| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1731 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 62.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1731 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "absolutely" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "crystalline" | | 6 | "determining" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "intricate" | | 10 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.65% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 67 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1758 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1621 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.17 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 19 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | December | 1 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Seer | 3 | | Despite | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae-Forged" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.914 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like patience" | | 1 | "patterns that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 2 | "symbols that seemed to writhe when viewed indirectly" | | 3 | "tasted like honey and ozone, sweet and el" | | 4 | "quite parse, figures that might have been human or Fae or something else entirely, their hands raised toward a sky that might have been the one above her now or might have been a sky that no longer existed" | | 5 | "lavender that seemed to hold light the way a glass holds wine" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 2.844 | | wordCount | 1758 | | matches | | 0 | "not muddy, but yielding, like walking on a mattress stuffed with moss" | | 1 | "not the hum, not the chiming flowers, but something else" | | 2 | "not the chiming flowers, but something else" | | 3 | "not her face but the canopy above" | | 4 | "not cloying, but complete, as if every good thing Rory had ever smelled had b" |
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| 99.33% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "saw that the" | | 1 | "scenes that Rory" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 48.83 | | std | 39.42 | | cv | 0.807 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 77 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 96 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 119 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 78 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 94 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 78 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 117 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 113 | | 26 | 112 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 124 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 88 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 81 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 49 |
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| 81.61% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "being weighed" | | 4 | "was covered" | | 5 | "was lit" | | 6 | "been distilled" |
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| 38.06% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 247 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "were breathing" | | 2 | "was being" | | 3 | "were going" | | 4 | "was hammering" | | 5 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 27 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.212 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx had no face to read, but their silhouette — that impossible humanoid shape woven from shadow and faintly leaking violet light at the eyes — turned toward her in a way that felt like patience." | | 1 | "She touched it once — a habit now, the way some people touch a crucifix — and stepped between the stones." | | 2 | "The cold didn't disappear, but it transformed — from the bitter, damp cold of a London winter to something cooler, cleaner, like stepping into a cellar carved from stone." | | 3 | "It was a canopy — impossibly high, impossibly dense, branches of trees she couldn't name interlocking in patterns that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 4 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in every direction — poppies, bluebells, foxgloves, things she recognized, and things she absolutely did not: spiraling fronds of deep indigo, bell-shaped blooms that chimed faintly when the non-existent breeze swayed them, flowers with petals like frosted glass that refracted the silver light into tiny rainbows across the moss." | | 5 | "The shadows that comprised them were denser, more defined, and for a moment Rory could almost make out the ghost of features — a jawline, the hollows of eyes, the suggestion of a collarbone beneath darkness." | | 6 | "The ground was soft — not muddy, but yielding, like walking on a mattress stuffed with moss." | | 7 | "She thought of what Nyx had told her about the Seer — leaves no footprints when she walks — and felt the skin at the back of her neck tighten." | | 8 | "The grove was not large — or perhaps it was infinitely large, and Rory couldn't tell because the trees kept rearranging themselves in her peripheral vision." | | 9 | "It was warm now — warmer than her skin, warmer than it should be, the faint inner glow visible even through her shirt." | | 10 | "A sound reached her then — not the hum, not the chiming flowers, but something else." | | 11 | "The surface reflected not her face but the canopy above — except in the reflection, the canopy was different." | | 12 | "It lasted half a second before the unease crept back in — the sense of being watched, of being weighed by something vast and patient." | | 13 | "She thought of Dymas, which she'd only read about in the fragmentary notes she'd found — a place of excess and indulgence, where the sky was warm amber and even hunger was a form of imprisonment." | | 14 | "The trees grew taller, their bark shifting from silver to a deep umber, and the carvings on their trunks became more frequent, more intricate — scenes that Rory couldn't quite parse, figures that might have been human or Fae or something else entirely, their hands raised toward a sky that might have been the one above her now or might have been a sky that no longer existed." | | 15 | "The wildflowers grew taller too, some reaching her waist, their blooms releasing scent in waves — jasmine, then rosemary, then something sharp and alien that made her eyes water and her thoughts scatter like startled birds." | | 16 | "The clearing was circular, ringed by the standing oaks, and in its center grew a single tree — smaller than the others, its trunk no wider than her arm, its branches reaching upward in a pattern that was almost but not quite symmetrical." | | 17 | "The air around the tree was thick with a sweetness that was almost unbearable — not cloying, but complete, as if every good thing Rory had ever smelled had been distilled into a single note." | | 18 | "She wore a dress the color of moonlight on water, and her skin was pale and ageless, her eyes — when she lifted them — a pale lavender that seemed to hold light the way a glass holds wine." | | 19 | "Between the two sensations, she felt — for the first time since entering the grove — that she was standing in her own skin, that she was a person with edges and a name and a small crescent scar on her left wrist that proved she had once been a child who fell and bled and survived." | | 20 | "The silver light drifted down around her like snow, and the wildflowers at her feet turned their faces — slowly, deliberately — toward Rory." |
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| 96.74% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1601 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 70 | | adverbRatio | 0.04372267332916927 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011867582760774516 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 17.76 | | std | 13.86 | | cv | 0.78 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 40.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.32323232323232326 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 95.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her hand back" | | 1 | "She touched it once —" | | 2 | "It was not a gradual" | | 3 | "It was a canopy —" | | 4 | "It was silver." | | 5 | "It moved like liquid, pooling" | | 6 | "She looked down and saw" | | 7 | "She lifted her foot and" | | 8 | "She thought of what Nyx" | | 9 | "They moved deeper." | | 10 | "She'd catch a glimpse of" | | 11 | "She'd look away, and the" | | 12 | "They had drifted ahead, their" | | 13 | "It was warm now —" | | 14 | "She tugged the chain out" | | 15 | "She followed it because there" | | 16 | "She crouched at its edge." | | 17 | "Her heart was hammering." | | 18 | "It lasted half a second" | | 19 | "She thought of Dymas, which" |
| | ratio | 0.313 | |
| 47.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones rose" | | 1 | "She pulled her hand back" | | 2 | "Nyx had no face to" | | 3 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant hung around" | | 5 | "She touched it once —" | | 6 | "The air changed." | | 7 | "It was not a gradual" | | 8 | "The next stride she was" | | 9 | "The cold didn't disappear, but" | | 10 | "The traffic was gone." | | 11 | "The wind was gone." | | 12 | "Rory stopped walking and looked" | | 13 | "The sky above the grove" | | 14 | "It was a canopy —" | | 15 | "It was silver." | | 16 | "It moved like liquid, pooling" | | 17 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 18 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 19 | "The shadows that comprised them" |
| | ratio | 0.825 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 17 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx had no face to read, but their silhouette — that impossible humanoid shape woven from shadow and faintly leaking violet light at the eyes — turned toward he…" | | 1 | "It was a canopy — impossibly high, impossibly dense, branches of trees she couldn't name interlocking in patterns that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking d…" | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in every direction — poppies, bluebells, foxgloves, things she recognized, and things she absolutely did not: spiraling fronds o…" | | 3 | "The shadows that comprised them were denser, more defined, and for a moment Rory could almost make out the ghost of features — a jawline, the hollows of eyes, t…" | | 4 | "She looked down and saw that the grass beneath her boots was luminescent, each blade edged in a faint bioluminescent green that pulsed gently, rhythmically, as …" | | 5 | "She'd catch a glimpse of a path branching left, turn to look, and find only a stand of silver-barked trees with trunks wider than she was tall, their surfaces c…" | | 6 | "They had drifted ahead, their form flowing between the shadows cast by the trees like water finding the lowest ground." | | 7 | "The water was crystalline, so clear that Rory could see every pebble on the bottom, and it ran with a directionality that felt deliberate, purposeful, as if the…" | | 8 | "The air here tasted like honey and ozone, sweet and electric, and it coated her tongue in a way that made her want to swallow and never stop swallowing." | | 9 | "The trees grew taller, their bark shifting from silver to a deep umber, and the carvings on their trunks became more frequent, more intricate — scenes that Rory…" | | 10 | "The wildflowers grew taller too, some reaching her waist, their blooms releasing scent in waves — jasmine, then rosemary, then something sharp and alien that ma…" | | 11 | "The clearing was circular, ringed by the standing oaks, and in its center grew a single tree — smaller than the others, its trunk no wider than her arm, its bra…" | | 12 | "It was covered in blossoms of white and pale gold, and each blossom was lit from within by that same silver light that filtered through the canopy." | | 13 | "The air around the tree was thick with a sweetness that was almost unbearable — not cloying, but complete, as if every good thing Rory had ever smelled had been…" | | 14 | "Her silver hair fell to her waist, spilling over her shoulders and pooling on the ground like liquid metal." | | 15 | "She wore a dress the color of moonlight on water, and her skin was pale and ageless, her eyes — when she lifted them — a pale lavender that seemed to hold light…" | | 16 | "Between the two sensations, she felt — for the first time since entering the grove — that she was standing in her own skin, that she was a person with edges and…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |