| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.524 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1731 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1731 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "standard" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "marble" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "comforting" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1753 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1529 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Nyx | 10 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Rory | 17 | | Bonfire | 1 | | Night | 1 | | Boundary | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.944 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 56.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "glow that seemed to emanate from the air itself, the flowers, the mist at the edges of the clearing" | | 1 | "not-quite darkness, the dagger's faint luminescence bled through the sheath's stitching, casting thin lines of blue-white light across her thigh" | | 2 | "seemed slighter than that, narrower, as though someone had taken a woman and refined her down to her essential elements" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.282 | | wordCount | 1753 | | matches | | 0 | "not, solid but not" | | 1 | "no pattern she could follow but" | | 2 | "not the uncertain pulse of the Boundary or the sharp flare of a Hel rift, but something sustained" | | 3 | "not aggressively, but the way a dog lifts its head" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 38.96 | | std | 33.73 | | cv | 0.866 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 104 | | 2 | 96 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 107 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 74 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 102 | | 12 | 76 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 102 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 66 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 78 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 63 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 86 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 98 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 49 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 43 | | 40 | 71 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 42 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were carved" | | 2 | "was armed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 246 | | matches | | 0 | "was sensing" | | 1 | "was glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 18 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.132 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory counted seven of them as she stepped through the gap between the nearest pair, her shoulder brushing bark that should have been rough but wasn't — it was smooth, warm, pulsing faintly beneath her jacket like a heartbeat." | | 1 | "Their shadowed form — humanoid but not, solid but not — simply flowed between the oaks like water finding the path of least resistance." | | 2 | "Not hidden, not obscured — gone." | | 3 | "Their surfaces were carved with symbols she hadn't noticed before — spirals and crescents and something that might have been a script, though it was no alphabet she recognized." | | 4 | "The clearing was enormous — easily the size of a football pitch — but she'd walked Richmond Park enough times to know that no such clearing existed between the standing stones and the residential streets beyond." | | 5 | "Not the sparse, windblown survivors that clung to London's parks — these were lush, rampant, impossibly alive." | | 6 | "They weren't any species Rory could identify — their bark was pale, almost white, and their leaves were silver on one side and gold on the other." | | 7 | "The crimson gem was glowing steadily now, its inner light stronger than she'd ever seen it — not the uncertain pulse of the Boundary or the sharp flare of a Hel rift, but something sustained and almost content." | | 8 | "In moonlight, it glowed — and here, in this pearlescent not-quite-darkness, the dagger's faint luminescence bled through the sheath's stitching, casting thin lines of blue-white light across her thigh." | | 9 | "The chiming intensified, layer upon layer of sound until it wasn't just music anymore — it was pressure, a vibration she felt in her sternum and the roots of her teeth." | | 10 | "Not a presence, exactly — an awareness." | | 11 | "Nyx's form solidified for a moment — fully present, fully sharp, six feet two inches of living shadow with violet eyes that burned like gas flames." | | 12 | "Ahead, the wildflowers parted to reveal a clearing within the clearing — a perfect circle of bare earth, darker than the surrounding soil, pressed smooth as though by centuries of footsteps." | | 13 | "The water reflected a sky that didn't match the one above them — in the reflection, she saw stars, thousands of them, where the actual sky held only that sourceless pearl glow." | | 14 | "Her face was ageless in the way that marble is ageless — not young, not old, simply beyond the jurisdiction of time." | | 15 | "Instinct — or the pendant, pulsing a warning beat against her palm — told her not to." | | 16 | "Something passed between them — recognition, perhaps." | | 17 | "The wind — the one only Isolde seemed to feel — stirred her silver hair again, and the reflected stars in the pool behind her shifted and swam, rearranging themselves into a pattern that looked, for just a moment, like a map." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1517 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.035596572181938034 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013843111404087014 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 12.89 | | std | 10.55 | | cv | 0.819 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 53.19% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3897058823529412 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "She jerked her hand back" | | 1 | "Its silver chain coiled against" | | 2 | "They didn't need to." | | 3 | "Their shadowed form — humanoid" | | 4 | "She'd learned, over the past" | | 5 | "She turned to check behind" | | 6 | "Their surfaces were carved with" | | 7 | "It shouldn't have fit." | | 8 | "It wasn't London's light-polluted orange-black." | | 9 | "It wasn't even night, exactly." | | 10 | "It could have been dusk." | | 11 | "It could have been dawn." | | 12 | "It could have been some" | | 13 | "Her phone was dead." | | 14 | "She'd checked it three times." | | 15 | "They weren't any species Rory" | | 16 | "It disappeared before she could" | | 17 | "Their violet eyes turned toward" | | 18 | "She pulled the pendant from" | | 19 | "She was armed in a" |
| | ratio | 0.282 | |
| 91.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones rose" | | 1 | "Rory counted seven of them" | | 2 | "She jerked her hand back" | | 3 | "Its silver chain coiled against" | | 4 | "The stone couldn't decide what" | | 5 | "They didn't need to." | | 6 | "Their shadowed form — humanoid" | | 7 | "Here, past the stones, they" | | 8 | "The violet light of their" | | 9 | "Nyx's whisper carried from everywhere" | | 10 | "Rory didn't ask what that" | | 11 | "She'd learned, over the past" | | 12 | "She turned to check behind" | | 13 | "The park was gone." | | 14 | "The standing stones were still" | | 15 | "Their surfaces were carved with" | | 16 | "The carvings glowed with a" | | 17 | "Nyx's whisper pulled her forward" | | 18 | "The grove opened before her." | | 19 | "It shouldn't have fit." |
| | ratio | 0.736 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "As though the stone recognized" | | 1 | "As though it had come" | | 2 | "Because something was." | | 3 | "As though the woman existed" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 5.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory counted seven of them as she stepped through the gap between the nearest pair, her shoulder brushing bark that should have been rough but wasn't — it was s…" | | 1 | "Not the sparse, windblown survivors that clung to London's parks — these were lush, rampant, impossibly alive." | | 2 | "Thin, clear tones, each flower a different pitch, so that the whole meadow sang in a harmony that had no pattern she could follow but never once sounded discord…" | | 3 | "Nyx moved past her, their form rippling as they crossed from shadow to shadow cast by trees that grew in a loose ring around the meadow's edge." | | 4 | "Ahead, the wildflowers parted to reveal a clearing within the clearing — a perfect circle of bare earth, darker than the surrounding soil, pressed smooth as tho…" | | 5 | "The water reflected a sky that didn't match the one above them — in the reflection, she saw stars, thousands of them, where the actual sky held only that source…" | | 6 | "Five foot five, the codex had said, but she seemed slighter than that, narrower, as though someone had taken a woman and refined her down to her essential eleme…" | | 7 | "And her eyes, pale lavender, almost white, fixed on Rory with an intensity that made the delivery driver's lungs forget their rhythm." | | 8 | "Isolde's lavender eyes shifted to Nyx, who stood at the meadow's edge, half-dissolved into the shadow of a silver-leafed tree." | | 9 | "The wind — the one only Isolde seemed to feel — stirred her silver hair again, and the reflected stars in the pool behind her shifted and swam, rearranging them…" |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, and her voice was the chiming of the flowers given words, melodic and layered and fundamentally inhuman" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Behind her Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |