recognized from Eva's research but couldn't translate."
5"Tuesday evening — three days ago now — she'd dropped off the last delivery of the night and found Yu-Fei in the kitchen, staring at a sealed envelope with an expression the older woman had never worn before."
6"Something shifted behind his eyes — the amber one, the one that still carried something human."
7"The night he'd walked her home and stopped at her door and almost — almost — leaned in."
8"Lucien tracked the movement, his gaze following her hands as she reached for her jacket on the back of the chair — the worn leather one with the broken zipper she'd been meaning to fix for months."
9"Lucien watched her with an expression she couldn't read — something between admiration and exasperation, the same look he'd worn the night she'd picked the lock on a safe he'd spent an hour trying to crack."
10"\"I'm not staying here.\" She met him at the door, close enough to smell rain and charcoal wool and something underneath that was just him — something sharp and dark and electric."
11"Not a smile — Lucien Moreau didn't smile — but the ghost of one, the memory of a shape his face might one day learn."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount963
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.01557632398753894
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004153686396677051
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean11.69
std9.5
cv0.812
sampleLengths
019
121
211
36
420
59
69
710
81
97
1016
1114
129
134
147
1520
164
173
186
1930
206
215
2214
236
242
257
2637
273
287
2918
301
319
3248
337
3411
354
363
378
385
3917
4011
4122
421
4319
448
4513
4615
476
4814
496
50.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3424657534246575
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners50
35.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Somewhere below, the curry house"
ratio0.011
75.32% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences94
matches
0"She expected Eva on the"
1"She expected Ptolemy to make"
2"She did not expect Lucien"
3"He stood in the narrow"
4"Her hand tightened on the"
5"She started pushing the door"
6"His cane shot out, the"
7"Her jaw tightened."
8"He looked tired."
9"She'd never seen him look"
10"She stepped back and let"
11"He took it all in"
12"His nostrils flared once, and"
13"She pulled out the kitchen"
14"He rested both hands on"
15"His mismatched eyes locked onto"
16"She kept her expression flat,"
17"He reached inside his jacket"
18"She read the symbols inked"
19"Her heart had picked up"
ratio0.362
29.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences94
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, as"
1"She expected Eva on the"
2"She expected Ptolemy to make"
3"She did not expect Lucien"
4"He stood in the narrow"
5"Rain had darkened the shoulders"
6"The other — the black"
7"Her hand tightened on the"
8"The crescent scar on her"
9"She started pushing the door"
10"His cane shot out, the"
11"Her jaw tightened."
12"Yu-Fei had been good to"
13"Rory's hand stalled on the"
14"Lucien's voice dropped, losing its"
15"The mask slipped, just a"
16"The words hung between them"
17"Rory studied his face —"
18"He looked tired."
19"She'd never seen him look"
ratio0.862
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Better than good — the woman had given her a job when no one else would touch a stranger with no references and a face that flinched at loud voices."
1"Rory studied his face — the sharp jaw, the platinum hair plastered to his temples by the drizzle, the way his mouth had pressed into a line that had nothing to …"
2"Lucien crossed the threshold like a man entering a minefield, his gaze sweeping the cramped flat — the books stacked on every surface, the scrolls pinned to the…"
3"Had noted her absence like a man checking a box on a list, or like a man who'd spent sleepless nights pacing a floor he wouldn't admit to pacing."
4"The ink was cold against her fingers, the script crawling with faint, residual energy that made her skin crawl."
5"Lucien tracked the movement, his gaze following her hands as she reached for her jacket on the back of the chair — the worn leather one with the broken zipper s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.075
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.2478%