Run: 2026-06-24-01KVX3BRJ1K7S7WTHS0FDTHE9X

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56.2s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

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The deadbolts clicked in sequence. Three of them, Eva's paranoid symphony, and Rory swung the door inward with her foot because both hands were occupied with a bowl of leftover noodles and a half-read copy of Eva's annotated Bestiary of the Western Atelier. Lucien stood in the hallway. The noodles went cold in her hands. Not literally, but the sensation registered the same, a sudden stillness in her gut like someone had paused a film mid-frame. "Your landlady let me in." "She's not my landlady, she's my friend, and she's not home." Rory stared at him. The charcoal suit was new, or at least newer than the one she remembered. The ivory-handled cane hung from his right wrist by a leather loop. He hadn't needed the cane six weeks ago. "You're limping." "I was shot." "Deservedly?" "Almost certainly." Ptolemy wound between Lucien's ankles, purring. Traitor cat. Rory stepped back from the doorway, not quite an invitation, not quite a refusal. Lucien interpreted it as the former and crossed the threshold, bringing with him the scent of cedar and something darker, something ozone-adjacent that clung to half-demons like static to polyester. The flat swallowed him. Between the towers of books and the scrolls pinned to every vertical surface with coloured drawing pins, he looked like a man who'd wandered into a paper explosion. He surveyed the chaos with those mismatched eyes, amber and black, and something flickered across his face. Amusement, maybe. Or its crueler cousin. "You're living here." "Eva's generously lent me the sofa bed while I sort myself out." "Six weeks is a long sorting process." Rory set the noodles on the kitchen counter, which was actually a stack of milk crates topped with a laminate board. She closed the Bestiary. Her thumb found the crescent scar on her left wrist and traced it, an old habit she thought she'd killed. "What do you want, Lucien?" He lowered himself onto the edge of Eva's reading chair, the only surface in the flat not buried under research materials. The cane settled across his lap. Up close, the limp was more pronounced. His left leg extended at an angle that suggested the bullet had struck the thigh or the knee, and the suit trousers, despite excellent tailoring, couldn't entirely disguise the compression bandage beneath. "Yu-Fei fired you." "Yu-Fei did not fire me. Yu-Fei reassigned my delivery route to someone who doesn't attract demons." "And yet here you are, attracting demons." "I'm not attracting anything. I'm reading Eva's bestiary and eating cold noodles and minding my own business, which is precisely what you told me to do the last time we spoke." She crossed her arms. "Your exact words were 'disappear, Aurora.' Spat them out like they tasted of ash. Ring a bell?" Something shifted behind his expression. The amber eye caught the light from the single desk lamp, and for a moment it looked molten, like honey held over a flame. "Ring a bell. Yes. That does sound like me." "Charming. So you've come all the way to Brick Lane, on a leg that's been recently perforated, to check that I followed orders? I followed them. Happy? Door's behind you." "I need your help." The words landed in the small flat like a stone dropped into a pond. Ptolemy's ears twitched. Rory felt her jaw tighten, felt the muscle along her temple do that thing it did when she was clenching without realising it. "You need my help." "I'm aware of how it sounds." "Say it again, slower, so I can commit it to memory. Lucien Moreau, fixer, information broker, fluent in four languages and fluent in condescension in all of them, needs the help of the woman he told to disappear." "If I'd known you'd memorise the instruction, I'd have phrased it differently." "Would you? Would you really?" She took a step toward him, and the floorboard beneath her foot groaned. "Because from where I'm standing, your problem with me six weeks ago wasn't about phrasing. It was about control. You couldn't control what happened at the bridge, so you controlled the only thing you could after. Me. Push me away. Make me vanish. Clean cut, no loose ends, very French, very you." Lucien's fingers tightened on the head of his cane. The knuckles went pale. He didn't deny it. "There's a name surfacing in the underground," he said. "Malphora." The name hit like a slap. Rory's hand found the counter behind her, gripping the edge. The laminate flexed. "Where." "Three separate sources in the last week. Someone's looking for her. Someone with resources." "Who?" "That's what I'm trying to establish. Which is why I'm here, on a leg that's been recently perforated, as you so delicately put it, asking for your help. Because Malphora is you, Aurora. And whoever's looking has gotten close enough to make me nervous." The room felt smaller. The towers of books seemed to lean inward, pressing the air between them into something dense and electric. Rory's pulse thudded in her ears, a steady tribal beat that she could feel in her wrists, her throat, the back of her knees. She'd taken the name Malphora two years ago, in another life, in Cardiff, when Evan had still been Evan and the supernatural had been something that happened to other people. A precaution. A shield name, Eva had called it. Something to hide behind when the real one became too dangerous to wear. "You should have called." "You don't pick up." "I pick up for Eva." "Exactly." That landed harder than the name. Rory stared at him, and the anger she'd been nursing, the righteous heat she'd been feeding herself for six weeks of sofa-surfing and cold noodles and the echo of his voice saying disappear, Aurora, flickered. Underneath it was something she didn't want to name, something that lived in the space between his amber eye and her bright blue ones, something that had been there since the first night they'd met in Silas' bar when she'd been clutching a pint and bleeding from a cut on her palm and he'd handed her a clean handkerchief with an embroidered L and said, "You're holding that glass like it owes you money." "Show me your leg." "What?" "Your leg. The wound. If you're asking me to work with you, I need to know you can actually walk when this goes sideways. And it will go sideways. It always does." Lucien hesitated, a rare crack in the composure. Then he unbuttoned the trouser cuff and rolled the fabric up, revealing a compression bandage stained with something that wasn't quite blood. It was darker, with an iridescent quality that caught the lamplight and threw it back in colours that shouldn't exist. "That's not a bullet wound." "It was a bullet. The bullet was cursed." "Blessed or cursed?" "Does it matter?" "It matters enormously, actually. Blessed means someone sent a hunter. Cursed means someone sent a message." She crouched beside his chair, her fingers hovering over the bandage without touching it. The skin around the wound was threaded with black lines, like ink dropped in water. "Cursed. Someone wanted you alive and suffering." "Your diagnostic skills remain impressive." "My diagnostic skills are basic first aid and common sense. You're the one who walked into a curse and lived." She looked up at him. This close, she could see the faint shadow of stubble along his jaw, the almost imperceptible tremor in his lower lip that he was controlling through sheer willpower. Pain. He was in pain right now, sitting in Eva's reading chair, pretending he wasn't. "Why me, Lucien? You know people. Hundreds of them. Better people, connected people, people who don't sleep on milk crates." "Because you're clever. Because you think sideways when everyone else thinks forward. Because when the bridge collapsed and everything went to hell, you were the one who got us out, not me. I just looked good doing it." He paused. "And because whoever's looking for Malphora will find you eventually. I'd rather they found us together than you alone in a flat with three deadbolts and a cat." Ptolemy chose that moment to jump onto Rory's back, using her hunched form as a springboard to reach the bookshelf. She stumbled, caught Lucien's knee, and his hand came up to steady her, gripping her upper arm. His palm was warm through her jumper. Warmer than it should have been. Demon blood ran hot, Eva had told her once. Among other things. His thumb pressed against the inside of her wrist. Against the crescent scar. Neither of them moved. "I need to see what your sources sent you," she said. "Everything. Names, locations, timestamps. And I need access to Eva's cross-referencing system, which is a nightmare, but it works." "I'll send it tonight." "You'll send it now. And Lucien?" His thumb was still on her scar. The black lines on his leg pulsed once, a slow, sick heartbeat. "You don't get to tell me to disappear again."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"precisely"
1"really"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"symphony"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"clenching"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"symphony"
1"flickered"
2"traced"
3"clenching"
4"electric"
5"pulse"
6"could feel"
7"echo"
8"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1502
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.10% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount867
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Rory9
Bestiary2
Western1
Atelier1
Lucien6
Malphora1
Cardiff1
Evan2
Aurora1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"Aurora"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.981
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite an invitation, not quite a refusal"
1"not quite a refusal"
2"looked like a man who'd wandered into a p"
3"quite blood"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.666
wordCount1502
matches
0"Not literally, but the sensation registered the same, a sudden stillness in her"
80.46% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences116
matches
0"do that thing"
1"holding that glass"
2"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean23.47
std25.74
cv1.097
sampleLengths
043
15
228
35
451
53
61
72
884
923
103
1112
127
1345
145
1566
163
1716
187
1952
2029
219
2230
234
2440
254
266
2738
2812
2970
3017
3110
3219
331
3414
351
3644
3746
3852
394
404
415
421
43115
444
451
4632
4750
485
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"was threaded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was clenching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences116
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount845
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.027218934911242602
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009467455621301775
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean12.95
std12.35
cv0.954
sampleLengths
05
138
25
37
421
55
615
714
812
98
102
113
121
132
146
152
1614
1730
184
1928
2017
212
224
233
2412
257
2621
274
2820
295
3021
316
327
3332
343
3516
367
3735
3817
395
4024
419
4230
434
4414
453
4623
474
486
4938
76.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4827586206896552
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners56
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then he unbuttoned the trouser"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences64
matches
0"He hadn't needed the cane"
1"He surveyed the chaos with"
2"She closed the Bestiary."
3"Her thumb found the crescent"
4"He lowered himself onto the"
5"His left leg extended at"
6"She crossed her arms"
7"She took a step toward"
8"He didn't deny it."
9"She'd taken the name Malphora"
10"It was darker, with an"
11"She crouched beside his chair,"
12"She looked up at him"
13"He was in pain right"
14"She stumbled, caught Lucien's knee,"
15"His palm was warm through"
16"His thumb pressed against the"
17"His thumb was still on"
ratio0.281
38.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences64
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked in sequence."
1"Lucien stood in the hallway."
2"The noodles went cold in"
3"Rory stared at him"
4"The charcoal suit was new,"
5"The ivory-handled cane hung from"
6"He hadn't needed the cane"
7"Ptolemy wound between Lucien's ankles,"
8"Rory stepped back from the"
9"Lucien interpreted it as the"
10"The flat swallowed him."
11"He surveyed the chaos with"
12"Rory set the noodles on"
13"She closed the Bestiary."
14"Her thumb found the crescent"
15"He lowered himself onto the"
16"The cane settled across his"
17"His left leg extended at"
18"She crossed her arms"
19"Something shifted behind his expression."
ratio0.844
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His left leg extended at an angle that suggested the bullet had struck the thigh or the knee, and the suit trousers, despite excellent tailoring, couldn't entir…"
1"She'd taken the name Malphora two years ago, in another life, in Cardiff, when Evan had still been Evan and the supernatural had been something that happened to…"
2"Then he unbuttoned the trouser cuff and rolled the fabric up, revealing a compression bandage stained with something that wasn't quite blood."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She crouched, her fingers hovering over the bandage without touching it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.037
leniency0.074
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.5573%